Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
Everyday Rarities
Dan Williams said:
It is a lot of times hard to know what objects, and people, we will come to treasure. Songs, and surely poems fall in this group. Nice work.
September 20th, 2024 01:00
Dan Williams said:
It is a lot of times hard to know what objects, and people, we will come to treasure. Songs, and surely poems fall in this group. Nice work.
September 20th, 2024 01:00
Everyday Rarities
Accidental Poet said:
Maybe they are old and only bought to last until the \"nice\" set comes along, but they represent beginnings and a period of your lives that is now in the distant past. ππ
September 19th, 2024 09:03
Accidental Poet said:
Maybe they are old and only bought to last until the \"nice\" set comes along, but they represent beginnings and a period of your lives that is now in the distant past. ππ
September 19th, 2024 09:03
Everyday Rarities
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful sentiment here. Lovely nostalgia. Such items carry huge sentimental value. Priceless. A lovely piece Tom. Relatable too. Thanks for sharing.
September 19th, 2024 08:21
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful sentiment here. Lovely nostalgia. Such items carry huge sentimental value. Priceless. A lovely piece Tom. Relatable too. Thanks for sharing.
September 19th, 2024 08:21
Everyday Rarities
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories - the special value mundane objects can acquire over time, Tom.
Even Antiques Roadshow with its insistence on placing a market value on almost everything independent of the artistry and skill evident in its presence, will very occasionally acknowledge the intrinsic value important to the owners. A rare occurrence but a moment I value greatly.
September 19th, 2024 05:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories - the special value mundane objects can acquire over time, Tom.
Even Antiques Roadshow with its insistence on placing a market value on almost everything independent of the artistry and skill evident in its presence, will very occasionally acknowledge the intrinsic value important to the owners. A rare occurrence but a moment I value greatly.
September 19th, 2024 05:55
Everyday Rarities
sorenbarrett said:
Remember those days. A poem of coziness that is nostalgic and somewhat heartwarming about days when love was new but objects weren\'t and the contrast of now when objects are new but love is not.
September 19th, 2024 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Remember those days. A poem of coziness that is nostalgic and somewhat heartwarming about days when love was new but objects weren\'t and the contrast of now when objects are new but love is not.
September 19th, 2024 05:22
100 Not Out
Goldfinch60 said:
Poetry shows the words in our minds and hearts Tom and it does not matter how they are written.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Poetry shows the words in our minds and hearts Tom and it does not matter how they are written.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 01:45
100 Not Out
Dan Williams said:
All these things come slowly. Be patient, keep writing. Not too much concern with the rules.
September 19th, 2024 00:55
Dan Williams said:
All these things come slowly. Be patient, keep writing. Not too much concern with the rules.
September 19th, 2024 00:55
100 Not Out
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work with the poet\'s tools. Congrats.
September 18th, 2024 20:47
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work with the poet\'s tools. Congrats.
September 18th, 2024 20:47
100 Not Out
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations Tom be careful about the anthropomorphism, personification, meter and hyperbole
September 18th, 2024 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations Tom be careful about the anthropomorphism, personification, meter and hyperbole
September 18th, 2024 05:10
100 Not Out
Doggerel Dave said:
I ain\'t much good at them figures of speech, Tom - they feel like euphemisms to me.
And of course, congrats on doing the ton.
September 18th, 2024 02:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I ain\'t much good at them figures of speech, Tom - they feel like euphemisms to me.
And of course, congrats on doing the ton.
September 18th, 2024 02:34
100 Not Out
Cassie58 said:
Congratulations Tom. I love the idea that you continue to work on your garden. Nurturing your flowers will yield even better results. Iβm a gardener myself. I just felt the need to respond in metaphor. Have a wonderful Wednesday and keep those green fingers busy.
September 18th, 2024 02:25
Cassie58 said:
Congratulations Tom. I love the idea that you continue to work on your garden. Nurturing your flowers will yield even better results. Iβm a gardener myself. I just felt the need to respond in metaphor. Have a wonderful Wednesday and keep those green fingers busy.
September 18th, 2024 02:25
100 Not Out
orchidee said:
A fine write Tom. I thought a simile was one of those emoji things - a smiley! lol. Doh! And what IS an iambic pentameter in poetry?
September 18th, 2024 02:24
orchidee said:
A fine write Tom. I thought a simile was one of those emoji things - a smiley! lol. Doh! And what IS an iambic pentameter in poetry?
September 18th, 2024 02:24
Another One of The Lads
Dan Williams said:
I think I was out drinking with this lout last week. A barroom fixture. Nice work.
September 18th, 2024 00:47
Dan Williams said:
I think I was out drinking with this lout last week. A barroom fixture. Nice work.
September 18th, 2024 00:47
Another One of The Lads
orchidee said:
Why - or how - do ya know all this stuff about me?! lol.
September 17th, 2024 11:39
orchidee said:
Why - or how - do ya know all this stuff about me?! lol.
