Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
Goldfinch60 said:
Blimey Ben, that took me back to the days when I went up the pub regularly, and that scene you have created witt those words took me back to those days, thank you.
Andy
June 15th, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Blimey Ben, that took me back to the days when I went up the pub regularly, and that scene you have created witt those words took me back to those days, thank you.
Andy
June 15th, 2021 00:47
Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
Doggerel Dave said:
Greatly enjoyed, AS. Atmospheric picture of a British pub. Nice recharge as memory fades slightly....
Apart from you and the barman there weren\'t any blokes. Had they deserted?
June 14th, 2021 20:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Greatly enjoyed, AS. Atmospheric picture of a British pub. Nice recharge as memory fades slightly....
Apart from you and the barman there weren\'t any blokes. Had they deserted?
June 14th, 2021 20:08
Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, A.S.
Dogs in the bar is getting very popular. Really good wing men.
June 14th, 2021 16:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, A.S.
Dogs in the bar is getting very popular. Really good wing men.
June 14th, 2021 16:11
Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely read AS. Most enjoyable
June 14th, 2021 13:54
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely read AS. Most enjoyable
June 14th, 2021 13:54
Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
Fay Slimm. said:
Could just imagine the rumpus when doggie owners gathered for liquid and chatter - your poetic-docu. is clearly a fun-raiser to read next time you join that throng. Great write.
June 14th, 2021 13:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Could just imagine the rumpus when doggie owners gathered for liquid and chatter - your poetic-docu. is clearly a fun-raiser to read next time you join that throng. Great write.
June 14th, 2021 13:47
Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary)
dusk arising said:
My sister once took me to a pub in Aslockton with her dawg. Big surprise to me was the landlord though. Serving me a pint was John Robertson ex Nottingham Forest left winger.
Served a good aqua for the dawg too.
Worrisit baat Notts pubs\'s meks em so wam. Taint Shippos no more!
June 14th, 2021 11:40
dusk arising said:
My sister once took me to a pub in Aslockton with her dawg. Big surprise to me was the landlord though. Serving me a pint was John Robertson ex Nottingham Forest left winger.
Served a good aqua for the dawg too.
Worrisit baat Notts pubs\'s meks em so wam. Taint Shippos no more!
June 14th, 2021 11:40
Upon Bingham Market Square
Saxon Crow said:
Life goes on no matter what which is the point if this poem. Wonderful reminder
June 13th, 2021 00:51
Saxon Crow said:
Life goes on no matter what which is the point if this poem. Wonderful reminder
June 13th, 2021 00:51
Upon Bingham Market Square
Doggerel Dave said:
I probably listen and watch far too much news and political commentary. And you know where that can lead...To watch others just in the midst of their ordinary apparently carefree lives must be something of a restorative.
Thanks for a nicely framed picture, AS.
June 12th, 2021 20:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I probably listen and watch far too much news and political commentary. And you know where that can lead...To watch others just in the midst of their ordinary apparently carefree lives must be something of a restorative.
Thanks for a nicely framed picture, AS.
June 12th, 2021 20:34
Upon Bingham Market Square
dusk arising said:
It is good to reject negativity, it hacks at one\'s vitality of life.
I know that square. My brother lived in Bingham and later at Sheldon. Very busy on a saturday I remember.
June 12th, 2021 16:11
dusk arising said:
It is good to reject negativity, it hacks at one\'s vitality of life.
I know that square. My brother lived in Bingham and later at Sheldon. Very busy on a saturday I remember.
June 12th, 2021 16:11
Upon Bingham Market Square
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep nourishing your spirit Ben and wonderful words like these will flow over all of us.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 12:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep nourishing your spirit Ben and wonderful words like these will flow over all of us.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 12:40
“Roll Around” (A Song, coming out of Lockdown)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Both in love, and in bleeding,\'..
\'in\' - bleeding?
yikes, that\'s a hard no for me... lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing dear poet
May 28th, 2021 03:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'Both in love, and in bleeding,\'..
\'in\' - bleeding?
yikes, that\'s a hard no for me... lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing dear poet
May 28th, 2021 03:49
“Roll Around” (A Song, coming out of Lockdown)
Goldfinch60 said:
See you in the pub Ben - the first round is on me.
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
See you in the pub Ben - the first round is on me.
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:26
“Roll Around” (A Song, coming out of Lockdown)
orchidee said:
And now the next hymn in the Service: No.473: \'I like to kick the table\'. heehee.
They\'ll boot us out if we kick the Communion table/altar!
May 27th, 2021 08:31
orchidee said:
And now the next hymn in the Service: No.473: \'I like to kick the table\'. heehee.
They\'ll boot us out if we kick the Communion table/altar!
May 27th, 2021 08:31
NG24
Goldfinch60 said:
I now how you feel, I was brought up in Rochester in Kent but it is so changed now to the way it was when I moved to the Midlands 22 years ago.
Andy
May 15th, 2021 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
I now how you feel, I was brought up in Rochester in Kent but it is so changed now to the way it was when I moved to the Midlands 22 years ago.
Andy
May 15th, 2021 00:48
NG24
dusk arising said:
Newark on Trent the lovely market town where my parents spent their late years. Indeed I grew up a little further up the river in the big bad city itself.
I appreciate your words as one who too strayed away and sees with different eyes on returning.
Your rock, your springboard.
