Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
My Mama`s Gone.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad story Tobani, it happens so frequently, I have a friend who was abused for many years, she got rid of him eventually and I spent much time listening to her problems and helping all I could. She now has a new wonderful partner and they are wonderful together.
Andy
March 19th, 2025 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad story Tobani, it happens so frequently, I have a friend who was abused for many years, she got rid of him eventually and I spent much time listening to her problems and helping all I could. She now has a new wonderful partner and they are wonderful together.
Andy
March 19th, 2025 02:27
My Mama`s Gone.
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A deep and very relatable write. Truthful and raw. Thank you
March 18th, 2025 11:53
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A deep and very relatable write. Truthful and raw. Thank you
March 18th, 2025 11:53
My Mama`s Gone.
Friendship said:
Well written,So sad , This poem is narrated by a child, reflecting their perspective on family dynamics, particularly the relationship between the child’s parents—primarily focusing on the mother and father.
March 18th, 2025 08:45
Friendship said:
Well written,So sad , This poem is narrated by a child, reflecting their perspective on family dynamics, particularly the relationship between the child’s parents—primarily focusing on the mother and father.
March 18th, 2025 08:45
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write and I fear you are correct. A thought-provoking piece.
March 18th, 2025 08:25
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write and I fear you are correct. A thought-provoking piece.
March 18th, 2025 08:25
My Mama`s Gone.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profoundly sad and terrible reality. Thank you sharing my friend! Excellent write. 🌹👏
March 18th, 2025 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profoundly sad and terrible reality. Thank you sharing my friend! Excellent write. 🌹👏
March 18th, 2025 08:24
My Mama`s Gone.
David Wakeling said:
Very distrubing events here.Its always difficult when Parents are abusive.Sad to read really.
March 18th, 2025 05:23
David Wakeling said:
Very distrubing events here.Its always difficult when Parents are abusive.Sad to read really.
March 18th, 2025 05:23
My Mama`s Gone.
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse an ugly monster that consumes both victim and perpetrator as well as many around it. A sad poem with a message that unfortunately those that need to hear it most will probably not hear. Well done
March 18th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse an ugly monster that consumes both victim and perpetrator as well as many around it. A sad poem with a message that unfortunately those that need to hear it most will probably not hear. Well done
March 18th, 2025 04:08
My Mama`s Gone.
arqios said:
Quite close to home for me but with slight differences. Powerful read🙏🏻🕊️
March 18th, 2025 03:54
arqios said:
Quite close to home for me but with slight differences. Powerful read🙏🏻🕊️
March 18th, 2025 03:54
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Tobani, why cannot we stop fighting!!!
Andy
March 18th, 2025 03:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Tobani, why cannot we stop fighting!!!
Andy
March 18th, 2025 03:35
As The Clouds Gently Roll On By
Simurgh said:
Wonderful poem Tobani, the insight of your poem is indeed true! I also feel this feeling at times...... I understand how you feel... The reflections of the poem made it a lyrical song as well!
Bravo! Good work with beautiful touch of poetic treasure, Tobani🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
With love and warm regards
Simurgh
A renowned poetic bard from India
March 18th, 2025 00:04
Simurgh said:
Wonderful poem Tobani, the insight of your poem is indeed true! I also feel this feeling at times...... I understand how you feel... The reflections of the poem made it a lyrical song as well!
Bravo! Good work with beautiful touch of poetic treasure, Tobani🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
With love and warm regards
Simurgh
A renowned poetic bard from India
March 18th, 2025 00:04
Wise Man Says (6) Have Fun On a Sunny Sunday
John Prophet said:
Usual excellence!
March 17th, 2025 17:42
John Prophet said:
Usual excellence!
March 17th, 2025 17:42
Fun On A Sunnier Sunday
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious. Dumbing down reality with a playful twist is just enough fun for a day of rest, forsooth. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a seriously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 16:36
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious. Dumbing down reality with a playful twist is just enough fun for a day of rest, forsooth. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a seriously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 16:36
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
MR.apocalypse said:
i very much like this idea may i use it for my next poem
March 17th, 2025 16:04
MR.apocalypse said:
i very much like this idea may i use it for my next poem
March 17th, 2025 16:04
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As things currently are...FOR SURE. And what does true peace look like? It seems to me everyone\'s idea of what peace exactly is differs, which then sets up conflict, ironically. At the same time, I do believe in and strive for peace. How complicated of me! 🤣 We humans really are complex, no? Anywho, wonderfully though-provoking write on this St. Patrick\'s Day friend. And, I do believe your poem fits with the day in this way: as St. Patrick peacefully spread his faith only for the church to take over behind him and undo much of what he set up and, to make matter\'s worse, the dude is only remembered for green beer and snakes. All of this to question, can peace really be attained, when one can work for peace only to have it completely undone in one fell swoop. Anywho, a very thought-provoking and wonderful write, TobanI! 🌹👏☘️🎩☘️
March 17th, 2025 13:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As things currently are...FOR SURE. And what does true peace look like? It seems to me everyone\'s idea of what peace exactly is differs, which then sets up conflict, ironically. At the same time, I do believe in and strive for peace. How complicated of me! 🤣 We humans really are complex, no? Anywho, wonderfully though-provoking write on this St. Patrick\'s Day friend. And, I do believe your poem fits with the day in this way: as St. Patrick peacefully spread his faith only for the church to take over behind him and undo much of what he set up and, to make matter\'s worse, the dude is only remembered for green beer and snakes. All of this to question, can peace really be attained, when one can work for peace only to have it completely undone in one fell swoop. Anywho, a very thought-provoking and wonderful write, TobanI! 🌹👏☘️🎩☘️
March 17th, 2025 13:50
The Water.
