Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Black and White Cat
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , liked the read ! And I love cats just dislike them going for birds , but it’s just the way they are
January 29th, 2022 16:04
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , liked the read ! And I love cats just dislike them going for birds , but it’s just the way they are
January 29th, 2022 16:04
Up Beacon Hill, Via the Sconce
Rozina said:
I really enjoyed your walking poem. It would be so nice to go for tea and scones after that walk. Have a good rest for your feet now.
January 27th, 2022 20:57
Rozina said:
I really enjoyed your walking poem. It would be so nice to go for tea and scones after that walk. Have a good rest for your feet now.
January 27th, 2022 20:57
Up Beacon Hill, Via the Sconce
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for the docu-poem and the long walk - - those feet deserve a rest methinks when at last Beacon Hill has been done and as your final line states the road signs are guiding you home - so clearly explained I was there.
January 27th, 2022 16:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for the docu-poem and the long walk - - those feet deserve a rest methinks when at last Beacon Hill has been done and as your final line states the road signs are guiding you home - so clearly explained I was there.
January 27th, 2022 16:29
For Rabbie (to the rhythm of \"Auld Lang Syne\")
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben on one of the great poets.
Slàinte Mhath
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben on one of the great poets.
Slàinte Mhath
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:40
Lazy
Caring dove said:
Really like your writing ! 🙂🙂 such a good choice of words , and flow ..
Very engaging fun read
January 23rd, 2022 14:15
Caring dove said:
Really like your writing ! 🙂🙂 such a good choice of words , and flow ..
Very engaging fun read
January 23rd, 2022 14:15
Monotony
Caring dove said:
Everyone has the right to happiness but it seems that some people get a lot more than others ! I sometimes think it’s a little unbalanced .
Nobody should have to struggle and feel unhappy in life
January 23rd, 2022 13:35
Caring dove said:
Everyone has the right to happiness but it seems that some people get a lot more than others ! I sometimes think it’s a little unbalanced .
Nobody should have to struggle and feel unhappy in life
January 23rd, 2022 13:35
A Mutual Apology, from Cronos and Zeus
sophin said:
great write, auburn. interesting how you tied in the tales of mythology into the modern world.
\"with benign pride, we think ourselves gods,
but we cry, when we make our blood drop,
\"
- great lines
January 21st, 2022 01:06
sophin said:
great write, auburn. interesting how you tied in the tales of mythology into the modern world.
\"with benign pride, we think ourselves gods,
but we cry, when we make our blood drop,
\"
- great lines
January 21st, 2022 01:06
Bad YouTube Ad, Bad!
GypsyLady said:
Oh I so feel your pain! I love this clever and witty write which expresses your frustration so very well!
January 18th, 2022 10:10
GypsyLady said:
Oh I so feel your pain! I love this clever and witty write which expresses your frustration so very well!
January 18th, 2022 10:10
Bad YouTube Ad, Bad!
spilleronsheet said:
Such a different topic and the words to express the frustration
But no denial I couldn’t stop laughing
Very clever and witty poetry
January 18th, 2022 09:23
spilleronsheet said:
Such a different topic and the words to express the frustration
But no denial I couldn’t stop laughing
Very clever and witty poetry
January 18th, 2022 09:23
Bad YouTube Ad, Bad!
L. B. Mek said:
\'who live for sin!\'
they\'re just capitalising
on that capitalist
all consuming greed of modernity..
and be careful, dear Poet
lest they start making us
sign-up
and pay;
adds, are just fine with me...
(lol, luv the details in your rant
and despite my response above
I - so, relate
to your frustrations, my friend)
January 18th, 2022 08:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'who live for sin!\'
they\'re just capitalising
on that capitalist
all consuming greed of modernity..
and be careful, dear Poet
lest they start making us
sign-up
and pay;
adds, are just fine with me...
(lol, luv the details in your rant
and despite my response above
I - so, relate
to your frustrations, my friend)
January 18th, 2022 08:42
Plain Andrew
Rozina said:
I just saw this on the news yesterday. In the end no escape. I enjoyed the poem.
January 14th, 2022 21:42
Rozina said:
I just saw this on the news yesterday. In the end no escape. I enjoyed the poem.
January 14th, 2022 21:42
Plain Andrew
sophin said:
good write, auburn. you hold so much hope and kindness for the scorned. have a nice day.
January 14th, 2022 13:04
sophin said:
good write, auburn. you hold so much hope and kindness for the scorned. have a nice day.
January 14th, 2022 13:04
Thirteen A (An Acrostic)
Rozina said:
This is an interesting poem. In some cultures 4 is an unlucky number because the ethnic pronunciation sounds like the word \'death\'. The building may lack a 4th floor for example. Great idea.
January 13th, 2022 04:36
Rozina said:
This is an interesting poem. In some cultures 4 is an unlucky number because the ethnic pronunciation sounds like the word \'death\'. The building may lack a 4th floor for example. Great idea.
January 13th, 2022 04:36
Thirteen A (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, home is what you make it and it sounds as if you have a very good home.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, home is what you make it and it sounds as if you have a very good home.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:38
Thirteen A (An Acrostic)
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful acrostic and a wonderful connection with the house to make it home
Very beautiful dear poet
January 12th, 2022 22:50
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful acrostic and a wonderful connection with the house to make it home
Very beautiful dear poet
January 12th, 2022 22:50
Thirteen A (An Acrostic)
orchidee said:
Good write AS. Unusual 13A.
Doh! Sometimes we can spend ages looking for No.13 in a street. it\'s often been changed to 11A, or non-existent.
Some streets with houses about 100 years old or so, haven\'t been so superstitious. They have No.13.
