Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight
It\'s Monday
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem brings to mind the saying ... \"Do what you love and you\'ll never work a day in your life.\" Your poem reflects that theme very well, WBL. I enjoyed it!
August 7th, 2017 16:00
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem brings to mind the saying ... \"Do what you love and you\'ll never work a day in your life.\" Your poem reflects that theme very well, WBL. I enjoyed it!
August 7th, 2017 16:00
It\'s Monday
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Oh, my Write! You sure do tell it like it is, not like many people do. I love the way the words just seem to flow.. Good write, good message as well! Thanks so much for sharing!
August 7th, 2017 15:53
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Oh, my Write! You sure do tell it like it is, not like many people do. I love the way the words just seem to flow.. Good write, good message as well! Thanks so much for sharing!
August 7th, 2017 15:53
It\'s Monday
Hopey_xx said:
Lol! Great poem Wbl, or should I say grate? Thanks for the smiles to get rid of our monday morning blues :)
August 7th, 2017 15:15
Hopey_xx said:
Lol! Great poem Wbl, or should I say grate? Thanks for the smiles to get rid of our monday morning blues :)
August 7th, 2017 15:15
It\'s Monday
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY for another of your Poems which starts off serious but ends up ~ up the Bosses A** ! I have always loved my JOBS too ! At work they call me SMILER ~ which is nice ! Happy Hugs ~ BRIAN
August 7th, 2017 10:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY for another of your Poems which starts off serious but ends up ~ up the Bosses A** ! I have always loved my JOBS too ! At work they call me SMILER ~ which is nice ! Happy Hugs ~ BRIAN
August 7th, 2017 10:06
It\'s Monday
Michael Edwards said:
You never cease to give us a smile - thanks WBL
August 7th, 2017 09:15
Michael Edwards said:
You never cease to give us a smile - thanks WBL
August 7th, 2017 09:15
Look Both Ways
Night Owl said:
Nice! I often have this conversation with myself...
August 7th, 2017 02:32
Night Owl said:
Nice! I often have this conversation with myself...
August 7th, 2017 02:32
Who Needs Weeds?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true when applied to people but with those in the garden weeds are only plants in the wrong place.
August 7th, 2017 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true when applied to people but with those in the garden weeds are only plants in the wrong place.
August 7th, 2017 01:34
Who Needs Weeds?
Christina8 said:
A never ending battle in the garden and sometimes in life. Great write!
August 6th, 2017 15:59
Christina8 said:
A never ending battle in the garden and sometimes in life. Great write!
August 6th, 2017 15:59
Who Needs Weeds?
FredPeyer said:
WBL, the problem is that some weeds are so beautiful. And they serve the bees too, so something good can be seen as well. Otherwise, completely agree, even people we consider \'weeds\' may have some good in them somewhere, if we look deep and long enough. But then we have to wonder if it is worth the effort.
August 6th, 2017 15:11
FredPeyer said:
WBL, the problem is that some weeds are so beautiful. And they serve the bees too, so something good can be seen as well. Otherwise, completely agree, even people we consider \'weeds\' may have some good in them somewhere, if we look deep and long enough. But then we have to wonder if it is worth the effort.
August 6th, 2017 15:11
Who Needs Weeds?
Fay Slimm. said:
This gave me a smile as I think I have their close relations in my garden patch !!
August 6th, 2017 14:34
Fay Slimm. said:
This gave me a smile as I think I have their close relations in my garden patch !!
August 6th, 2017 14:34
Who Needs Weeds?
Michael Edwards said:
Ahh - I fell a tad sorry for the weeds - after all they are only plants growing where us humans don\'t want them to grow. Being a vicious human type person I an always yanking them out and am beginning to feel a bit guilty but I still love the write.
August 6th, 2017 14:20
Michael Edwards said:
Ahh - I fell a tad sorry for the weeds - after all they are only plants growing where us humans don\'t want them to grow. Being a vicious human type person I an always yanking them out and am beginning to feel a bit guilty but I still love the write.
August 6th, 2017 14:20
Who Needs Weeds?
orchidee said:
Doh, I dunno! I water people\'s weeds as well as their plants, if I pop in while they\'re away on hols. I told them I\'m no gardener...... heehee.
Weeds - \"a waste of space\"? As certain people too?!
August 6th, 2017 09:41
orchidee said:
Doh, I dunno! I water people\'s weeds as well as their plants, if I pop in while they\'re away on hols. I told them I\'m no gardener...... heehee.
Weeds - \"a waste of space\"? As certain people too?!
August 6th, 2017 09:41
Who Needs Weeds?
Accidental Poet said:
I wonder. Is it people can be like weeds? Or weeds can be like people? Excellent write..
August 6th, 2017 09:40
Accidental Poet said:
I wonder. Is it people can be like weeds? Or weeds can be like people? Excellent write..
August 6th, 2017 09:40
All Washed Up
FredPeyer said:
Great sponge/cleaning/throwing out/shopping poem. Am sure that with just a little bit of digging I would find metaphors for all kind of life situations here! Imagination at its best.
August 5th, 2017 13:09
FredPeyer said:
Great sponge/cleaning/throwing out/shopping poem. Am sure that with just a little bit of digging I would find metaphors for all kind of life situations here! Imagination at its best.
August 5th, 2017 13:09
All Washed Up
orchidee said:
A fine write WBL lol. Much more of this and I shall be feeling sorry for the lamp-post on a wet day. I shall bring it indoors, or get a 15 foot umbrella for it - or however tall lamp-posts are! heehee.
