Comments received on poems by StormyDay
Realizations
Anna said:
I can't help but rate it ten! It expresses the exact feeling I get when I have a crush♥~. Congrats!
January 23rd, 2011 21:21
Anna said:
I can't help but rate it ten! It expresses the exact feeling I get when I have a crush♥~. Congrats!
January 23rd, 2011 21:21
Those Eyes
Anna said:
Wow... Wow... I love this poem! I really like the way you built it... the structure. ♥
January 23rd, 2011 21:17
Anna said:
Wow... Wow... I love this poem! I really like the way you built it... the structure. ♥
January 23rd, 2011 21:17
Stay
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, it reminded me of some of Dido's music as well as a Sugerland(?) song. Great job! And you're right about the hint. Fascinating. Now, can we sing it too, I wonder? But call me stupid,...why won't she let him see her cry?
January 21st, 2011 15:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, it reminded me of some of Dido's music as well as a Sugerland(?) song. Great job! And you're right about the hint. Fascinating. Now, can we sing it too, I wonder? But call me stupid,...why won't she let him see her cry?
January 21st, 2011 15:04
A World Gone Awry
Cheeky Missy said:
The perpetual question....you captured it nicely in your concluding line, and your explanation made it more understandable. It is rather difficult to answer, to assess. On the one hand, if we look at the Bible, it looks like the wicked prosper and the righteous suffer, and yet some wicked suffer too....Your concluding line seems rather to indicate the speaker has a solace, a refuge above the turmoil, rather like the Lord says, in this world ye shall have tribulation, but be of good cheer for I have overcome the world...peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you,....let not your heart be troubled, neither let it not be afraid...or maybe not? Excellent...I enjoyed this.
January 20th, 2011 15:31
Cheeky Missy said:
The perpetual question....you captured it nicely in your concluding line, and your explanation made it more understandable. It is rather difficult to answer, to assess. On the one hand, if we look at the Bible, it looks like the wicked prosper and the righteous suffer, and yet some wicked suffer too....Your concluding line seems rather to indicate the speaker has a solace, a refuge above the turmoil, rather like the Lord says, in this world ye shall have tribulation, but be of good cheer for I have overcome the world...peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you,....let not your heart be troubled, neither let it not be afraid...or maybe not? Excellent...I enjoyed this.
January 20th, 2011 15:31
What I Loved About You
a soldiers wife13 said:
very nice poem... it could possible get u far in the future...
January 19th, 2011 15:51
a soldiers wife13 said:
very nice poem... it could possible get u far in the future...
January 19th, 2011 15:51
Cherry Blossoms
StormyDay said:
Thanks to you both. I'm very lucky to have such sweet and encouraging critique(ers?).
January 19th, 2011 15:43
StormyDay said:
Thanks to you both. I'm very lucky to have such sweet and encouraging critique(ers?).
January 19th, 2011 15:43
Cherry Blossoms
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent tribute!!!! And VERY sweet too! Perfecto! I love it!
January 19th, 2011 15:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent tribute!!!! And VERY sweet too! Perfecto! I love it!
January 19th, 2011 15:16
The Spider's Web
StormyDay said:
Attention! I just had a great idea. I'll continue The Spider's Web, but with a catch; it'll be under fusioned poems. Of course I'll add more stanzas once someone (s) have joined in, but I would really like all your help! Everyone is invited.
January 19th, 2011 13:41
StormyDay said:
Attention! I just had a great idea. I'll continue The Spider's Web, but with a catch; it'll be under fusioned poems. Of course I'll add more stanzas once someone (s) have joined in, but I would really like all your help! Everyone is invited.
January 19th, 2011 13:41
Sight
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. The clever thing is that you captured the old "love is blind" in it, seems to me. You have an excellent point regarding describing colour to one blind from birth...but maybe love is different, at least when it comes to the love of God,...while we were yet sinners dying for us....but then again, He says, taste and see that the Lord is good....so maybe you are right on and it is all so indescribable. I enjoyed this haiku...you delightfully captured both colour and love in it, making your point...thanks for your explanatory comment...it helped.
January 18th, 2011 23:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. The clever thing is that you captured the old "love is blind" in it, seems to me. You have an excellent point regarding describing colour to one blind from birth...but maybe love is different, at least when it comes to the love of God,...while we were yet sinners dying for us....but then again, He says, taste and see that the Lord is good....so maybe you are right on and it is all so indescribable. I enjoyed this haiku...you delightfully captured both colour and love in it, making your point...thanks for your explanatory comment...it helped.
January 18th, 2011 23:19
Sight
dbremner said:
You've done really well on this and seem to have applied a lot of thought to it and then captured it in the limited Haiku form, very well done.
January 18th, 2011 15:56
dbremner said:
You've done really well on this and seem to have applied a lot of thought to it and then captured it in the limited Haiku form, very well done.
January 18th, 2011 15:56
The Spider's Web
Lifewellspoken said:
You must be the Rainbow that the sun shines through the dew.
Great read thanks for sharing.
January 17th, 2011 14:21
Lifewellspoken said:
You must be the Rainbow that the sun shines through the dew.
Great read thanks for sharing.
January 17th, 2011 14:21
The Spider's Web
gerrylegister said:
I wanted to read a little more about the spider's web!
January 14th, 2011 15:37
gerrylegister said:
I wanted to read a little more about the spider's web!
