Comments received on poems by StormyDay
Cherry Blossoms
bigwolf said:
A dramatic picture, very well written with such imagery.
February 28th, 2013 12:55
bigwolf said:
A dramatic picture, very well written with such imagery.
February 28th, 2013 12:55
Trust Within
Dolphine29 said:
My personal suggestion... for the title .. TRUST WITHIN
It can also be a reflection inside ourselves, and that is the love that make everything be alive.
I really enjoyed your poem!
January 31st, 2012 17:11
Dolphine29 said:
My personal suggestion... for the title .. TRUST WITHIN
It can also be a reflection inside ourselves, and that is the love that make everything be alive.
I really enjoyed your poem!
January 31st, 2012 17:11
Know This
Cheeky Missy said:
While the graphic slang added the effective depth of cruelty and despite dealt to the suffering, still another would have been more tasteful and gracious, if I may dare to say so. It seems to have a hint almost of romance, though it is unclassified, (I had to think of your Daryn first) and offers that sweetening breath of tender consolation, a promise to strengthen, where possible, the failing, easing the burden and lightening the load. Admittedly entering the scene belatedly yet no less fervently in love for the victim, it seems an offer the drowning might only too readily welcome and embrace. Excellent imagery and beautiful sentiments. I enjoyed it sans the touch of modern crudity. Lovely.
January 28th, 2012 22:43
Cheeky Missy said:
While the graphic slang added the effective depth of cruelty and despite dealt to the suffering, still another would have been more tasteful and gracious, if I may dare to say so. It seems to have a hint almost of romance, though it is unclassified, (I had to think of your Daryn first) and offers that sweetening breath of tender consolation, a promise to strengthen, where possible, the failing, easing the burden and lightening the load. Admittedly entering the scene belatedly yet no less fervently in love for the victim, it seems an offer the drowning might only too readily welcome and embrace. Excellent imagery and beautiful sentiments. I enjoyed it sans the touch of modern crudity. Lovely.
January 28th, 2012 22:43
Without You
dbremner said:
I'll tell you something straight - this poem is truly excellent and it's without doubt one of the best I've ever read here. What you have written is pure art! Really well done.
January 17th, 2012 16:25
dbremner said:
I'll tell you something straight - this poem is truly excellent and it's without doubt one of the best I've ever read here. What you have written is pure art! Really well done.
January 17th, 2012 16:25
Soldier
Anna said:
This poem is true.
I hate wars, by the way. And I don't understand why we and others start them- all they cause is destruction and sadness...
Beautiful poem.
July 29th, 2011 20:08
Anna said:
This poem is true.
I hate wars, by the way. And I don't understand why we and others start them- all they cause is destruction and sadness...
Beautiful poem.
July 29th, 2011 20:08
Soldier
Dolphine29 said:
So true the last part. And I hope one day wars will be no more, I hope ppl start to be aware and have understanding instead of resentment and hate. Well I hope.
Best
Dolphine
April 20th, 2011 18:25
Dolphine29 said:
So true the last part. And I hope one day wars will be no more, I hope ppl start to be aware and have understanding instead of resentment and hate. Well I hope.
Best
Dolphine
April 20th, 2011 18:25
My Reason
Cheeky Missy said:
Oooh, lala! Luck Daryn! Looks like the spoiled Valentine's Day didn't mar the future! This is delightfully sweet and beautiful. So romantic and sweetly loving. I like it.
March 22nd, 2011 22:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Oooh, lala! Luck Daryn! Looks like the spoiled Valentine's Day didn't mar the future! This is delightfully sweet and beautiful. So romantic and sweetly loving. I like it.
March 22nd, 2011 22:13
Facade
SauravRHS said:
Cool! Loved it! I wonder what the real identity of that girl is! Keep writing and one day I shall answer to that girl's identity!
February 26th, 2011 08:44
SauravRHS said:
Cool! Loved it! I wonder what the real identity of that girl is! Keep writing and one day I shall answer to that girl's identity!
February 26th, 2011 08:44
Buds in Bloom
Cheeky Missy said:
Sakura?! Lovely tribute to the form itself, as well as love. Excellent!
February 26th, 2011 00:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Sakura?! Lovely tribute to the form itself, as well as love. Excellent!
February 26th, 2011 00:33
Butterflies
Cheeky Missy said:
The image is perfect and the description is fascinating...beautiful, and as it seems I heard haikus were supposed to be about nature...seems....altogether perfect! Lovely, I enjoyed it.
