Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
arqios said:
Now that’s the stuff of popular daytime drama 🎭 🙏🏻🕊
March 1st, 2025 06:42
arqios said:
Now that’s the stuff of popular daytime drama 🎭 🙏🏻🕊
March 1st, 2025 06:42
Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
sorenbarrett said:
Words are like people they can be a lot of fun but difficult to work with. These brought a smile to the face and I thank you for that.
March 1st, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Words are like people they can be a lot of fun but difficult to work with. These brought a smile to the face and I thank you for that.
March 1st, 2025 05:31
Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes Tobani.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes Tobani.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:53
To Be Alone
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful poem Tobani, I hope all is well now.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful poem Tobani, I hope all is well now.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:44
The Same Picture Frame
NafisaSB said:
a calm and soothing verse that makes me wish i could enjoy such days too
well written
February 28th, 2025 23:55
NafisaSB said:
a calm and soothing verse that makes me wish i could enjoy such days too
well written
February 28th, 2025 23:55
To Be Alone
Cheeky Missy said:
The wry smile whose sad eyes reflect from this ironic twist in concluding doesn\'t fail to garner affection since this tale cannot but resonate with many. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful twist of humor with a haunting, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, dear Sir. I love it.
February 28th, 2025 12:06
Cheeky Missy said:
The wry smile whose sad eyes reflect from this ironic twist in concluding doesn\'t fail to garner affection since this tale cannot but resonate with many. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful twist of humor with a haunting, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, dear Sir. I love it.
February 28th, 2025 12:06
To Be Alone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it. The truth of what we wish for and what we ultimately come to long for. That said, perhaps we want that in our older age because it is all we\'ve been accustomed to and, at that point, why bother? Not sure there is an answer as to why, but this poem rings really, really true to me. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 28th, 2025 07:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it. The truth of what we wish for and what we ultimately come to long for. That said, perhaps we want that in our older age because it is all we\'ve been accustomed to and, at that point, why bother? Not sure there is an answer as to why, but this poem rings really, really true to me. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 28th, 2025 07:21
To Be Alone
Mutley Ravishes said:
I recall a story where the teller recalls a book case seeming to come alive after a session of meditation. That reminded me of a teacher telling me once that \"we\'re never really alone,\" with a twinkle in his eye.
Great write.
February 28th, 2025 06:59
Mutley Ravishes said:
I recall a story where the teller recalls a book case seeming to come alive after a session of meditation. That reminded me of a teacher telling me once that \"we\'re never really alone,\" with a twinkle in his eye.
Great write.
February 28th, 2025 06:59
To Be Alone
sorenbarrett said:
With so much struggle to be with others we all find in the end that we are all, everyone of us alone. No one can creep inside this shell or lay with our naked thoughts and be as one with us. We are ultimately alone. And that is okay. A wonderful write on the evolution of being alone.
February 28th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
With so much struggle to be with others we all find in the end that we are all, everyone of us alone. No one can creep inside this shell or lay with our naked thoughts and be as one with us. We are ultimately alone. And that is okay. A wonderful write on the evolution of being alone.
February 28th, 2025 04:28
If i Were Made Off Glass
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words would always be seen within you Tobani.
Andy
February 28th, 2025 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words would always be seen within you Tobani.
Andy
February 28th, 2025 02:46
If i Were Made Off Glass
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great question that causes each reader to reflect on how they look at and perceive others. Brilliant in its brevity, my friend. Well done on this! 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 17:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great question that causes each reader to reflect on how they look at and perceive others. Brilliant in its brevity, my friend. Well done on this! 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 17:54
If i Were Made Off Glass
Distant View said:
A playful poem! This made me smile, but it has a serious side to it too! Some people are more complicated than others -- some you can see right through, others are dark horses in deep waters!
February 27th, 2025 16:08
Distant View said:
A playful poem! This made me smile, but it has a serious side to it too! Some people are more complicated than others -- some you can see right through, others are dark horses in deep waters!
