Comments received on poems by kevin browne
Willowing Whispers.
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the flow and the subtle humour in this invitation to love Kevin
February 26th, 2018 13:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the flow and the subtle humour in this invitation to love Kevin
February 26th, 2018 13:54
When The Weather Gets A Little Lonely.
Caring dove said:
hi kevin , i found this to be quite a lovely and well thought out poem .. i love how you talk of \'\'love screaming in your eyes\'\', and hearts beating like thunder, shadows crying on the pavement.. i love your wording in this . my favourite part of the poem has to be this
\'\'Underneath a petal sits a fairy-tale
Of you and I in a wishing well
Where kissing lovers hallucinate
Upon the fields of wonders in the sky\'\' such a beautiful thing to say
truly enjoyed :-)
February 24th, 2018 10:23
Caring dove said:
hi kevin , i found this to be quite a lovely and well thought out poem .. i love how you talk of \'\'love screaming in your eyes\'\', and hearts beating like thunder, shadows crying on the pavement.. i love your wording in this . my favourite part of the poem has to be this
\'\'Underneath a petal sits a fairy-tale
Of you and I in a wishing well
Where kissing lovers hallucinate
Upon the fields of wonders in the sky\'\' such a beautiful thing to say
truly enjoyed :-)
February 24th, 2018 10:23
Double Edged Sword.
FredPeyer said:
I like both, title and poem! What I get from your poem is that just about everything we do is a \'double edged sword\', just like everything can be both good and bad, depending on how it is used or done. Your poem made me think!
February 21st, 2018 10:49
FredPeyer said:
I like both, title and poem! What I get from your poem is that just about everything we do is a \'double edged sword\', just like everything can be both good and bad, depending on how it is used or done. Your poem made me think!
February 21st, 2018 10:49
Weeping Away The World.
Fay Slimm. said:
The spirit which oozed from each line of this powerful lament touches the core Kevin - the poem itself bleeds with compassion and has to be one of your best. Thank you for sharing the pain of those \"unnoticed\" yet who still grasp at the \"love of life\". Must have this among my favourites.
February 21st, 2018 03:03
Fay Slimm. said:
The spirit which oozed from each line of this powerful lament touches the core Kevin - the poem itself bleeds with compassion and has to be one of your best. Thank you for sharing the pain of those \"unnoticed\" yet who still grasp at the \"love of life\". Must have this among my favourites.
February 21st, 2018 03:03
Weeping Away The World.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write Kevin and those last two lines are so true.
February 21st, 2018 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write Kevin and those last two lines are so true.
February 21st, 2018 01:17
The Most Wonderful Things.
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, even greater lines
-For our image of life, there seems to be an illusion of delusion
-Expression of inner belief may not fool an intellectual thief
-Stars shine their hearts out when we look up with crying eyes
-And still, we mess about with the power of our own negativity
-And in our hearts, we fight for the freedom of ourselves to live
and many more!
February 15th, 2018 16:43
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, even greater lines
-For our image of life, there seems to be an illusion of delusion
-Expression of inner belief may not fool an intellectual thief
-Stars shine their hearts out when we look up with crying eyes
-And still, we mess about with the power of our own negativity
-And in our hearts, we fight for the freedom of ourselves to live
and many more!
February 15th, 2018 16:43
The Most Wonderful Things.
Accidental Poet said:
Another marvelous write Kevin. Straight into my favs.
February 14th, 2018 20:27
Accidental Poet said:
Another marvelous write Kevin. Straight into my favs.
February 14th, 2018 20:27
Help Me Please.
Jo Middleton said:
This was such a sweet and beautiful read.. amazing work!
February 14th, 2018 16:31
Jo Middleton said:
This was such a sweet and beautiful read.. amazing work!
February 14th, 2018 16:31
The Most Wonderful Things.
malubotelho said:
Hello Kevin. Nice write. You only get better everyday.
February 14th, 2018 12:59
malubotelho said:
Hello Kevin. Nice write. You only get better everyday.
February 14th, 2018 12:59
Then Came The Sadness.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, sometimes we have to go through the whole gamut of emotions like sadness, and loss and more, before we realize that all we can really do is accept the facts with grace. Great poem!
February 13th, 2018 20:58
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, sometimes we have to go through the whole gamut of emotions like sadness, and loss and more, before we realize that all we can really do is accept the facts with grace. Great poem!
February 13th, 2018 20:58
Then Came The Sadness.
dusk arising said:
Excellent closing line. Grace is so important. Grace nurtures self respect. Great deal of wisdom in your words sir.
I really related to this piece.
February 12th, 2018 19:41
dusk arising said:
Excellent closing line. Grace is so important. Grace nurtures self respect. Great deal of wisdom in your words sir.
I really related to this piece.
February 12th, 2018 19:41
Sugar Sweet She Shone.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, you keep surprising me, positively for sure! Some great lines. I like the \'curtains pulled and we stood there both unaware\'. To me that says \'reality interfered\'! Well written!
February 10th, 2018 19:43
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, you keep surprising me, positively for sure! Some great lines. I like the \'curtains pulled and we stood there both unaware\'. To me that says \'reality interfered\'! Well written!
February 10th, 2018 19:43
Sugar Sweet She Shone.
Poetic Dan said:
Outstandingly you my friend
Such a great read from start to end
Left me with so many songs
With a new love for the pen.
Many thanks again
February 9th, 2018 09:36
Poetic Dan said:
Outstandingly you my friend
Such a great read from start to end
Left me with so many songs
With a new love for the pen.
Many thanks again
February 9th, 2018 09:36
What Ever God Was Hiding Up His Sleeve.
dusk arising said:
What an amazing piece you\'ve written here. Good to read the positivity which remains within you.
Goes into my favourites.
