Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Spinning Hoops
Damaso said:
I see a very accurate prophecy that worries me greatly. \"God, give me patience, because if you give me strength, I\'ll kill them all,\" my grandmother used to say. Thank you for sharing your writing, sir. It\'s always a pleasure to read it. Greetings.
June 11th, 2025 07:32
Damaso said:
I see a very accurate prophecy that worries me greatly. \"God, give me patience, because if you give me strength, I\'ll kill them all,\" my grandmother used to say. Thank you for sharing your writing, sir. It\'s always a pleasure to read it. Greetings.
June 11th, 2025 07:32
Spinning Hoops
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most intriguing write and the use of abattoir is quite creative. This is a write that takes the mind by the reigns and goes for a long ride. Very nide
June 11th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most intriguing write and the use of abattoir is quite creative. This is a write that takes the mind by the reigns and goes for a long ride. Very nide
June 11th, 2025 04:46
Spinning Hoops
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated
June 11th, 2025 04:33
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated
June 11th, 2025 04:33
Spinning Hoops
David Wakeling said:
haiku is a difficult skill but i think you have done really well.I enjoyed reading.Well done
June 11th, 2025 04:11
David Wakeling said:
haiku is a difficult skill but i think you have done really well.I enjoyed reading.Well done
June 11th, 2025 04:11
My Poems.
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write the words that come into our minds Tobani and we just cannot change that, your poems are good and show us your life.
Andy
June 11th, 2025 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write the words that come into our minds Tobani and we just cannot change that, your poems are good and show us your life.
Andy
June 11th, 2025 01:17
My Poems.
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you Tobani and can identify with you. This poem is a confession for many good poets that conjure there best work out of the dregs or their pain. It is human emotion that makes for the best poems frills only add the icing on the cake. Nicely said my friend
June 10th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you Tobani and can identify with you. This poem is a confession for many good poets that conjure there best work out of the dregs or their pain. It is human emotion that makes for the best poems frills only add the icing on the cake. Nicely said my friend
June 10th, 2025 04:20
My Poems.
David Wakeling said:
don\'t be so tough on yourself. You are a much admired poet here.This is a tough self reflection but very cleverly done.Excellent
June 10th, 2025 04:10
David Wakeling said:
don\'t be so tough on yourself. You are a much admired poet here.This is a tough self reflection but very cleverly done.Excellent
June 10th, 2025 04:10
We Evacuate To Where.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tobani, the killing must cease!
Andy
June 10th, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tobani, the killing must cease!
Andy
June 10th, 2025 01:45
Your Heart Is Strong.
NafisaSB said:
Thought provoking message. Always a tussle between the mind and the heart - agree it is the mind which is fickle and keeps changing - the heart definitely knows what is to be done, but is overruled by the \'ifs\' and \'whats\'
June 9th, 2025 23:20
NafisaSB said:
Thought provoking message. Always a tussle between the mind and the heart - agree it is the mind which is fickle and keeps changing - the heart definitely knows what is to be done, but is overruled by the \'ifs\' and \'whats\'
June 9th, 2025 23:20
We Evacuate To Where.
Doggerel Dave said:
Thumbs up to Cheeky Missy for her realistic assessment of the children card too often played in these tirades against this disgusting war.
Full marks to you, Tobani for the rest.
June 9th, 2025 16:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Thumbs up to Cheeky Missy for her realistic assessment of the children card too often played in these tirades against this disgusting war.
Full marks to you, Tobani for the rest.
June 9th, 2025 16:59
The Urge To Kill.
Damaso said:
Incredible, sir, how anger can be felt gushing from the lines of this gripping and totally controversial text. Who can say they\'re right? Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.
June 9th, 2025 16:44
Damaso said:
Incredible, sir, how anger can be felt gushing from the lines of this gripping and totally controversial text. Who can say they\'re right? Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.
June 9th, 2025 16:44
We Evacuate To Where.
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah. Aptly illustrated herein, we see the point of mass media and social control, of the television. Never mind the facts, let\'s wallow in the latest. Besides, the fastest route to extermination of a culture and people is their progeny. The only question remaining is whether it\'s better to abort mid term or at any point, let the children live but teach them lies and deceive them thoroughly, abuse them completely, or kill them outright. Hmm. I give up. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. [P.S. I already \"tweeted\" my opinion months ago, I think.]
June 9th, 2025 08:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah. Aptly illustrated herein, we see the point of mass media and social control, of the television. Never mind the facts, let\'s wallow in the latest. Besides, the fastest route to extermination of a culture and people is their progeny. The only question remaining is whether it\'s better to abort mid term or at any point, let the children live but teach them lies and deceive them thoroughly, abuse them completely, or kill them outright. Hmm. I give up. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. [P.S. I already \"tweeted\" my opinion months ago, I think.]
June 9th, 2025 08:42
Wise Man Say (15).
Tom Dylan said:
A great write. Each line hits home perfectly. Nicely done.
June 9th, 2025 07:03
Tom Dylan said:
A great write. Each line hits home perfectly. Nicely done.
June 9th, 2025 07:03
We Evacuate To Where.
sorenbarrett said:
As long as man holds his beliefs as more important than his brother\'s life there will be such tragedies. A sad and tragic view of mankind and how he treats his fellow man. Well written Tobani
June 9th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
As long as man holds his beliefs as more important than his brother\'s life there will be such tragedies. A sad and tragic view of mankind and how he treats his fellow man. Well written Tobani
June 9th, 2025 04:43
We Evacuate To Where.
David Wakeling said:
Exactly the Middle east is a disaster and there is no where to evacuate to.A very important poem.Well done
June 9th, 2025 04:32
David Wakeling said:
Exactly the Middle east is a disaster and there is no where to evacuate to.A very important poem.Well done
June 9th, 2025 04:32
Wise Man Say (15).
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious, downright hilarious. I declare! I dunno where you get these pithy sayings, but you\'re too fun. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 8th, 2025 17:58
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hilarious, downright hilarious. I declare! I dunno where you get these pithy sayings, but you\'re too fun. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 8th, 2025 17:58
Wise Man Say (15).
Damaso said:
\"If Too Much Kindness
Can Kill
Why.
Do So Many People
Die.\"
This will be my lesson of the day. Thank you so much for sharing, sir. Best regards, and have a nice weekend.
June 8th, 2025 10:02
Damaso said:
\"If Too Much Kindness
Can Kill
Why.
Do So Many People
Die.\"
This will be my lesson of the day. Thank you so much for sharing, sir. Best regards, and have a nice weekend.
June 8th, 2025 10:02
Jack and Jill
Kevin Hulme said:
Not the Version I remember at School sadly.
Nice one.
June 8th, 2025 09:30
Kevin Hulme said:
Not the Version I remember at School sadly.
Nice one.
June 8th, 2025 09:30
Wise Man Say (15).
sorenbarrett said:
This one Tobani again made me smile and that is always a measure of a good pome to me. A most fun read
June 8th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
This one Tobani again made me smile and that is always a measure of a good pome to me. A most fun read
June 8th, 2025 05:42
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