Comments received on poems by StormyDay
Lost
BattleChrist said:
Was it personal experience you were writing from ????Whatever it is its truly heart warming,,i could well relate to the poem for i too had dealt with a similar situation earlier !I really like your style ,the use of some wonderful phrases coherently coupled with the sing song rhyme scheme of the poem made me delve deeper into the the poem's feelings and the emotions which echo through its words!Sad in the end but i guess that is what life is all about ,someone is always sad in the end!
February 16th, 2011 15:37
BattleChrist said:
Was it personal experience you were writing from ????Whatever it is its truly heart warming,,i could well relate to the poem for i too had dealt with a similar situation earlier !I really like your style ,the use of some wonderful phrases coherently coupled with the sing song rhyme scheme of the poem made me delve deeper into the the poem's feelings and the emotions which echo through its words!Sad in the end but i guess that is what life is all about ,someone is always sad in the end!
February 16th, 2011 15:37
Sibling Rivalry
Cheeky Missy said:
Haiku...the way to succinctly state so much. Fascinating perspective on sibling strife...and I think rather perfect, as well.
February 14th, 2011 23:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Haiku...the way to succinctly state so much. Fascinating perspective on sibling strife...and I think rather perfect, as well.
February 14th, 2011 23:04
Fall Out
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, lalala. It is very sad, and so perfectly descriptive of falling out of love...excellently put...I like how you presented in the varying stanzas, which effectively communicated the thoughts.
February 12th, 2011 14:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, lalala. It is very sad, and so perfectly descriptive of falling out of love...excellently put...I like how you presented in the varying stanzas, which effectively communicated the thoughts.
February 12th, 2011 14:20
Sorry
Lonelykaren said:
this is a good poem sometimes we dont think wht we say is hurtful untill the damage is done . well great poem.
February 11th, 2011 14:19
Lonelykaren said:
this is a good poem sometimes we dont think wht we say is hurtful untill the damage is done . well great poem.
February 11th, 2011 14:19
Noise
Lonelykaren said:
This was a good poem its kind of like me. Keep writing.
February 11th, 2011 14:13
Lonelykaren said:
This was a good poem its kind of like me. Keep writing.
February 11th, 2011 14:13
Shy
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, so perfectly expressed! The image is cute and fitting, and the scenario you depicted too real and familiar....I love how you gently captured it in your stanzas. Beautiful and excellent!!
February 8th, 2011 22:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, so perfectly expressed! The image is cute and fitting, and the scenario you depicted too real and familiar....I love how you gently captured it in your stanzas. Beautiful and excellent!!
February 8th, 2011 22:17
Snow
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautifully done, and delightful itself! I love the image you paired with it...too perfectly showing what your sweet haiku presented. Lovely, short and sweet! Excellent!
February 8th, 2011 22:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautifully done, and delightful itself! I love the image you paired with it...too perfectly showing what your sweet haiku presented. Lovely, short and sweet! Excellent!
February 8th, 2011 22:14
Shy
dbremner said:
You've written this very well. Words and picture fit perfectly.
February 8th, 2011 17:05
dbremner said:
You've written this very well. Words and picture fit perfectly.
February 8th, 2011 17:05
Snow
dbremner said:
Fine haiku on a natural theme as they are supposed to be. Great job with a fine wee rhyme to the end line!
February 7th, 2011 16:43
dbremner said:
Fine haiku on a natural theme as they are supposed to be. Great job with a fine wee rhyme to the end line!
February 7th, 2011 16:43
Your Girl
a soldiers wife13 said:
this poem is so true..i love it.. i love how it just gets to the point...
February 2nd, 2011 10:30
a soldiers wife13 said:
this poem is so true..i love it.. i love how it just gets to the point...
February 2nd, 2011 10:30
Your Girl
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, a very nice love poem...fascinating, since she feels herself not good enough for him, yet rather downplays his love in the concluding stanza, the final two lines making her point of why she loves him and wants to be the best for him. I liked the line in the first stanza that he doesn't want her to change, implying he loves her as she is, good and bad. It's a sweet, love poem...I like it!
January 31st, 2011 23:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, a very nice love poem...fascinating, since she feels herself not good enough for him, yet rather downplays his love in the concluding stanza, the final two lines making her point of why she loves him and wants to be the best for him. I liked the line in the first stanza that he doesn't want her to change, implying he loves her as she is, good and bad. It's a sweet, love poem...I like it!
