Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
The World Holds It`s Breath
MendedFences27 said:
Truth, and nothing but the truth. A well-spoken piece. I feel like it will all come crashing down on him soon. (You reap what you sow). I pray for it to be true. Well spoken, - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:05
MendedFences27 said:
Truth, and nothing but the truth. A well-spoken piece. I feel like it will all come crashing down on him soon. (You reap what you sow). I pray for it to be true. Well spoken, - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:05
The World Holds It`s Breath
E.J. Waling said:
At 72 I’ve been around the block a few times. There was a saying no so long ago that everyone was entitled to their opinion.
I lost friends and family in the last few years as they pushed me away because my opinion did not conform with theirs. Sad….
February 17th, 2025 19:04
E.J. Waling said:
At 72 I’ve been around the block a few times. There was a saying no so long ago that everyone was entitled to their opinion.
I lost friends and family in the last few years as they pushed me away because my opinion did not conform with theirs. Sad….
February 17th, 2025 19:04
The World Holds It`s Breath
Cassie58 said:
That’s quite an itch Tobani. An epic one and I congratulate you on your patience. So much content here and much to be worried about. We wait with bated breath. Hope your Monday has been good.
February 17th, 2025 14:18
Cassie58 said:
That’s quite an itch Tobani. An epic one and I congratulate you on your patience. So much content here and much to be worried about. We wait with bated breath. Hope your Monday has been good.
February 17th, 2025 14:18
The World Holds It`s Breath
Neville said:
Damn, this is about as true as it gets .. and darn near made me cry with frustration and anger .. Needed to be said tho\' .. nuff said .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:22
Neville said:
Damn, this is about as true as it gets .. and darn near made me cry with frustration and anger .. Needed to be said tho\' .. nuff said .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:22
The World Holds It`s Breath
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Write on! It makes me feel less alone! LOL! That itch will come back, no doubt! Agent Orange Menace will see to that. (Oops, did I say that out loud? 🤣) Well done, on this, though I wish it weren\'t so damn true. 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Write on! It makes me feel less alone! LOL! That itch will come back, no doubt! Agent Orange Menace will see to that. (Oops, did I say that out loud? 🤣) Well done, on this, though I wish it weren\'t so damn true. 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:19
The World Holds It`s Breath
David Wakeling said:
There is so much to unpack here. I think recent events have made us all get ready for bad things to happen. Let\'s face it wars are happening around the world so more could be coming.Let\'s hope things improve.An amazing poem
February 17th, 2025 05:38
David Wakeling said:
There is so much to unpack here. I think recent events have made us all get ready for bad things to happen. Let\'s face it wars are happening around the world so more could be coming.Let\'s hope things improve.An amazing poem
February 17th, 2025 05:38
The World Holds It`s Breath
sorenbarrett said:
Strong feelings something that America has not had in a long time. Wait and see if the bull shit that has been spread is a growth stimulant or too strong and burns the roots. When the horrific becomes humorous all we can do is laugh. Good and passionate write.
February 17th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Strong feelings something that America has not had in a long time. Wait and see if the bull shit that has been spread is a growth stimulant or too strong and burns the roots. When the horrific becomes humorous all we can do is laugh. Good and passionate write.
February 17th, 2025 05:10
The World Holds It`s Breath
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not holding my breath!
Taking the journey to the west!
February 17th, 2025 04:54
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not holding my breath!
Taking the journey to the west!
February 17th, 2025 04:54
My Bed For The Night
Parisab said:
Glad you listened as a way of helping-good write
February 17th, 2025 03:35
Parisab said:
Glad you listened as a way of helping-good write
February 17th, 2025 03:35
The World Holds It`s Breath
arqios said:
You held on for as long as you could. That’s all that can be asked of anyone 🙏🏻🕊️
February 17th, 2025 03:09
arqios said:
You held on for as long as you could. That’s all that can be asked of anyone 🙏🏻🕊️
February 17th, 2025 03:09
Yesterday Was
Cassie58 said:
This is a very touching poem Tobani. A reminder of the lonely people on Valentine’s Day, and there are many of them. I particularly enjoyed the structure and the repetition of some hearts, worked well. A favourite.
February 16th, 2025 12:27
Cassie58 said:
This is a very touching poem Tobani. A reminder of the lonely people on Valentine’s Day, and there are many of them. I particularly enjoyed the structure and the repetition of some hearts, worked well. A favourite.
