Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Wise Man Say (18).
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All very true, my dear friend! Wise man say that this is a great series of poems very much looked forward to. Well done, Tobani! Happy Sunday to you! 🌹👏
June 29th, 2025 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All very true, my dear friend! Wise man say that this is a great series of poems very much looked forward to. Well done, Tobani! Happy Sunday to you! 🌹👏
June 29th, 2025 07:49
Wise Man Say (18).
David Wakeling said:
Some great wisdom here.I always enjoy these gems.
June 29th, 2025 04:32
David Wakeling said:
Some great wisdom here.I always enjoy these gems.
June 29th, 2025 04:32
Wise Man Say (18).
sorenbarrett said:
Another Sunday with the good wise man, starts it off with a bang. Nicely done
June 29th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Another Sunday with the good wise man, starts it off with a bang. Nicely done
June 29th, 2025 04:05
Fun With Jack.
Doggerel Dave said:
Organisation is the key when moving. One hopes Jack was organised enough to pack his best companion and the puncture kit in the same bin.
June 28th, 2025 20:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Organisation is the key when moving. One hopes Jack was organised enough to pack his best companion and the puncture kit in the same bin.
June 28th, 2025 20:36
Jack and Jill
rrodriguez said:
These are fun to read. I read them with my grandchildren and we had a laugh. Thank you for sharing ☺️
June 28th, 2025 17:23
rrodriguez said:
These are fun to read. I read them with my grandchildren and we had a laugh. Thank you for sharing ☺️
June 28th, 2025 17:23
Mary\'s Fun Life.
Teddy.15 said:
My sister is called Mary and so from the start I was chuckling. 🌹
June 28th, 2025 14:22
Teddy.15 said:
My sister is called Mary and so from the start I was chuckling. 🌹
June 28th, 2025 14:22
Best Friend Harry
NafisaSB said:
Message is - no personal comment will be tolerated. All else allowed. Good one👏👏👌
June 28th, 2025 11:38
NafisaSB said:
Message is - no personal comment will be tolerated. All else allowed. Good one👏👏👌
June 28th, 2025 11:38
Wise Man Say (14)
rrodriguez said:
The wise man said it wisely. These reflections are on point. They\'re a primer for thought. Thank you for sharing.
June 28th, 2025 10:58
rrodriguez said:
The wise man said it wisely. These reflections are on point. They\'re a primer for thought. Thank you for sharing.
June 28th, 2025 10:58
Fun With Jack.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Moving is never fun! Have had to do it many times! These poems. Totally fun! Thank you for sharing, my friend! 🌹👏
June 28th, 2025 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Moving is never fun! Have had to do it many times! These poems. Totally fun! Thank you for sharing, my friend! 🌹👏
June 28th, 2025 09:39
Fun With Jack.
arqios said:
Your fun poem lands with a mix of tongue-in-cheek irreverence and domestic chaos, all wrapped in a dry, mischievous humour. Jack’s antics feel like something out of a cheeky sitcom; absurd yet oddly relatable in that “just trying to cope” kind of way. It’s equal parts bizarre and brilliant, like a backyard farce with a wink to the audience.
June 28th, 2025 05:55
arqios said:
Your fun poem lands with a mix of tongue-in-cheek irreverence and domestic chaos, all wrapped in a dry, mischievous humour. Jack’s antics feel like something out of a cheeky sitcom; absurd yet oddly relatable in that “just trying to cope” kind of way. It’s equal parts bizarre and brilliant, like a backyard farce with a wink to the audience.
June 28th, 2025 05:55
Fun With Jack.
sorenbarrett said:
I saw that one coming I guess I\'ve done it before myself. Hate moving and hate fixing flats. Good write Tobani made me smile again
June 28th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
I saw that one coming I guess I\'ve done it before myself. Hate moving and hate fixing flats. Good write Tobani made me smile again
June 28th, 2025 04:11
Children Had Fun.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem beautifully captures the bittersweet chaos of a family outing—where mishaps and frustrations pile up, yet the children’s joy shines through it all. Percy and Joan’s sacrifices and quiet exasperation feel so real, making their love for Paul and Jill all the more touching. The humor in the absurdity (seagull theft, graffiti explanations, and the infamous ‘bare arses’ scene!) balances the underlying tenderness. A reminder that even imperfect days become cherished memories when seen through the eyes of happy children. Lovely work, Tobani—relatable, funny, and full of heart!
June 27th, 2025 14:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
This poem beautifully captures the bittersweet chaos of a family outing—where mishaps and frustrations pile up, yet the children’s joy shines through it all. Percy and Joan’s sacrifices and quiet exasperation feel so real, making their love for Paul and Jill all the more touching. The humor in the absurdity (seagull theft, graffiti explanations, and the infamous ‘bare arses’ scene!) balances the underlying tenderness. A reminder that even imperfect days become cherished memories when seen through the eyes of happy children. Lovely work, Tobani—relatable, funny, and full of heart!
