Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Lonely Canvas
Parisab said:
Brilliant observation that he may not have wanted to draw in a genius fashion but for others to capture his “loneliness” on his canvas. This poem connects to the artist’s heart very well.
October 18th, 2023 02:06
Parisab said:
Brilliant observation that he may not have wanted to draw in a genius fashion but for others to capture his “loneliness” on his canvas. This poem connects to the artist’s heart very well.
October 18th, 2023 02:06
Lonely Canvas
LIZ said:
Doesn\'t that always happen though? Sadly, the most beautifully troubled minds, are only discovered after death! This is an amazing piece Teddy!!! 💖💖💖💖💖
October 18th, 2023 01:59
LIZ said:
Doesn\'t that always happen though? Sadly, the most beautifully troubled minds, are only discovered after death! This is an amazing piece Teddy!!! 💖💖💖💖💖
October 18th, 2023 01:59
Lonely Canvas
orchidee said:
A sensitive write - a troubled soul.
A genius on the verge of some madness? That\'ll be me then, married to KP, of course! heehee.
October 18th, 2023 01:49
orchidee said:
A sensitive write - a troubled soul.
A genius on the verge of some madness? That\'ll be me then, married to KP, of course! heehee.
October 18th, 2023 01:49
A True Hollywood Woman
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Teddy, so much said from those innocent eyes.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Teddy, so much said from those innocent eyes.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 01:30
Sheep In Uniform
aDarkerMind said:
there is something about your writing of late that takes me to places I have never been before Teddy;
a darkness shared with friends.
thinking of you;
October 17th, 2023 16:18
aDarkerMind said:
there is something about your writing of late that takes me to places I have never been before Teddy;
a darkness shared with friends.
thinking of you;
October 17th, 2023 16:18
Sheep In Uniform
LIZ said:
Teddy, this must have been so hard for you to share. I applaud your bravery! THIS \"I’m not scared, I promise, no point, the more I shiver laughter gets louder\" gave me chills!! Holding a candle for you my lovely!!!
October 17th, 2023 09:37
LIZ said:
Teddy, this must have been so hard for you to share. I applaud your bravery! THIS \"I’m not scared, I promise, no point, the more I shiver laughter gets louder\" gave me chills!! Holding a candle for you my lovely!!!
October 17th, 2023 09:37
Sheep In Uniform
sorenbarrett said:
At first I thought that you were referring to so many different episodes of slaughter, the war in Ukraine the war with Israel and Hamas countless others then it became clear. So many sad incidents in this world buried in the ashes of history. When will people learn to treat one another with \"humanity\" or maybe they do. A poignant metaphor Teddy.
October 17th, 2023 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
At first I thought that you were referring to so many different episodes of slaughter, the war in Ukraine the war with Israel and Hamas countless others then it became clear. So many sad incidents in this world buried in the ashes of history. When will people learn to treat one another with \"humanity\" or maybe they do. A poignant metaphor Teddy.
October 17th, 2023 08:51
Sheep In Uniform
orchidee said:
And he only had one thingy....... it\'s said. swoon! An aberration in more than one way.
October 17th, 2023 02:51
orchidee said:
And he only had one thingy....... it\'s said. swoon! An aberration in more than one way.
October 17th, 2023 02:51
Sheep In Uniform
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Teddy.
Yes, why these people going about with dead caterpillars on their upper lips?
Don\'t like beards much; like moustaches even less. I got my rug - my wig!
October 17th, 2023 02:50
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Teddy.
Yes, why these people going about with dead caterpillars on their upper lips?
Don\'t like beards much; like moustaches even less. I got my rug - my wig!
