Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Silent Opinions
ginny jayne said:
So true are your words, I loved reading it ☺️
February 4th, 2025 18:30
ginny jayne said:
So true are your words, I loved reading it ☺️
February 4th, 2025 18:30
Silent Opinions
rawaneigh.99 said:
I really love the energy and message in this! It’s like a call to action, reminding people to embrace their opinions and share them, even when it\'s challenging. The emphasis on the power of expressing ourselves and not staying silent rings true. It highlights the importance of participation and how it shapes the world around us. The line about “speaking the truth” really stands out—sometimes we hold back out of fear, but when we do speak up, even if it\'s just for our own peace of mind, we’re still making an impact.
February 4th, 2025 17:43
rawaneigh.99 said:
I really love the energy and message in this! It’s like a call to action, reminding people to embrace their opinions and share them, even when it\'s challenging. The emphasis on the power of expressing ourselves and not staying silent rings true. It highlights the importance of participation and how it shapes the world around us. The line about “speaking the truth” really stands out—sometimes we hold back out of fear, but when we do speak up, even if it\'s just for our own peace of mind, we’re still making an impact.
February 4th, 2025 17:43
Silent Opinions
E.J. Waling said:
Wonderful work.. Many flames attest to your talent!
February 4th, 2025 16:12
E.J. Waling said:
Wonderful work.. Many flames attest to your talent!
February 4th, 2025 16:12
Silent Opinions
Cassie58 said:
No one should ever be afraid to express their own opinion out of fear of others not agreeing with them. We are all different, no two people are the same. This is a fine composition Tobani. Well done.
February 4th, 2025 07:20
Cassie58 said:
No one should ever be afraid to express their own opinion out of fear of others not agreeing with them. We are all different, no two people are the same. This is a fine composition Tobani. Well done.
February 4th, 2025 07:20
Silent Opinions
sorenbarrett said:
In thought this poem is meta in that it voices its own opinion within a poem about that very subject. Very nicely stated and expressed in great meter
February 4th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
In thought this poem is meta in that it voices its own opinion within a poem about that very subject. Very nicely stated and expressed in great meter
February 4th, 2025 04:54
Silent Opinions
arqios said:
Beautiful poem… I’ve been tinkering with one on the same topic/theme… but it isn’t ready yet. To have an opinion without being opinionated is quite a challenge at times. Thanks for sharing 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 4th, 2025 02:16
arqios said:
Beautiful poem… I’ve been tinkering with one on the same topic/theme… but it isn’t ready yet. To have an opinion without being opinionated is quite a challenge at times. Thanks for sharing 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 4th, 2025 02:16
The Trap
Neville said:
We are all precisely where we are today because of the choices we made that are both good and bad .. and regardless of the outcomes of them .. Much enjoyed Neville
February 3rd, 2025 16:16
Neville said:
We are all precisely where we are today because of the choices we made that are both good and bad .. and regardless of the outcomes of them .. Much enjoyed Neville
February 3rd, 2025 16:16
The Trap
Bloomingdale said:
Death is freedom to some…I love this one nataiella
February 3rd, 2025 12:52
Bloomingdale said:
Death is freedom to some…I love this one nataiella
February 3rd, 2025 12:52
The Trap
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a dramatic life style that comes to a horrible end. He who lives by the sword dies by the sword. Well written
February 3rd, 2025 05:53
David Wakeling said:
Sounds like a dramatic life style that comes to a horrible end. He who lives by the sword dies by the sword. Well written
February 3rd, 2025 05:53
The Trap
sorenbarrett said:
Choices we make take us to where we are today and this may not be where we wanted to be. Bad choices bad results. Great write well written with good rhyme
February 3rd, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Choices we make take us to where we are today and this may not be where we wanted to be. Bad choices bad results. Great write well written with good rhyme
February 3rd, 2025 04:14
The Trap
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your feedback, it was quite rare back then, but today i should think it is very common.
February 3rd, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your feedback, it was quite rare back then, but today i should think it is very common.
February 3rd, 2025 03:19
The Trap
arqios said:
So sad so sorry. We all probably have someone we know that got swallowed up whole by The Trap! Very meaningful if somewhat painful as well. Superb read 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 3rd, 2025 03:10
arqios said:
So sad so sorry. We all probably have someone we know that got swallowed up whole by The Trap! Very meaningful if somewhat painful as well. Superb read 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 3rd, 2025 03:10
Real Fake Beauty
Salvia.S said:
A poignant and thought provoking poem. Well written!
February 1st, 2025 23:46
Salvia.S said:
A poignant and thought provoking poem. Well written!