September 17th, 2024 11:39
Another One of The Lads
sorenbarrett said:
A portrait of a colorful man that life would be black and white without. I love these people and have known a few. All put in wonderful verse.
September 17th, 2024 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
A portrait of a colorful man that life would be black and white without. I love these people and have known a few. All put in wonderful verse.
September 17th, 2024 08:59
Another One of The Lads
Neville said:
this is so true isn\'t it I know and have known so many who this could very easily apply to .. this is in fact so true and so good, it could become a conversation piece in its own write .. Neville
September 17th, 2024 08:39
Neville said:
this is so true isn\'t it I know and have known so many who this could very easily apply to .. this is in fact so true and so good, it could become a conversation piece in its own write .. Neville
September 17th, 2024 08:39
Another One of The Lads
Doggerel Dave said:
\"His so-called banter borders on bullying but heβs only having a laugh\",
A pain in the arse, Tom - a so called night out with the boys can be excruciating......π
September 17th, 2024 07:05
Doggerel Dave said:
\"His so-called banter borders on bullying but heβs only having a laugh\",
A pain in the arse, Tom - a so called night out with the boys can be excruciating......π
September 17th, 2024 07:05
If I Could I Would
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems I missed this one - apologies, Tom.
Unless it were possible to take those practical steps, then I, who usually find words reasonably easy, am no good utilising them in such situations. The words feel hollow.
So the cuppa and being there would be, as you point out, my best option, all I personally could do.
Thanks for that.
September 16th, 2024 21:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems I missed this one - apologies, Tom.
Unless it were possible to take those practical steps, then I, who usually find words reasonably easy, am no good utilising them in such situations. The words feel hollow.
So the cuppa and being there would be, as you point out, my best option, all I personally could do.
Thanks for that.
September 16th, 2024 21:03
If I Could I Would
sorenbarrett said:
My mind wanders and I read this poem two ways. The first is someone that can\'t carry your burden but is there for you in spirit and available when needed. The other is the person that after the fact says they would have helped if they could have known, been there, on and on but instead offer you only lip service and tea. I prefer the first interpretation.
September 16th, 2024 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
My mind wanders and I read this poem two ways. The first is someone that can\'t carry your burden but is there for you in spirit and available when needed. The other is the person that after the fact says they would have helped if they could have known, been there, on and on but instead offer you only lip service and tea. I prefer the first interpretation.
September 16th, 2024 07:13
Hopes May Rise Over Grasmere
Neville said:
I\'ve been there too .. went with my folks when I was a nipper .. only have vague memories of the gingerbread shop but have much clear recollections of the great Wordsworth\'s grave .. Perfectly captured Tom a real treat sir .. Neville
September 16th, 2024 05:37
Neville said:
I\'ve been there too .. went with my folks when I was a nipper .. only have vague memories of the gingerbread shop but have much clear recollections of the great Wordsworth\'s grave .. Perfectly captured Tom a real treat sir .. Neville
September 16th, 2024 05:37
If I Could I Would
Neville said:
This is now write up there among my very favouwritest TD poems .. Honestly wish I had got to each one of those verses before you but must give credit where credit is due and this one\'s a real belter Tom .. Neville
September 14th, 2024 08:52
Neville said:
This is now write up there among my very favouwritest TD poems .. Honestly wish I had got to each one of those verses before you but must give credit where credit is due and this one\'s a real belter Tom .. Neville
September 14th, 2024 08:52
If I Could I Would
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts will always be there Tom and maybe one day they will become reality.
No sugar in my tea thank you.
Andy
September 14th, 2024 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts will always be there Tom and maybe one day they will become reality.
No sugar in my tea thank you.
Andy
September 14th, 2024 01:27
If I Could I Would
Dan Williams said:
You are, as my Dad would say, a Peach of a guy. Go heavy on the music.
September 14th, 2024 00:35
Dan Williams said:
You are, as my Dad would say, a Peach of a guy. Go heavy on the music.
September 14th, 2024 00:35
Hopes May Rise Over Grasmere
Dan Williams said:
Ah, the consummate romantic. Very nice tribute.
September 14th, 2024 00:33
Dan Williams said:
Ah, the consummate romantic. Very nice tribute.
September 14th, 2024 00:33
If I Could I Would
Cheeky Missy said:
My, how seductively you lead the soul to watering, tendering that much needed cuppa and friendly inquiry in finishing like twas to be expected. Wonderful. I love how delightfully you\'ve rendered this to perfection, then capped it off superbly. Thank you for sharing!
September 13th, 2024 14:45
Cheeky Missy said:
My, how seductively you lead the soul to watering, tendering that much needed cuppa and friendly inquiry in finishing like twas to be expected. Wonderful. I love how delightfully you\'ve rendered this to perfection, then capped it off superbly. Thank you for sharing!
September 13th, 2024 14:45
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