Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
A Very Brief Moment
Goldfinch60 said:
The lights are always red when Mary drives. LOL
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
The lights are always red when Mary drives. LOL
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:40
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
Bella Shepard said:
Emotions shape almost every aspect our every day lives, and you express so beautifully the need for the greatest of all, \"love\". While we cannot physically feel anothers pain, we recognize the signs, and that draws us to commiserate, comfort, help. These words are written from a heart that truly understands.
September 23rd, 2023 14:23
Bella Shepard said:
Emotions shape almost every aspect our every day lives, and you express so beautifully the need for the greatest of all, \"love\". While we cannot physically feel anothers pain, we recognize the signs, and that draws us to commiserate, comfort, help. These words are written from a heart that truly understands.
September 23rd, 2023 14:23
Blank Sheet
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Blank sheet” by Teddy.15
Thus, love has departed. This has resulted in frustration and resentment. There is even anger in the heart. From anger hardly anything positive can come out. It turns out that the musical performance is a solo one. It is even a performance from which no sounds come out : “total silence.” Even the piano keys are not those of the present. In the past they played perfect renditions. Now they play music from which no sound comes out. The instrument and the poetess are silent. The poetess is turned both blind and lost. A frustrated love can have this troubling effect. Emotionally affected writers are known to write tragedies or sad stories. Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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September 23rd, 2023 10:07
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Blank sheet” by Teddy.15
Thus, love has departed. This has resulted in frustration and resentment. There is even anger in the heart. From anger hardly anything positive can come out. It turns out that the musical performance is a solo one. It is even a performance from which no sounds come out : “total silence.” Even the piano keys are not those of the present. In the past they played perfect renditions. Now they play music from which no sound comes out. The instrument and the poetess are silent. The poetess is turned both blind and lost. A frustrated love can have this troubling effect. Emotionally affected writers are known to write tragedies or sad stories. Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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September 23rd, 2023 10:07
Destination
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Destination” by Teddy.15
The photo has the words : “Why must I be a bird with no wings ?”
Birds have been created with wings. It is unnatural to clip their wings. It is like humans being deprived of their limbs… Thus, the bird’s wings must be left alone. A bird without wings is condemned just to hop about, whereas it is meant to fly. Wings enable it to escape from many predators, except winged ones that are faster than itself. If it just remains on the ground, it becomes very vulnerable. Wings help it to escape from many dangers.
As concerns humans, dreams are the stuff through which we set targets that ideally we wish to attain for our betterment. We might or might not achieve these targets, but at least we formulate them and we work towards attaining them. Thus, dreams give us a purpose in life. Very often our achievements started as dreams. Without dreams we will just slouch about, not achieving much. Dreams enable humans to move forward. Wings help the bird to survive. Survival is the precondition for the bird to propagate itself.
Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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September 23rd, 2023 09:55
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Destination” by Teddy.15
The photo has the words : “Why must I be a bird with no wings ?”
Birds have been created with wings. It is unnatural to clip their wings. It is like humans being deprived of their limbs… Thus, the bird’s wings must be left alone. A bird without wings is condemned just to hop about, whereas it is meant to fly. Wings enable it to escape from many predators, except winged ones that are faster than itself. If it just remains on the ground, it becomes very vulnerable. Wings help it to escape from many dangers.
As concerns humans, dreams are the stuff through which we set targets that ideally we wish to attain for our betterment. We might or might not achieve these targets, but at least we formulate them and we work towards attaining them. Thus, dreams give us a purpose in life. Very often our achievements started as dreams. Without dreams we will just slouch about, not achieving much. Dreams enable humans to move forward. Wings help the bird to survive. Survival is the precondition for the bird to propagate itself.
Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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September 23rd, 2023 09:55
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
Neville said:
I guess that\'s pretty much most of us covered .. and warmly ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 07:30
Neville said:
I guess that\'s pretty much most of us covered .. and warmly ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 07:30
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"None of us would be poets” by Teddy.15
You say “without love none of us would be poets.” Indeed, the poet not only experiences love for humanity but also transmits his feelings to humanity. Some quotes :
(a) “Second, that, the poet feels with greater intensity than ordinary men and, through his art, is able to give enduring form to the strong emotions that ideas, sights and incidents arouse in him.” S. H. Burton : \"THE CRITICISM OF POETRY.\" London : Longman Group Ltd., 1950. (2nd Edition, 1974).
(b) “the function of poetry is to touch the heart, to arouse emotion. Only emotion can arouse emotion. If a poet feels nothing when he writes a poem, his readers will feel nothing when they hear it. Heart must speak to heart.”
