Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



ME ~ SLAM POET
Shadowbox15 said:

First of all: WOW. I never knew that the Sonnet-master could SLAM!
Second: I would love to perform my poems! However, I am sadly too young to join adult things like book club, slam poetry club, or astronomy night (alone. I could do it with a group if anyone I trust would join me 😢).

January 25th, 2018 14:00

THURSDAY\'S ENIGMA ? An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

Thursday - and here\'s me decorating one of the bedrooms with the house in a tip from the overflow of furniture - Most Thursday okay for me but this Thursday: YUCK. Great write Brian.

January 25th, 2018 12:15

THURSDAY\'S ENIGMA ? An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:

Good write Brian.
Yep, Thursday today - \'all day\'! or \'What\'s left of it\' we say, as the day goes on.
Yep, 24 hours in it as usual, same as any other day has.
End of \'Today\'s Useless Information\' from me. I dunno what day it is. Any day will do for my useless info! lol.


January 25th, 2018 09:21

THURSDAY\'S ENIGMA ? An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Every day is a Saturday or Sunday to me as I retired five and a half years ago. Good write Brian.

January 25th, 2018 08:56

THURSDAY\'S ENIGMA ? An Acrostic Sonnet
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 25th, 2018 08:11

I AM A VEG~ET~ABLE !
Goldfinch60 said:

I enjoy ALL food and I certainly eat my \'five a day\'. Good write Brian.

January 25th, 2018 01:17

OPEN MY EYES !
poetsinspire said:

That\'s so helpful. You know, for inspiration. I LOVE IT!!! :)


January 24th, 2018 19:20

LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA !
Christina8 said:

A moving piece, showing your feelings for angela. I haven\'t seen this from you before but I loved it! I hope she liked it too! Sisterly hugs-Christina

January 24th, 2018 14:51

I AM A VEG~ET~ABLE !
Christina8 said:

Cute upbeat write! Well done Brian! Veggie hugs--Christina

January 24th, 2018 14:49

I AM A VEG~ET~ABLE !
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for your comments FAY ~ pleased you relished it ! Yours Organically ~ BRIAN

January 24th, 2018 12:18

I AM A VEG~ET~ABLE !
Fay Slimm. said:

An ode to all things green and brown - and so deeeelishously done Brian - - such a yummy read.

January 24th, 2018 10:49

I AM A VEG~ET~ABLE !
orchidee said:

A tasty write Brian.

January 24th, 2018 09:26

I AM A VEG~ET~ABLE !
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 24th, 2018 07:58

I AM A VEG~ET~ABLE !
Michael Edwards said:

Won\'t get into the dispute about beans etc being a fruit - but whatever they all are I love both fruit and veg and prefer it over meat - super write - will give the fusion some thought.

January 24th, 2018 06:45

LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA !
RebeccaRose.x said:

Really enjoyed this!! \"Unfolding love\" is filled with so much emotion and makes for a great write!

January 23rd, 2018 19:28

LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA !
FredPeyer said:

Very tender poem, Brian. And you know what happens to two fallen snowflakes when it gets warmer: They become ONE drop of water!

January 23rd, 2018 19:26

GOD WILL TAKE CARE OF YOU !
Sarah Marie said:

Awesome job I love it! God is good.

January 23rd, 2018 15:52

LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA !
Caring dove said:

how lovely :-) my favourite line .. Joined like two fallen snowflakes\'\' such nice expression :-) i wish i had someone to cuddle up to

January 23rd, 2018 15:50

LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA !
Michael Edwards said:

Ahh - made me feel all soppy - what a lovely tender write Brian.

January 23rd, 2018 11:27

LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA !
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving write Brian, may your love grow stronger each moment.

January 23rd, 2018 09:02

LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA !
orchidee said:

A bit swoony, but not slap and tickle! But what would I know about that?! heehee. I feel a swoon coming on.

January 23rd, 2018 07:11

LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA !
Fay Slimm. said:

A moving and romantic ballad to found love - -- a beautiful and tender verse and thanks for sharing it Brian.

January 23rd, 2018 05:59

OPEN MY EYES !
FredPeyer said:

I am sure you will get what you pray for, Brian! Well written, well structured! Kudos!

January 23rd, 2018 04:09

X~RAYS ~ An Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:

Great insight - short and sweet - nice one Brian.

January 22nd, 2018 09:18

X~RAYS ~ An Acrostic
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. Or Rontgen Rays? Should have two dots over the \'o\' in Rontgen. Dunno how to do that. I shall lose sleep over it now! lol. It\'s them umlauts, I mean!

January 22nd, 2018 09:18

X~RAYS ~ An Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:

Dem bones, dem bones, dem dry bones,
Dem bones, dem bones, dem dry bones,
Dem bones, dem bones, dem dry bones,
Now shake dem skeleton bones!

The toe bone\'s connected to the foot bone,
The foot bone\'s connected to the ankle bone,
The ankle bone\'s connected to the leg bone,
Now shake dem skeleton bones!

The leg bone\'s connected to the knee bone,
The knee bone\'s connected to the thigh bone,
The thigh bone\'s connected to the hip bone,
Now shake dem skeleton bones!

Dem bones, dem bones, dem dry bones,
Dem bones, dem bones, dem dry bones,
Dem bones, dem bones, dem dry bones,
Now shake dem skeleton bones!

The hip bone\'s connected to the back bone
The back bone\'s connected to the neck bone,
The neck bone\'s connected to the head bone,
Now shake dem skeleton bones!

The finger bone\'s connected to the hand bone,
The hand bone\'s connected to the arm bone,
The arm bone\'s connected to the shoulder bone,
Now shake dem skeleton bones!

Dem bones, dem bones gonna walk around
Dem bones, dem bones, gonna walk around
Dem bones, dem bones, gonna walk around
Now shake dem skeleton bones!


January 22nd, 2018 09:00

X~RAYS ~ An Acrostic
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SR ~ I always like to post a smile on a MONDAY ! Yours BRIAN

January 22nd, 2018 08:11

X~RAYS ~ An Acrostic
Lorna said:

Cute and made me smile!

January 22nd, 2018 07:13

OPEN MY EYES !
Goldfinch60 said:

WE are all awaiting Our Lords return Brain. Good write.

January 22nd, 2018 01:29

OPEN MY EYES !
Heather T said:

Beautiful prayer. May you receive generously the good promises from our Father of Lights.

January 21st, 2018 16:12



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