Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Wise Man Say (7) Fun On a Spring Sunday.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good ones Tobani, especially
Do Not Drown in.
Hate.
Swim in.
Compassion.
Andy
March 24th, 2025 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good ones Tobani, especially
Do Not Drown in.
Hate.
Swim in.
Compassion.
Andy
March 24th, 2025 02:41
The Water.
NafisaSB said:
beautiful - these days i hope such water reaches me too
March 23rd, 2025 23:44
NafisaSB said:
beautiful - these days i hope such water reaches me too
March 23rd, 2025 23:44
Writers Doubt
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hereby as charming as dear Shakespeare, this carefully delineated injunction to self, which aught to resonate with countless, eloquently rendering reality in more than simply this genre. This baring of the soul, as you\'ve excellently rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delightful poignancy, is a serious thing indeed. I guess I\'d honestly never have found the chutzpa to enter a local poetry group nine years ago if I hadn\'t first found sweet camaraderie online. Thank you very, very much for sharing. I love it.
March 23rd, 2025 12:15
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re hereby as charming as dear Shakespeare, this carefully delineated injunction to self, which aught to resonate with countless, eloquently rendering reality in more than simply this genre. This baring of the soul, as you\'ve excellently rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delightful poignancy, is a serious thing indeed. I guess I\'d honestly never have found the chutzpa to enter a local poetry group nine years ago if I hadn\'t first found sweet camaraderie online. Thank you very, very much for sharing. I love it.
March 23rd, 2025 12:15
Wise Man Say (7) Fun On a Spring Sunday.
Cheeky Missy said:
After which the sage takes a hearty swig of amber draught, wiping his whitest beard with satisfaction, eyes twinkling. And I\'m forever the little child at his feet, mouth too widely opened, eyes agog. Beautifully rendered with a touch of nigh exquisite imagery and a very haunting poignancy, thank you so much for sharing.
March 23rd, 2025 10:47
Cheeky Missy said:
After which the sage takes a hearty swig of amber draught, wiping his whitest beard with satisfaction, eyes twinkling. And I\'m forever the little child at his feet, mouth too widely opened, eyes agog. Beautifully rendered with a touch of nigh exquisite imagery and a very haunting poignancy, thank you so much for sharing.
March 23rd, 2025 10:47
Wise Man Say (7) Fun On a Spring Sunday.
David Wakeling said:
Some wisdom and Fun mixed together.Wonderful
March 23rd, 2025 05:00
David Wakeling said:
Some wisdom and Fun mixed together.Wonderful
March 23rd, 2025 05:00
Wise Man Say (7) Fun On a Spring Sunday.
sorenbarrett said:
Always enjoy your Sunday fun it brings a smile ant that is the best part of a Sunday. Thanks for sharing
March 23rd, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Always enjoy your Sunday fun it brings a smile ant that is the best part of a Sunday. Thanks for sharing
March 23rd, 2025 04:12
Wise Man Say (7) Fun On a Spring Sunday.
arqios said:
And so the fun continues! It’s becoming a much welcome tradition 🙏🏻🕊
March 23rd, 2025 03:49
arqios said:
And so the fun continues! It’s becoming a much welcome tradition 🙏🏻🕊
March 23rd, 2025 03:49
Writers Doubt
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Tobani, we can interpret our own and others poetry in differing ways every time we read them, that is the beauty of writing our words.
Andy
March 23rd, 2025 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Tobani, we can interpret our own and others poetry in differing ways every time we read them, that is the beauty of writing our words.
Andy
March 23rd, 2025 02:26
Writers Doubt
Damaso said:
What a brave and encouraging piece of writing, with a voice of experience that shares the keys to character. Heroic
March 22nd, 2025 14:09
Damaso said:
What a brave and encouraging piece of writing, with a voice of experience that shares the keys to character. Heroic
March 22nd, 2025 14:09
Writers Doubt
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I did fear sharing my poetry prior to doing it, for a whole variety of reasons, most of which you have covered in this poem. First, wonderful poem, my friend. Second, I am so glad you wrote it to yourself and ended up convincing yourself to come on here! It\'s been great getting to read your excellent poetry and get to know each other as best as we can digitally! This poem is a fave for me. Have a great weekend, Tobani! 🌹👏❤️
March 22nd, 2025 08:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I did fear sharing my poetry prior to doing it, for a whole variety of reasons, most of which you have covered in this poem. First, wonderful poem, my friend. Second, I am so glad you wrote it to yourself and ended up convincing yourself to come on here! It\'s been great getting to read your excellent poetry and get to know each other as best as we can digitally! This poem is a fave for me. Have a great weekend, Tobani! 🌹👏❤️
March 22nd, 2025 08:23
Writers Doubt
Friendship said:
Nicely worded.Your poem delves into the transformative experience of channeling thoughts and emotions into written words, highlighting the writer\'s inner journey of self-discovery, the pursuit of connection, and the quest for validation, ultimately inspiring the writer to embrace their creative voice.
Have agreat weekend,
March 22nd, 2025 06:58
Friendship said:
Nicely worded.Your poem delves into the transformative experience of channeling thoughts and emotions into written words, highlighting the writer\'s inner journey of self-discovery, the pursuit of connection, and the quest for validation, ultimately inspiring the writer to embrace their creative voice.
Have agreat weekend,
March 22nd, 2025 06:58
Writers Doubt
Mutley Ravishes said:
No matter what we write we know so little of each other.
Great write!
March 22nd, 2025 06:00
Mutley Ravishes said:
No matter what we write we know so little of each other.
