Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



The Death of Great Music
Bella Shepard said:

We all suffered a great loss when we lost them. Just to wonder what they might have done, if only, is a sad remembrance. The true greats will live on forever in their music, from generation to generation, and we are fortunate in that. Beautifully pondered dear Teddy, and eloquently expressed.

September 28th, 2023 10:38

An Ode To The Sandwich
aDarkerMind said:

crunchy peanut butter and real butter.
Janis Joplin ripping thru a blues tune, in the company of Kate Bush.
perfik!

September 28th, 2023 09:51

None Of Us Would Be Poets.
Pop64 said:

The ending of the poem, as stated, sums the truth of the write up with clarity. For love, the greatest of all emotions, that which inspires, brings joy, sadness and pain, is the very foundation of poetry. It is the spark for everything else. This is a wonderful write!

September 28th, 2023 09:47

None Of Us Would Be Poets.
AuburnScribbler said:

This is an amazingly written immaculate definition Teddy.15.

Some poems, emphatically hit the nail on the head, and this is one them.

This is a true literary triumph bravo and I hope that all is well!

September 28th, 2023 09:41

An Ode To The Sandwich
Christina8 said:

OOH my that was a lovely visual!! I\'d switch out keanu with someone else but keep Bradley Cooper!! Very nice!

September 28th, 2023 07:46

An Ode To The Sandwich
Saxon Crow said:

With or without sauce?

September 28th, 2023 07:35

An Ode To The Sandwich
Pop64 said:

Everyone has their own taste, that\'s quite a sandwich! Enjoy it and remember, what you don\'t finish, you can wrap up and have later LOL

September 28th, 2023 06:17

An Ode To The Sandwich
BlessedbyGod said:

Not at all what I was expecting!!!!🤣🤣
I love it!!!
Keanu Reeves and Bradley Cooper !!!!!!
Imagine that, obviously u do!!😂😂😂🥰🥰🥰

September 28th, 2023 06:16

An Ode To The Sandwich
peto said:

And served up on a plate
Wire in Teddy

September 28th, 2023 02:40

An Ode To The Sandwich
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Teddy.
I\'m between KP and dunno who else. It\'s a mouldy old sandwich! 😁 Tastes of... you know it, botox!

September 28th, 2023 01:45

An Ode To The Sandwich
LIZ said:

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I was thinking....I\'m hungry...but now I\'m REALLY hungry!!! I\'ll have a bite....or 2....or 3....Damn!!! 😲😲 OK give me the whole thing!! 💖💖💖

September 28th, 2023 01:28

The Death of Great Music
Jowi said:

That\'s powerful

September 27th, 2023 09:35

The Death of Great Music
Pop64 said:

While their families remain the victims, we as appreciators of the music only lose potential songs, but we carry forward their library of life. Well penned!

September 27th, 2023 08:31

And Write She shall
Pop64 said:

Sadness, I find, turns into more profound, deeper writes. These 3 short lines are a true statement of fact. Wonderfully conveyed.

September 27th, 2023 08:05

The Death of Great Music
sorenbarrett said:

I often wonder if they were all to live longer along with Janis Joplin, Mozart, Jimi Hendrix and many other greats what would music be like today? A provocative and most interesting thought. Nicely done Teddy.

September 27th, 2023 05:19

The Death of Great Music
Christina8 said:

I often wonder the same....as the daughter in law of a recording artist I think he went to soon....same with all the above mentioned artists....enough to make you cry when you think about all the music we missed out on.....Christina

September 27th, 2023 02:27

The Death of Great Music
LIZ said:

Tragedies....only way to not let ourselves become victims of it, is by keeping their music alive! 💖💖💖

September 27th, 2023 02:07

The Death of Great Music
orchidee said:

A fine write Teddy.

September 27th, 2023 02:04

And Write She shall
Christina8 said:

i do find it\'s easier to write about the sad stuff than happy...

September 26th, 2023 04:56

And Write She shall
Neville said:



................. superb ❤️

September 26th, 2023 01:59

And Write She shall
orchidee said:

Will KP write?! lol

September 26th, 2023 01:28

And Write She shall
LIZ said:

EVERY TIME!!!!💖💖💖

September 26th, 2023 01:03

Washed Away
sorenbarrett said:

I\'ve heard of lightning striking, whirlwind relationships and love going down the drain but this kind of wraps it all up into one. The metaphor of the umbrella is great, I think we all need one.

September 25th, 2023 13:50

Senryu 1
peto said:

Touche Teddy


September 25th, 2023 12:48

Washed Away
Doggerel Dave said:

I have absolutely no idea how your brain is wired (and, I admit, have been troubled by this in the past) but you certainly come up with some very interesting and entertaining connections, Teddy.

September 25th, 2023 04:15

None Of Us Would Be Poets.
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
(I bow to your superior talent
dear Poetess)
Beautiful poetry
I think your beloved Dante
would agree with me..
Have a lovely week, my friend

September 25th, 2023 04:13

Washed Away
Neville said:



brilliant .. this reminds me so much of ME .. ❤️

September 25th, 2023 03:20

Washed Away
Goldfinch60 said:

That can happen to us all Teddy but there is always a way forward into a better life where that umbrella will not be needed.

Andy

September 25th, 2023 02:46

Senryu 1
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful Senryu Teddy,

Andy

September 25th, 2023 02:40

Washed Away
LIZ said:

Teddy, life\'s experiences can do that to us. Letting go is no joke. But setting ourselves free....well that\'s priceless. And we must be aware...hence the heavy duty umbrella. BUT, I truly believe that sometimes....those hurricane winds take us to the most incredible, unexpected places...and that\'s where we learn and grow. I may be way off here but....I loved it!! ❤️

September 25th, 2023 02:32



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