Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
WE ARE SAILING ..................... ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
malubotelho said:
I live in Florida and we are surrounded by water. We have ponds and canals everywhere. We have a beautiful park on the neighborhood where one rent canoes and go down the river. Very soft. The beach is just about 7 miles away because I live in Jupiter Farms. I\'m not so good with water though. Love the beach when the water is soft and not wavy. Thanks for your beautiful poem.
July 15th, 2017 11:49
malubotelho said:
I live in Florida and we are surrounded by water. We have ponds and canals everywhere. We have a beautiful park on the neighborhood where one rent canoes and go down the river. Very soft. The beach is just about 7 miles away because I live in Jupiter Farms. I\'m not so good with water though. Love the beach when the water is soft and not wavy. Thanks for your beautiful poem.
July 15th, 2017 11:49
WE ARE SAILING ..................... ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
Christina8 said:
I too live near water. Love rafting or canoeing down a river. Don\'t get to boat as much but I love it! Much like I loved your poem! I envy that you can go on cruises to all those places. Great job! Hugs--Christina
July 15th, 2017 10:33
Christina8 said:
I too live near water. Love rafting or canoeing down a river. Don\'t get to boat as much but I love it! Much like I loved your poem! I envy that you can go on cruises to all those places. Great job! Hugs--Christina
July 15th, 2017 10:33
WE ARE SAILING ..................... ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
FredPeyer said:
I love it Brian. The way you feel about yachts (or boats, or ships) I feel about motorcycles!
July 15th, 2017 03:34
FredPeyer said:
I love it Brian. The way you feel about yachts (or boats, or ships) I feel about motorcycles!
July 15th, 2017 03:34
WE ARE SAILING ..................... ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Rarely put feet on water so to speak although did go on the ferry Cross the Mersey a few months back and last month was on the River Douro in Portugal so not doing so bad. Nevertheless I appreciate this poem and the fascination for water.
July 15th, 2017 02:08
Michael Edwards said:
Rarely put feet on water so to speak although did go on the ferry Cross the Mersey a few months back and last month was on the River Douro in Portugal so not doing so bad. Nevertheless I appreciate this poem and the fascination for water.
July 15th, 2017 02:08
WE ARE SAILING ..................... ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
orchidee said:
A fine write again B.
July 15th, 2017 01:58
orchidee said:
A fine write again B.
July 15th, 2017 01:58
WE ARE SAILING ..................... ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
Nicholas Browning said:
Your poetry packs a strange punch. I can\'t really put my finger on it. If I had to say, it would be that it\'s both playful and serious at the same time. It\'s really perplexing. Anyways, well done. Happy writing friend.
July 15th, 2017 01:53
Nicholas Browning said:
Your poetry packs a strange punch. I can\'t really put my finger on it. If I had to say, it would be that it\'s both playful and serious at the same time. It\'s really perplexing. Anyways, well done. Happy writing friend.
July 15th, 2017 01:53
HOT AIR BALLOONS - An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We see many hot air balloons around our way and the town used to have a hot air balloon festival. I have many picture of them but have never been up in one. I am quite high enough at 6\'1\".
July 14th, 2017 23:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We see many hot air balloons around our way and the town used to have a hot air balloon festival. I have many picture of them but have never been up in one. I am quite high enough at 6\'1\".
July 14th, 2017 23:53
HOT AIR BALLOONS - An Acrostic Sonnet
malubotelho said:
Beautiful poem and picture. I never
had the opportunity to go on a trip like this but I think would be fun. Thanks for sharing.
July 14th, 2017 22:24
malubotelho said:
Beautiful poem and picture. I never
had the opportunity to go on a trip like this but I think would be fun. Thanks for sharing.
July 14th, 2017 22:24
HOT AIR BALLOONS - An Acrostic Sonnet
Adri said:
Oh your poem had such fun energy! I felt the excitement. Made me want to go on a hot air ballon ride at that moment!!!! Great poem Brian!
July 14th, 2017 19:42
Adri said:
Oh your poem had such fun energy! I felt the excitement. Made me want to go on a hot air ballon ride at that moment!!!! Great poem Brian!
