Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Life Is Like A Song
MendedFences27 said:

If there is an afterlife, I perceive it to be a state of ecstasy, totally different from this life.
Your poem paints a very hopeful image of what it might be like. Your words and images become clear and complete. It is a paradise for all. Loved this poem. - Phil A.

September 21st, 2023 11:54

Life Is Like A Song
Christina8 said:

Wow, an incredibly insightful write, Teddy! Yes I personally believe the same, that we were dead before we were alive. i also don\'t remember it hurting before I was born......I find cemeteries peaceful, knowing that those spirits are in the beyond. its not like they are there just hanging around. Really thought provoking!

September 21st, 2023 11:46

Life Is Like A Song
sorenbarrett said:

Interesting thoughts that run through all of our minds from time to time. They say that when they used to hang people they would let them pass out then revive them because it was so painful coming back. Then they would hang them again. I think life is more painful than death. As to life after I\'ll have to wait to see.

September 21st, 2023 11:41

Life Is Like A Song
BlessedbyGod said:

Wow, incredible piece Teddy, I have always found cemeteries peaceful, I don\'t know why, maybe it\'s because I know it that those souls are at peace and sleeping, in a way,
But I also believe that there is coming judgement day where God will separate the good from the bad, in the Bible it says the sheep from the goats,and the good will be in a very beautiful place that\'s peaceful , no pain , HEAVEN,
and the bad will go on to forever torment, paying for their murders, rapes , child abuse and so on....
I\'m very confident that I\'m going to heaven, a beautiful paradise full of love and laughter. See u there!!

September 21st, 2023 09:37

Life Is Like A Song
Pop64 said:

This is not only a piece that makes one think deeply on the subject of death, but it also provides a happy idea of death, which is a welcome change. Beautiful!

September 21st, 2023 05:46

Life Is Like A Song
LIZ said:

You\'ve gone deep on me Teddy, and I love it!!! \"yet I believe those lost souls must be somewhere?\", me too! This is so beautiful! Looking at death as a rebirth sort of....where we end up being...who we were always meant to be! The unknown.....And ummmmm you already are a songwriter!!! 💖💖💖💖

September 21st, 2023 03:25

Life Is Like A Song
Neville said:

I found the whole experience of reading & then re-reading each of these lines peculiarly reassuring ..
I was going to say encouraging, but on immediate reflection, I am happy with the r word I first chose above .. thank you Teddy ❤️

September 21st, 2023 02:54

Life Is Like A Song
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotive words Teddy, death can be a release for many but i my belief I know that they will be waiting for me when My Spirit joins them.

Andy

September 21st, 2023 01:58

Ladybird
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure you are always \'polished to perfection\' Teddy and are certainly a wonderful lady.

Andy

September 21st, 2023 01:44

Life Is Like A Song
Doggerel Dave said:

Very deep, Teddy.

September 21st, 2023 01:43

Life Is Like A Song
orchidee said:

It\'s the death of song, when I start to sing! heehee.

September 21st, 2023 01:28

Ladybird
The Fife Wanderer said:

Very nice read 👏

September 20th, 2023 16:50

Ladybird
Pop64 said:

Beauty, style and strength, a true lady! Nicely done and way to be!

September 20th, 2023 05:48

Ladybird
Neville said:



Never change .. stay just as you are .. ❤️

September 20th, 2023 05:44

Ladybird
Doggerel Dave said:

Nice to know the lashing will be smooth and hygienic.... LOL

September 20th, 2023 04:24

Ladybird
Caring dove said:

Hi teddy a good writing think ladybirds are very pretty .. and yes sometimes we don’t want to share too much and we just wish to be seen in a almost shiny , perfect way lol

Ladybirds are lovely )

September 20th, 2023 02:08

Ladybird
orchidee said:

A fine write T.

September 20th, 2023 02:02

Ladybird
LIZ said:

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 and we\'re off!!! SAME....I\'ll
always be a lady....but not scared to kick some a$$; and my stilettos are 6 inch high! 😆 Teddy, are you a Scorpio? LOL! This is gold!!!!

September 20th, 2023 01:33

Charlotte’s Fate
Goldfinch60 said:

Glad you had a good day after killing that spider Teddy. Mary does not like spiders so I have to capture them and let them go free in the garden.

Andy

September 20th, 2023 01:17

Charlotte’s Fate
sorenbarrett said:

Although I respect all life and feel it is bad luck to kill anything living I wouldn\'t let it ruin my day either. An entertaining write Teddy

September 19th, 2023 12:24

Charlotte’s Fate
Christina8 said:

Spiders are not traditionally bad luck in the USA but I tend to leave them alone......unless they are in my house! Great write by the way, wonderful, in fact!

September 19th, 2023 10:59

Charlotte’s Fate
Neville said:


you are excelling in a vast arrange of poetic genres Teddy .. and I admire anyone who let\'s these extraordinarily creatures live beside them in peace just as I do ..

my mum used to say .. if you want to live and thrive, then let a spider run alive ... ❤️

September 19th, 2023 05:32

Charlotte’s Fate
orchidee said:

Oops! Porky Pig there...lol.

September 19th, 2023 04:05

Charlotte’s Fate
LIZ said:

🤣🤣🤣 Teddy....your mood lately!!! 🤣
I love this!! UMMMM I killed one this morning. 🙈 She had no business being in my space. Just saying. She got HER karma!!! Lol

September 19th, 2023 03:21

Charlotte’s Fate
BlessedbyGod said:

Hahaha, I\'ve done that myself!!!

September 19th, 2023 02:59

Only One Thing Can Silence Me
Goldfinch60 said:

I will send you 1 lira to get you started Teddy.

Andy

September 19th, 2023 00:51

Only One Thing Can Silence Me
MendedFences27 said:

Sounds like a plan. If I start with the $72. 48 I\'ve made so far it should only take me about 138 billion years to get there. Seriously, poetry is not for the faint of wallet. We\'ll just have to write what must be written to the best of our abilities and hope for a miracle. - Phil A.

September 18th, 2023 21:40

Only One Thing Can Silence Me
sorenbarrett said:

I echo that but I\'m not sure, a million what? Laughs, criticisms, irate readers?

September 18th, 2023 17:13

Only One Thing Can Silence Me
Bella Shepard said:

Here, here Teddy! A very wise choice. But I hope you will still consider us even when you reach that million. You may not be rich in bucks right now, but you are very rich in the esteem we all feel for you. Keep that pen well inked!

September 18th, 2023 13:52

Only One Thing Can Silence Me
aDarkerMind said:

I would say the very same thing Teddy, but doubt I\'ll live to be 200!
Happy Monday to you also;

September 18th, 2023 13:51



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