February 23rd, 2011 23:40
Cheeky Missy said:
The image is perfect and the description is fascinating...beautiful, and as it seems I heard haikus were supposed to be about nature...seems....altogether perfect! Lovely, I enjoyed it.
February 23rd, 2011 23:40
Facade
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent point...yet that is not the way to bring down the facade,...by demanding,...is it? Something that can get underneath, something that might inspire the trust? Just a guess, but that's what it seems to me.
February 23rd, 2011 00:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent point...yet that is not the way to bring down the facade,...by demanding,...is it? Something that can get underneath, something that might inspire the trust? Just a guess, but that's what it seems to me.
February 23rd, 2011 00:33
Facade
Emi said:
Wow... This is amazing!! One of the best poems I've ever read on here!!
February 21st, 2011 16:48
Emi said:
Wow... This is amazing!! One of the best poems I've ever read on here!!
February 21st, 2011 16:48
Snow
SauravRHS said:
"delight in the white"
delight in the sight... Yeah. I have fortunately experienced snowfall once. It was really a very fascinating venture!
February 20th, 2011 10:28
SauravRHS said:
"delight in the white"
delight in the sight... Yeah. I have fortunately experienced snowfall once. It was really a very fascinating venture!
February 20th, 2011 10:28
Sorry
SauravRHS said:
Simple and good! Loved it! I guess there won't be anyone who will read this and yet remain angry. They will have to give in... awsome!
February 20th, 2011 10:26
SauravRHS said:
Simple and good! Loved it! I guess there won't be anyone who will read this and yet remain angry. They will have to give in... awsome!
February 20th, 2011 10:26
Noise
SauravRHS said:
I love your way of keeping the poem simple! It is so amazing! I am quite bad at that. Often people don't understand my poems. Yeah really noise is like a desperate dunce who is trying to impress people but is getting frustrated on failing again and again. Haha! Great work! Keep writing!
February 20th, 2011 10:24
SauravRHS said:
I love your way of keeping the poem simple! It is so amazing! I am quite bad at that. Often people don't understand my poems. Yeah really noise is like a desperate dunce who is trying to impress people but is getting frustrated on failing again and again. Haha! Great work! Keep writing!
February 20th, 2011 10:24
Water
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently succinct, as usual, and well-penned. Quite enjoyable.
February 19th, 2011 23:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently succinct, as usual, and well-penned. Quite enjoyable.
February 19th, 2011 23:53
Sorry
Emi said:
I love it!! I especially love the first stanza - so true! What is left unsaid is sometimes more hurtful that what is said... If this is based off of something that has happened to you, then I hope you were forgiven. :)
February 18th, 2011 13:38
Emi said:
I love it!! I especially love the first stanza - so true! What is left unsaid is sometimes more hurtful that what is said... If this is based off of something that has happened to you, then I hope you were forgiven. :)
February 18th, 2011 13:38
Water
StormyDay said:
Think of the course of a river. Let's say it flows down from a mountainside, over rocks and ledges, through rapids and white water, then it comes to the bottom, where it trickles down to a stream and empties into an ocean, estruary, delta, ect... It's just the journey of the river, much condensed.
February 18th, 2011 13:09
StormyDay said:
Think of the course of a river. Let's say it flows down from a mountainside, over rocks and ledges, through rapids and white water, then it comes to the bottom, where it trickles down to a stream and empties into an ocean, estruary, delta, ect... It's just the journey of the river, much condensed.
February 18th, 2011 13:09
Lost
SauravRHS said:
Hey... this was really a good piece of work. Good deal of work at it eh? I liked it!
February 18th, 2011 13:08
SauravRHS said:
Hey... this was really a good piece of work. Good deal of work at it eh? I liked it!
February 18th, 2011 13:08
Hitting the Rapids
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! You've sweetly depicted the determination of growing true love. I love how well you've done it with your symbolism. Beautiful!!
February 17th, 2011 00:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! You've sweetly depicted the determination of growing true love. I love how well you've done it with your symbolism. Beautiful!!
February 17th, 2011 00:37
Lost
Emi said:
Wow this is amazing! I love the voice in this, and the word choice was brilliant. :)
February 16th, 2011 17:23
Emi said:
Wow this is amazing! I love the voice in this, and the word choice was brilliant. :)
February 16th, 2011 17:23
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