“POETRY SPRINGS FROM IMAGINATION ROUSED BY EMOTION, AND IS EXPRESSED IN MUSIC AND IMAGERY.” Wren & Martin : \"HIGH SCHOOL ENGLISH GRAMMAR AND COMPOSITION.\" (Revised by Prasada Rao). New Delhi : S. Chand & Co., 1994. (Reprinted 1994).
(c) “In all definitions of poetry, the common factors are the imagination and emotions; that is to say, poetry consists of emotions and feelings that are imaginatively conceived and imaginatively expressed.” Dr. C. Paul Verghese : \"ADVANCED LEVEL GENERAL PAPER.\" Singapore : Fairfield Book Publishers Pte. Ltd., 1988.
(d) “he (the poet) has greater knowledge of human nature. He understands accurately the nature of human passions and emotions, even of those which he had not personally experienced.” Dr. Raghukul Tilak : \"WORDSWORTH : PREFACE TO THE LYRICAL BALLADS.\" New Delhi : Rama Brothers, 1980. (Fourth edition).
Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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September 23rd, 2023 06:20
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"None of us would be poets” by Teddy.15
You say “without love none of us would be poets.” Indeed, the poet not only experiences love for humanity but also transmits his feelings to humanity. Some quotes :
(a) “Second, that, the poet feels with greater intensity than ordinary men and, through his art, is able to give enduring form to the strong emotions that ideas, sights and incidents arouse in him.” S. H. Burton : \"THE CRITICISM OF POETRY.\" London : Longman Group Ltd., 1950. (2nd Edition, 1974).
(b) “the function of poetry is to touch the heart, to arouse emotion. Only emotion can arouse emotion. If a poet feels nothing when he writes a poem, his readers will feel nothing when they hear it. Heart must speak to heart.”
“POETRY SPRINGS FROM IMAGINATION ROUSED BY EMOTION, AND IS EXPRESSED IN MUSIC AND IMAGERY.” Wren & Martin : \"HIGH SCHOOL ENGLISH GRAMMAR AND COMPOSITION.\" (Revised by Prasada Rao). New Delhi : S. Chand & Co., 1994. (Reprinted 1994).
(c) “In all definitions of poetry, the common factors are the imagination and emotions; that is to say, poetry consists of emotions and feelings that are imaginatively conceived and imaginatively expressed.” Dr. C. Paul Verghese : \"ADVANCED LEVEL GENERAL PAPER.\" Singapore : Fairfield Book Publishers Pte. Ltd., 1988.
(d) “he (the poet) has greater knowledge of human nature. He understands accurately the nature of human passions and emotions, even of those which he had not personally experienced.” Dr. Raghukul Tilak : \"WORDSWORTH : PREFACE TO THE LYRICAL BALLADS.\" New Delhi : Rama Brothers, 1980. (Fourth edition).
Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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September 23rd, 2023 06:20
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful observations leading to an important question that like other important questions has more than one right answer. I love the way you have worded this dilemma organizing it into different divisions and posing the question to the reader to answer. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2023 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful observations leading to an important question that like other important questions has more than one right answer. I love the way you have worded this dilemma organizing it into different divisions and posing the question to the reader to answer. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2023 05:59
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
LIZ said:
Teddy, I\'ve always believed you can\'t really TRULY understand someone\'s pain unless you\'ve experienced it yourself. And even then, you can\'t really know because we all feel differently. BUT, we can respect each other\'s pain/feelings. There are some people....empaths....who are able to feel other\'s emotions without experiencing. But it\'s rare. I love this one!! A topic I often think about. 💖💖💖💖
September 23rd, 2023 02:17
LIZ said:
Teddy, I\'ve always believed you can\'t really TRULY understand someone\'s pain unless you\'ve experienced it yourself. And even then, you can\'t really know because we all feel differently. BUT, we can respect each other\'s pain/feelings. There are some people....empaths....who are able to feel other\'s emotions without experiencing. But it\'s rare. I love this one!! A topic I often think about. 💖💖💖💖
September 23rd, 2023 02:17
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
orchidee said:
A fine write Teddy.
Without love I would never have married KP. But I did marry her - without love. Doh!
it was a night she hid the water from my whisky. It made me says \'yesh\' and \'I do!\' lol.
September 23rd, 2023 02:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Teddy.
Without love I would never have married KP. But I did marry her - without love. Doh!
it was a night she hid the water from my whisky. It made me says \'yesh\' and \'I do!\' lol.
