Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic
Des said:

Nice job

July 26th, 2017 08:50

F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:

A sensuous acrostic on fabrics and written with a smile on your poet\'s face methinks Brian - - love the line taken on silk and its feel. A most interesting read on Textiles in general and thank you for sharing it.

July 26th, 2017 05:15

F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic
orchidee said:

A fine write B.

July 26th, 2017 03:47

JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS
Christina8 said:

Excellent write on Japan. I\'ve never been. I don\'t even know anyone who\'s been to Japan. Very interesting cultural piece!

July 25th, 2017 21:31

JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS
Azura Nightsong said:

I wish I could visit faraway places such as Japan, they would probably help with inspiring the worlds I write.
Great write as always!

July 25th, 2017 14:53

JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS
malubotelho said:

Very nice writing as always. Thanks for sharing.

July 25th, 2017 11:59

JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 25th, 2017 11:35

JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS
orchidee said:

A fine write B.

July 25th, 2017 08:33

JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS
Jooles said:

I don\'t fancy going to Japan but that doesn\'t matter...love how you always teach us about your poems

July 25th, 2017 08:33

JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I love Japanese food.

July 25th, 2017 07:50

JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS
Michael Edwards said:

One of those countries still on the bucket list - hope to make it soon - great poem Brian

July 25th, 2017 04:40

OCEAN BLESSINGS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Jooles said:

Always love your writes...the individuality of them

July 24th, 2017 18:33

OCEAN BLESSINGS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Azura Nightsong said:

Truth before us, yet so many refuse to open their eyes.
I wish it were different.
But as we kill our oceans and animals we kill biodiversity which will eventually lead to our own demises.

July 24th, 2017 17:28

OCEAN BLESSINGS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Awesome reminder of why we must be green and do whatever we can to save the planet. I am lucky to live near a fresh water Great Lake. Wouldn\'t drink it but we do try and take care of it. Thanks for a thought provoking write! Hugs-Christina

July 24th, 2017 15:27

OCEAN BLESSINGS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:

A fine write B. On a daft note, some are glad of no water, as I\'m known as a phantom whisky-waterer! heehee.

July 24th, 2017 10:40

OCEAN BLESSINGS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, we are killing our world.

July 24th, 2017 08:27

OCEAN BLESSINGS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

Great reminder of our responsibilities for our environment - will we ever take heed?

July 24th, 2017 07:49

THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a good Faith Filled write Brian, it s a pity that those with power don\'t seem to listen to God\'s word and carry on with destroying God\'s paradise.

July 24th, 2017 00:48

THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic
Christina8 said:

Your poetry (psalm) is so wonderful. Your words afterwards couldn\'t be truer. By the time we can fly to \"planets similar to ours\" we\'ll be long gone and so may our planet. A very thoughtful write. Happy sunday! Hugs-Christina

July 23rd, 2017 16:55

THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic
orchidee said:

Oops, sorry B, I deleted a rather irrelevant comment of mine. Now it\'s deleted your reply too. I understand your reply. But you going to possibly live until 2085?!

July 23rd, 2017 11:47

THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Brian. yes, we as \'care-takers\' of His creation. I know I go on a bit, not to rubbish humans, though we are \'dust\' and \'worms\' in comparison to God. (who ya calling a worm, Orchi? lol). Well, we are derived from humus.

July 23rd, 2017 09:03

THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:

So inspiring this verse of reminders dear Brian - - our planet is a true gift indeed and thanking God the great Creator brings awareness of more responsibility to our human hearts.

July 23rd, 2017 04:40

THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic
Poetic Dan said:

Although I don\'t share your faith
Your words still resonate and true
There is no where else to go
We need to look inward
To create what you would call
Heaven on this earth

I have faith that we all can
If we dropped the guns
And just pick up the pen

Thank you for these thoughts ;)


July 23rd, 2017 04:14

A T M O S P H E R I C S ~ An Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and so true, we need to clean the air we breath.

July 23rd, 2017 00:28

A T M O S P H E R I C S ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:

Wonderful informative write!! It is a shame to see what we\'ve done to the planet. Thank you for sharing such an important message!!

July 22nd, 2017 21:09

A T M O S P H E R I C S ~ An Acrostic
malubotelho said:

Air is Gods breath for us. Thanks for sharing

July 22nd, 2017 17:23

A T M O S P H E R I C S ~ An Acrostic
orchidee said:

A fine write B. There\'s a terrible waste of hot air, from some folk\'s waffling on! It\'s got to stop! heehee. I\'m Chair of a new group: \'The-stop-the-waffle-and -don\'t-go-on-meaninglessly-saying-20-words-when-5-will-do\' Committee! Not that I believe in a word I say on that Committee! lol.

July 22nd, 2017 11:25

A T M O S P H E R I C S ~ An Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for this much needed reminder Brian. Air is vital to life and must be kept fresh.

July 22nd, 2017 03:56

TEMPUS FUGIT ~ TIME FLIES !
Primrose said:

I loved the poem, very neat and I liked the rhyming pattern

July 22nd, 2017 01:40

TEMPUS FUGIT ~ TIME FLIES !
Azura Nightsong said:

I suppose too many of my hours are spent off in other worlds, living others lives. But such is the life of an author. This was a great write, worthy of the time it took to write this comment!

July 21st, 2017 21:36



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