Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
From Florence With Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, your words will live on forever.
Andy
March 1st, 2024 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, your words will live on forever.
Andy
March 1st, 2024 02:20
From Florence With Love
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You make it come alive.
February 29th, 2024 10:50
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You make it come alive.
February 29th, 2024 10:50
From Florence With Love
Accidental Poet said:
You Teddy will live forever in the Halls of Love Poetry. 😉👍
February 29th, 2024 08:59
Accidental Poet said:
You Teddy will live forever in the Halls of Love Poetry. 😉👍
February 29th, 2024 08:59
Slumberbash
sorenbarrett said:
I could certainly identify with this one Teddy it is not only beautiful but a piece of reality deeply imbedded.
February 29th, 2024 01:02
sorenbarrett said:
I could certainly identify with this one Teddy it is not only beautiful but a piece of reality deeply imbedded.
February 29th, 2024 01:02
Slumberbash
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly got them out from under the covers here!!!
No need for clarification/rectification, is there? You know I admire your work, Teddy.
February 28th, 2024 18:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly got them out from under the covers here!!!
No need for clarification/rectification, is there? You know I admire your work, Teddy.
February 28th, 2024 18:49
Slumberbash
Goldfinch60 said:
Slumberdash is a fine word word Teddy and I agree totally with its meaning.
Andy
February 28th, 2024 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Slumberdash is a fine word word Teddy and I agree totally with its meaning.
Andy
February 28th, 2024 02:18
Slumberbash
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. I like your poetic license. I once made up the word, Sorceriffic to describe a woman\'s ass. lol (I felt I was under a spell.)
February 27th, 2024 13:13
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. I like your poetic license. I once made up the word, Sorceriffic to describe a woman\'s ass. lol (I felt I was under a spell.)
February 27th, 2024 13:13
Slumberbash
Cassie58 said:
A new word for me Teddy. Such fun to invent your own vocabulary. As for remembering dreams, I rarely do these days. I am an insomniac, so your posted image is very appealing to me. Have a lovely day poet.
February 27th, 2024 10:28
Cassie58 said:
A new word for me Teddy. Such fun to invent your own vocabulary. As for remembering dreams, I rarely do these days. I am an insomniac, so your posted image is very appealing to me. Have a lovely day poet.
February 27th, 2024 10:28
Slumberbash
Accidental Poet said:
I believe as poets, we have the right to invent words as we wish. Teddy, I love how your take an image and miraculously pull a poem out of it. Great job. 😉👍
February 27th, 2024 09:20
Accidental Poet said:
I believe as poets, we have the right to invent words as we wish. Teddy, I love how your take an image and miraculously pull a poem out of it. Great job. 😉👍
February 27th, 2024 09:20
Slumberbash
Neville said:
as far as words go slumberbash must rank up there among my favouwrites ..
February 27th, 2024 07:59
Neville said:
as far as words go slumberbash must rank up there among my favouwrites ..
February 27th, 2024 07:59
Slumberbash
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot you mean is you made \'slumberbash\' up! Google don\'t record it in memory either....Tomorrow I\'m going to attempt to have your poetic licence revoked... so there!
Apart from that, M\'lady, I can relate to the meaning embodied in the entirety and, as usual admire your choice of visuals.
February 27th, 2024 05:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot you mean is you made \'slumberbash\' up! Google don\'t record it in memory either....Tomorrow I\'m going to attempt to have your poetic licence revoked... so there!
Apart from that, M\'lady, I can relate to the meaning embodied in the entirety and, as usual admire your choice of visuals.
February 27th, 2024 05:03
From where the wild roses grow
sorenbarrett said:
How did I miss gem? There is just enough mystery and puzzle in these lines to grip the attention of the reader and bury him in that soil beneath the roses. This is one of my favorites of yours
February 27th, 2024 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
How did I miss gem? There is just enough mystery and puzzle in these lines to grip the attention of the reader and bury him in that soil beneath the roses. This is one of my favorites of yours
February 27th, 2024 03:55
Party Animal
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say I have never been there myself. Wonderful wording and images. Provoking thoughts.
February 26th, 2024 20:47
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say I have never been there myself. Wonderful wording and images. Provoking thoughts.
February 26th, 2024 20:47
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Bella Shepard said:
I confess I know little of this form of poetry, but the words Dear Teddy, are exquisite. If this be the food of love, then write on , and on, and on. Once again you introduce to something I want to learn more about. Thank you!!
February 26th, 2024 09:49
Bella Shepard said:
I confess I know little of this form of poetry, but the words Dear Teddy, are exquisite. If this be the food of love, then write on , and on, and on. Once again you introduce to something I want to learn more about. Thank you!!
February 26th, 2024 09:49
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful loving words Teddy.
Andy
February 26th, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful loving words Teddy.