February 1st, 2025 23:46
Real Fake Beauty
Cheeky Missy said:
You half wonder when she\'ll finally comprehend that the exterior trimmings don\'t truly add the beauty she imagined. Then again, there\'s the Kardashians who admit they wear cosmetics to hide themselves, as my close friend does likewise, where, crazily enough, I literally cannot tolerate my face if it\'s hidden by cosmetics. You could ask my friend if you wondered, since she had no sooner complimented me to high heaven over the \"French girl\" style of making up the face (which my late mother had carefully trained me to do), but I shortly washed my face clean, unable to tolerate my face thus \"hidden,\" or as I termed it, no longer my own face. You also remind me of a discussion on this topic years ago with one of my brothers who was disappointed when I listed off the multitudinous means my sex uses to \"enhance\" itself, or rather, attempt to deceive the opposite. Enough of that, however. Beautifully rendered with awesome imagery and a tastefully haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 31st, 2025 17:34
Cheeky Missy said:
You half wonder when she\'ll finally comprehend that the exterior trimmings don\'t truly add the beauty she imagined. Then again, there\'s the Kardashians who admit they wear cosmetics to hide themselves, as my close friend does likewise, where, crazily enough, I literally cannot tolerate my face if it\'s hidden by cosmetics. You could ask my friend if you wondered, since she had no sooner complimented me to high heaven over the \"French girl\" style of making up the face (which my late mother had carefully trained me to do), but I shortly washed my face clean, unable to tolerate my face thus \"hidden,\" or as I termed it, no longer my own face. You also remind me of a discussion on this topic years ago with one of my brothers who was disappointed when I listed off the multitudinous means my sex uses to \"enhance\" itself, or rather, attempt to deceive the opposite. Enough of that, however. Beautifully rendered with awesome imagery and a tastefully haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 31st, 2025 17:34
Real Fake Beauty
Skally said:
Beautiful poem. Than you for sharing ! Well done :)
January 31st, 2025 16:58
Skally said:
Beautiful poem. Than you for sharing ! Well done :)
January 31st, 2025 16:58
Real Fake Beauty
Neville said:
I have been contemplating this very same phenomenon for quite some time.. you have done good and far better than the draft scribble I have now consigned to the wast bin … Neville
January 30th, 2025 16:52
Neville said:
I have been contemplating this very same phenomenon for quite some time.. you have done good and far better than the draft scribble I have now consigned to the wast bin … Neville
January 30th, 2025 16:52
Real Fake Beauty
Neville said:
I have been contemplating this very same phenomenon for quite some time.. you have done good and far better than the draft scribble I have now consigned to the wast bin … Neville
January 30th, 2025 16:52
Neville said:
I have been contemplating this very same phenomenon for quite some time.. you have done good and far better than the draft scribble I have now consigned to the wast bin … Neville
January 30th, 2025 16:52
Real Fake Beauty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem. Society paints an image for everyone to aspire to live up to and, then, tragically so many buy into it and spend their lives trying to live up to an unrealistic image. Years of anxiety, eating disorders, expensive procedures, hours of makeup prep...and for what? Oh, and we men fall into it too, just differently. This poem\'s message is so important and you are right, true beauty comes from within. Well done. 🌹👏
January 30th, 2025 08:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem. Society paints an image for everyone to aspire to live up to and, then, tragically so many buy into it and spend their lives trying to live up to an unrealistic image. Years of anxiety, eating disorders, expensive procedures, hours of makeup prep...and for what? Oh, and we men fall into it too, just differently. This poem\'s message is so important and you are right, true beauty comes from within. Well done. 🌹👏
January 30th, 2025 08:46
Real Fake Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful and powerful message set in great metaphor all too real. I too have asked why what we are is never good enough. Why do we want to be someone else? Is it possible that someone else wants to be us? Poor self esteem runs rampant.
January 30th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful and powerful message set in great metaphor all too real. I too have asked why what we are is never good enough. Why do we want to be someone else? Is it possible that someone else wants to be us? Poor self esteem runs rampant.
January 30th, 2025 04:41
The Devils Smile
Tom Dylan said:
Such a powerful piece. Thanks for sharing. A fine write.
January 30th, 2025 03:50
Tom Dylan said:
Such a powerful piece. Thanks for sharing. A fine write.
January 30th, 2025 03:50
Real Fake Beauty
arqios said:
Yup, seen her often enough… and at all ages as well. Good message too! 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 30th, 2025 03:48
arqios said:
Yup, seen her often enough… and at all ages as well. Good message too! 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 30th, 2025 03:48
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