Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU
Christina8 said:
Clever senryu!! Very good poem. I saw your first reply to a comment! Made me smile! Hugs to you-Christina
July 31st, 2017 19:28
Christina8 said:
Clever senryu!! Very good poem. I saw your first reply to a comment! Made me smile! Hugs to you-Christina
July 31st, 2017 19:28
YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU
malubotelho said:
Cute writing. I never been to Paris. Still want to go live there for a while.
July 31st, 2017 14:54
malubotelho said:
Cute writing. I never been to Paris. Still want to go live there for a while.
July 31st, 2017 14:54
YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU
Azura Nightsong said:
Interesting, *i also find it amusing that this was written write after I posted my three line poem*
Nice write as always!
July 31st, 2017 12:04
Azura Nightsong said:
Interesting, *i also find it amusing that this was written write after I posted my three line poem*
Nice write as always!
July 31st, 2017 12:04
YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU
Frank Prem said:
Ah, love in the Louvre? Lervly!
July 31st, 2017 03:57
Frank Prem said:
Ah, love in the Louvre? Lervly!
July 31st, 2017 03:57
YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing picture is La Gioconda as is this senryu.
July 31st, 2017 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
An intriguing picture is La Gioconda as is this senryu.
July 31st, 2017 02:04
YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry to hear they both fell - nice one Brian - will write a haiku later today - in fact 2 or 3. if I have time.
July 31st, 2017 02:01
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry to hear they both fell - nice one Brian - will write a haiku later today - in fact 2 or 3. if I have time.
July 31st, 2017 02:01
YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU
orchidee said:
Crash! Me swooning and falling over! Erm, she\'s in my bedroom. Mona Lisa pic that is!
July 31st, 2017 01:50
orchidee said:
Crash! Me swooning and falling over! Erm, she\'s in my bedroom. Mona Lisa pic that is!
July 31st, 2017 01:50
YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU
orchidee said:
Phew! Thought I would have to swoon, opening the title of this poem! Good write Brian. heehee.
July 31st, 2017 01:30
orchidee said:
Phew! Thought I would have to swoon, opening the title of this poem! Good write Brian. heehee.
July 31st, 2017 01:30
THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7)
Goldfinch60 said:
May the Word always be with us and the Lord be closer. Thank you Brian.
July 31st, 2017 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
May the Word always be with us and the Lord be closer. Thank you Brian.
July 31st, 2017 00:20
THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7)
Christina8 said:
You put a lot of effort into this and it\'s so well done. Thanks for sharing Gods word and filling our Sunday with inspiration! Sunday hugs--Christina
July 30th, 2017 20:12
Christina8 said:
You put a lot of effort into this and it\'s so well done. Thanks for sharing Gods word and filling our Sunday with inspiration! Sunday hugs--Christina
July 30th, 2017 20:12
THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7)
Heather T said:
I taught my children about the persons of the Trinity by using an egg as an example, explaining the three distinct parts and jobs, but it is still as a whole, an egg. Enjoyed!
July 30th, 2017 14:19
Heather T said:
I taught my children about the persons of the Trinity by using an egg as an example, explaining the three distinct parts and jobs, but it is still as a whole, an egg. Enjoyed!
July 30th, 2017 14:19
THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7)
orchidee said:
I\'m not wishing to be flippant - but, erm, yes, if you say so Outback. I dunno - as I said; I blew a fuse in me brain-box trying to unravel your writings!
July 30th, 2017 08:35
orchidee said:
I\'m not wishing to be flippant - but, erm, yes, if you say so Outback. I dunno - as I said; I blew a fuse in me brain-box trying to unravel your writings!
July 30th, 2017 08:35
THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7)
orchidee said:
Simple, and yet profound too? Easy, and yet difficult too? Three-leaved clover; milk, sugar, and tea in a cup; etc? A fine write Brian.
I know some say no trinity, because the word itself is not in the Bible.
July 30th, 2017 08:33
orchidee said:
Simple, and yet profound too? Easy, and yet difficult too? Three-leaved clover; milk, sugar, and tea in a cup; etc? A fine write Brian.
I know some say no trinity, because the word itself is not in the Bible.
July 30th, 2017 08:33
THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7)
Michael Edwards said:
I like this form - well worked Brian
July 30th, 2017 03:28
Michael Edwards said:
I like this form - well worked Brian
July 30th, 2017 03:28
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I was an Analytical Chemist at the beginning of my working life.