July 14th, 2017 19:42
HOT AIR BALLOONS - An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Great acrostic on hot air balloons! I am too chicken to to go on a hot air balloon ride but I do appreciate a good write nonetheless. Great job! Hot air hugs-Christina
July 14th, 2017 18:37
Christina8 said:
Great acrostic on hot air balloons! I am too chicken to to go on a hot air balloon ride but I do appreciate a good write nonetheless. Great job! Hot air hugs-Christina
July 14th, 2017 18:37
HOT AIR BALLOONS - An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:
A fine write B. Let\'s save gas and use the hot air of........ [insert names of who you will]! lol.
July 14th, 2017 08:44
orchidee said:
A fine write B. Let\'s save gas and use the hot air of........ [insert names of who you will]! lol.
July 14th, 2017 08:44
HOT AIR BALLOONS - An Acrostic Sonnet
ShannonXx said:
Love the theme of this! Great write
July 14th, 2017 07:23
ShannonXx said:
Love the theme of this! Great write
July 14th, 2017 07:23
HOT AIR BALLOONS - An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve been up and this poem reminds me of a great experience.
July 14th, 2017 04:25
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve been up and this poem reminds me of a great experience.
July 14th, 2017 04:25
THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but another things that you have to remember is that us Brits were the ones that started upsetting the Native American culture in America, the Pilgrims were not all saints!
July 14th, 2017 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but another things that you have to remember is that us Brits were the ones that started upsetting the Native American culture in America, the Pilgrims were not all saints!
July 14th, 2017 01:09
THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature
Tia Davis/テイア said:
I loved it my grandmother is full native American I read it to her she loved it too Im glad I could read it to her its like you made it just in time she visits to place to place and travel and tells storys if she liked it must be a really good poem
July 13th, 2017 16:17
Tia Davis/テイア said:
I loved it my grandmother is full native American I read it to her she loved it too Im glad I could read it to her its like you made it just in time she visits to place to place and travel and tells storys if she liked it must be a really good poem
July 13th, 2017 16:17
THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature
onepauly said:
I to am angry about white men who did this unspeakable act. I\'ve studied
about the native americans and how the white men took their land. when more and more people were coming into the country they needed more room for settlements, and the way I see it they talked and did use something called indian removal. and took more land pushing the Indians westward. I am ashamed to be an American. call me benedict Arnold. (paul). man without a country. I hope this opens some eyes. onepauly
July 13th, 2017 16:15
onepauly said:
I to am angry about white men who did this unspeakable act. I\'ve studied
about the native americans and how the white men took their land. when more and more people were coming into the country they needed more room for settlements, and the way I see it they talked and did use something called indian removal. and took more land pushing the Indians westward. I am ashamed to be an American. call me benedict Arnold. (paul). man without a country. I hope this opens some eyes. onepauly
July 13th, 2017 16:15
THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature
Michael Edwards said:
What a great accolade - great verse Brian.
July 13th, 2017 10:37
Michael Edwards said:
What a great accolade - great verse Brian.
July 13th, 2017 10:37
THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature
Christina8 said:
Beautiful message in the picture and I really liked the poem. I have a small percentage native background and I really appreciate the poem. I have always felt strongly about the things that you discuss here. I echo also that I would never live in the city. It is amazing to see tribal dances, etc. This is one of my favorite topics that you\'ve written about. Thanks for sharing! Hugs-Christina
July 13th, 2017 10:04
Christina8 said:
Beautiful message in the picture and I really liked the poem. I have a small percentage native background and I really appreciate the poem. I have always felt strongly about the things that you discuss here. I echo also that I would never live in the city. It is amazing to see tribal dances, etc. This is one of my favorite topics that you\'ve written about. Thanks for sharing! Hugs-Christina
July 13th, 2017 10:04
THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature
malubotelho said:
One of the most beautiful I\'ve got from you. It speaks to me the way you wrote it, because I\'m always listening to the leaves and the arguments of frogs 🐸. I can hear the insects wings everyday of my life even though I drive a Toyota, don\'t ride a horse. As for the Indians I live very close to a park called the battlefield park where they have the history written there for people to see. So sad! Thanks for your beautiful poem.
July 13th, 2017 09:08
malubotelho said:
One of the most beautiful I\'ve got from you. It speaks to me the way you wrote it, because I\'m always listening to the leaves and the arguments of frogs 🐸. I can hear the insects wings everyday of my life even though I drive a Toyota, don\'t ride a horse. As for the Indians I live very close to a park called the battlefield park where they have the history written there for people to see. So sad! Thanks for your beautiful poem.
