Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Standing Alone.
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Tobani and with good meaning as well. Here the use of rhyme lures the reader to ignore the wisdom. Very well done. Never put off for tomorrow what can be done today unless it is death.
July 15th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Tobani and with good meaning as well. Here the use of rhyme lures the reader to ignore the wisdom. Very well done. Never put off for tomorrow what can be done today unless it is death.
July 15th, 2025 04:27
Wise Man Say (20).
Jeremy Leach said:
I like them. Each one could be a poem really because there is a lot to say.
July 15th, 2025 00:57
Jeremy Leach said:
I like them. Each one could be a poem really because there is a lot to say.
July 15th, 2025 00:57
Gaza (Help).
ElizabethMoroz said:
Your use of rhythm propels a sense of urgency in your words . Excellent work on a most devastating situation. Necessary words of the time that we live in . Well done Sincerely Elizabeth
July 14th, 2025 05:49
ElizabethMoroz said:
Your use of rhythm propels a sense of urgency in your words . Excellent work on a most devastating situation. Necessary words of the time that we live in . Well done Sincerely Elizabeth
July 14th, 2025 05:49
Wise Man Say (20).
Goldfinch60 said:
God ones Tobani and that last one is so true.
Andy
July 14th, 2025 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
God ones Tobani and that last one is so true.
Andy
July 14th, 2025 02:21
Just Because.
AwHec8 said:
Absolutely Love this Poem. Nice short and sweet words you put together.
July 13th, 2025 17:27
AwHec8 said:
Absolutely Love this Poem. Nice short and sweet words you put together.
July 13th, 2025 17:27
Wise Man Say (20).
Bella Shepard said:
Simple truths that speak volumes. Thank you for sharing such wisdom!
July 13th, 2025 14:52
Bella Shepard said:
Simple truths that speak volumes. Thank you for sharing such wisdom!
July 13th, 2025 14:52
Wise Man Say (20).
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun, yet in a trice also too sagacious herein, leaving a wry smile in concluding, the subtle poignancy trailing in its wake. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and, well, you know. Thank you for sharing.
July 13th, 2025 09:39
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun, yet in a trice also too sagacious herein, leaving a wry smile in concluding, the subtle poignancy trailing in its wake. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and, well, you know. Thank you for sharing.
July 13th, 2025 09:39
Roasted Turkey.
Kevin Hulme said:
You said it all. Come December us Turkey\'s will be back in the Freezer.
Good one.
July 13th, 2025 07:27
Kevin Hulme said:
You said it all. Come December us Turkey\'s will be back in the Freezer.
Good one.
July 13th, 2025 07:27
Roasted Turkey.
Jeremy Leach said:
That was good. Made me chuckle in this freak heatwave.
July 13th, 2025 06:59
Jeremy Leach said:
That was good. Made me chuckle in this freak heatwave.
July 13th, 2025 06:59
Wise Man Say (20).
arqios said:
Glass slippers and glass hearts... and glass spectacles for those visually challenged!
July 13th, 2025 06:11
arqios said:
Glass slippers and glass hearts... and glass spectacles for those visually challenged!
July 13th, 2025 06:11
Roasted Turkey.
Tony Grannell said:
So, Noel Coward was correct, \"Mad dogs and Englishmen go out in the midday sun...\" A hot and crispy verse - hahaha!
All the best,
Tony.
July 13th, 2025 05:59
Tony Grannell said:
So, Noel Coward was correct, \"Mad dogs and Englishmen go out in the midday sun...\" A hot and crispy verse - hahaha!
All the best,
Tony.
July 13th, 2025 05:59
Wise Man Say (20).
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read to pick up my Sunday. I couldn\'t help but answer the first one Tobani (it depends how it clieves) Well done again and with a smile my Sunday can continue and that deserves a fave
July 13th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read to pick up my Sunday. I couldn\'t help but answer the first one Tobani (it depends how it clieves) Well done again and with a smile my Sunday can continue and that deserves a fave
July 13th, 2025 04:34
Wise Man Say (20).
David Wakeling said:
Some fun here and some wisdom. A very enjoyable read compadre
July 13th, 2025 04:26
David Wakeling said:
Some fun here and some wisdom. A very enjoyable read compadre
July 13th, 2025 04:26
Roasted Turkey.
Bella Shepard said:
I have turkey once a year on our nationl Thanksgiving holiday, and now I have to wait until the third thursday in November to enjoy what you now have me craving. Great poem, I think I\'ll go raid the fridge!
July 12th, 2025 12:24
Bella Shepard said:
I have turkey once a year on our nationl Thanksgiving holiday, and now I have to wait until the third thursday in November to enjoy what you now have me craving. Great poem, I think I\'ll go raid the fridge!
July 12th, 2025 12:24
Half a Heart.
SureshG said:
No matter how you sliced it, there was no right half.
July 12th, 2025 11:50
SureshG said:
No matter how you sliced it, there was no right half.
July 12th, 2025 11:50
Roasted Turkey.
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re downright hilarious! I figured twas tongue-in-cheek. Nothing like a proper roasting, eh? Delightful. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. [By the way, \"Turkey\" was my parents\' pet name for yours truly.]
July 12th, 2025 09:22
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re downright hilarious! I figured twas tongue-in-cheek. Nothing like a proper roasting, eh? Delightful. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. [By the way, \"Turkey\" was my parents\' pet name for yours truly.]
July 12th, 2025 09:22
Roasted Turkey.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A day at the beach, my friend? Exactly how I feel out in the sun. This American Turkey is right there with you! LOL!
July 12th, 2025 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A day at the beach, my friend? Exactly how I feel out in the sun. This American Turkey is right there with you! LOL!
July 12th, 2025 08:18
Roasted Turkey.
Doggerel Dave said:
Roast, baby, roast. I see pictures of nutters in the UK and other northern hemisphere places wandering around without a hat in 40 degree plus heat.
A salutary warning.
July 12th, 2025 07:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Roast, baby, roast. I see pictures of nutters in the UK and other northern hemisphere places wandering around without a hat in 40 degree plus heat.
A salutary warning.
July 12th, 2025 07:44
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