January 31st, 2011 23:20
Sorry
StormyDay said:
Thank you all for your kind words of encouragemnent. :)
January 31st, 2011 11:26
StormyDay said:
Thank you all for your kind words of encouragemnent. :)
January 31st, 2011 11:26
Sorry
Cheeky Missy said:
I LOVE the image...the puppy is so perfectly fitting and so adorable! It's a short and sweet apology only too applicable to life with those who love you....Excellent! And they must readily forgive, if they love you....if not, somehow it takes some of the weight out of the apology anyway. I enjoyed this.
January 28th, 2011 22:49
Cheeky Missy said:
I LOVE the image...the puppy is so perfectly fitting and so adorable! It's a short and sweet apology only too applicable to life with those who love you....Excellent! And they must readily forgive, if they love you....if not, somehow it takes some of the weight out of the apology anyway. I enjoyed this.
January 28th, 2011 22:49
Sorry
Marius said:
"and all the things I didn't say"... how true. How often we forget that. Thank you for the reminder in this beautiful little poem.
January 28th, 2011 16:29
Marius said:
"and all the things I didn't say"... how true. How often we forget that. Thank you for the reminder in this beautiful little poem.
January 28th, 2011 16:29
False Conceptions
Lonelykaren said:
well this was good. everyone i would have to say likes bad boys in life. although some of them are actually nice. take my friend john for example hes a bad boy but he can be sweet an caring. i love this poem it has a deep meaning.
January 27th, 2011 14:34
Lonelykaren said:
well this was good. everyone i would have to say likes bad boys in life. although some of them are actually nice. take my friend john for example hes a bad boy but he can be sweet an caring. i love this poem it has a deep meaning.
January 27th, 2011 14:34
False Conceptions
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, sweet! I quite enjoyed this! You drew it all so delightfully, building up from the beginning familiar childish/youthful haughtiness to the concluding beautiful rather humble cry of love...it is so sweet...and so perfectly depicted true to life....Excellent! I love it!
January 27th, 2011 12:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, sweet! I quite enjoyed this! You drew it all so delightfully, building up from the beginning familiar childish/youthful haughtiness to the concluding beautiful rather humble cry of love...it is so sweet...and so perfectly depicted true to life....Excellent! I love it!
January 27th, 2011 12:19
Stay
a soldiers wife13 said:
i love this peom.. u out did urself on this one....
January 27th, 2011 11:36
a soldiers wife13 said:
i love this peom.. u out did urself on this one....
January 27th, 2011 11:36
Stallion
Cheeky Missy said:
Delightful! Fascinating delineation of a mighty stallion. I enjoyed this! And the image was only too perfect!
January 27th, 2011 00:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Delightful! Fascinating delineation of a mighty stallion. I enjoyed this! And the image was only too perfect!
January 27th, 2011 00:33
Desire
Cheeky Missy said:
Oooh. I think it's like the songs I don' t listen to....I 'spect you wrote it very well....it's unfamiliar territory to me....But doubtless you did a great job..image included. It's erotic.
January 26th, 2011 19:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Oooh. I think it's like the songs I don' t listen to....I 'spect you wrote it very well....it's unfamiliar territory to me....But doubtless you did a great job..image included. It's erotic.
January 26th, 2011 19:53
Desire
Marius said:
It's usually not a good thing to lose oneself for any reason, but this time you found the perfect reason to do it. Love is worth it. Loved the poem.
January 25th, 2011 17:02
Marius said:
It's usually not a good thing to lose oneself for any reason, but this time you found the perfect reason to do it. Love is worth it. Loved the poem.
January 25th, 2011 17:02
Stay
Lonelykaren said:
i like this. its nice
you are a great writter keep your dreams up ull succeed..
January 25th, 2011 14:22
Lonelykaren said:
i like this. its nice
you are a great writter keep your dreams up ull succeed..
January 25th, 2011 14:22
Can You?
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. La, and now I shall sound stupid...what is being experienced? For I thought you were tasting and experiencing "love" and if he is not, then how can you? Too bad it concluded on the low note...but the title of course, paved the way for such a disappointment. I like the way you wrote it...makes the point effectively, narrowing the stanzas down to the essential point of the questions and your answer. You captured the sentiment nicely with your questions. Excellent!
January 24th, 2011 16:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. La, and now I shall sound stupid...what is being experienced? For I thought you were tasting and experiencing "love" and if he is not, then how can you? Too bad it concluded on the low note...but the title of course, paved the way for such a disappointment. I like the way you wrote it...makes the point effectively, narrowing the stanzas down to the essential point of the questions and your answer. You captured the sentiment nicely with your questions. Excellent!
January 24th, 2011 16:37
Those Eyes
StormyDay said:
Thank you all so much, I really enjoyed writing this one.
January 24th, 2011 08:44
StormyDay said:
Thank you all so much, I really enjoyed writing this one.
January 24th, 2011 08:44
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