Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
My Bed For The Night
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Standing alone sans the author\'s note this is a very pretty number, the additional information raising it to heights far beyond. How charmingly rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and seeming so chock full it is like a meal which would have satisfied the unfortunate soul if only words could pull that off. Hauntingly poignant on its own, your note raises it to near painfulness. Thank you so very much for sharing!
February 10th, 2025 14:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Standing alone sans the author\'s note this is a very pretty number, the additional information raising it to heights far beyond. How charmingly rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and seeming so chock full it is like a meal which would have satisfied the unfortunate soul if only words could pull that off. Hauntingly poignant on its own, your note raises it to near painfulness. Thank you so very much for sharing!
February 10th, 2025 14:19
Marys Pussy Cat
Cassie58 said:
This seems to come to a happy conclusion. If neglected, cuddle up to your pets. They have more than enough love to share. Enjoyed the fun Tobani. My dog Solo is sitting next to me as I type:)
February 10th, 2025 13:00
Cassie58 said:
This seems to come to a happy conclusion. If neglected, cuddle up to your pets. They have more than enough love to share. Enjoyed the fun Tobani. My dog Solo is sitting next to me as I type:)
February 10th, 2025 13:00
My Bed For The Night
Cassie58 said:
The homeless. We should be ashamed at the number of people sleeping on the streets. I don’t care what the reason is, it is inhumane that anyone should be out in the freezing cold weather, or any other time of year. If illegal immigrants are housed in hotels, then the homeless veterans and others deserve the very same. Your poem Tobani, so well written, touches a nerve and makes me angry.
February 10th, 2025 12:55
Cassie58 said:
The homeless. We should be ashamed at the number of people sleeping on the streets. I don’t care what the reason is, it is inhumane that anyone should be out in the freezing cold weather, or any other time of year. If illegal immigrants are housed in hotels, then the homeless veterans and others deserve the very same. Your poem Tobani, so well written, touches a nerve and makes me angry.
February 10th, 2025 12:55
My Bed For The Night
Simurgh said:
Wonderful poem, Tobani! Written with lots of emotion and with a heart for the homeless and road side people, great work!
Much appreciated.
I found it not only beautiful but a reality spoken with beautiful words because I am myself a social worker in my city Kolkata, India and I regularly donate people on the roads asking for assistance just to live their lives.
I have also donated 300 Indian Rupees to the famous NGO of our country
Helpage providing home to the homeless, older people on roads, free treatment for people having cancer and other dreadful diseases, orphans, poor children with a intelligent brain and so on.... providing them the life of dignity and respect.
This poem holds good for our country as you know there are lots of people below the poverty line!
We are still much behind in taking out people from the poverty line, a very sad truth...
Anyways thanks again, I loved this poem a lot!! ❤️
Thank you 😊.
With regards
Simurgh
A poetic bard from India
February 10th, 2025 09:26
Simurgh said:
Wonderful poem, Tobani! Written with lots of emotion and with a heart for the homeless and road side people, great work!
Much appreciated.
I found it not only beautiful but a reality spoken with beautiful words because I am myself a social worker in my city Kolkata, India and I regularly donate people on the roads asking for assistance just to live their lives.
I have also donated 300 Indian Rupees to the famous NGO of our country
Helpage providing home to the homeless, older people on roads, free treatment for people having cancer and other dreadful diseases, orphans, poor children with a intelligent brain and so on.... providing them the life of dignity and respect.
This poem holds good for our country as you know there are lots of people below the poverty line!
We are still much behind in taking out people from the poverty line, a very sad truth...
Anyways thanks again, I loved this poem a lot!! ❤️
Thank you 😊.
With regards
Simurgh
A poetic bard from India
February 10th, 2025 09:26
My Bed For The Night
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. I love the empathy. Life is hell on the streets.
February 10th, 2025 09:26
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. I love the empathy. Life is hell on the streets.
February 10th, 2025 09:26
My Bed For The Night
arqios said:
And right there is where it’s at. Had to sleep on the street one cold night, the coldness of being alone and invisible could have been worse than the physical weather that sent chills all through the heat of sunrise. Good stuff here.🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:35
arqios said:
And right there is where it’s at. Had to sleep on the street one cold night, the coldness of being alone and invisible could have been worse than the physical weather that sent chills all through the heat of sunrise. Good stuff here.🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:35
My Bed For The Night
Neville said:
there is a lot more of this about than many might imagine & sadly even local councils don\'t know or don\'t wish to know the true extent of the problem .. I still regularly do a homeless count for the local shelter often coinciding with the local authorities head count on particularly cold nights .. and on average, I find and count ten times more street homeless than them .. it makes my blood bloomin boil .. Needless to say, I am glad you touched on this raw nerve PL ..
