Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Thomas W Case said:
So powerful and scenic. Great work.
February 25th, 2024 16:48
Thomas W Case said:
So powerful and scenic. Great work.
February 25th, 2024 16:48
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Parisab said:
To praise ones essence in the hard labor of a sonnet, is so brave and lovely. Job well done! I hope to take a walk somewhere in the old world and sit and attempt one soon.
February 25th, 2024 11:17
Parisab said:
To praise ones essence in the hard labor of a sonnet, is so brave and lovely. Job well done! I hope to take a walk somewhere in the old world and sit and attempt one soon.
February 25th, 2024 11:17
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Accidental Poet said:
Teddy, I sit here in awe. I know what it\'s like for a poem to take so long to write, and you pulled this off beautifully. This my dear poetess, is what poetry is all about. 🌹 😊
February 25th, 2024 10:47
Accidental Poet said:
Teddy, I sit here in awe. I know what it\'s like for a poem to take so long to write, and you pulled this off beautifully. This my dear poetess, is what poetry is all about. 🌹 😊
February 25th, 2024 10:47
Party Animal
rhmn_7 said:
That\'s what you call rising from the ashes. Nice poem!
February 25th, 2024 09:04
rhmn_7 said:
That\'s what you call rising from the ashes. Nice poem!
February 25th, 2024 09:04
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
rhmn_7 said:
Now that is a love worth living over and over again.
February 25th, 2024 07:59
rhmn_7 said:
Now that is a love worth living over and over again.
February 25th, 2024 07:59
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, now this is a sonnet to top all sonnets. I know how difficult they are to compose because I have dabbled myself. You have given your readers a love poem here of incredible depth and beauty. I can’t praise it enough. 🌹
February 25th, 2024 07:28
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, now this is a sonnet to top all sonnets. I know how difficult they are to compose because I have dabbled myself. You have given your readers a love poem here of incredible depth and beauty. I can’t praise it enough. 🌹
February 25th, 2024 07:28
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully expresses a deep and passionate love, comparing it to the intensity of the sun and the beauty of nature. The imagery of fiery eyes and golden locks evokes a sense of awe and admiration. The poem also touches on the theme of forgiveness and the importance of cherishing each day. The final lines convey a sense of eternal love and devotion, promising to continue loving even in the face of darkness.
February 25th, 2024 06:09
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully expresses a deep and passionate love, comparing it to the intensity of the sun and the beauty of nature. The imagery of fiery eyes and golden locks evokes a sense of awe and admiration. The poem also touches on the theme of forgiveness and the importance of cherishing each day. The final lines convey a sense of eternal love and devotion, promising to continue loving even in the face of darkness.
February 25th, 2024 06:09
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Neville said:
Perfectly executed Teddy .. I must again confess you are far braver than I .. and for some sad reason, you made me think about our dear old Dusk Arising .. 🌹
February 25th, 2024 05:52
Neville said:
Perfectly executed Teddy .. I must again confess you are far braver than I .. and for some sad reason, you made me think about our dear old Dusk Arising .. 🌹
February 25th, 2024 05:52
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Doggerel Dave said:
As Soren so rightly points out, You are up there with, I\'ll say, the bard of Stratford-upon-Avon, Teddy.
And this coming from someone with a general antipathy for love poetry.....
February 25th, 2024 05:09
Doggerel Dave said:
As Soren so rightly points out, You are up there with, I\'ll say, the bard of Stratford-upon-Avon, Teddy.
And this coming from someone with a general antipathy for love poetry.....
February 25th, 2024 05:09
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this holds such a classical feel. I hear Browning in this somehow. Romantic to the core. I love this one. So many good lines from the first stanza on.
\"Dusk until dawn, to your love I have clung
Dreaming of a world that sing songs unsung
I, who dies in the forest of your heart
It’s I whom will die in the forest dark\"
There is deep meaning in these lines of obsession and facing the cold of being ignored or rejected.
February 25th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy this holds such a classical feel. I hear Browning in this somehow. Romantic to the core. I love this one. So many good lines from the first stanza on.
\"Dusk until dawn, to your love I have clung
Dreaming of a world that sing songs unsung
I, who dies in the forest of your heart
It’s I whom will die in the forest dark\"
There is deep meaning in these lines of obsession and facing the cold of being ignored or rejected.
February 25th, 2024 04:59
Party Animal
Doggerel Dave said:
I do believe you may have made a typo here, Teddy.
I\'m pretty sure it\'s \'cobblers\', as I believe you are far too canny for that......
February 24th, 2024 18:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I do believe you may have made a typo here, Teddy.
I\'m pretty sure it\'s \'cobblers\', as I believe you are far too canny for that......
February 24th, 2024 18:17
Party Animal
Cassie58 said:
A fun poem Teddy which brought back some memories of times gone by. Happy Saturday to you.
February 24th, 2024 14:57
Cassie58 said:
A fun poem Teddy which brought back some memories of times gone by. Happy Saturday to you.