May 14th, 2021 12:30
dusk arising said:
Newark on Trent the lovely market town where my parents spent their late years. Indeed I grew up a little further up the river in the big bad city itself.
I appreciate your words as one who too strayed away and sees with different eyes on returning.
Your rock, your springboard.
May 14th, 2021 12:30
Haemorrhoid Cream
Doggerel Dave said:
AS: Little do I understand (or for that matter care) about the electoral vote in the UK. However I can relate to the observation that the relationship between the yobbos, of what ever stripe, the media and the pollies there as here, is a right royal pain in the arse......lol.
May 11th, 2021 05:04
Doggerel Dave said:
AS: Little do I understand (or for that matter care) about the electoral vote in the UK. However I can relate to the observation that the relationship between the yobbos, of what ever stripe, the media and the pollies there as here, is a right royal pain in the arse......lol.
May 11th, 2021 05:04
Haemorrhoid Cream
L. B. Mek said:
and \'they\' say Anarchy - is dead, too...
some choice wording, for sure, lol
\'this is when a quick Pint in your local
makes the difference, between
ranting and raving, all night
and a grunted exhale, as acceptance
so as: to prevail...
May 11th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
and \'they\' say Anarchy - is dead, too...
some choice wording, for sure, lol
\'this is when a quick Pint in your local
makes the difference, between
ranting and raving, all night
and a grunted exhale, as acceptance
so as: to prevail...
May 11th, 2021 04:30
Haemorrhoid Cream
Goldfinch60 said:
I have some Ben but it is nearly run out, I will have to get some more.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
I have some Ben but it is nearly run out, I will have to get some more.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:27
Mane
L. B. Mek said:
\'I hope that you and your hair are \"getting on\"\'..
sets the tone, for what is just a fun-tastic read, you supreme inker of wit
thanks for the soul nourishing smiles
to match our rejuvenating cloudless sky;
a read: match-made
within that harmonious symphony of Spring! lol
April 29th, 2021 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'I hope that you and your hair are \"getting on\"\'..
sets the tone, for what is just a fun-tastic read, you supreme inker of wit
thanks for the soul nourishing smiles
to match our rejuvenating cloudless sky;
a read: match-made
within that harmonious symphony of Spring! lol
April 29th, 2021 04:44
Mane
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Ben, my hair was the same, I had gone back to my seventies look. I wasn\'t bothered about it and I certainly was not going to queue at a barbers, but on Monday I was walking in town and saw that my barbers was empty so I went in and had my hair cut. Went to croquet the following day and they charged me a fiver as new player😂😂😂.
Andy
April 29th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Ben, my hair was the same, I had gone back to my seventies look. I wasn\'t bothered about it and I certainly was not going to queue at a barbers, but on Monday I was walking in town and saw that my barbers was empty so I went in and had my hair cut. Went to croquet the following day and they charged me a fiver as new player😂😂😂.
Andy
April 29th, 2021 00:43
Mane
Doggerel Dave said:
At a time of my life when the choice was between do something about the hole in the seat of my trousers or get a haircut, I chose to cut it myself using scissors which had seen better days. In retrospect I should have followed the example you set in your entertaining piece, but it was a time when everyone was doing it and my contrarian kicked in….
April 28th, 2021 20:45
Doggerel Dave said:
At a time of my life when the choice was between do something about the hole in the seat of my trousers or get a haircut, I chose to cut it myself using scissors which had seen better days. In retrospect I should have followed the example you set in your entertaining piece, but it was a time when everyone was doing it and my contrarian kicked in….
April 28th, 2021 20:45
Beer Garden (An Acrostic)
L. B. Mek said:
a great read!
\'we oft neglect the \'public house\' roots
of our beloved pubs
so then, once more in timely Spring
they\'ve allowed us to unlock - our castle doors
let us few who can: choose
to simply toast and enjoy, for once
and let it be Fate
forced to wait and contemplate...\'
April 19th, 2021 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
a great read!
\'we oft neglect the \'public house\' roots
of our beloved pubs
so then, once more in timely Spring
they\'ve allowed us to unlock - our castle doors
let us few who can: choose
to simply toast and enjoy, for once
and let it be Fate
forced to wait and contemplate...\'
April 19th, 2021 05:18
Beer Garden (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
\"please do not make it a “fear garden”\" such true words Ben, we must still be careful.
I didn\'t see that beer garden when I was in Newark!
Andy
April 19th, 2021 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
\"please do not make it a “fear garden”\" such true words Ben, we must still be careful.
I didn\'t see that beer garden when I was in Newark!
Andy
April 19th, 2021 00:42
A Reunion on the River Bank
L. B. Mek said:
such a mellow flow, even initially when reading without context I was thinking of fishing (that Hemingway \'old man and the sea\' resonance) or reminiscing my college days when we used to sit by that river in Richmond and drink our beers outdoors, in the glorious summer (before the masses invaded that is, lol)..
brilliantly executed tone and feel, an immersive read: a timely write
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 6th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
such a mellow flow, even initially when reading without context I was thinking of fishing (that Hemingway \'old man and the sea\' resonance) or reminiscing my college days when we used to sit by that river in Richmond and drink our beers outdoors, in the glorious summer (before the masses invaded that is, lol)..
brilliantly executed tone and feel, an immersive read: a timely write
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 6th, 2021 05:15
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