August 5th, 2017 10:49
orchidee said:
A fine write WBL lol. Much more of this and I shall be feeling sorry for the lamp-post on a wet day. I shall bring it indoors, or get a 15 foot umbrella for it - or however tall lamp-posts are! heehee.
August 5th, 2017 10:49
All Washed Up
Michael Edwards said:
A lifting write - I also use them for painting (art type painting that is - and also scrub buds).
August 5th, 2017 10:18
Michael Edwards said:
A lifting write - I also use them for painting (art type painting that is - and also scrub buds).
August 5th, 2017 10:18
All Washed Up
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhh HONEY ~ I love sponges (and sponge cake !). Love to visit Greece and the Islands and feel and purchase the Natural Sponges. I worked on Polyurethanes so I love the synthetic sponges as well ! Your poem is a GAS so i empathise with your attitude ! EVERY SYNTHETIC SPONGE HAS ITS DAY ! Love your poem ~ everyday & funny ! Thanks for sharing ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN
August 5th, 2017 09:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhh HONEY ~ I love sponges (and sponge cake !). Love to visit Greece and the Islands and feel and purchase the Natural Sponges. I worked on Polyurethanes so I love the synthetic sponges as well ! Your poem is a GAS so i empathise with your attitude ! EVERY SYNTHETIC SPONGE HAS ITS DAY ! Love your poem ~ everyday & funny ! Thanks for sharing ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN
August 5th, 2017 09:36
All Washed Up
Goldfinch60 said:
I wonder how many sponges we have in our lives. Good fun write.
August 5th, 2017 08:57
Goldfinch60 said:
I wonder how many sponges we have in our lives. Good fun write.
August 5th, 2017 08:57
Look Both Ways
Christina8 said:
Very insightful poem. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing!
August 4th, 2017 19:34
Christina8 said:
Very insightful poem. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing!
August 4th, 2017 19:34
Look Both Ways
FredPeyer said:
Look both ways....no train......but you missed the truck in front of you!
Great poem WBL, so true, but sometimes we do look in the wrong direction.
August 4th, 2017 15:00
FredPeyer said:
Look both ways....no train......but you missed the truck in front of you!
Great poem WBL, so true, but sometimes we do look in the wrong direction.
August 4th, 2017 15:00
Look Both Ways
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise council and written in wonderful rhyme. You capture the feeling of being caught between tracks.
August 4th, 2017 12:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise council and written in wonderful rhyme. You capture the feeling of being caught between tracks.
August 4th, 2017 12:52
Look Both Ways
Michael Edwards said:
They can be so dangerous - when we reach a crossing we need time to reflect - do like this WBL
August 4th, 2017 11:41
Michael Edwards said:
They can be so dangerous - when we reach a crossing we need time to reflect - do like this WBL
August 4th, 2017 11:41
Look Both Ways
whisperingquill said:
Damn, Write this is pretty tight
Profound within suspended sundown
emitting enhanced auric sound
strumming the influx of epiphanies impulse
Nicely done
Really deep \"it\'s only you, to hold yourself back\" I love that so damn true 👍🏼
August 4th, 2017 11:28
whisperingquill said:
Damn, Write this is pretty tight
Profound within suspended sundown
emitting enhanced auric sound
strumming the influx of epiphanies impulse
Nicely done
Really deep \"it\'s only you, to hold yourself back\" I love that so damn true 👍🏼
August 4th, 2017 11:28
Look Both Ways
Tony36 said:
I think we could all use a crossing gate in our lives. Great write
August 4th, 2017 10:24
Tony36 said:
I think we could all use a crossing gate in our lives. Great write
August 4th, 2017 10:24
Look Both Ways
orchidee said:
Yes, fine write WBL. Now Outback knows I gets confused with thinking and non-thinking, and all that. By the time I\'ve \"thought\" about going over the crossroads the train will knock me over! (What I am wittering on about?). heehee.
August 4th, 2017 10:03
orchidee said:
Yes, fine write WBL. Now Outback knows I gets confused with thinking and non-thinking, and all that. By the time I\'ve \"thought\" about going over the crossroads the train will knock me over! (What I am wittering on about?). heehee.
August 4th, 2017 10:03
Look Both Ways
Goldfinch60 said:
All those crossingswe take can be scary, but once crossed add to our experience. Good write.
August 4th, 2017 08:13
Goldfinch60 said:
All those crossingswe take can be scary, but once crossed add to our experience. Good write.
August 4th, 2017 08:13
A Hat For That
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing HONEY ! Like you I wear many hats in the week ~ some invisible (like my \"Hat of Odes\") others have to be visible for H & S reasons ! like my Crash Helmet ~ My Hard Hat (when i\'m on a Building Site or in the Mountains ! } and My Chefs Hat (if I\'m in the College Kitchen !) Today your hat definitely had a \"P\" on it and not a \"D\" ~ Hugs BRIAN
August 3rd, 2017 14:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing HONEY ! Like you I wear many hats in the week ~ some invisible (like my \"Hat of Odes\") others have to be visible for H & S reasons ! like my Crash Helmet ~ My Hard Hat (when i\'m on a Building Site or in the Mountains ! } and My Chefs Hat (if I\'m in the College Kitchen !) Today your hat definitely had a \"P\" on it and not a \"D\" ~ Hugs BRIAN
August 3rd, 2017 14:31
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