Shantha Teldeniya said:
Without water, there is no life
Water makes our world so bright
Your poem is very nice.
March 17th, 2025 11:09
Shantha Teldeniya said:
Without water, there is no life
Water makes our world so bright
Your poem is very nice.
March 17th, 2025 11:09
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Caring dove said:
Maybe one day there will be more peace .. hope so anyway
March 17th, 2025 10:27
Caring dove said:
Maybe one day there will be more peace .. hope so anyway
March 17th, 2025 10:27
Wise Man Says (6) Have Fun On a Sunny Sunday
Tom Dylan said:
This made me smile. Loved the last line. Just nailed it.
March 17th, 2025 09:22
Tom Dylan said:
This made me smile. Loved the last line. Just nailed it.
March 17th, 2025 09:22
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Cheeky Missy said:
Mmm... what we fail to recognize in the face of such an insidious reality is how lacking we are of the most essential on that score: peace with God through our Lord Jesus Christ. Had men THAT, yes, all, there would be peace methinks. With the internal struggle alive, or seemingly quelled by the devouring of mankind our neighbors, and the world entirely itself, how can there possibly be peace? They say, \"Misery loves company;\" and I see it night and day, trying to foist itself upon me that I\'d join it. I\'d rather not. But enough. Gorgeously eloquent and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 09:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Mmm... what we fail to recognize in the face of such an insidious reality is how lacking we are of the most essential on that score: peace with God through our Lord Jesus Christ. Had men THAT, yes, all, there would be peace methinks. With the internal struggle alive, or seemingly quelled by the devouring of mankind our neighbors, and the world entirely itself, how can there possibly be peace? They say, \"Misery loves company;\" and I see it night and day, trying to foist itself upon me that I\'d join it. I\'d rather not. But enough. Gorgeously eloquent and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 09:17
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Friendship said:
well written ,your poem is likely written to provoke thought and inspire awareness about the harsh realities of the world, urging readers to reflect on the cyclical nature of violence and the elusive nature of peace. It challenges the notion that true peace can ever be achieved, given humanity\'s historical context and present-day realities
March 17th, 2025 08:50
Friendship said:
well written ,your poem is likely written to provoke thought and inspire awareness about the harsh realities of the world, urging readers to reflect on the cyclical nature of violence and the elusive nature of peace. It challenges the notion that true peace can ever be achieved, given humanity\'s historical context and present-day realities
March 17th, 2025 08:50
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Tommy B Goode said:
I fear that mankind as a species is unable to live in peace.
But I still hope that someday I will be proven wrong.
March 17th, 2025 07:50
Tommy B Goode said:
I fear that mankind as a species is unable to live in peace.
But I still hope that someday I will be proven wrong.
March 17th, 2025 07:50
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Mutley Ravishes said:
Perhaps there will never be real peace until the sword of Manjushri is turned inwards. By everyone.
March 17th, 2025 06:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Perhaps there will never be real peace until the sword of Manjushri is turned inwards. By everyone.
March 17th, 2025 06:42
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
sorenbarrett said:
It appears that violence is part of the human DNA and greed as well. It is what fuels the economy as well as war. Peace was a nice thought too bad it didn\'t work out. A poem that leaves a dark feeling and one too realistic I\'m afraid. Nicely said
March 17th, 2025 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
It appears that violence is part of the human DNA and greed as well. It is what fuels the economy as well as war. Peace was a nice thought too bad it didn\'t work out. A poem that leaves a dark feeling and one too realistic I\'m afraid. Nicely said
March 17th, 2025 06:38
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
arqios said:
More like a driving aspiration and desire methinks 🙏🏻🕊️
March 17th, 2025 05:00
arqios said:
More like a driving aspiration and desire methinks 🙏🏻🕊️
March 17th, 2025 05:00
Wise Man Says (6) Have Fun On a Sunny Sunday
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani especially this one:
Wise Man Says.
Too Many Cooks.
Get in The.
Bloody Way.
My daughter and I almost come to blows if we both working in the kitchen. 🤣😂🤣
Andy
March 17th, 2025 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani especially this one:
Wise Man Says.
Too Many Cooks.
Get in The.
Bloody Way.
My daughter and I almost come to blows if we both working in the kitchen. 🤣😂🤣
Andy
March 17th, 2025 02:28
Wise Man Says (6) Have Fun On a Sunny Sunday
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! I begin to see him now, wizened and shaking a bony finger at the listener while tendering this advice. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 16th, 2025 12:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! I begin to see him now, wizened and shaking a bony finger at the listener while tendering this advice. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 16th, 2025 12:06
Wise Man Says (6) Have Fun On a Sunny Sunday
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Confucius, erm, PL.
March 16th, 2025 11:28
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Confucius, erm, PL.
March 16th, 2025 11:28
Wise Man Says (6) Have Fun On a Sunny Sunday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, these are great. And that last stanza really rocks, changing it from Wise man says to Wise man asks...and the question asked. Indeed. Profound. Well done, my friend! Happy Sunday to you! 🌹👏
March 16th, 2025 07:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, these are great. And that last stanza really rocks, changing it from Wise man says to Wise man asks...and the question asked. Indeed. Profound. Well done, my friend! Happy Sunday to you! 🌹👏
March 16th, 2025 07:54
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