June 27th, 2025 14:51
Children Had Fun.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What is misery to one is joy to another. Chuckles were found...and the read well worth it. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 27th, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What is misery to one is joy to another. Chuckles were found...and the read well worth it. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 27th, 2025 10:50
Children Had Fun.
Cheeky Missy said:
You DID make me shake with silent laughter, and this latest pretty number was indeed lengthy, minorly akin to our old American poets such as Longfellow, but it was worth the reading. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a humorous, haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 27th, 2025 10:02
Cheeky Missy said:
You DID make me shake with silent laughter, and this latest pretty number was indeed lengthy, minorly akin to our old American poets such as Longfellow, but it was worth the reading. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a humorous, haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 27th, 2025 10:02
Children Had Fun.
arqios said:
Your enjoyment oozes our through the lines and the cadence of the poem. Enjoyment all around for both writer and reader.🕊️🙏🏻
June 27th, 2025 06:49
arqios said:
Your enjoyment oozes our through the lines and the cadence of the poem. Enjoyment all around for both writer and reader.🕊️🙏🏻
June 27th, 2025 06:49
Children Had Fun.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Tobani. We have all had that day. Have a nice weekend yourself.
June 27th, 2025 06:46
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Tobani. We have all had that day. Have a nice weekend yourself.
June 27th, 2025 06:46
Children Had Fun.
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh! I do like to be beside the seaside!
I do like to be beside the sea!
Oh I do like to stroll along the Prom, Prom, Prom!
Where the brass bands play, \"Tiddely-om-pom-pom!\"
Your entertaining tale tells more truths than this old English seaside favourite fable Tobani.
Enjoyed every line.
June 27th, 2025 06:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh! I do like to be beside the seaside!
I do like to be beside the sea!
Oh I do like to stroll along the Prom, Prom, Prom!
Where the brass bands play, \"Tiddely-om-pom-pom!\"
Your entertaining tale tells more truths than this old English seaside favourite fable Tobani.
Enjoyed every line.
June 27th, 2025 06:04
Children Had Fun.
David Wakeling said:
Poor old Percy thought he was taking the family on an adventure and everything went wrong.A great and entertaining story. I really enjoyed it.
June 27th, 2025 04:18
David Wakeling said:
Poor old Percy thought he was taking the family on an adventure and everything went wrong.A great and entertaining story. I really enjoyed it.
June 27th, 2025 04:18
Children Had Fun.
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how one person\'s misery can be another\'s joy. Point of view establishes attitude that determines mood. A fun read and I was expecting further disasters such as coming back to a stripped car or one that wasn\'t there or worse being held up with no money to pay on the way back but then my views are always dark. Well done
June 27th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how one person\'s misery can be another\'s joy. Point of view establishes attitude that determines mood. A fun read and I was expecting further disasters such as coming back to a stripped car or one that wasn\'t there or worse being held up with no money to pay on the way back but then my views are always dark. Well done
June 27th, 2025 03:54
Best Friend Harry
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write PL. And could one mention his dead caterpillar under his nose - his moustache?! lol.
June 26th, 2025 14:47
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write PL. And could one mention his dead caterpillar under his nose - his moustache?! lol.
June 26th, 2025 14:47
Best Friend Harry
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay, Harry\'s turn for Thursday! Loved it, my friend. Thanks for the laugh! 🌹👏
June 26th, 2025 10:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay, Harry\'s turn for Thursday! Loved it, my friend. Thanks for the laugh! 🌹👏
June 26th, 2025 10:21
Best Friend Harry
Cheeky Missy said:
My la! I begin this hilarious week might last forever. You\'re too fun with these. Beautifully rendered with a disarming sense of casual speech which manages delightfully to rhyme, tinged by a delicate poignancy which lingers. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 10:18
Cheeky Missy said:
My la! I begin this hilarious week might last forever. You\'re too fun with these. Beautifully rendered with a disarming sense of casual speech which manages delightfully to rhyme, tinged by a delicate poignancy which lingers. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 10:18
Best Friend Harry
Damaso said:
I really identify with Harry. I enjoyed it a lot, sir. Thanks for sharing! Cheers
June 26th, 2025 08:56
Damaso said:
I really identify with Harry. I enjoyed it a lot, sir. Thanks for sharing! Cheers
June 26th, 2025 08:56
Best Friend Harry
arqios said:
A most amicable write about such an amiable friend🕊️🙏🏻 Much enjoyed.
June 26th, 2025 07:05
arqios said:
A most amicable write about such an amiable friend🕊️🙏🏻 Much enjoyed.
June 26th, 2025 07:05
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