Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Successfully Failed Again.
arqios said:
The greater the effort after failed trials the greater the learning and achievement 🙏🏻🕊️
April 7th, 2025 02:47
arqios said:
The greater the effort after failed trials the greater the learning and achievement 🙏🏻🕊️
April 7th, 2025 02:47
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good ones once more Tobani.
Andy
April 7th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good ones once more Tobani.
Andy
April 7th, 2025 01:18
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun herein, though. Dinna leave off, it\'s all too good. I love it. Little bits of good sense concluding with a hilarious finale are too good. Beautifully rendered with a tasteful bit of imagery and haunting poignancy. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 20:35
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun herein, though. Dinna leave off, it\'s all too good. I love it. Little bits of good sense concluding with a hilarious finale are too good. Beautifully rendered with a tasteful bit of imagery and haunting poignancy. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 20:35
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
This real touched me, beautiful one
April 6th, 2025 11:43
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
This real touched me, beautiful one
April 6th, 2025 11:43
To Be Alone
definitelymayank said:
Ahh such a lovely one, sad that I relate to it to some extent.
April 6th, 2025 11:42
definitelymayank said:
Ahh such a lovely one, sad that I relate to it to some extent.
April 6th, 2025 11:42
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
Friendship said:
how Wise is the Wise man? Your poem illustrate the complexities of human relationships.
April 6th, 2025 07:57
Friendship said:
how Wise is the Wise man? Your poem illustrate the complexities of human relationships.
April 6th, 2025 07:57
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
sorenbarrett said:
No don\'t assume you know the old saying. I have grown to enjoy your Sunday wise man say section it makes my day and I hope it don\'t go away. Have a great day.
April 6th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
No don\'t assume you know the old saying. I have grown to enjoy your Sunday wise man say section it makes my day and I hope it don\'t go away. Have a great day.
April 6th, 2025 05:47
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
arqios said:
Oh yes! Indeed and 10 not far behind 🙏🏻🕊️
April 6th, 2025 03:49
arqios said:
Oh yes! Indeed and 10 not far behind 🙏🏻🕊️
April 6th, 2025 03:49
Is Insanity Now Normality.
NafisaSB said:
i think the answer is obvious - you have clarified it yourself indirectly
scary thought - wish things normalize one day soon
April 6th, 2025 02:32
NafisaSB said:
i think the answer is obvious - you have clarified it yourself indirectly
scary thought - wish things normalize one day soon
April 6th, 2025 02:32
Just a Waste of F------ Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong poem Tobani. I just cannot understand why people treat children like this.
Andy
April 5th, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong poem Tobani. I just cannot understand why people treat children like this.
Andy
April 5th, 2025 01:21
Just a Waste of F------ Time
Friendship said:
your poem \"Just a Waste of F--king Time\" explores themes of self-worth, abuse, and the psychological impact of being belittled and dehumanized. The speaker grapples with feelings of inadequacy and worthlessness, stemming from the harsh treatment they receive from an authority figure, likely a parent or caretaker. The repetition of \"waste of f-- king time\" emphasizes the speaker\'s internalized belief that they are undeserving of love and respect.I am so sorry ,but you need to move on ,I could never understand why anyone do this their child.
April 4th, 2025 18:38
Friendship said:
your poem \"Just a Waste of F--king Time\" explores themes of self-worth, abuse, and the psychological impact of being belittled and dehumanized. The speaker grapples with feelings of inadequacy and worthlessness, stemming from the harsh treatment they receive from an authority figure, likely a parent or caretaker. The repetition of \"waste of f-- king time\" emphasizes the speaker\'s internalized belief that they are undeserving of love and respect.I am so sorry ,but you need to move on ,I could never understand why anyone do this their child.
