Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Pleasing Everyone Else
David Wakeling said:

yes a powerful message here about dancing to your own tune and not following others.Enjoyable read

April 14th, 2025 05:44

Pleasing Everyone Else
sorenbarrett said:

Know oneself, be comfortable with oneself, be oneself is the process I see and this is reflected in this poem of spiritual freedom. Very well stated and nicely written.

April 14th, 2025 04:10

Pleasing Everyone Else
arqios said:

Mistrusting and people pleasing are probably the first ailments that beset any infant child. Itโ€™s something so hard to cure and shake off, in my opinion. Glad youโ€™ve taken up the topic in poem. ๐Ÿ•Š๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

April 14th, 2025 02:40

Pleasing Everyone Else
MR.apocalypse said:

This was a treat to read I love the way I can just read it so smoothly.



April 14th, 2025 02:21

Wise Man Say (10).
Goldfinch60 said:

Some more good ones Tobani especially.
Wise Man Say.
Do Not Fear
Failure
It Means At
Least You
Tried.

Andy

April 14th, 2025 01:48

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
Kevin Hulme said:

I\'m sure it was Harry with a Weak- End.
Very good, look forward to the Film Version.

April 13th, 2025 20:33

Wise Man Say (10).
Cheeky Missy said:

What\'s with you?! I can\'t resist smiling, with twinkling eyes at the very least, on the indulgence of this latest from that sage whose poignant bits and pieces are certain to find a home. Way too fun! Delightfully rendered with awesome imagery and a teasing poignancy. Thank you, thank you for sharing.

April 13th, 2025 13:24

Wise Man Say (10).
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

April 13th, 2025 13:18

Wise Man Say (10).
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

April 13th, 2025 09:57

Wise Man Say (10).
Tony Grannell said:

Wisdom personified in each succinct stanza. Each one drawing to a close with your insightful observations. A delight to read and finely composed. Very well done indeed.

Kind regards,
Tony.

April 13th, 2025 09:56

Wise Man Say (10).
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

A very positive and uplifting poem on the true meaning of wisdom

April 13th, 2025 08:58

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
2781 said:

It that what they call \"banging\"?

April 13th, 2025 08:33

Wise Man Say (10).
2781 said:

I am feeling like a bit of a failure

April 13th, 2025 08:25

Wise Man Say (10).
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Much wisdom here, but the latter...many unsolicited \"advisers\" need to heed. A fave from me friend. I look forward to these! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

April 13th, 2025 07:31

Wise Man Say (10).
David Wakeling said:

Lots of un and wisdom here,Excellent

April 13th, 2025 05:32

Wise Man Say (10).
sorenbarrett said:

More great adages for a Sunday. Love it.

April 13th, 2025 04:22

Wise Man Say (10).
arqios said:

Ah is it 10 already! And still going strong๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

April 13th, 2025 03:11

Wise Man Say (10).
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good writes PL. And - \'If at first you fail - give up! No use keep bashing head against brick wall.\' lol.

April 13th, 2025 02:57

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words Tobani, it is not quite the same with my Mary, LOL.

Andy

April 13th, 2025 02:29

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
KTay said:

Hahaha! Love this!

April 12th, 2025 14:12

You Get Out What You Put In
rrodriguez said:

Cute and clever playfulness, with a touch of wit. I liked it!

April 12th, 2025 11:56

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

LOL! These were totally fun...and funny! Well done, my friend. Enjoy the weekend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

April 12th, 2025 07:58

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
David Wakeling said:

This was a fun read.Excellent well done

April 12th, 2025 05:33

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
arqios said:

Real life can be so much more hilarious than fiction as exemplified in Harry and Maryโ€™s adventures. Iโ€™m surmising number 4 is well on its way๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

April 12th, 2025 05:28

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
teardrop said:

Hahaha I love it. Great write. Thank you for the chuckle!

April 12th, 2025 04:56

Adventures of Mary and Harry (3)
sorenbarrett said:

Poor Mary she never seems to catch a break. A fun read set in rhyme loved it my friend.

April 12th, 2025 04:22

Children Have Rights.
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Tobani, children should always be protected, love and encouraged in their lives. I cannot ever understand why people can hurt children!

Andy

April 12th, 2025 01:52

Children Have Rights.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

April 11th, 2025 16:01

Children Have Rights.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant.

April 11th, 2025 14:50

The Success Of My Dreams.
spilleronsheet said:

And truth be told, many lives perished under the invisible burden of generations
Keep writing dear poet

April 11th, 2025 14:37



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