Neville 👍
February 10th, 2025 07:18
Neville said:
there is a lot more of this about than many might imagine & sadly even local councils don\'t know or don\'t wish to know the true extent of the problem .. I still regularly do a homeless count for the local shelter often coinciding with the local authorities head count on particularly cold nights .. and on average, I find and count ten times more street homeless than them .. it makes my blood bloomin boil .. Needless to say, I am glad you touched on this raw nerve PL ..
Neville 👍
February 10th, 2025 07:18
Marys Pussy Cat
Neville said:
Poor old Jack .. very lucky pussy cat .. 🐈⬛
February 10th, 2025 07:11
Neville said:
Poor old Jack .. very lucky pussy cat .. 🐈⬛
February 10th, 2025 07:11
My Bed For The Night
Distant View said:
A highly poignant social commentary type of poem! It beggars belief that here in England we have more homeless than ever before! The latest available figures (for 2023-2024) show that more than 320,000 HOUSEHOLDS in England alone faced homelessness! Most households will have more than one person, of course! Also, these figures do not include the number of people who are already homeless! So sad!
February 10th, 2025 06:17
Distant View said:
A highly poignant social commentary type of poem! It beggars belief that here in England we have more homeless than ever before! The latest available figures (for 2023-2024) show that more than 320,000 HOUSEHOLDS in England alone faced homelessness! Most households will have more than one person, of course! Also, these figures do not include the number of people who are already homeless! So sad!
February 10th, 2025 06:17
My Bed For The Night
sorenbarrett said:
A poem from the heart written in the first person. The plight of the homeless is a sad thing in a modern world of plenty. Sad souls with mental disorders or just bad luck they roam the streets like dogs searching for food and a place to lay their heads. In metaphor many if not all of us are such roaming an emotional and psychological world in search of a home we are all the homeless.
February 10th, 2025 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem from the heart written in the first person. The plight of the homeless is a sad thing in a modern world of plenty. Sad souls with mental disorders or just bad luck they roam the streets like dogs searching for food and a place to lay their heads. In metaphor many if not all of us are such roaming an emotional and psychological world in search of a home we are all the homeless.
February 10th, 2025 05:48
My Bed For The Night
teardrop said:
Wow! Writen with such emotion. Glad I read you comments. Beautiful write! I know a few homeless people. Wish I could help them all but it\'s a struggle enough trying to help myself. Great write, my friend!
February 10th, 2025 03:35
teardrop said:
Wow! Writen with such emotion. Glad I read you comments. Beautiful write! I know a few homeless people. Wish I could help them all but it\'s a struggle enough trying to help myself. Great write, my friend!
February 10th, 2025 03:35
Which Did You Choose
Cheeky Missy said:
I must, perforce, behold and hear the evil, yet prefer to see beyond to the beauty barely in sight and less readily heard. Fascinating and sweetly rendered in charming brevity with a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
February 9th, 2025 09:47
Cheeky Missy said:
I must, perforce, behold and hear the evil, yet prefer to see beyond to the beauty barely in sight and less readily heard. Fascinating and sweetly rendered in charming brevity with a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
February 9th, 2025 09:47
Voice of darkness
teardrop said:
Love this piece. Writing from the heart are the best reads as well as can be such a release for the writer. Most my poems are wtitten in the same manner. I truly enjoyed reading this and look forward tp reading more of your words.
February 9th, 2025 05:25
teardrop said:
Love this piece. Writing from the heart are the best reads as well as can be such a release for the writer. Most my poems are wtitten in the same manner. I truly enjoyed reading this and look forward tp reading more of your words.
February 9th, 2025 05:25
Marys Pussy Cat
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tobani, pets bring such comfort to many.
Andy
February 9th, 2025 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tobani, pets bring such comfort to many.
Andy
February 9th, 2025 02:23
Sun is Breaking Through
Simurgh said:
Tobani, your poems are always beautiful! Continue writing and reading more poems in the coming days here in MPS.....
How many of you are Robert Downey Jr ( RDJ) fans here?🤩😍
He is great! Ain\'t it? Send your opinions here.
I loved how he acted in the Marvel Universe\'s Ironman, The Sherlock Holmes----2009 and The Game of Shadows in 2011!
RDJ playing in the boxing match as Sherlock Holmes and chasing Irene Adler in disguise to learn her motive was the most interesting scenes of the movie.....🆒💖😎😎
I loved how Rachel McAdams acted in the role of Irene Adler in this movie, falling in love with her acting skills once more!
She stunned everybody with her acting as Irene Adler and beautiful Victorian red bustle costume she wore in this movie... In my opinion she is the best Irene Adler ever!👗💌❤️❤️
Kindly, share your comments on this.
What do you think about the great actors, Antonio Banderas ( Spanish ) and Guy Williams ( who appeared as Don Diego de la Vega or his alter ego infamous Walt Disney\'s Zorro) ??💌💌
Let me know about your opinions, guys....
