Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Wise Man Say (14)
David Wakeling said:
I love the wisdom here.I always learn something new.Excellent
June 1st, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
I love the wisdom here.I always learn something new.Excellent
June 1st, 2025 04:14
Wise Man Say (14)
arqios said:
40, now that is a wonderful number,; bring them onποΈππ»
June 1st, 2025 02:36
arqios said:
40, now that is a wonderful number,; bring them onποΈππ»
June 1st, 2025 02:36
Jolly Fun!!!
arqios said:
Yes, now it\'s Mary\'s turn; unless of course I missed something.ππ»ποΈ
June 1st, 2025 01:46
arqios said:
Yes, now it\'s Mary\'s turn; unless of course I missed something.ππ»ποΈ
June 1st, 2025 01:46
Jolly Fun!!!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tobani.
Don\'t mention Greggs, we cannot walk passed the shops without going in. LOL
Andy
June 1st, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tobani.
Don\'t mention Greggs, we cannot walk passed the shops without going in. LOL
Andy
June 1st, 2025 01:24
Jolly Fun!!!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A lot of fun! Thanks for the laugh! Good to see Mary out on her own, and to know it\'s not just Harry! LOL! Wonderful job! πΉπ
May 31st, 2025 07:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A lot of fun! Thanks for the laugh! Good to see Mary out on her own, and to know it\'s not just Harry! LOL! Wonderful job! πΉπ
May 31st, 2025 07:26
Jolly Fun!!!
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read Tobani keep those smiles coming.
May 31st, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read Tobani keep those smiles coming.
May 31st, 2025 04:13
Jolly Fun!!!
David Wakeling said:
That Mary she is her own worst enemy. Yet another fall from grace. Fun read mi amigo
May 31st, 2025 04:04
David Wakeling said:
That Mary she is her own worst enemy. Yet another fall from grace. Fun read mi amigo
May 31st, 2025 04:04
Convert To Peace.
sorenbarrett said:
I loved not only the message of this poem but the way it was said. Everything was stated in a positive manner. The wording was in balance in all directions, stanza to stanza, line to line, meaning to inverted meaning it came across as a yin and yang so perfect and yet on the positive side a fave
May 30th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
I loved not only the message of this poem but the way it was said. Everything was stated in a positive manner. The wording was in balance in all directions, stanza to stanza, line to line, meaning to inverted meaning it came across as a yin and yang so perfect and yet on the positive side a fave
May 30th, 2025 04:24
Convert To Peace.
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful sentiment and prayer. I have always been a pacifist so this music to my ears. Well done
May 30th, 2025 04:03
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful sentiment and prayer. I have always been a pacifist so this music to my ears. Well done
May 30th, 2025 04:03
Success Of Lies.
Goldfinch60 said:
He obviously became a politician then Tobani.
Andy
May 30th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
He obviously became a politician then Tobani.
Andy
May 30th, 2025 01:18
Success Of Lies.
Cheeky Missy said:
That twist in concluding, the entire sarcastic discussion is so deliciously rendered it simply drips with burning hot sarcasm. Oh! How gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Superb.
May 29th, 2025 11:24
Cheeky Missy said:
That twist in concluding, the entire sarcastic discussion is so deliciously rendered it simply drips with burning hot sarcasm. Oh! How gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Superb.
May 29th, 2025 11:24
Success Of Lies.
Damaso said:
I feel a poem in the form of a slap that awakens, a perfect discourse that leaves us with more questions than before, but with a very clear reflection that we are very distracted. It\'s always a pleasure to read you, sir.
May 29th, 2025 09:45
Damaso said:
I feel a poem in the form of a slap that awakens, a perfect discourse that leaves us with more questions than before, but with a very clear reflection that we are very distracted. It\'s always a pleasure to read you, sir.
May 29th, 2025 09:45
Success Of Lies.
Doggerel Dave said:
An oblique view of the state the world is in. Lies and cons everywhere.
Very much enjoyed this for it\'s irony.
May 29th, 2025 09:14
Doggerel Dave said:
An oblique view of the state the world is in. Lies and cons everywhere.
Very much enjoyed this for it\'s irony.