February 24th, 2024 14:57
Party Animal
Thoughtless said:
You might like the series Hazbin in Hell. Who knows? I know about burning midnight oil, though.
Exhaustion, whew! Know that feeling. Especially when I used to read by kerosene lamp.
February 24th, 2024 14:49
Thoughtless said:
You might like the series Hazbin in Hell. Who knows? I know about burning midnight oil, though.
Exhaustion, whew! Know that feeling. Especially when I used to read by kerosene lamp.
February 24th, 2024 14:49
Party Animal
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m quite certain I know nothing of such an animal. 😉
February 24th, 2024 14:37
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m quite certain I know nothing of such an animal. 😉
February 24th, 2024 14:37
The Greatest Love Album Ever Written
sorenbarrett said:
\"a broken heart only needs
that one last sip
just enough to numb
the excruciating pain
that comes with loss
whilst giving company to my brokenness\"
A great stanza here. Identifiable for anyone that has suffered loss of any type. Loved it.
February 24th, 2024 08:52
sorenbarrett said:
\"a broken heart only needs
that one last sip
just enough to numb
the excruciating pain
that comes with loss
whilst giving company to my brokenness\"
A great stanza here. Identifiable for anyone that has suffered loss of any type. Loved it.
February 24th, 2024 08:52
Breakfast Surprise
Goldfinch60 said:
What a big egg for breakfast this morning Teddy. LOL
Andy
February 24th, 2024 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
What a big egg for breakfast this morning Teddy. LOL
Andy
February 24th, 2024 02:42
Breakfast Surprise
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m dying to know, scrambled or fried. Poor Humpty, but lucky utensils. Love the poem, love the pic, love the poet!
February 23rd, 2024 15:24
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m dying to know, scrambled or fried. Poor Humpty, but lucky utensils. Love the poem, love the pic, love the poet!
February 23rd, 2024 15:24
Breakfast Surprise
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ll take mine with bacon, taters and wheat toast please. Oh, and a glass of orange juice too. Thanks Teddy, this brightened up my day. 🌞👍
February 23rd, 2024 10:12
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ll take mine with bacon, taters and wheat toast please. Oh, and a glass of orange juice too. Thanks Teddy, this brightened up my day. 🌞👍
February 23rd, 2024 10:12
Breakfast Surprise
sorenbarrett said:
Appetizing. but I thought that the dish had run away with the spoon. Did the spoon come back for an encore performance? A most fun read Teddy
February 23rd, 2024 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Appetizing. but I thought that the dish had run away with the spoon. Did the spoon come back for an encore performance? A most fun read Teddy
February 23rd, 2024 05:01
From where the wild roses grow
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Loaded with meaning and poetic mastery... A heavy piece, delivered just right!
February 23rd, 2024 04:41
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Loaded with meaning and poetic mastery... A heavy piece, delivered just right!
February 23rd, 2024 04:41
Maniac
sorenbarrett said:
Seductive, alluring, haunting in a way, I hear a sirens call. Short but so powerfully packed with imagery leading one\'s imagination expanding on the original work filling in what is not said. A true sign of a wonderful work that lingers long after the read is done. Kudos for the courage to write on a risque\' topic with such class and skill.
February 22nd, 2024 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
Seductive, alluring, haunting in a way, I hear a sirens call. Short but so powerfully packed with imagery leading one\'s imagination expanding on the original work filling in what is not said. A true sign of a wonderful work that lingers long after the read is done. Kudos for the courage to write on a risque\' topic with such class and skill.
February 22nd, 2024 13:17
Maniac
Accidental Poet said:
I believe I\'ve encountered this person before. I barely escaped. 🤔
February 22nd, 2024 10:17
Accidental Poet said:
I believe I\'ve encountered this person before. I barely escaped. 🤔
February 22nd, 2024 10:17
From where the wild roses grow
Accidental Poet said:
If I could be but a rose at the side of my parents, I shall bloom every day and rest peacefully at night. (inspired by you Teddy 😉)
February 22nd, 2024 10:07
Accidental Poet said:
If I could be but a rose at the side of my parents, I shall bloom every day and rest peacefully at night. (inspired by you Teddy 😉)
February 22nd, 2024 10:07
Maniac
Doggerel Dave said:
Pass. I\'ve never been fond of a pretzel as the last one was followed by an extraordinary large dental bill after I got my indigestion under control, (half a box of antiacid tablets it took) and I really can\'t afford another and I\'m trying to loose weight so the bendy bit isn\'t going to work for me, plus the thought of her dirty feet is a little teensy bit of a turn off and.........
February 22nd, 2024 07:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Pass. I\'ve never been fond of a pretzel as the last one was followed by an extraordinary large dental bill after I got my indigestion under control, (half a box of antiacid tablets it took) and I really can\'t afford another and I\'m trying to loose weight so the bendy bit isn\'t going to work for me, plus the thought of her dirty feet is a little teensy bit of a turn off and.........
February 22nd, 2024 07:53
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