January 12th, 2022 11:38
orchidee said:
Good write AS. Unusual 13A.
Doh! Sometimes we can spend ages looking for No.13 in a street. it\'s often been changed to 11A, or non-existent.
Some streets with houses about 100 years old or so, haven\'t been so superstitious. They have No.13.
January 12th, 2022 11:38
Guest List
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Ben. It is absolutely awful that this party took place and they will not even admit it as the blame will now fall on the new lady Sue Gray who is \'investigating\' the problem.
\"How do you know when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Andy
January 12th, 2022 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Ben. It is absolutely awful that this party took place and they will not even admit it as the blame will now fall on the new lady Sue Gray who is \'investigating\' the problem.
\"How do you know when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Andy
January 12th, 2022 01:32
Guest List
Rozina said:
Marvellous poem. Politicians are the same the world over. Difficult to trust. A great write.
January 12th, 2022 01:23
Rozina said:
Marvellous poem. Politicians are the same the world over. Difficult to trust. A great write.
January 12th, 2022 01:23
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woundedheart said:
Boris can kiss my free pass i never voted for him and never will as he does not represent Britain or its true views, this is a fabulous piece full of truth. Kudos. 💟
January 11th, 2022 17:18
woundedheart said:
Boris can kiss my free pass i never voted for him and never will as he does not represent Britain or its true views, this is a fabulous piece full of truth. Kudos. 💟
January 11th, 2022 17:18
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orchidee said:
It\'s enough to make people believe, as some papers say, that the country is being run by Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc - clowns!
January 11th, 2022 11:24
orchidee said:
It\'s enough to make people believe, as some papers say, that the country is being run by Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc - clowns!
January 11th, 2022 11:24
Guest List
L. B. Mek said:
(a great write!
thanks for inspiring my over opinionated - rant
of a reply, dear poet)..
just amazed, how they got
the general public warring
with each other
over our vaccinated, status
feeding
those gluttonous, morally bankrupt Bulletins
with evermore, fearmongering
unverifiable figures and guesses
yet
they walk around, making their filthy
backhanded deals
as if, COVID
was just a tag line
in some far-fetched
sci-fi, plot scheme...
(their is a reason why
the 5th of November
is my Favourite, remembrance
holiday!!!)
and to think, of all those
who died for this dreamed, reality
we waste
generation after wasted, generation!
January 11th, 2022 07:55
L. B. Mek said:
(a great write!
thanks for inspiring my over opinionated - rant
of a reply, dear poet)..
just amazed, how they got
the general public warring
with each other
over our vaccinated, status
feeding
those gluttonous, morally bankrupt Bulletins
with evermore, fearmongering
unverifiable figures and guesses
yet
they walk around, making their filthy
backhanded deals
as if, COVID
was just a tag line
in some far-fetched
sci-fi, plot scheme...
(their is a reason why
the 5th of November
is my Favourite, remembrance
holiday!!!)
and to think, of all those
who died for this dreamed, reality
we waste
generation after wasted, generation!
January 11th, 2022 07:55
Guest List
dusk arising said:
The very fact that this party took place is a disgrace when all over our nation people were not allowed to visit their dieing loved ones, nor their funerals, banned form care homes.
So much bad feeling will arise from this particular party, it was truly in lockdown time when there were no vaccinations and the nation was on a plague footing.
The sarcasm of your piece is well placed here. I doubt whether it would have made any difference if the PM and government were labour instead of tory for all those in power seem to exist in a different world to the rest of us.
January 11th, 2022 06:46
dusk arising said:
The very fact that this party took place is a disgrace when all over our nation people were not allowed to visit their dieing loved ones, nor their funerals, banned form care homes.
So much bad feeling will arise from this particular party, it was truly in lockdown time when there were no vaccinations and the nation was on a plague footing.
The sarcasm of your piece is well placed here. I doubt whether it would have made any difference if the PM and government were labour instead of tory for all those in power seem to exist in a different world to the rest of us.
January 11th, 2022 06:46
The Butterfly and Lazarus
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, I believe that shower in the morning strips away the troubles we may feel and lead us into a brighter day in our lives.
Andy
January 10th, 2022 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, I believe that shower in the morning strips away the troubles we may feel and lead us into a brighter day in our lives.
Andy
January 10th, 2022 01:07
The Butterfly and Lazarus
spilleronsheet said:
Nature is beautiful
We inspire
We love
We miss
We get in captivated
Yet at times we do get jealous at some lines
Very well penned dear friend
It’s a part that feels the same
Jealous or aspire to transform one day
January 9th, 2022 14:03
spilleronsheet said:
Nature is beautiful
We inspire
We love
We miss
We get in captivated
Yet at times we do get jealous at some lines
Very well penned dear friend
It’s a part that feels the same
Jealous or aspire to transform one day
January 9th, 2022 14:03
The Butterfly and Lazarus
woundedheart said:
Beautifully penned such vivid imagery my friend.☺
January 9th, 2022 12:42
woundedheart said:
Beautifully penned such vivid imagery my friend.☺
January 9th, 2022 12:42
The Butterfly and Lazarus
chriswylie2 said:
Well composed and written. Love the comparison!
January 9th, 2022 10:35
chriswylie2 said:
Well composed and written. Love the comparison!
January 9th, 2022 10:35
From Light to Dark, Then Back Again
Rozina said:
I agree. We all have dark and light. A balancing act. Sometimes the scales tilt a bit more to 1 side. Then a correction. Excellent poem.
January 9th, 2022 09:07
Rozina said:
I agree. We all have dark and light. A balancing act. Sometimes the scales tilt a bit more to 1 side. Then a correction. Excellent poem.
January 9th, 2022 09:07
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