January 14th, 2011 15:37
The Spider's Web
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating...and the image is excellent! Great job...and yet you could explore the spider's web much further as well....so this is one angle and delightfully put!!
January 14th, 2011 14:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating...and the image is excellent! Great job...and yet you could explore the spider's web much further as well....so this is one angle and delightfully put!!
January 14th, 2011 14:33
The Spider's Web
dbremner said:
Another really good Haiku. You must like writing them?
January 14th, 2011 12:49
dbremner said:
Another really good Haiku. You must like writing them?
January 14th, 2011 12:49
The Willow Tree
StormyDay said:
Thanks to you both, there's many more to come. Thank you for your kind words and encouragement.
January 14th, 2011 12:40
StormyDay said:
Thanks to you both, there's many more to come. Thank you for your kind words and encouragement.
January 14th, 2011 12:40
The Willow Tree
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! I absolutely LOVE this haiku of yours....from the perfect picture to the delightful description contained therein....it is beautiful!! (I love willow trees!)
January 13th, 2011 14:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! I absolutely LOVE this haiku of yours....from the perfect picture to the delightful description contained therein....it is beautiful!! (I love willow trees!)
January 13th, 2011 14:58
Stolen Identity
Cheeky Missy said:
And in it you've excellently expressed what love made of you.....a different person than before, which was subsequently destroyed and/or recreated into the you that was left of the remnants. I like it very well for its having thus pictured what love does with us. Excellent!
January 12th, 2011 14:52
Cheeky Missy said:
And in it you've excellently expressed what love made of you.....a different person than before, which was subsequently destroyed and/or recreated into the you that was left of the remnants. I like it very well for its having thus pictured what love does with us. Excellent!
January 12th, 2011 14:52
Realizations
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful. I love it. Almost makes my heart beat faster with the speaker's admissions....you've captured that feeling very nicely....and pictured it all so very well. Excellent!!!!
January 11th, 2011 22:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful. I love it. Almost makes my heart beat faster with the speaker's admissions....you've captured that feeling very nicely....and pictured it all so very well. Excellent!!!!
January 11th, 2011 22:56
Balance
jerrypat said:
Constant battle lines drawn each and every day. Shall we fire from this volley and crush the mindset or drop a live bomb into the heart of the matter?
I brought violence into the equation because it feel like violence as we attempt to balance one with the other sometimes.
Good poetry.
January 10th, 2011 22:46
jerrypat said:
Constant battle lines drawn each and every day. Shall we fire from this volley and crush the mindset or drop a live bomb into the heart of the matter?
I brought violence into the equation because it feel like violence as we attempt to balance one with the other sometimes.
Good poetry.
January 10th, 2011 22:46
Balance
Cheeky Missy said:
Delightful, for all the ugliness of the struggle....you've expressed it excellently....and the image is only too fitting! And l love how you've victimized ourselves, caught in the perpetual battle between the two....which ever is stronger for the moment....doesn't usually heart win out? Jane Austen dealt with that issue, especially, I think, in her novel Persuasion. I enjoyed this!!
January 10th, 2011 15:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Delightful, for all the ugliness of the struggle....you've expressed it excellently....and the image is only too fitting! And l love how you've victimized ourselves, caught in the perpetual battle between the two....which ever is stronger for the moment....doesn't usually heart win out? Jane Austen dealt with that issue, especially, I think, in her novel Persuasion. I enjoyed this!!
January 10th, 2011 15:51
Those Eyes
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet, very sweet, delightfully romantic. I very much enjoyed this poetic look at those loving eyes. Excellent!
January 4th, 2011 17:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet, very sweet, delightfully romantic. I very much enjoyed this poetic look at those loving eyes. Excellent!
January 4th, 2011 17:05
What I Loved About You
dbremner said:
This, I think, is well written, a nice poem.
December 17th, 2010 15:33
dbremner said:
This, I think, is well written, a nice poem.
December 17th, 2010 15:33
What I Loved About You
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. And it is a very sweet poem. I like all the descriptions you used to paint him...the picture your love drew was tender and funny and sweet. It is a rather delightful piece, excepting the tinge of sorrow in the "loveD." Sorry it only once was and is now no more. I enjoyed your loving him.
December 17th, 2010 13:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. And it is a very sweet poem. I like all the descriptions you used to paint him...the picture your love drew was tender and funny and sweet. It is a rather delightful piece, excepting the tinge of sorrow in the "loveD." Sorry it only once was and is now no more. I enjoyed your loving him.
December 17th, 2010 13:42
Destiny
Cheeky Missy said:
It is fascinating and well-written, I think. The last stanza, last three lines are ominous in that it cannot refer to the Lord God of the Bible, for He does not use any of us, that I know of, and then I can't guess who the "Fools that Blind" are? I enjoyed it, though.
December 16th, 2010 17:11
Cheeky Missy said:
It is fascinating and well-written, I think. The last stanza, last three lines are ominous in that it cannot refer to the Lord God of the Bible, for He does not use any of us, that I know of, and then I can't guess who the "Fools that Blind" are? I enjoyed it, though.
December 16th, 2010 17:11
Let Me Be
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet. I like it. Very nicely done with all your similes. I enjoyed it!
December 15th, 2010 14:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet. I like it. Very nicely done with all your similes. I enjoyed it!
December 15th, 2010 14:57
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