Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Natures S.O.S.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads like one of the judgments being poured out in Revelation. Most people miss it, but that book is highly ecological—God’s grief and anger are deeply tied to the way humanity has ravaged the earth. That’s part of why there’s a new creation in Revelation 21.Your poem is totally in that spirit. I highly approve. This is a very, very important ecological, and I would even say spiritual, work. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 2nd, 2025 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads like one of the judgments being poured out in Revelation. Most people miss it, but that book is highly ecological—God’s grief and anger are deeply tied to the way humanity has ravaged the earth. That’s part of why there’s a new creation in Revelation 21.Your poem is totally in that spirit. I highly approve. This is a very, very important ecological, and I would even say spiritual, work. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
June 2nd, 2025 07:29
Natures S.O.S.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful point made Tobani it is hard not to stomp out flowers in the path of a riot. The balance of nature is overturned when the population of a species outgrows its controls. Answer that no one wants to see is (Too many people) a fave for the message my friend
June 2nd, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful point made Tobani it is hard not to stomp out flowers in the path of a riot. The balance of nature is overturned when the population of a species outgrows its controls. Answer that no one wants to see is (Too many people) a fave for the message my friend
June 2nd, 2025 04:31
Natures S.O.S.
David Wakeling said:
This is an important poem with an important message.The amount of destruction is alarming especial of the extinction of species.Sad but true.
June 2nd, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
This is an important poem with an important message.The amount of destruction is alarming especial of the extinction of species.Sad but true.
June 2nd, 2025 04:14
Natures S.O.S.
arqios said:
When we listen and heed nature we survive in harmony together 🕊️🙏🏻
June 2nd, 2025 03:07
arqios said:
When we listen and heed nature we survive in harmony together 🕊️🙏🏻
June 2nd, 2025 03:07
Wise Man Say (14)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wise man says
when you look in a mirror
you see the reverse of yourself.
Andy
June 2nd, 2025 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wise man says
when you look in a mirror
you see the reverse of yourself.
Andy
June 2nd, 2025 02:11
Jolly Fun!!!
RSM0812 said:
Lol I\'m not sure if I feel soor for Mary or I want to tell her to quit eating so much food.
June 1st, 2025 23:33
RSM0812 said:
Lol I\'m not sure if I feel soor for Mary or I want to tell her to quit eating so much food.
June 1st, 2025 23:33
In My Heart I Cry.
Cirawrites01 said:
This is so true, I almost cried reading cause I relate hard, it\'s a different kind of pain when you don\'t have tears but your heart is aching, and the mask you have to wear because the moment you let it down, people are gonna keep away,, it\'s like being the most funniest person in the group and once you lay the smile to rest the face, they ask \"Are you okay? You look sad, everything fine?\" I mean, I was just resting my face, but deep down I was broken and I just couldn\'t smile that day because I was deep in my pain to put the mask up...
June 1st, 2025 22:45
Cirawrites01 said:
This is so true, I almost cried reading cause I relate hard, it\'s a different kind of pain when you don\'t have tears but your heart is aching, and the mask you have to wear because the moment you let it down, people are gonna keep away,, it\'s like being the most funniest person in the group and once you lay the smile to rest the face, they ask \"Are you okay? You look sad, everything fine?\" I mean, I was just resting my face, but deep down I was broken and I just couldn\'t smile that day because I was deep in my pain to put the mask up...
June 1st, 2025 22:45
Broken Dreams.
Cirawrites01 said:
It really hurts when your dreams break apart and all the things you hold deep in, you can\'t even express it cause it\'d hurt everyone around you, I really love this short verse and I relate a lot to it
June 1st, 2025 22:41
Cirawrites01 said:
It really hurts when your dreams break apart and all the things you hold deep in, you can\'t even express it cause it\'d hurt everyone around you, I really love this short verse and I relate a lot to it
June 1st, 2025 22:41
Wise Man Say (14)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
But by then, there might be 40 more 😂 ...and I, for one, would welcome that! Well done, my friend. These delivered! 🌹👏
June 1st, 2025 16:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
But by then, there might be 40 more 😂 ...and I, for one, would welcome that! Well done, my friend. These delivered! 🌹👏
June 1st, 2025 16:35
Jolly Fun!!!