February 16th, 2025 12:27
Yesterday Was
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true, so much emotion comes into our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true, so much emotion comes into our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:43
Yesterday Was
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s something of sheer solace in this seemingly simple piece which yet so capable says so much more than would seem, covering the bases gently with such a tender hand, likeas a mother\'s. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 21:50
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s something of sheer solace in this seemingly simple piece which yet so capable says so much more than would seem, covering the bases gently with such a tender hand, likeas a mother\'s. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 21:50
Yesterday Was
David Wakeling said:
Yesterday seemed to be filled with hearts broken and otherwise. A very thoughtful poem. Enjoyed reading
February 15th, 2025 21:00
David Wakeling said:
Yesterday seemed to be filled with hearts broken and otherwise. A very thoughtful poem. Enjoyed reading
February 15th, 2025 21:00
Yesterday Was
E.J. Waling said:
Wonderful words. Sensitive write ✍️ PL
John
February 15th, 2025 19:22
E.J. Waling said:
Wonderful words. Sensitive write ✍️ PL
John
February 15th, 2025 19:22
Yesterday Was
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. You and I are on a similar track this morning. Serendipity. As for your poem, spot on! Well done! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. You and I are on a similar track this morning. Serendipity. As for your poem, spot on! Well done! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:30
Yesterday Was
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
A thing called the heart is so easy to break, yet so many times, it heals with love. The chances were high yesterday. Love this poem❤️
February 15th, 2025 08:12
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
A thing called the heart is so easy to break, yet so many times, it heals with love. The chances were high yesterday. Love this poem❤️
February 15th, 2025 08:12
Yesterday Was
Michael Edwards said:
I am noty usually into \'lovey\' poems but this rings so true and is so well written - much enjoyed - ikudos.
February 15th, 2025 05:08
Michael Edwards said:
I am noty usually into \'lovey\' poems but this rings so true and is so well written - much enjoyed - ikudos.
February 15th, 2025 05:08
Yesterday Was
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message contained in your poem. Sensitivity, empathy, awareness are things that have been dulled in a fast moving society. Being aware that not all people experience life the same is critical to being a caring person. A most poignant write. Nicely worded and written.
February 15th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message contained in your poem. Sensitivity, empathy, awareness are things that have been dulled in a fast moving society. Being aware that not all people experience life the same is critical to being a caring person. A most poignant write. Nicely worded and written.
February 15th, 2025 04:38
The Passion Has Gone
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Tobani, may that passion re-emerge once again.
Andy
February 15th, 2025 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Tobani, may that passion re-emerge once again.
Andy
February 15th, 2025 02:42
The Clock has stopped Ticking
whats write for me said:
Deep and dark prose. Perhaps it was not his fault. The demons that chase us each and every one. Come from our own deep, dark soul.
February 15th, 2025 00:47
whats write for me said:
Deep and dark prose. Perhaps it was not his fault. The demons that chase us each and every one. Come from our own deep, dark soul.
February 15th, 2025 00:47
The Passion Has Gone
David Wakeling said:
Inevitability of lossing love and passion is very sad.Very moving and thoughtful poem.
February 14th, 2025 15:41
David Wakeling said:
Inevitability of lossing love and passion is very sad.Very moving and thoughtful poem.
February 14th, 2025 15:41
The Passion Has Gone
Cheeky Missy said:
On Valentine\'s Day of all days in the year, this eloquent tribute to the reality of this holiday and oft-extolled romance. La dee. Too perfect. Charmingly rendered in seeming simplicity and tantalizing brevity, with tasteful imagery and an almost exquisitely haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:38
Cheeky Missy said:
On Valentine\'s Day of all days in the year, this eloquent tribute to the reality of this holiday and oft-extolled romance. La dee. Too perfect. Charmingly rendered in seeming simplicity and tantalizing brevity, with tasteful imagery and an almost exquisitely haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:38
The Passion Has Gone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s sad...but I live in this poem. Not what I want, never what I wanted, but my reality all the same. Thank you for giving it words. Brought me to tears this morning. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 14th, 2025 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s sad...but I live in this poem. Not what I want, never what I wanted, but my reality all the same. Thank you for giving it words. Brought me to tears this morning. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 14th, 2025 09:49
The Passion Has Gone
arqios said:
If only there was a refresh button… or even a reboot function!
February 14th, 2025 07:48
arqios said:
If only there was a refresh button… or even a reboot function!
February 14th, 2025 07:48
The Passion Has Gone
Mutley Ravishes said:
We\'re being asked to dig deep.
The electricity
Never dies
It lies
In wait
Keep the faith
What if the snake
Can only awake
When all passion dissipates?
February 14th, 2025 07:33
Mutley Ravishes said:
We\'re being asked to dig deep.
The electricity
Never dies
It lies
In wait
Keep the faith
What if the snake
Can only awake
When all passion dissipates?
February 14th, 2025 07:33
The Passion Has Gone
sorenbarrett said:
The old song \"You\'ve lost that lovin feeling\" comes through strong and clear in this poem. It is hard to keep the fire alive and once out it is even harder to restart. A wonderful write.
February 14th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
The old song \"You\'ve lost that lovin feeling\" comes through strong and clear in this poem. It is hard to keep the fire alive and once out it is even harder to restart. A wonderful write.
February 14th, 2025 05:07
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