May 29th, 2025 09:14
Success Of Lies.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man, I have read this three times now. This is so subversive, I LOVE IT and find my home in it. Thank you for writing this my friend! πΉπΉπΉπΉππππ
May 29th, 2025 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Man, I have read this three times now. This is so subversive, I LOVE IT and find my home in it. Thank you for writing this my friend! πΉπΉπΉπΉππππ
May 29th, 2025 08:21
Success Of Lies.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spoken like a prophet of plainness! And the funny thing is, even now, the Son\'s followers will still fall mostly deaf to its message! Not a judgment toward anyone, just an observation. I am a believer so this could apply to me too, but I hear it\'s message loud and clear, my friend. I hope and pray, fuck that, I will shout it out along with you. This is why the Jesus Facepalm meme was created! Because even plain speech and common sense gets ignored by the ones who supposedly hold \"The way, the truth, and the life\". πΉπ
May 29th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spoken like a prophet of plainness! And the funny thing is, even now, the Son\'s followers will still fall mostly deaf to its message! Not a judgment toward anyone, just an observation. I am a believer so this could apply to me too, but I hear it\'s message loud and clear, my friend. I hope and pray, fuck that, I will shout it out along with you. This is why the Jesus Facepalm meme was created! Because even plain speech and common sense gets ignored by the ones who supposedly hold \"The way, the truth, and the life\". πΉπ
May 29th, 2025 08:20
Success Of Lies.
David Wakeling said:
This is powerful. The truth and dishonesty mixed together to give confusion. Its a deep and serious question. Well done
May 29th, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
This is powerful. The truth and dishonesty mixed together to give confusion. Its a deep and serious question. Well done
May 29th, 2025 04:14
Success Of Lies.
sorenbarrett said:
Was this the first day of politician school? A sad but fun read that seems to be its own Bible of a sort. Loved it
May 29th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Was this the first day of politician school? A sad but fun read that seems to be its own Bible of a sort. Loved it
May 29th, 2025 03:56
Success Of Lies.
HolesInMyJeans said:
Wow. Very nice. And a sad world we live in when thatβs the way things are.
May 29th, 2025 02:29
HolesInMyJeans said:
Wow. Very nice. And a sad world we live in when thatβs the way things are.
May 29th, 2025 02:29
Broken Mirror
RSM0812 said:
Maybe you get to see the reflections of every part of yourself.
May 28th, 2025 21:09
RSM0812 said:
Maybe you get to see the reflections of every part of yourself.
May 28th, 2025 21:09
Broken Mirror
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, or...perhaps it is not the mirror that is broken after all. We\'re all a little broken, some more than others, so we can\'t judge the mirror! Or so an aspiring Wise Man Say π€£. Wonderfully profound poem and deserves to be more faved than it already is, my dear friend! I have now helped that cause! ππΉ
May 28th, 2025 19:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, or...perhaps it is not the mirror that is broken after all. We\'re all a little broken, some more than others, so we can\'t judge the mirror! Or so an aspiring Wise Man Say π€£. Wonderfully profound poem and deserves to be more faved than it already is, my dear friend! I have now helped that cause! ππΉ
May 28th, 2025 19:39
Broken Mirror
Damaso said:
Fragmenting the reflection, perhaps. Excellent. Regards.
May 28th, 2025 17:08
Damaso said:
Fragmenting the reflection, perhaps. Excellent. Regards.
May 28th, 2025 17:08
The Dream I Wanted.
Cheeky Missy said:
Exquisitely painful in conclusion, how very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy. Perspective is another angle, perhaps, to pursue, as I guess I had an oddly cheerful perspective on my own early years. Thank you very much for sharing. I wish I could comfort you.
May 28th, 2025 15:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Exquisitely painful in conclusion, how very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy. Perspective is another angle, perhaps, to pursue, as I guess I had an oddly cheerful perspective on my own early years. Thank you very much for sharing. I wish I could comfort you.
May 28th, 2025 15:24
Blade In My Hand.
Cheeky Missy said:
The tongue is neither shiny nor appears to be a blade which can be sheathed, yet my late mother warned me too many years ago about how much like a scimitar mine was and against using it freely in that regard. Likewise, in the battle of kill or be killed, I learned painfully that I\'d rather be the victim than the murderer, and again, not so evidently as a knife battle proves. Ergo, it\'s a painfully relevant discussion raised. Excellently rendered with exquisite imagery and a painfully resonating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 15:20
Cheeky Missy said:
The tongue is neither shiny nor appears to be a blade which can be sheathed, yet my late mother warned me too many years ago about how much like a scimitar mine was and against using it freely in that regard. Likewise, in the battle of kill or be killed, I learned painfully that I\'d rather be the victim than the murderer, and again, not so evidently as a knife battle proves. Ergo, it\'s a painfully relevant discussion raised. Excellently rendered with exquisite imagery and a painfully resonating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 15:20
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