February 27th, 2025 16:08
If i Were Made Off Glass
David Wakeling said:
Raises an interesting question. We are travelling through the looking glass here
February 27th, 2025 15:03
David Wakeling said:
Raises an interesting question. We are travelling through the looking glass here
February 27th, 2025 15:03
If i Were Made Off Glass
Cheeky Missy said:
I wonder. Probably accidentally jostle and thereby shatter the glass, you know? Never see the real entity, just enjoy the fantasies it culls. Fascinating and pointedly rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 27th, 2025 11:17
Cheeky Missy said:
I wonder. Probably accidentally jostle and thereby shatter the glass, you know? Never see the real entity, just enjoy the fantasies it culls. Fascinating and pointedly rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 27th, 2025 11:17
If i Were Made Off Glass
sorenbarrett said:
Crystal clear this poem. A lovely thought to puzzle over. Many a time I have walked into a glass door not seeing it. Lovely
February 27th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Crystal clear this poem. A lovely thought to puzzle over. Many a time I have walked into a glass door not seeing it. Lovely
February 27th, 2025 04:37
If i Were Made Off Glass
Cassie58 said:
If you were mirror glass, I would be looking at myself :) However, this morning I am looking straight through plate glass and focusing on what’s on the other side. That happens to be a silver birch tree, tresses swaying in a light breeze against a blue sky back drop. Thank goodness for clear glass. Enjoyed the read Tobani.
February 27th, 2025 03:40
Cassie58 said:
If you were mirror glass, I would be looking at myself :) However, this morning I am looking straight through plate glass and focusing on what’s on the other side. That happens to be a silver birch tree, tresses swaying in a light breeze against a blue sky back drop. Thank goodness for clear glass. Enjoyed the read Tobani.
February 27th, 2025 03:40
A Selfish Man.
Cassie58 said:
Hello Tobani, sadly there are many who don’t care about looking after our planet, it is shameful. Beauty spots spoiled by rubbish, rivers and seas polluted with plastic. Locally we have a group of dedicated people who regularly go out and litter pick, keeping the environment clean for those who care. Taking s pride in the neighborhood. A topical write. Have a good Thursday.
February 27th, 2025 03:00
Cassie58 said:
Hello Tobani, sadly there are many who don’t care about looking after our planet, it is shameful. Beauty spots spoiled by rubbish, rivers and seas polluted with plastic. Locally we have a group of dedicated people who regularly go out and litter pick, keeping the environment clean for those who care. Taking s pride in the neighborhood. A topical write. Have a good Thursday.
February 27th, 2025 03:00
A Selfish Man.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and unfortunately so very true. Will man ever learn!
Andy
February 27th, 2025 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and unfortunately so very true. Will man ever learn!
Andy
February 27th, 2025 02:45
A Selfish Man.
David Wakeling said:
I think that selfish man is my neighbour. An iinteresting poem.MAde me think Well done
February 26th, 2025 17:00
David Wakeling said:
I think that selfish man is my neighbour. An iinteresting poem.MAde me think Well done
February 26th, 2025 17:00
A Selfish Man.
Distant View said:
Yes, sadly this is true! We always seem to select the wrong kind of people to lead us, and so we are, alas, collectively all partly to blame! A poem with a powerful message!
February 26th, 2025 16:16
Distant View said:
Yes, sadly this is true! We always seem to select the wrong kind of people to lead us, and so we are, alas, collectively all partly to blame! A poem with a powerful message!
February 26th, 2025 16:16
A Selfish Man.
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Enjoy the rhythm and rhyme to this write. Beautifully written!
February 26th, 2025 15:43
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Enjoy the rhythm and rhyme to this write. Beautifully written!
February 26th, 2025 15:43
A Selfish Man.
Cheeky Missy said:
Partaking of the forbidden fruit left perfection so dead that despite the mercies abounding daily, we\'ve a thread of the perverse staining everything. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 14:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Partaking of the forbidden fruit left perfection so dead that despite the mercies abounding daily, we\'ve a thread of the perverse staining everything. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 14:05
A Selfish Man.
MDStone said:
This one speaks into the deep dark space of my own selfishness. A good wake up call and reminder. Thanks for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 09:28
MDStone said:
This one speaks into the deep dark space of my own selfishness. A good wake up call and reminder. Thanks for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 09:28
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