Great write!
March 22nd, 2025 06:00
Writers Doubt
arqios said:
Pretty much found my concerns nestled within your stanzas. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 22nd, 2025 05:34
arqios said:
Pretty much found my concerns nestled within your stanzas. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 22nd, 2025 05:34
Writers Doubt
David Wakeling said:
Some greta wisdom here mi amigo.Never doubt yourself.You are a great wordsmith
March 22nd, 2025 05:21
David Wakeling said:
Some greta wisdom here mi amigo.Never doubt yourself.You are a great wordsmith
March 22nd, 2025 05:21
Writers Doubt
sorenbarrett said:
What a splendid poem that rings with truth in every line. How many times I have had readers tell me the exact opposite of what I had intended and I\'ve asked myself did I word it wrong? or were they not reading it carefully? Long ago I decided that there is no correct interpretation of a poem all interpretations are correct it each reader\'s eyes. The question is did it touch someone? Even the author? A fave
March 22nd, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
What a splendid poem that rings with truth in every line. How many times I have had readers tell me the exact opposite of what I had intended and I\'ve asked myself did I word it wrong? or were they not reading it carefully? Long ago I decided that there is no correct interpretation of a poem all interpretations are correct it each reader\'s eyes. The question is did it touch someone? Even the author? A fave
March 22nd, 2025 05:13
Writers Doubt
orchidee said:
Ohh, just follow me - write any old rubbish, as I do at intervals! LOL. Now, now, poets, I didn\'t say rubbish my EVERY poem! Heehee.
But seriously, we can sometimes write poems hoping they will \'fit in\' and be acceptable to others. But we can\'t please all the people all of the time, and we would lose our individuality if we tried to do that, I think. And that\'s quite a long word for this time of day - individuality. Got headache now, thinking that word up! lol.
March 22nd, 2025 03:26
orchidee said:
Ohh, just follow me - write any old rubbish, as I do at intervals! LOL. Now, now, poets, I didn\'t say rubbish my EVERY poem! Heehee.
But seriously, we can sometimes write poems hoping they will \'fit in\' and be acceptable to others. But we can\'t please all the people all of the time, and we would lose our individuality if we tried to do that, I think. And that\'s quite a long word for this time of day - individuality. Got headache now, thinking that word up! lol.
March 22nd, 2025 03:26
Lie In a Truth.
Goldfinch60 said:
Truth and respect seem to have died in our world Tobani.
Andy
March 22nd, 2025 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Truth and respect seem to have died in our world Tobani.
Andy
March 22nd, 2025 02:54
Half A Bag Of S... !!!
Quemis said:
Agony carried in turns.
Pains a part of love, and the trend these days to act like there should be zero suffering at all in knowing others is insane.
March 21st, 2025 19:29
Quemis said:
Agony carried in turns.
Pains a part of love, and the trend these days to act like there should be zero suffering at all in knowing others is insane.
March 21st, 2025 19:29
Lie In a Truth.
Friendship said:
Well written,,Your poem \"Lie In a Truth\" explores the complexities of truth and deception, questioning whether any truth can exist without an inherent lie. It delves into the uncertainty of what is real and what is fabricated, suggesting a sense of disillusionment with accepted truths.
March 21st, 2025 12:54
Friendship said:
Well written,,Your poem \"Lie In a Truth\" explores the complexities of truth and deception, questioning whether any truth can exist without an inherent lie. It delves into the uncertainty of what is real and what is fabricated, suggesting a sense of disillusionment with accepted truths.
March 21st, 2025 12:54
Lie In a Truth.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent my friend! Simple, yet profound and rings wonderfully! Well done, Tobani!!! 🌹👏
March 21st, 2025 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent my friend! Simple, yet profound and rings wonderfully! Well done, Tobani!!! 🌹👏
March 21st, 2025 08:34
Lie In a Truth.
arqios said:
Interesting dynamic! How much lie stains or cancels out a truth or how much truth to make a lie plausible… thought provoking 🕊🙏🏻
March 21st, 2025 05:29
arqios said:
Interesting dynamic! How much lie stains or cancels out a truth or how much truth to make a lie plausible… thought provoking 🕊🙏🏻
March 21st, 2025 05:29
Lie In a Truth.
David Wakeling said:
I think it is hard to know what is real. So many different opinions.Good poem made me think
March 21st, 2025 04:53
David Wakeling said:
I think it is hard to know what is real. So many different opinions.Good poem made me think
March 21st, 2025 04:53
Lie In a Truth.
sorenbarrett said:
In truth it may have never been born. A great play on words and woven wisdom and another way of looking at how we see the world. Nicely written.
March 21st, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
In truth it may have never been born. A great play on words and woven wisdom and another way of looking at how we see the world. Nicely written.
March 21st, 2025 04:08
Lie In a Truth.
Caring dove said:
Some people tell you somethings true when it’s not .. as it’s just another lie . Sometimes clear when someone’s being honest , other times you might be able to tell if their not being truthful
March 21st, 2025 03:30
Caring dove said:
Some people tell you somethings true when it’s not .. as it’s just another lie . Sometimes clear when someone’s being honest , other times you might be able to tell if their not being truthful
March 21st, 2025 03:30
Am I Alone.
Goldfinch60 said:
Open that window and door and walk into life with others Tobani. Clever thoughtful write.
Andy
March 21st, 2025 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Open that window and door and walk into life with others Tobani. Clever thoughtful write.
Andy
March 21st, 2025 02:42
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