September 23rd, 2023 02:00
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
2781 said:
I like to think nothing is lost, how can we empathise without the lose. If that makes any sense?
September 23rd, 2023 01:59
2781 said:
I like to think nothing is lost, how can we empathise without the lose. If that makes any sense?
September 23rd, 2023 01:59
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
Serhat Doğan said:
Love is a feeling which can lead to many things. Congrats for this one ,its really good
September 23rd, 2023 01:24
Serhat Doğan said:
Love is a feeling which can lead to many things. Congrats for this one ,its really good
September 23rd, 2023 01:24
A Very Brief Moment
aDarkerMind said:
memories indeed Teddy;
I had a black 2L Laser Capri automatic for umpteen years.
sadly, never got to hump in it!
but fond memories none the less;
September 22nd, 2023 10:42
aDarkerMind said:
memories indeed Teddy;
I had a black 2L Laser Capri automatic for umpteen years.
sadly, never got to hump in it!
but fond memories none the less;
September 22nd, 2023 10:42
A Very Brief Moment
orchidee said:
A very brief moment of 2 seconds when I did not sing! 🤣
September 22nd, 2023 10:09
orchidee said:
A very brief moment of 2 seconds when I did not sing! 🤣
September 22nd, 2023 10:09
A Very Brief Moment
Pop64 said:
Wow, love the imagery here and the reminders of other times, youthful new times with that special someone. Beautiful!
September 22nd, 2023 07:48
Pop64 said:
Wow, love the imagery here and the reminders of other times, youthful new times with that special someone. Beautiful!
September 22nd, 2023 07:48
A Very Brief Moment
Doggerel Dave said:
So that\'s how traffic jams occurred in London.....😂
September 22nd, 2023 05:53
Doggerel Dave said:
So that\'s how traffic jams occurred in London.....😂
September 22nd, 2023 05:53
Ladybird
L. B. Mek said:
I bet those heels would \'help\'
a few see sense, lol
always like your choice
to unearth the fun and light hearted
angles of life\'s annoyances..
(I read and learn dear Poetess)
September 22nd, 2023 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
I bet those heels would \'help\'
a few see sense, lol
always like your choice
to unearth the fun and light hearted
angles of life\'s annoyances..
(I read and learn dear Poetess)
September 22nd, 2023 05:09
A Very Brief Moment
LIZ said:
Mmmmm you play too much Teddy!! 😆 TEASE!! Loved it!! 💖
September 22nd, 2023 04:29
LIZ said:
Mmmmm you play too much Teddy!! 😆 TEASE!! Loved it!! 💖
September 22nd, 2023 04:29
A Very Brief Moment
Neville said:
I know exactly where you are coming from .. I have been following you, you see ..
and without being too crude .. I woulda left my horn where it was and just jumped ya ...
what a smashing little treat this turned out to be .. Ta Teddy .. ❤️
September 22nd, 2023 04:13
Neville said:
I know exactly where you are coming from .. I have been following you, you see ..
and without being too crude .. I woulda left my horn where it was and just jumped ya ...
what a smashing little treat this turned out to be .. Ta Teddy .. ❤️
September 22nd, 2023 04:13
A Very Brief Moment
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lol ) a lovely lighthearted writing , teddy 🙂 nicely expressed
September 22nd, 2023 04:12
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lol ) a lovely lighthearted writing , teddy 🙂 nicely expressed
September 22nd, 2023 04:12
A Very Brief Moment
orchidee said:
That was me honking, spoiling your moments! lol.
September 22nd, 2023 04:05
orchidee said:
That was me honking, spoiling your moments! lol.
September 22nd, 2023 04:05
Autumn\'s Painting
Sunsetmet said:
I just love this the colors go beyond anything so nicely written. I was in Florence Italy beautiful there I love Italy
September 21st, 2023 14:53
Sunsetmet said:
I just love this the colors go beyond anything so nicely written. I was in Florence Italy beautiful there I love Italy
September 21st, 2023 14:53
Life Is Like A Song
MendedFences27 said:
If there is an afterlife, I perceive it to be a state of ecstasy, totally different from this life.
Your poem paints a very hopeful image of what it might be like. Your words and images become clear and complete. It is a paradise for all. Loved this poem. - Phil A.
September 21st, 2023 11:54
MendedFences27 said:
If there is an afterlife, I perceive it to be a state of ecstasy, totally different from this life.
Your poem paints a very hopeful image of what it might be like. Your words and images become clear and complete. It is a paradise for all. Loved this poem. - Phil A.