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious. So this is Harry\'s princess, eh?! La dee. Poor girl. I hope he and she manage to live happily ever after despite these minor incidents. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 11:09
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious. So this is Harry\'s princess, eh?! La dee. Poor girl. I hope he and she manage to live happily ever after despite these minor incidents. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 11:09
Wise Man Say (14)
Cheeky Missy said:
At least there ARE 40 more, and we need not fear the loss of these poignant morsels any time in the near future. So many are powerless for that very reason, the battle for the mind a very serious one few take seriously. Delightful and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 11:07
Cheeky Missy said:
At least there ARE 40 more, and we need not fear the loss of these poignant morsels any time in the near future. So many are powerless for that very reason, the battle for the mind a very serious one few take seriously. Delightful and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 11:07
Wise Man Say (14)
MendedFences27 said:
Wisdom and wry humor, what else could one want. Keep bringing it. - Phil A.
June 1st, 2025 09:25
MendedFences27 said:
Wisdom and wry humor, what else could one want. Keep bringing it. - Phil A.
June 1st, 2025 09:25
Wise Man Say (14)
sorenbarrett said:
How will I know it\'s Sunday without these? Another fun read Tobani. You had better start composing some more.
June 1st, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
How will I know it\'s Sunday without these? Another fun read Tobani. You had better start composing some more.
June 1st, 2025 04:31
Wise Man Say (14)
David Wakeling said:
I love the wisdom here.I always learn something new.Excellent
June 1st, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
I love the wisdom here.I always learn something new.Excellent
June 1st, 2025 04:14
Wise Man Say (14)
arqios said:
40, now that is a wonderful number,; bring them on🕊️🙏🏻
June 1st, 2025 02:36
arqios said:
40, now that is a wonderful number,; bring them on🕊️🙏🏻
June 1st, 2025 02:36
Jolly Fun!!!
arqios said:
Yes, now it\'s Mary\'s turn; unless of course I missed something.🙏🏻🕊️
June 1st, 2025 01:46
arqios said:
Yes, now it\'s Mary\'s turn; unless of course I missed something.🙏🏻🕊️
June 1st, 2025 01:46
Jolly Fun!!!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tobani.
Don\'t mention Greggs, we cannot walk passed the shops without going in. LOL
Andy
June 1st, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tobani.
Don\'t mention Greggs, we cannot walk passed the shops without going in. LOL
Andy
June 1st, 2025 01:24
Jolly Fun!!!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A lot of fun! Thanks for the laugh! Good to see Mary out on her own, and to know it\'s not just Harry! LOL! Wonderful job! 🌹👏
May 31st, 2025 07:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A lot of fun! Thanks for the laugh! Good to see Mary out on her own, and to know it\'s not just Harry! LOL! Wonderful job! 🌹👏
May 31st, 2025 07:26
Jolly Fun!!!
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read Tobani keep those smiles coming.
May 31st, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read Tobani keep those smiles coming.
May 31st, 2025 04:13
Jolly Fun!!!
David Wakeling said:
That Mary she is her own worst enemy. Yet another fall from grace. Fun read mi amigo
May 31st, 2025 04:04
David Wakeling said:
That Mary she is her own worst enemy. Yet another fall from grace. Fun read mi amigo
May 31st, 2025 04:04
Convert To Peace.
sorenbarrett said:
I loved not only the message of this poem but the way it was said. Everything was stated in a positive manner. The wording was in balance in all directions, stanza to stanza, line to line, meaning to inverted meaning it came across as a yin and yang so perfect and yet on the positive side a fave
May 30th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
I loved not only the message of this poem but the way it was said. Everything was stated in a positive manner. The wording was in balance in all directions, stanza to stanza, line to line, meaning to inverted meaning it came across as a yin and yang so perfect and yet on the positive side a fave
May 30th, 2025 04:24
Convert To Peace.
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful sentiment and prayer. I have always been a pacifist so this music to my ears. Well done
May 30th, 2025 04:03
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful sentiment and prayer. I have always been a pacifist so this music to my ears. Well done
May 30th, 2025 04:03
Success Of Lies.
Goldfinch60 said:
He obviously became a politician then Tobani.
Andy
May 30th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
He obviously became a politician then Tobani.
Andy
May 30th, 2025 01:18
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