October 17th, 2023 02:50
Sheep In Uniform
2781 said:
\"I said in mine heart concerning the estate of the sons of men, that God might manifest them, and they may see that they themselves are beasts.\"
October 17th, 2023 02:32
2781 said:
\"I said in mine heart concerning the estate of the sons of men, that God might manifest them, and they may see that they themselves are beasts.\"
October 17th, 2023 02:32
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
Pop64 said:
First off, I love the expression \"Wrinkles of the great moon\", that\'s so original and just so clever and descriptive. To be free upon days wake, that\'s a dream in itself. This read so beautifully - Michael
October 16th, 2023 09:52
Pop64 said:
First off, I love the expression \"Wrinkles of the great moon\", that\'s so original and just so clever and descriptive. To be free upon days wake, that\'s a dream in itself. This read so beautifully - Michael
October 16th, 2023 09:52
A True Hollywood Woman
2781 said:
The world would be a better place if we were all child like.
October 16th, 2023 07:54
2781 said:
The world would be a better place if we were all child like.
October 16th, 2023 07:54
A True Hollywood Woman
LIZ said:
A child\'s insight, on the realities of life.....and what we as adults fail to see!!! If you would have seen her today...with the knowledge you have....would it change your mind? Would you see her differently? Just thinking out loud!! 😏
This picture though!! 🤌
💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
October 16th, 2023 05:02
LIZ said:
A child\'s insight, on the realities of life.....and what we as adults fail to see!!! If you would have seen her today...with the knowledge you have....would it change your mind? Would you see her differently? Just thinking out loud!! 😏
This picture though!! 🤌
💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
October 16th, 2023 05:02
A Letter From Dante To Me
L. B. Mek said:
simply Beautiful!
Muse inspiring, A muse
Poetic legacy, enriching
refinement of a Poetess\'
ink
meanwhile Poesy\'s truth
lives on...!
October 16th, 2023 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
simply Beautiful!
Muse inspiring, A muse
Poetic legacy, enriching
refinement of a Poetess\'
ink
meanwhile Poesy\'s truth
lives on...!
October 16th, 2023 04:35
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, I hope he took your worries with him as he flew to the Moon.
Andy
October 16th, 2023 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, I hope he took your worries with him as he flew to the Moon.
Andy
October 16th, 2023 01:25
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
Thomas W Case said:
I love the atmosphere in this piece. Great use of language to set the scene.
October 16th, 2023 00:40
Thomas W Case said:
I love the atmosphere in this piece. Great use of language to set the scene.
October 16th, 2023 00:40
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Teddy, 👏 👌
October 15th, 2023 21:26
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Teddy, 👏 👌
October 15th, 2023 21:26
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
peto said:
Your word choices in this one are spectacular Teddy
Loved it
October 15th, 2023 13:11
peto said:
Your word choices in this one are spectacular Teddy
Loved it
October 15th, 2023 13:11
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
LIZ said:
Ahhhh the Raven! My spirit animal!! I loved everything about this one!! FREEDOM-of the mind! Out of sight, but flying high!!
October 15th, 2023 09:17
LIZ said:
Ahhhh the Raven! My spirit animal!! I loved everything about this one!! FREEDOM-of the mind! Out of sight, but flying high!!
October 15th, 2023 09:17
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
sorenbarrett said:
Great poetic lines \"the shadows of the moons wrinkles \"i.I can\'t help but think of Poe\'s The Raven but in his poem the narrator did not end up free but would not lift himself from the shadow \"nevermore\"
October 15th, 2023 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
Great poetic lines \"the shadows of the moons wrinkles \"i.I can\'t help but think of Poe\'s The Raven but in his poem the narrator did not end up free but would not lift himself from the shadow \"nevermore\"
October 15th, 2023 06:58
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
novaa said:
Evocative words that capture a serene imagery. Enjoyed reading!
October 15th, 2023 05:05
novaa said:
Evocative words that capture a serene imagery. Enjoyed reading!
October 15th, 2023 05:05
A Letter From Dante To Me
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work and use of language to paint the scene. Well done.
October 15th, 2023 00:34
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work and use of language to paint the scene. Well done.
October 15th, 2023 00:34
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