Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Thank You
arqios said:
Hope this isnโt goodbye. And our community is part of our strength ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 20th, 2025 03:13
arqios said:
Hope this isnโt goodbye. And our community is part of our strength ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 20th, 2025 03:13
Just a Waste of F------ Time
maydanae said:
Wow this was hard to read because I feel for younger you. It is never pleasant to feel like that and to have people in your life put those words in your head is really sad. I hope you are doing better in recent years. You are loved
April 19th, 2025 11:40
maydanae said:
Wow this was hard to read because I feel for younger you. It is never pleasant to feel like that and to have people in your life put those words in your head is really sad. I hope you are doing better in recent years. You are loved
April 19th, 2025 11:40
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
Tony Grannell said:
What a cracking end to Harry\'s best laid plans. An Easter to remember, indeed. A joy to read and then some.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 19th, 2025 08:55
Tony Grannell said:
What a cracking end to Harry\'s best laid plans. An Easter to remember, indeed. A joy to read and then some.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 19th, 2025 08:55
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That Harry, my goodness. LOL! I love this series, my friend. ๐น๐
April 19th, 2025 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That Harry, my goodness. LOL! I love this series, my friend. ๐น๐
April 19th, 2025 08:30
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
teardrop said:
This was a very enjoyable read. The story kept my interest and kept me wanting to read more. Thank you for the smile!
April 19th, 2025 05:45
teardrop said:
This was a very enjoyable read. The story kept my interest and kept me wanting to read more. Thank you for the smile!
April 19th, 2025 05:45
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun tale.Enjoyed reading.Well done
April 19th, 2025 05:09
David Wakeling said:
This was a fun tale.Enjoyed reading.Well done
April 19th, 2025 05:09
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
sorenbarrett said:
Got to break a few eggs if you want to make an omelet they say. Humorously sad. Found this a day brightener. Thanks for the smile. Written with good rhyme and flow it went down well. Loved it
April 19th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Got to break a few eggs if you want to make an omelet they say. Humorously sad. Found this a day brightener. Thanks for the smile. Written with good rhyme and flow it went down well. Loved it
April 19th, 2025 03:55
Harrys Easter Egg for Mary
arqios said:
Cracking beds have happened before so itโs a bit of fun indeed for that to be featured in a poem ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 19th, 2025 01:44
arqios said:
Cracking beds have happened before so itโs a bit of fun indeed for that to be featured in a poem ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 19th, 2025 01:44
Heart or Mind.
Goldfinch60 said:
Both are important in life Tobani, the mind thinks and the heart feels.
Andy
April 19th, 2025 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Both are important in life Tobani, the mind thinks and the heart feels.
Andy
April 19th, 2025 01:39
Pleasing Everyone Else
โโฑ๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑโฑโ said:
This is brilliant! I especially love in the third stanza when you write, \"don\'t be tied go their thoughts like a mental slave\" and, \"you dong always have go sing other people\'s song\"
April 18th, 2025 12:55
โโฑ๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑโฑโ said:
This is brilliant! I especially love in the third stanza when you write, \"don\'t be tied go their thoughts like a mental slave\" and, \"you dong always have go sing other people\'s song\"
April 18th, 2025 12:55
Heart or Mind.
Cheeky Missy said:
Since \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked, who can know it?\" (Jeremiah 17:9 [see also verse 10]), the mind seems initially preferable. Yet I cannot help but think the mind is controlled by said heart, until this conundrum leaves me floundering. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Since \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked, who can know it?\" (Jeremiah 17:9 [see also verse 10]), the mind seems initially preferable. Yet I cannot help but think the mind is controlled by said heart, until this conundrum leaves me floundering. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:57
I Got Burned.
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re not allowed to cull laughter with such a macabre and gristly rendition, yet you invariably do, somehow, until I\'m left here at its conclusion, trying to stifle smirks and giggles. How capably rendered with gorgeous imagery and a ghastly, haunting poignancy, yet a very lively sense of humor.