September 21st, 2023 11:54
Life Is Like A Song
Christina8 said:
Wow, an incredibly insightful write, Teddy! Yes I personally believe the same, that we were dead before we were alive. i also don\'t remember it hurting before I was born......I find cemeteries peaceful, knowing that those spirits are in the beyond. its not like they are there just hanging around. Really thought provoking!
September 21st, 2023 11:46
Christina8 said:
Wow, an incredibly insightful write, Teddy! Yes I personally believe the same, that we were dead before we were alive. i also don\'t remember it hurting before I was born......I find cemeteries peaceful, knowing that those spirits are in the beyond. its not like they are there just hanging around. Really thought provoking!
September 21st, 2023 11:46
Life Is Like A Song
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting thoughts that run through all of our minds from time to time. They say that when they used to hang people they would let them pass out then revive them because it was so painful coming back. Then they would hang them again. I think life is more painful than death. As to life after I\'ll have to wait to see.
September 21st, 2023 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting thoughts that run through all of our minds from time to time. They say that when they used to hang people they would let them pass out then revive them because it was so painful coming back. Then they would hang them again. I think life is more painful than death. As to life after I\'ll have to wait to see.
September 21st, 2023 11:41
Life Is Like A Song
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, incredible piece Teddy, I have always found cemeteries peaceful, I don\'t know why, maybe it\'s because I know it that those souls are at peace and sleeping, in a way,
But I also believe that there is coming judgement day where God will separate the good from the bad, in the Bible it says the sheep from the goats,and the good will be in a very beautiful place that\'s peaceful , no pain , HEAVEN,
and the bad will go on to forever torment, paying for their murders, rapes , child abuse and so on....
I\'m very confident that I\'m going to heaven, a beautiful paradise full of love and laughter. See u there!!
September 21st, 2023 09:37
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, incredible piece Teddy, I have always found cemeteries peaceful, I don\'t know why, maybe it\'s because I know it that those souls are at peace and sleeping, in a way,
But I also believe that there is coming judgement day where God will separate the good from the bad, in the Bible it says the sheep from the goats,and the good will be in a very beautiful place that\'s peaceful , no pain , HEAVEN,
and the bad will go on to forever torment, paying for their murders, rapes , child abuse and so on....
I\'m very confident that I\'m going to heaven, a beautiful paradise full of love and laughter. See u there!!
September 21st, 2023 09:37
Life Is Like A Song
Pop64 said:
This is not only a piece that makes one think deeply on the subject of death, but it also provides a happy idea of death, which is a welcome change. Beautiful!
September 21st, 2023 05:46
Pop64 said:
This is not only a piece that makes one think deeply on the subject of death, but it also provides a happy idea of death, which is a welcome change. Beautiful!
September 21st, 2023 05:46
Life Is Like A Song
LIZ said:
You\'ve gone deep on me Teddy, and I love it!!! \"yet I believe those lost souls must be somewhere?\", me too! This is so beautiful! Looking at death as a rebirth sort of....where we end up being...who we were always meant to be! The unknown.....And ummmmm you already are a songwriter!!! 💖💖💖💖
September 21st, 2023 03:25
LIZ said:
You\'ve gone deep on me Teddy, and I love it!!! \"yet I believe those lost souls must be somewhere?\", me too! This is so beautiful! Looking at death as a rebirth sort of....where we end up being...who we were always meant to be! The unknown.....And ummmmm you already are a songwriter!!! 💖💖💖💖
September 21st, 2023 03:25
Life Is Like A Song
Neville said:
I found the whole experience of reading & then re-reading each of these lines peculiarly reassuring ..
I was going to say encouraging, but on immediate reflection, I am happy with the r word I first chose above .. thank you Teddy ❤️
September 21st, 2023 02:54
Neville said:
I found the whole experience of reading & then re-reading each of these lines peculiarly reassuring ..
I was going to say encouraging, but on immediate reflection, I am happy with the r word I first chose above .. thank you Teddy ❤️
September 21st, 2023 02:54
Life Is Like A Song
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Teddy, death can be a release for many but i my belief I know that they will be waiting for me when My Spirit joins them.
Andy
September 21st, 2023 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Teddy, death can be a release for many but i my belief I know that they will be waiting for me when My Spirit joins them.
Andy
September 21st, 2023 01:58
Ladybird
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure you are always \'polished to perfection\' Teddy and are certainly a wonderful lady.
Andy
September 21st, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure you are always \'polished to perfection\' Teddy and are certainly a wonderful lady.
Andy
September 21st, 2023 01:44
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