Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7)
Michael Edwards said:
I like this form - well worked Brian
July 30th, 2017 03:28
Michael Edwards said:
I like this form - well worked Brian
July 30th, 2017 03:28
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I was an Analytical Chemist at the beginning of my working life.
July 30th, 2017 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I was an Analytical Chemist at the beginning of my working life.
July 30th, 2017 00:57
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Christina8 said:
Great acrostic! I remember the first time I got to look in a microscope in a lab. I was hooked! But I see a very clever write here, Brian! Hugs, Christina
July 29th, 2017 22:03
Christina8 said:
Great acrostic! I remember the first time I got to look in a microscope in a lab. I was hooked! But I see a very clever write here, Brian! Hugs, Christina
July 29th, 2017 22:03
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
FredPeyer said:
Another great poem by the master of Acrostic poems.
Never thought of it before, but you are right, nobody ever mentions labs!
July 29th, 2017 19:32
FredPeyer said:
Another great poem by the master of Acrostic poems.
Never thought of it before, but you are right, nobody ever mentions labs!
July 29th, 2017 19:32
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:
Well plenty of reason here - congrats on giving the lab a thumbs up - so often just taken for granted if it\'s taken for anything at all that is.
July 29th, 2017 12:16
Michael Edwards said:
Well plenty of reason here - congrats on giving the lab a thumbs up - so often just taken for granted if it\'s taken for anything at all that is.
July 29th, 2017 12:16
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Azura Nightsong said:
I do love me some science, even if that\'s not what I\'m planning on going into, I\'ll still probably be interested in it!
Awesome write
July 29th, 2017 09:06
Azura Nightsong said:
I do love me some science, even if that\'s not what I\'m planning on going into, I\'ll still probably be interested in it!
Awesome write
July 29th, 2017 09:06
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. But oh no, not animal experiments surely?!
July 29th, 2017 08:20
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. But oh no, not animal experiments surely?!
July 29th, 2017 08:20
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:
Never realized as much about the diversity in labs. before Brian - - an interesting read and clever acrostic.
July 29th, 2017 05:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Never realized as much about the diversity in labs. before Brian - - an interesting read and clever acrostic.
July 29th, 2017 05:12
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
jonas_marie said:
this is so beautiful and delicate just like the tapestry you describe, you really capture God\'s message here, well said;)
July 28th, 2017 12:28
jonas_marie said:
this is so beautiful and delicate just like the tapestry you describe, you really capture God\'s message here, well said;)
July 28th, 2017 12:28
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem! You are right about sometimes only looking at the underneath and only seeing a bunch of disorganized threads. I wish we could all see the top, as you say. Inspiring! Hugs-Christina
July 28th, 2017 11:41
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful poem! You are right about sometimes only looking at the underneath and only seeing a bunch of disorganized threads. I wish we could all see the top, as you say. Inspiring! Hugs-Christina
July 28th, 2017 11:41
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
Louis Gibbs said:
For this fine poem to resonate with me, I would have to replace the word God with \'Higher Self\'. We tend to place too much responsibility on God, and not enough upon ourselves, our own free will, in this scheme of life. That\'s just me. I appreciate your poem, B.
July 28th, 2017 10:07
Louis Gibbs said:
For this fine poem to resonate with me, I would have to replace the word God with \'Higher Self\'. We tend to place too much responsibility on God, and not enough upon ourselves, our own free will, in this scheme of life. That\'s just me. I appreciate your poem, B.
July 28th, 2017 10:07
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
Azura Nightsong said:
I\'ve always seen fate as a tapestry slowly being woven, and that each person and thread is important.
This expresses that really nicely, great write!
July 28th, 2017 09:10
Azura Nightsong said:
I\'ve always seen fate as a tapestry slowly being woven, and that each person and thread is important.
This expresses that really nicely, great write!
July 28th, 2017 09:10
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
orchidee said:
I recall putting \'tapestry\' into one or two of my poems. Not thrown them out. May be archived somewhere (the actual bits of paper with the words written, I mean). A fine write B. Any sherry in that tapestry of life?! heehee.
July 28th, 2017 08:27
orchidee said:
I recall putting \'tapestry\' into one or two of my poems. Not thrown them out. May be archived somewhere (the actual bits of paper with the words written, I mean). A fine write B. Any sherry in that tapestry of life?! heehee.