April 4th, 2025 18:38
Just a Waste of F------ Time
sorenbarrett said:
The irony of what people say and do never ceases to amaze me. Being a scape goat does not make one a goat, unless one is a G.O.A.T. A touching write that shows that people use their own disabilities to create further disabilities in others. Tough read
April 4th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
The irony of what people say and do never ceases to amaze me. Being a scape goat does not make one a goat, unless one is a G.O.A.T. A touching write that shows that people use their own disabilities to create further disabilities in others. Tough read
April 4th, 2025 03:58
Just a Waste of F------ Time
Mutley Ravishes said:
How effing true! Sad, and funny.
April 4th, 2025 03:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
How effing true! Sad, and funny.
April 4th, 2025 03:38
Just a Waste of F------ Time
arqios said:
It does speak volumes of itself- the one that spoke to me like that is now gone, 2 years this week. How timely 🙏🏻🕊️
April 4th, 2025 02:57
arqios said:
It does speak volumes of itself- the one that spoke to me like that is now gone, 2 years this week. How timely 🙏🏻🕊️
April 4th, 2025 02:57
Just a Waste of F------ Time
orchidee said:
You seen my poem - censored?! (not posted on here). It starts:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and F
And so on for 5,483 verses! Ooh!
April 4th, 2025 02:21
orchidee said:
You seen my poem - censored?! (not posted on here). It starts:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and F
And so on for 5,483 verses! Ooh!
April 4th, 2025 02:21
Jimmy The Bully Man
Goldfinch60 said:
There were bullies in school that got their comeuppance Tobani, strangely I became good friends with one after we left school, he was fine.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
There were bullies in school that got their comeuppance Tobani, strangely I became good friends with one after we left school, he was fine.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:10
Jimmy The Bully Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yesss! I love the fire in your childhood self and this describes a real life scene I was invovled in where I had to stand up to a bully. The result, the same...not the same exact action, mine a punch to the face...but the laying on the ground and not feeling so big and tough...yup. And bully no longer bullied me anymore. Only that particular one stopped, of course, and there were times I lost and/or was beat up by groups of kids. But in that one instance, I moved like a butterfly and stung like a bee. Well done on this, Nataiella. Thank you for posting this throwback and for its message. A fave from me.
April 3rd, 2025 11:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yesss! I love the fire in your childhood self and this describes a real life scene I was invovled in where I had to stand up to a bully. The result, the same...not the same exact action, mine a punch to the face...but the laying on the ground and not feeling so big and tough...yup. And bully no longer bullied me anymore. Only that particular one stopped, of course, and there were times I lost and/or was beat up by groups of kids. But in that one instance, I moved like a butterfly and stung like a bee. Well done on this, Nataiella. Thank you for posting this throwback and for its message. A fave from me.
April 3rd, 2025 11:43
Jimmy The Bully Man
arqios said:
When you’re the underdog you learn to fight to survive 🙏🏻🕊️
April 3rd, 2025 03:09
arqios said:
When you’re the underdog you learn to fight to survive 🙏🏻🕊️
April 3rd, 2025 03:09
Jimmy The Bully Man
sorenbarrett said:
Standing up to a bully is more important than winning but winning helps. A good write my friend.
April 3rd, 2025 03:07
sorenbarrett said:
Standing up to a bully is more important than winning but winning helps. A good write my friend.
April 3rd, 2025 03:07
Smile
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Beautifully rendered in poignant brevity, how very haunting and thought-provoking. One of my brothers used to say folk were most honest when furious, but I dunno. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 17:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Superb. Beautifully rendered in poignant brevity, how very haunting and thought-provoking. One of my brothers used to say folk were most honest when furious, but I dunno. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 17:04
The Voices Have Gone
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtle note of humor which I suppose is called sarcasm, but I prefer the chuckle you gave me. Fascinating reality delineated. Perhaps you\'d like my tinnitus for style? It drives me and has long, long driven me to keep music and other recordings perpetually in the background to distract me from the constant tinny whine. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 17:01
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a subtle note of humor which I suppose is called sarcasm, but I prefer the chuckle you gave me. Fascinating reality delineated. Perhaps you\'d like my tinnitus for style? It drives me and has long, long driven me to keep music and other recordings perpetually in the background to distract me from the constant tinny whine. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 17:01
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