Andy
February 26th, 2024 02:21
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Thomas W Case said:
So powerful and scenic. Great work.
February 25th, 2024 16:48
Thomas W Case said:
So powerful and scenic. Great work.
February 25th, 2024 16:48
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Parisab said:
To praise ones essence in the hard labor of a sonnet, is so brave and lovely. Job well done! I hope to take a walk somewhere in the old world and sit and attempt one soon.
February 25th, 2024 11:17
Parisab said:
To praise ones essence in the hard labor of a sonnet, is so brave and lovely. Job well done! I hope to take a walk somewhere in the old world and sit and attempt one soon.
February 25th, 2024 11:17
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Accidental Poet said:
Teddy, I sit here in awe. I know what it\'s like for a poem to take so long to write, and you pulled this off beautifully. This my dear poetess, is what poetry is all about. 🌹 😊
February 25th, 2024 10:47
Accidental Poet said:
Teddy, I sit here in awe. I know what it\'s like for a poem to take so long to write, and you pulled this off beautifully. This my dear poetess, is what poetry is all about. 🌹 😊
February 25th, 2024 10:47
Party Animal
rhmn_7 said:
That\'s what you call rising from the ashes. Nice poem!
February 25th, 2024 09:04
rhmn_7 said:
That\'s what you call rising from the ashes. Nice poem!
February 25th, 2024 09:04
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
rhmn_7 said:
Now that is a love worth living over and over again.
February 25th, 2024 07:59
rhmn_7 said:
Now that is a love worth living over and over again.
February 25th, 2024 07:59
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, now this is a sonnet to top all sonnets. I know how difficult they are to compose because I have dabbled myself. You have given your readers a love poem here of incredible depth and beauty. I can’t praise it enough. 🌹
February 25th, 2024 07:28
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, now this is a sonnet to top all sonnets. I know how difficult they are to compose because I have dabbled myself. You have given your readers a love poem here of incredible depth and beauty. I can’t praise it enough. 🌹
February 25th, 2024 07:28
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully expresses a deep and passionate love, comparing it to the intensity of the sun and the beauty of nature. The imagery of fiery eyes and golden locks evokes a sense of awe and admiration. The poem also touches on the theme of forgiveness and the importance of cherishing each day. The final lines convey a sense of eternal love and devotion, promising to continue loving even in the face of darkness.
February 25th, 2024 06:09
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully expresses a deep and passionate love, comparing it to the intensity of the sun and the beauty of nature. The imagery of fiery eyes and golden locks evokes a sense of awe and admiration. The poem also touches on the theme of forgiveness and the importance of cherishing each day. The final lines convey a sense of eternal love and devotion, promising to continue loving even in the face of darkness.
February 25th, 2024 06:09
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Neville said:
Perfectly executed Teddy .. I must again confess you are far braver than I .. and for some sad reason, you made me think about our dear old Dusk Arising .. 🌹
February 25th, 2024 05:52
Neville said:
Perfectly executed Teddy .. I must again confess you are far braver than I .. and for some sad reason, you made me think about our dear old Dusk Arising .. 🌹
February 25th, 2024 05:52
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Doggerel Dave said:
As Soren so rightly points out, You are up there with, I\'ll say, the bard of Stratford-upon-Avon, Teddy.
And this coming from someone with a general antipathy for love poetry.....
February 25th, 2024 05:09
Doggerel Dave said:
As Soren so rightly points out, You are up there with, I\'ll say, the bard of Stratford-upon-Avon, Teddy.
And this coming from someone with a general antipathy for love poetry.....
February 25th, 2024 05:09
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this holds such a classical feel. I hear Browning in this somehow. Romantic to the core. I love this one. So many good lines from the first stanza on.
\"Dusk until dawn, to your love I have clung
Dreaming of a world that sing songs unsung
I, who dies in the forest of your heart
It’s I whom will die in the forest dark\"
There is deep meaning in these lines of obsession and facing the cold of being ignored or rejected.
February 25th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this holds such a classical feel. I hear Browning in this somehow. Romantic to the core. I love this one. So many good lines from the first stanza on.
\"Dusk until dawn, to your love I have clung
Dreaming of a world that sing songs unsung
I, who dies in the forest of your heart
It’s I whom will die in the forest dark\"
There is deep meaning in these lines of obsession and facing the cold of being ignored or rejected.
February 25th, 2024 04:59
Party Animal
Doggerel Dave said:
I do believe you may have made a typo here, Teddy.
I\'m pretty sure it\'s \'cobblers\', as I believe you are far too canny for that......
February 24th, 2024 18:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I do believe you may have made a typo here, Teddy.
I\'m pretty sure it\'s \'cobblers\', as I believe you are far too canny for that......
February 24th, 2024 18:17
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