February 7th, 2018 03:36
dusk arising said:
What an amazing piece you\'ve written here. Good to read the positivity which remains within you.
Goes into my favourites.
February 7th, 2018 03:36
What Ever God Was Hiding Up His Sleeve.
Laura🌻 said:
Kevin,
If you were my son, I would say you were the light of my life! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this write of yours! You are so brave to share personal information with us. Your faith and strength is to be admired! As AP said...ROCK ON MY FRIEND!!
~Laura~
February 6th, 2018 22:38
Laura🌻 said:
Kevin,
If you were my son, I would say you were the light of my life! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this write of yours! You are so brave to share personal information with us. Your faith and strength is to be admired! As AP said...ROCK ON MY FRIEND!!
~Laura~
February 6th, 2018 22:38
What Ever God Was Hiding Up His Sleeve.
Accidental Poet said:
Kevin, you were born the same day as my adoptive mother. You\'ve lived a tough life, and you\'re still here giving it your best. You are to be commended for your faith and endurance Kevin. We\'ve never met, but I\'m proud to call you friend. Rock on bro. ; )
February 6th, 2018 19:25
Accidental Poet said:
Kevin, you were born the same day as my adoptive mother. You\'ve lived a tough life, and you\'re still here giving it your best. You are to be commended for your faith and endurance Kevin. We\'ve never met, but I\'m proud to call you friend. Rock on bro. ; )
February 6th, 2018 19:25
Help Me Please.
Caring dove said:
this is very sweet and lovely .. i especially love the ending :-)
February 5th, 2018 14:32
Caring dove said:
this is very sweet and lovely .. i especially love the ending :-)
February 5th, 2018 14:32
For Gracious Greetings.
Caring dove said:
beautiful !! :-) such a deeply lovely piece of writing , my favourite lines.. \'\'As we watched the fish swimming under the love of swan lake\'\'
\'\'Roses and daffodils filled up the room so please open the door\'\'
\'\'Hilltops brimming with a view from the sky like a red ruby stone\'\'
you have some lovely way with words, truly beautiful
February 5th, 2018 07:25
Caring dove said:
beautiful !! :-) such a deeply lovely piece of writing , my favourite lines.. \'\'As we watched the fish swimming under the love of swan lake\'\'
\'\'Roses and daffodils filled up the room so please open the door\'\'
\'\'Hilltops brimming with a view from the sky like a red ruby stone\'\'
you have some lovely way with words, truly beautiful
February 5th, 2018 07:25
If Life Lets You Love.
Caring dove said:
a beautiful and lovely piece of writing , i especially love your mention of the sun and the moon disappearing , the feelings being sown together , you seem to love bringing nature into your poems and i think that is a very nice thing to do .. you bring in the moon , the sun , roses , daffodils, the sea.. all which makes me love the poem even more.
February 5th, 2018 07:16
Caring dove said:
a beautiful and lovely piece of writing , i especially love your mention of the sun and the moon disappearing , the feelings being sown together , you seem to love bringing nature into your poems and i think that is a very nice thing to do .. you bring in the moon , the sun , roses , daffodils, the sea.. all which makes me love the poem even more.
February 5th, 2018 07:16
If Life Lets You Love.
Laura🌻 said:
Oh Kevin, that is truly
a beautiful write!
“...when love smiles it cries...”
These words I cannot shake
out of my head! I keep
thinking of the times I’ve
looked at a loved ones
knowing they would be gone!
( one committed suicide, two have died of cancer)
Loved them dearly! They
would see my smile, but not my tears! I was crying on the inside!
Thank you for this amazing
share!
~Laura~
February 4th, 2018 20:59
Laura🌻 said:
Oh Kevin, that is truly
a beautiful write!
“...when love smiles it cries...”
These words I cannot shake
out of my head! I keep
thinking of the times I’ve
looked at a loved ones
knowing they would be gone!
( one committed suicide, two have died of cancer)
Loved them dearly! They
would see my smile, but not my tears! I was crying on the inside!
Thank you for this amazing
share!
~Laura~
February 4th, 2018 20:59
Although It\'s All I Can Remember.
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Kevin! Keep on remembering that \'sunnyside of the street\'! Love the rhyming too, very clever! You kind of sound like a sailor with a girl in every harbor! :-)
February 1st, 2018 13:27
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Kevin! Keep on remembering that \'sunnyside of the street\'! Love the rhyming too, very clever! You kind of sound like a sailor with a girl in every harbor! :-)
February 1st, 2018 13:27
For Gracious Greetings.
FineB said:
Thank you Kevin.
A wonderful write and beautiful poem.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:36
FineB said:
Thank you Kevin.
A wonderful write and beautiful poem.
Keep writing
FineB
January 31st, 2018 04:36
For Gracious Greetings.
FredPeyer said:
\'The bubble we spend our time in\'...sometimes it does feel like we live in a bubble, not knowing when it will burst! Great writing again, Kevin! Too many good lines to list them all.
January 29th, 2018 02:07
FredPeyer said:
\'The bubble we spend our time in\'...sometimes it does feel like we live in a bubble, not knowing when it will burst! Great writing again, Kevin! Too many good lines to list them all.
January 29th, 2018 02:07
She Broke All The Rules.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, may that revealed love be with you always.
January 28th, 2018 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, may that revealed love be with you always.
January 28th, 2018 02:00
She Broke All The Rules.
FredPeyer said:
I think AP is right, Kevin. You gotta show this to her! Beautifully written. Love the lines about the \'old lovers kiss\'!
January 27th, 2018 22:03
FredPeyer said:
I think AP is right, Kevin. You gotta show this to her! Beautifully written. Love the lines about the \'old lovers kiss\'!
January 27th, 2018 22:03
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