July 30th, 2017 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I was an Analytical Chemist at the beginning of my working life.
July 30th, 2017 00:57
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Christina8 said:
Great acrostic! I remember the first time I got to look in a microscope in a lab. I was hooked! But I see a very clever write here, Brian! Hugs, Christina
July 29th, 2017 22:03
Christina8 said:
Great acrostic! I remember the first time I got to look in a microscope in a lab. I was hooked! But I see a very clever write here, Brian! Hugs, Christina
July 29th, 2017 22:03
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
FredPeyer said:
Another great poem by the master of Acrostic poems.
Never thought of it before, but you are right, nobody ever mentions labs!
July 29th, 2017 19:32
FredPeyer said:
Another great poem by the master of Acrostic poems.
Never thought of it before, but you are right, nobody ever mentions labs!
July 29th, 2017 19:32
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:
Well plenty of reason here - congrats on giving the lab a thumbs up - so often just taken for granted if it\'s taken for anything at all that is.
July 29th, 2017 12:16
Michael Edwards said:
Well plenty of reason here - congrats on giving the lab a thumbs up - so often just taken for granted if it\'s taken for anything at all that is.
July 29th, 2017 12:16
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Azura Nightsong said:
I do love me some science, even if that\'s not what I\'m planning on going into, I\'ll still probably be interested in it!
Awesome write
July 29th, 2017 09:06
Azura Nightsong said:
I do love me some science, even if that\'s not what I\'m planning on going into, I\'ll still probably be interested in it!
Awesome write
July 29th, 2017 09:06
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. But oh no, not animal experiments surely?!
July 29th, 2017 08:20
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. But oh no, not animal experiments surely?!
July 29th, 2017 08:20
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:
Never realized as much about the diversity in labs. before Brian - - an interesting read and clever acrostic.
July 29th, 2017 05:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Never realized as much about the diversity in labs. before Brian - - an interesting read and clever acrostic.
July 29th, 2017 05:12
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
jonas_marie said:
this is so beautiful and delicate just like the tapestry you describe, you really capture God\'s message here, well said;)
July 28th, 2017 12:28
jonas_marie said:
this is so beautiful and delicate just like the tapestry you describe, you really capture God\'s message here, well said;)
July 28th, 2017 12:28
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem! You are right about sometimes only looking at the underneath and only seeing a bunch of disorganized threads. I wish we could all see the top, as you say. Inspiring! Hugs-Christina
July 28th, 2017 11:41
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem! You are right about sometimes only looking at the underneath and only seeing a bunch of disorganized threads. I wish we could all see the top, as you say. Inspiring! Hugs-Christina
July 28th, 2017 11:41
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
Louis Gibbs said:
For this fine poem to resonate with me, I would have to replace the word God with \'Higher Self\'. We tend to place too much responsibility on God, and not enough upon ourselves, our own free will, in this scheme of life. That\'s just me. I appreciate your poem, B.
July 28th, 2017 10:07
Louis Gibbs said:
For this fine poem to resonate with me, I would have to replace the word God with \'Higher Self\'. We tend to place too much responsibility on God, and not enough upon ourselves, our own free will, in this scheme of life. That\'s just me. I appreciate your poem, B.
July 28th, 2017 10:07
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
Azura Nightsong said:
I\'ve always seen fate as a tapestry slowly being woven, and that each person and thread is important.
This expresses that really nicely, great write!
July 28th, 2017 09:10
Azura Nightsong said:
I\'ve always seen fate as a tapestry slowly being woven, and that each person and thread is important.
This expresses that really nicely, great write!
July 28th, 2017 09:10
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
orchidee said:
I recall putting \'tapestry\' into one or two of my poems. Not thrown them out. May be archived somewhere (the actual bits of paper with the words written, I mean). A fine write B. Any sherry in that tapestry of life?! heehee.
July 28th, 2017 08:27
orchidee said:
I recall putting \'tapestry\' into one or two of my poems. Not thrown them out. May be archived somewhere (the actual bits of paper with the words written, I mean). A fine write B. Any sherry in that tapestry of life?! heehee.
July 28th, 2017 08:27
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, Gods tapestry is all around us.
July 28th, 2017 08:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, Gods tapestry is all around us.
July 28th, 2017 08:06
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