April 18th, 2025 10:52
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re not allowed to cull laughter with such a macabre and gristly rendition, yet you invariably do, somehow, until I\'m left here at its conclusion, trying to stifle smirks and giggles. How capably rendered with gorgeous imagery and a ghastly, haunting poignancy, yet a very lively sense of humor.
April 18th, 2025 10:52
Heart or Mind.
sorenbarrett said:
I love question poems because it leaves it up to the reader and thereby decreases resistance. The question frees the mind to think and choose. Here the question between heart and mind is the age old split between logic and emotion, male and female in traditional thought and as has been thought in old myth the perfect god is a hermaphrodite that shares both qualities. One without the other is hard to imagine Even Star Trek\'s Spock had a little feeling. Very nicely written this poem dichotomized into two three line stanzas
April 18th, 2025 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
I love question poems because it leaves it up to the reader and thereby decreases resistance. The question frees the mind to think and choose. Here the question between heart and mind is the age old split between logic and emotion, male and female in traditional thought and as has been thought in old myth the perfect god is a hermaphrodite that shares both qualities. One without the other is hard to imagine Even Star Trek\'s Spock had a little feeling. Very nicely written this poem dichotomized into two three line stanzas
April 18th, 2025 03:36
Heart or Mind.
David Wakeling said:
Thats a tough question.I think they are both important.Great poem.Made me think
April 18th, 2025 03:01
David Wakeling said:
Thats a tough question.I think they are both important.Great poem.Made me think
April 18th, 2025 03:01
I Got Burned.
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Tobani, the innocent do often get punished.
Andy
April 18th, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Tobani, the innocent do often get punished.
Andy
April 18th, 2025 01:51
I Got Burned.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am not fan of the death penalty. It gives the power to kill/murder to the government, and it brings no justice. It just creates more victims as I see it. This poem reminds me of that because it is exposes how easy it is for a terrible accident, in essence, can wind up getting blown up into something it was not. Scary, but happens all the time. Well done, my friend. ๐น๐
April 17th, 2025 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am not fan of the death penalty. It gives the power to kill/murder to the government, and it brings no justice. It just creates more victims as I see it. This poem reminds me of that because it is exposes how easy it is for a terrible accident, in essence, can wind up getting blown up into something it was not. Scary, but happens all the time. Well done, my friend. ๐น๐
April 17th, 2025 08:31
Tick Tock.
MinaH said:
I love the story told in this simple poem. So many written similar have a bland feel but this really hits home. Thanks for sharing
April 17th, 2025 07:10
MinaH said:
I love the story told in this simple poem. So many written similar have a bland feel but this really hits home. Thanks for sharing
April 17th, 2025 07:10
I Got Burned.
MDStone said:
A sad but true tale. In the court of public opinion we can be falsely accused and even sentenced without the facts. Worse yet, we can be burned more than once. Nicely done, Tobani.
April 17th, 2025 05:02
MDStone said:
A sad but true tale. In the court of public opinion we can be falsely accused and even sentenced without the facts. Worse yet, we can be burned more than once. Nicely done, Tobani.
April 17th, 2025 05:02
I Got Burned.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of injustice in an unjust world where little makes sense but all things lead to death. In a random world coincidence happens. No one wants to believe that it is random and everyone wants to think it should be fair. A good story Tobani. Nicely done
April 17th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of injustice in an unjust world where little makes sense but all things lead to death. In a random world coincidence happens. No one wants to believe that it is random and everyone wants to think it should be fair. A good story Tobani. Nicely done
April 17th, 2025 04:14
I Got Burned.
arqios said:
Oh dear! That was quite a horrifying thing to live through and die for. Should we just take our coffee burn and get stepped all over?๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 17th, 2025 03:04
arqios said:
Oh dear! That was quite a horrifying thing to live through and die for. Should we just take our coffee burn and get stepped all over?๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 17th, 2025 03:04
Tick Tock.
Goldfinch60 said:
Heartfelt write Tobani, but toi stop the clock that way is not the way to go.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Heartfelt write Tobani, but toi stop the clock that way is not the way to go.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:44
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