July 13th, 2017 09:08
THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature
Louis Gibbs said:
burning-embers makes a good point in his comment. The history of mankind is the constant claiming of lands that were occupied by other tribes and other civilizations ... including such actions by American Indian tribes amongst each other. Such is the nature of the beast. Is it right? Can it be judged or condemned? It is what it is ... a part of the earth experience. Fine tribute poem, Briansodes!
July 13th, 2017 08:56
Louis Gibbs said:
burning-embers makes a good point in his comment. The history of mankind is the constant claiming of lands that were occupied by other tribes and other civilizations ... including such actions by American Indian tribes amongst each other. Such is the nature of the beast. Is it right? Can it be judged or condemned? It is what it is ... a part of the earth experience. Fine tribute poem, Briansodes!
July 13th, 2017 08:56
THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature
orchidee said:
A fine write B.
July 13th, 2017 08:04
orchidee said:
A fine write B.
July 13th, 2017 08:04
THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature
burning-embers said:
Wholeheartedly agree but let us Brits not be \'holyer than thou\' about this. Remember we TOOK the lands of british empire by force crushing resistance in much same way as early americans did.
Great piece of writing - provoked me as u can see lol.
July 13th, 2017 06:52
burning-embers said:
Wholeheartedly agree but let us Brits not be \'holyer than thou\' about this. Remember we TOOK the lands of british empire by force crushing resistance in much same way as early americans did.
Great piece of writing - provoked me as u can see lol.
July 13th, 2017 06:52
THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree heartedly Brian - peoples worldwide who revere the earth and its wondrous mysteries deserve to be heard and respected.
July 13th, 2017 04:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree heartedly Brian - peoples worldwide who revere the earth and its wondrous mysteries deserve to be heard and respected.
July 13th, 2017 04:53
MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA !
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write. Michaels abstracts always talk to me as well.
July 13th, 2017 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write. Michaels abstracts always talk to me as well.
July 13th, 2017 00:43
MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA !
malubotelho said:
Oh! I\'m almost feeling like an outsider. It is like all the sober and emancipated people gathered out here. I wish my poor English would get miraculously fluent from day to night so I could understand and participate more on such interesting conversations. I love this pairing with all of its dripping colors. Wonderful art. I can paint too but never been brave enough to post any of my work here. Brian, you always has a way of pay tribute for others. Thank you for your beautiful soul. God bless.
July 12th, 2017 22:07
malubotelho said:
Oh! I\'m almost feeling like an outsider. It is like all the sober and emancipated people gathered out here. I wish my poor English would get miraculously fluent from day to night so I could understand and participate more on such interesting conversations. I love this pairing with all of its dripping colors. Wonderful art. I can paint too but never been brave enough to post any of my work here. Brian, you always has a way of pay tribute for others. Thank you for your beautiful soul. God bless.
July 12th, 2017 22:07
MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA !
Christina8 said:
An absolutely wonderful poem to go with such a stunning Michael Edwards painting! It is so fun to actually go Mardi Gras and be a part of the festivities. Would love to try your Creole cooking! :-) Hugs-Christina
July 12th, 2017 17:12
Christina8 said:
An absolutely wonderful poem to go with such a stunning Michael Edwards painting! It is so fun to actually go Mardi Gras and be a part of the festivities. Would love to try your Creole cooking! :-) Hugs-Christina
July 12th, 2017 17:12
MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA !
Louis Gibbs said:
The picture is of my brain on good poetry, such as this clever one. We have our own Mardi Gras here on the coast of Alabama ... much fun! Thanks for this fine contribution, Brian.
July 12th, 2017 09:31
Louis Gibbs said:
The picture is of my brain on good poetry, such as this clever one. We have our own Mardi Gras here on the coast of Alabama ... much fun! Thanks for this fine contribution, Brian.
July 12th, 2017 09:31
MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA !
P.H.Rose said:
Love this Brian......
Really great use
Of word...and like
The picture it
Paints it well...
July 12th, 2017 07:40
P.H.Rose said:
Love this Brian......
Really great use
Of word...and like
The picture it
Paints it well...
July 12th, 2017 07:40
MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA !
Fay Slimm. said:
Fin filled to the brim this jaunt to the carnival after viewing that wonderful abstract by Michael - smiling as I write Bravo for your wit Uncle Brian.
July 12th, 2017 05:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Fin filled to the brim this jaunt to the carnival after viewing that wonderful abstract by Michael - smiling as I write Bravo for your wit Uncle Brian.
July 12th, 2017 05:02
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