Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Hello or Goodbye.
sorenbarrett said:
Most clever Tobani weaving old cliches into a new poetic fabric and in rhyme no less quite a task. Well admired and a fave
July 3rd, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
Most clever Tobani weaving old cliches into a new poetic fabric and in rhyme no less quite a task. Well admired and a fave
July 3rd, 2025 05:17
Hello or Goodbye.
David Wakeling said:
This is quite clever.It offers opposites and a choice we all have to make. That\'s free will for you.Enjoyable read
July 3rd, 2025 04:24
David Wakeling said:
This is quite clever.It offers opposites and a choice we all have to make. That\'s free will for you.Enjoyable read
July 3rd, 2025 04:24
Born In A Dream.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, they are new angels in our lives.
Andy
July 3rd, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, they are new angels in our lives.
Andy
July 3rd, 2025 01:48
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How did I miss this? Great Senryu, my friend! 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 14:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How did I miss this? Great Senryu, my friend! 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 14:12
Born In A Dream.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Nataiella. Beautiful both in form and in message. Wonderfully done!🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 11:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Nataiella. Beautiful both in form and in message. Wonderfully done!🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 11:29
Born In A Dream.
arqios said:
This poem evokes both the warmth of immediate connection and the enduring responsibility to guide, care, and inspire, highlighting the transformative nature of love as it blooms and strengthens with time.
July 2nd, 2025 09:33
arqios said:
This poem evokes both the warmth of immediate connection and the enduring responsibility to guide, care, and inspire, highlighting the transformative nature of love as it blooms and strengthens with time.
July 2nd, 2025 09:33
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A tender ode to growth, where love’s soil fosters miracles. Your poem is sunlight on the seeds of hope, Tobani.
July 2nd, 2025 04:40
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A tender ode to growth, where love’s soil fosters miracles. Your poem is sunlight on the seeds of hope, Tobani.
July 2nd, 2025 04:40
Born In A Dream.
David Wakeling said:
For me this iabout a new born baby. Impossible not to cherish them.A beautiful poem
July 2nd, 2025 04:35
David Wakeling said:
For me this iabout a new born baby. Impossible not to cherish them.A beautiful poem
July 2nd, 2025 04:35
Born In A Dream.
sorenbarrett said:
Couldn\'t agree more with each of my four I rejoiced and still rejoice. A lovely poem that should strike the heart of any parent. Most lovely
July 2nd, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Couldn\'t agree more with each of my four I rejoiced and still rejoice. A lovely poem that should strike the heart of any parent. Most lovely
July 2nd, 2025 04:12
Born In A Dream.
Teddy.15 said:
I truly can feel this unconditional love. I hope you make them aware too. 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 03:12
Teddy.15 said:
I truly can feel this unconditional love. I hope you make them aware too. 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 03:12
Born In A Dream.
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. very important to feel ‘ loved
July 2nd, 2025 02:50
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. very important to feel ‘ loved
July 2nd, 2025 02:50
Children Had Fun.
Teddy.15 said:
LoL a fun day trip, reminds me of those I had with my own family. 🌹 Wonderful imagery also scary at times, seagull swoop mainly...🤣
July 2nd, 2025 01:48
Teddy.15 said:
LoL a fun day trip, reminds me of those I had with my own family. 🌹 Wonderful imagery also scary at times, seagull swoop mainly...🤣
July 2nd, 2025 01:48
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh what a gorgeous metaphor! How excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 1st, 2025 15:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh what a gorgeous metaphor! How excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 1st, 2025 15:36
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
MendedFences27 said:
To nurture is to love. What a great sentiment. We can succeed at parenting or even gardening if we follow your advice. A few words, much wisdom. Loved it.
July 1st, 2025 14:06
MendedFences27 said:
To nurture is to love. What a great sentiment. We can succeed at parenting or even gardening if we follow your advice. A few words, much wisdom. Loved it.
July 1st, 2025 14:06
Jolly Fun!!!
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I was about to laugh, but on second read I had to lose it. The poem reminded me of a book I read around 30 years back - Time of Desecration by Alberto Moravia. Mary\'s character is eerily reminiscent of one of tbe prominent characters in the book. An overweight girl who couldn\'t control her urge of eating due to depression.
A thought provoking poem in a deceptively simple language - to me it\'s high poetey.
July 1st, 2025 10:18
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I was about to laugh, but on second read I had to lose it. The poem reminded me of a book I read around 30 years back - Time of Desecration by Alberto Moravia. Mary\'s character is eerily reminiscent of one of tbe prominent characters in the book. An overweight girl who couldn\'t control her urge of eating due to depression.
A thought provoking poem in a deceptively simple language - to me it\'s high poetey.
July 1st, 2025 10:18
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
Damaso said:
That beautiful image and how much wisdom your message. Nature usually cures me at times just looking. She knows what I need and what makes me wrong. Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings
July 1st, 2025 09:47
Damaso said:
That beautiful image and how much wisdom your message. Nature usually cures me at times just looking. She knows what I need and what makes me wrong. Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings
July 1st, 2025 09:47
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic advice is a pill much easier to swallow. Nicely written Tobani
July 1st, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic advice is a pill much easier to swallow. Nicely written Tobani
July 1st, 2025 05:13
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
David Wakeling said:
Some good advice here. It reminds me to fertile the garden.Great work
July 1st, 2025 04:17
David Wakeling said:
Some good advice here. It reminds me to fertile the garden.Great work
July 1st, 2025 04:17
Freedom of Expression.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, why cannot people be told and be told the truth.
Andy
July 1st, 2025 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, why cannot people be told and be told the truth.
Andy
July 1st, 2025 02:26
Freedom of Expression.
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Freedom is the Freedom to say that Two Plus Two make Four\'. 1984.
Good Write.
June 30th, 2025 18:36
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Freedom is the Freedom to say that Two Plus Two make Four\'. 1984.
Good Write.
June 30th, 2025 18:36
Marriage Advice For Men (Chuckles Week Part 1).
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you so, so very much for this since concluded week of hilarious posts rendering reality with a capable humour that turned the mundane into a thing of near joy. This intro likewise is delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you again for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 15:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you so, so very much for this since concluded week of hilarious posts rendering reality with a capable humour that turned the mundane into a thing of near joy. This intro likewise is delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you again for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 15:54
Best Friend Harry
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, this is downright sweet. You\'ve indeed saintified the dear old chap with a tasteful bit of humor woven throughout. Beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 15:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, this is downright sweet. You\'ve indeed saintified the dear old chap with a tasteful bit of humor woven throughout. Beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 15:18
Mary\'s Fun Life.
Cheeky Missy said:
This is unfair. You\'re way, way, way too funny and hilarious with ordinary reality until I\'ll never be able to stop laughing. Awesome! Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 15:15
Cheeky Missy said:
This is unfair. You\'re way, way, way too funny and hilarious with ordinary reality until I\'ll never be able to stop laughing. Awesome! Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 15:15
Fun With Jack.
Cheeky Missy said:
This is too funny! My brother and kittens all wondered why on earth I began laughing too much and too loudly just now. I declare! Start to finish, oh! But you\'re a regular riot. I love it!!! Superbly rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a waltzing poignancy. Thank you so very, very much for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 15:12
Cheeky Missy said:
This is too funny! My brother and kittens all wondered why on earth I began laughing too much and too loudly just now. I declare! Start to finish, oh! But you\'re a regular riot. I love it!!! Superbly rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a waltzing poignancy. Thank you so very, very much for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 15:12
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