Anyways great write, Tobani! Hope to read more of your poems in the coming days...
With regards,
Your poetic friend,
Simurgh
India
February 9th, 2025 00:23
Simurgh said:
Tobani, your poems are always beautiful! Continue writing and reading more poems in the coming days here in MPS.....
How many of you are Robert Downey Jr ( RDJ) fans here?🤩😍
He is great! Ain\'t it? Send your opinions here.
I loved how he acted in the Marvel Universe\'s Ironman, The Sherlock Holmes----2009 and The Game of Shadows in 2011!
RDJ playing in the boxing match as Sherlock Holmes and chasing Irene Adler in disguise to learn her motive was the most interesting scenes of the movie.....🆒💖😎😎
I loved how Rachel McAdams acted in the role of Irene Adler in this movie, falling in love with her acting skills once more!
She stunned everybody with her acting as Irene Adler and beautiful Victorian red bustle costume she wore in this movie... In my opinion she is the best Irene Adler ever!👗💌❤️❤️
Kindly, share your comments on this.
What do you think about the great actors, Antonio Banderas ( Spanish ) and Guy Williams ( who appeared as Don Diego de la Vega or his alter ego infamous Walt Disney\'s Zorro) ??💌💌
Let me know about your opinions, guys....
Anyways great write, Tobani! Hope to read more of your poems in the coming days...
With regards,
Your poetic friend,
Simurgh
India
February 9th, 2025 00:23
Sun is Breaking Through
Simurgh said:
Beautifully constructed work of a poem!
I enjoyed reading it significantly.
Brilliant work that needs more appreciation! 🤩🌹🌹🌹
A great tribute to love which can change the meaning of life in an instant! ❤️❤️💓💓
Hope to see more comments on your beautiful poem, Tobani... Wishing you a good day, ahead!😊
With love,
Simurgh
Your poetic friend!
February 8th, 2025 23:57
Simurgh said:
Beautifully constructed work of a poem!
I enjoyed reading it significantly.
Brilliant work that needs more appreciation! 🤩🌹🌹🌹
A great tribute to love which can change the meaning of life in an instant! ❤️❤️💓💓
Hope to see more comments on your beautiful poem, Tobani... Wishing you a good day, ahead!😊
With love,
Simurgh
Your poetic friend!
February 8th, 2025 23:57
Marys Pussy Cat
David Wakeling said:
You have to go with those who love you.Interesting story well written. Enjoyed
February 8th, 2025 15:43
David Wakeling said:
You have to go with those who love you.Interesting story well written. Enjoyed
February 8th, 2025 15:43
Wise Man Speak
Simurgh said:
Wonderful poem Tobani, with lots of reflection filled with wisdom and sincerity!
I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for writing such a nice poem!😊🌹🌹
February 8th, 2025 15:18
Simurgh said:
Wonderful poem Tobani, with lots of reflection filled with wisdom and sincerity!
I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for writing such a nice poem!😊🌹🌹
February 8th, 2025 15:18
Voice of darkness
Cheeky Missy said:
Like beloved Shakespeare himself, how winsomely rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy which charms readers. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 8th, 2025 11:08
Cheeky Missy said:
Like beloved Shakespeare himself, how winsomely rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy which charms readers. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 8th, 2025 11:08
Wise Man Speak
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you so very much for this charming bit of wisdom rendered with enough humor to soften the more serious reality tastefully offered. I love it.
February 8th, 2025 11:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you so very much for this charming bit of wisdom rendered with enough humor to soften the more serious reality tastefully offered. I love it.
February 8th, 2025 11:05
Marys Pussy Cat
arqios said:
A sequel to the other Mary and Jack poem? Or just in that same universe? They have their flavour of humour 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 08:40
arqios said:
A sequel to the other Mary and Jack poem? Or just in that same universe? They have their flavour of humour 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 08:40
Marys Pussy Cat
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and furry but if taken the wrong way could be an over 18 rating. A most fun read
February 8th, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and furry but if taken the wrong way could be an over 18 rating. A most fun read
February 8th, 2025 08:00
Darling I Bought You A Hoover
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Tobani
Nice And Witty
February 8th, 2025 05:27
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Tobani
Nice And Witty
February 8th, 2025 05:27
Wise Man Speak
David Wakeling said:
Always enjoyable to learn some wisdom in your poems.Well done mi amigo
February 7th, 2025 15:50
David Wakeling said:
Always enjoyable to learn some wisdom in your poems.Well done mi amigo
February 7th, 2025 15:50
Wise Man Speak
arqios said:
Oh, let the week simmer and it’s wisdom filters! Wise move of wise men. 🙏🏻🕊
February 7th, 2025 06:12
arqios said:
Oh, let the week simmer and it’s wisdom filters! Wise move of wise men. 🙏🏻🕊
February 7th, 2025 06:12
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