July 28th, 2017 08:27
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, Gods tapestry is all around us.
July 28th, 2017 08:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, Gods tapestry is all around us.
July 28th, 2017 08:06
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
Fay Slimm. said:
The richness of woven design in our lives comes through every line in this tribute to the divine care shown. Another enlightening read Brian.
July 28th, 2017 04:47
Fay Slimm. said:
The richness of woven design in our lives comes through every line in this tribute to the divine care shown. Another enlightening read Brian.
July 28th, 2017 04:47
S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Thanks for bringing awareness to this issue. We all need to work as hard as we can to be greener. We\'ve got to preserve what we have. I\'ve been to New York City and was appalled by smog. I had never seen it before. (How do they see the stars?) I hope we can all do what we can to better the planet, and soon. Hugs-Christina
July 27th, 2017 11:15
Christina8 said:
Thanks for bringing awareness to this issue. We all need to work as hard as we can to be greener. We\'ve got to preserve what we have. I\'ve been to New York City and was appalled by smog. I had never seen it before. (How do they see the stars?) I hope we can all do what we can to better the planet, and soon. Hugs-Christina
July 27th, 2017 11:15
S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:
A fine write B.
July 27th, 2017 09:25
orchidee said:
A fine write B.
July 27th, 2017 09:25
S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Azura Nightsong said:
The problem is never going to go away if we just hide under our bedsheets. Great message!
July 27th, 2017 09:02
Azura Nightsong said:
The problem is never going to go away if we just hide under our bedsheets. Great message!
July 27th, 2017 09:02
S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Great message punched home.
July 27th, 2017 08:34
Michael Edwards said:
Great message punched home.
July 27th, 2017 08:34
S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true.
July 27th, 2017 08:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true.
July 27th, 2017 08:09
S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Louis Gibbs said:
A cleverly presented and important message, Briansodes. Thanks for sharing!
July 27th, 2017 07:48
Louis Gibbs said:
A cleverly presented and important message, Briansodes. Thanks for sharing!
July 27th, 2017 07:48
S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we are all in the blame area of pollution these days Brian - doing just the small bit we can to protect this planet is always worthwhile. A fine acrostic sonnet which shares all the many needs facing people who care.
July 27th, 2017 06:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we are all in the blame area of pollution these days Brian - doing just the small bit we can to protect this planet is always worthwhile. A fine acrostic sonnet which shares all the many needs facing people who care.
July 27th, 2017 06:27
S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Frank Prem said:
Bravo Brian. Very well said.
July 27th, 2017 03:40
Frank Prem said:
Bravo Brian. Very well said.
July 27th, 2017 03:40
F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but what intrigues me is why is fashion so bad that it needs to be changed every few months (or even weeks) - it is nothing to do with money of course!
July 27th, 2017 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but what intrigues me is why is fashion so bad that it needs to be changed every few months (or even weeks) - it is nothing to do with money of course!
July 27th, 2017 00:47
F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:
Hey thanks for posting that picture of me. LOL Kidding! I like fabrics for their durability and I suppose their texture but color is super important. Fabulous write. Hugs--Christina
July 26th, 2017 18:19
Christina8 said:
Hey thanks for posting that picture of me. LOL Kidding! I like fabrics for their durability and I suppose their texture but color is super important. Fabulous write. Hugs--Christina
July 26th, 2017 18:19
F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic
malubotelho said:
Nice writing and I love the design of the little night gown on your picture. I\'ve tried to manufacture lingerie here in USA but almost went broke when the recession came on 2008. My lingerie business is called Sweet Chilli Pepper. I\'m still making them but only silk and custom made. Thanks for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 11:03
malubotelho said:
Nice writing and I love the design of the little night gown on your picture. I\'ve tried to manufacture lingerie here in USA but almost went broke when the recession came on 2008. My lingerie business is called Sweet Chilli Pepper. I\'m still making them but only silk and custom made. Thanks for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 11:03
F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:
Great bit of composition - as always -
July 26th, 2017 10:39
Michael Edwards said:
Great bit of composition - as always -
July 26th, 2017 10:39
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