Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Neville said:
No aint that the bloomin truth .. wise men should take it easy on Sundays .. N
February 23rd, 2025 14:10
Neville said:
No aint that the bloomin truth .. wise men should take it easy on Sundays .. N
February 23rd, 2025 14:10
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom found here. It is in the trash that we find it and in sadness humor. I love these little gems they always give another look at things and add a smile. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom found here. It is in the trash that we find it and in sadness humor. I love these little gems they always give another look at things and add a smile. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:44
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
arqios said:
This series is becoming a regular delight here🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 03:51
arqios said:
This series is becoming a regular delight here🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 03:51
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Tobani. I hope Harry recovers.
Andy
February 23rd, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Tobani. I hope Harry recovers.
Andy
February 23rd, 2025 02:48
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A lot of fun. These are great! Happy weekend, my friend!
February 22nd, 2025 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A lot of fun. These are great! Happy weekend, my friend!
February 22nd, 2025 09:55
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
arqios said:
Kinda wondering what happened to Jack… or is this another ‘Mary’? Still a fun read as promised 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:02
arqios said:
Kinda wondering what happened to Jack… or is this another ‘Mary’? Still a fun read as promised 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:02
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Mutley Ravishes said:
Harry has balls like balloons
He\'ll be appearing in
A South Park cartoon
Anytime soon!
Enjoyed the read!
February 22nd, 2025 05:39
Mutley Ravishes said:
Harry has balls like balloons
He\'ll be appearing in
A South Park cartoon
Anytime soon!
Enjoyed the read!
February 22nd, 2025 05:39
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
sorenbarrett said:
Poor Harry \'twas not merry because of hairy Mary. Hairy wished to tarry Mary was contrary kicked him in the berry which he was unable to parry. All I want to know is what happened to Larry and Rosemary. A fun read that brightened the day
February 22nd, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Poor Harry \'twas not merry because of hairy Mary. Hairy wished to tarry Mary was contrary kicked him in the berry which he was unable to parry. All I want to know is what happened to Larry and Rosemary. A fun read that brightened the day
February 22nd, 2025 04:55
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
David Wakeling said:
Great fun.Brightened my day
February 22nd, 2025 04:51
David Wakeling said:
Great fun.Brightened my day
February 22nd, 2025 04:51
I Can`t Hide It
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani, that anger can be destructive so it is better to keep it hidden.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani, that anger can be destructive so it is better to keep it hidden.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 02:55
The Same Picture Frame
faie said:
A very good poem that identifies routine and aging.
February 21st, 2025 21:19
faie said:
A very good poem that identifies routine and aging.
February 21st, 2025 21:19
I Can`t Hide It
Salvia.S said:
This makes the readers curious until they read the last line. Powerful and well written!
February 21st, 2025 20:58
Salvia.S said:
This makes the readers curious until they read the last line. Powerful and well written!
February 21st, 2025 20:58
I Can`t Hide It
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The question for me is, why hide it? Of course, there are reasons for doing so, but i have only ever found that hiding my anger makes me even more angry. All the same, brilliant expression my friend. Thought-provoking and worth a fave! 🌹👏
February 21st, 2025 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The question for me is, why hide it? Of course, there are reasons for doing so, but i have only ever found that hiding my anger makes me even more angry. All the same, brilliant expression my friend. Thought-provoking and worth a fave! 🌹👏
February 21st, 2025 11:13
I Can`t Hide It
2781 said:
Looks like you can\'t judge a book by its cover.
February 21st, 2025 09:08
2781 said:
Looks like you can\'t judge a book by its cover.
February 21st, 2025 09:08
I Can`t Hide It
Cassie58 said:
All revealed in the final line. Anger is not a pleasant emotion to deal with it. Most people experience it at differing levels. Some can hide it, others not do. I like the way you led us down the garden path to find the solution. Have a good day Tobani.
February 21st, 2025 07:30
Cassie58 said:
All revealed in the final line. Anger is not a pleasant emotion to deal with it. Most people experience it at differing levels. Some can hide it, others not do. I like the way you led us down the garden path to find the solution. Have a good day Tobani.
February 21st, 2025 07:30
I Can`t Hide It
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that when anger is purified it leads to clarity.
You kept me guessing what \"it\" is until the last line! Great write.
February 21st, 2025 07:26
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that when anger is purified it leads to clarity.
You kept me guessing what \"it\" is until the last line! Great write.
February 21st, 2025 07:26
I Can`t Hide It
David Wakeling said:
Anger is a cross to bare.Powerful poem
February 21st, 2025 06:14
David Wakeling said:
Anger is a cross to bare.Powerful poem
February 21st, 2025 06:14
I Can`t Hide It
arqios said:
Don’t we all have it hardwired. When as a child it used to startle me when my hackles would rise quite suddenly 🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 05:39
arqios said:
Don’t we all have it hardwired. When as a child it used to startle me when my hackles would rise quite suddenly 🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 05:39
I Can`t Hide It
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way you have left the reveal until the very end it provokes that strong human drive of curiosity and pulls the reader through the poem. Very nicely done.
February 21st, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way you have left the reveal until the very end it provokes that strong human drive of curiosity and pulls the reader through the poem. Very nicely done.
February 21st, 2025 05:01
The Same Picture Frame
Goldfinch60 said:
Each morning we awake takes us into a new good day as we are still here Tobani.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Each morning we awake takes us into a new good day as we are still here Tobani.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:14
To Be My Fathers Son
Neville said:
We none of us know what exactly shaped our neighbour until we hear it from them or read it in a newspaper .. What an excellent piece of literature encompassing a life and perfectly poemed, my good man .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 09:34
Neville said:
We none of us know what exactly shaped our neighbour until we hear it from them or read it in a newspaper .. What an excellent piece of literature encompassing a life and perfectly poemed, my good man .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 09:34
The Same Picture Frame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Tobani! Thought-provoking, that makes me think of the old Heraclitus adage, \"You cannot step into the same river twice\". Change is always a reality...the only constant in a world of utter chaos. Wonderfully expressed. 🌹👏
February 20th, 2025 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Tobani! Thought-provoking, that makes me think of the old Heraclitus adage, \"You cannot step into the same river twice\". Change is always a reality...the only constant in a world of utter chaos. Wonderfully expressed. 🌹👏
February 20th, 2025 08:43
The Same Picture Frame
Cassie58 said:
A lovely write Tobani. Has such an air of calm and peace about it. Dawn is a beautiful time of the day. My favourite quiet time. Have a beautiful Thursday.
February 20th, 2025 07:04
Cassie58 said:
A lovely write Tobani. Has such an air of calm and peace about it. Dawn is a beautiful time of the day. My favourite quiet time. Have a beautiful Thursday.
February 20th, 2025 07:04
The Same Picture Frame
teardrop said:
I gotta say, this is so far one of my favorites of yours I have read so far. Love the imagery, the rhymes and the story it tells. Great write.
February 20th, 2025 06:17
teardrop said:
I gotta say, this is so far one of my favorites of yours I have read so far. Love the imagery, the rhymes and the story it tells. Great write.
February 20th, 2025 06:17
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