Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
WHITE HAIR AND WALKING STICKS
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
It sounds like a great afternoon!
I enjoyed your great poem!
The only one I’ve met up close and personal of the Beatles is Sir Paul at Madison Square Garden thanks to a mutual friend of ours! I do enjoy their music!
Beautiful daffodils! I like the color contrast!
~Laura
March 29th, 2018 08:57
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
It sounds like a great afternoon!
I enjoyed your great poem!
The only one I’ve met up close and personal of the Beatles is Sir Paul at Madison Square Garden thanks to a mutual friend of ours! I do enjoy their music!
Beautiful daffodils! I like the color contrast!
~Laura
March 29th, 2018 08:57
WHITE HAIR AND WALKING STICKS
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Michael, even the Rock & Rollers are all turning grey now. Some have even past on to a higher stage to perform for a higher audience. I saw Gordon Lightfoot last fall, and he\'s not the young sprout he used to be. But neither am I. Love the poem and photo.
March 29th, 2018 04:01
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Michael, even the Rock & Rollers are all turning grey now. Some have even past on to a higher stage to perform for a higher audience. I saw Gordon Lightfoot last fall, and he\'s not the young sprout he used to be. But neither am I. Love the poem and photo.
March 29th, 2018 04:01
WHITE HAIR AND WALKING STICKS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the DAFFS ~ I\'m a THIRD Welsh (and 1/3 Scottish 1/3 Irish and 1/3 English !) The last Beatles Tribute Band I heard were all White Haired or BALD ~ But then Sir Paul is 75 and John & George are both partaking of Glory ! Great poem based on an actual event ! Pleases check \"Annie\'s Song for Angela ~ Thanks BRIAN
March 29th, 2018 03:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love the DAFFS ~ I\'m a THIRD Welsh (and 1/3 Scottish 1/3 Irish and 1/3 English !) The last Beatles Tribute Band I heard were all White Haired or BALD ~ But then Sir Paul is 75 and John & George are both partaking of Glory ! Great poem based on an actual event ! Pleases check \"Annie\'s Song for Angela ~ Thanks BRIAN
March 29th, 2018 03:38
WHITE HAIR AND WALKING STICKS
orchidee said:
Oohh, grey and white hair makes one look distinguished I think. I\'m a little grey around the gills myself! Did they rave all night?! Or take Horlicks or cocoa and be in bed by 9pm?
March 29th, 2018 02:00
orchidee said:
Oohh, grey and white hair makes one look distinguished I think. I\'m a little grey around the gills myself! Did they rave all night?! Or take Horlicks or cocoa and be in bed by 9pm?
March 29th, 2018 02:00
WHITE HAIR AND WALKING STICKS
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, at least they got to the gig.
March 29th, 2018 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, at least they got to the gig.
March 29th, 2018 01:30
THE OWNERS ARE REALLY TO BLAME
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Great poem.
Alas all creatures great and small are not infallible yes all of this down to the owners.
Keep writing
FineB
March 28th, 2018 13:13
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Great poem.
Alas all creatures great and small are not infallible yes all of this down to the owners.
Keep writing
FineB
March 28th, 2018 13:13
THE OWNERS ARE REALLY TO BLAME
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
UNPOOPULAR MICHAEL ~ That is too kind a word ! If you were not one of my best Friends on MPS (I have a great respect for you !) I would riposte with a scourge on all DOGS ~ but I won\'t ! I can\'t have a CAT in a FLAT or even a CAT in a HAT. My Parents still have Cats and I visit often just to discuss Relativity etc now that Stephen Hawking has been called Home to Glory ! Dogs can be Domesticated (as you know) and Dogs in our extended Family are well behaved ~ and know their place ! Cats on the other hand are Mystical and Majestic and consider themselves to be well above Humans in the pecking order. They are too aloof and elegant to be domesticated and as for being constrained on a lead ~ it would unleash worldwide CATACLYSM ! They don\'t need us to feed Pus and the large colonies of Feral Cats in Athens and other Cities are a good example ! BUT they are very CrAfTy and in return for regular GOURMET WHISKERS etc they well allow you a stroke and will purrrrrrrrrr (not an aggressive BAAAAAARK) and will rub your leg in return ! Cats just do \"what comes naturally\" ~ just like Teenagers ! and we should LOVE THEM (Cats & Teens) for it ! I case my rest Yours BRIAN I am very tolerant today because (as you know) it is my DAY of ENGAGEMENT ~ Your Best friend on MPS ~ BRIAN ~ ANGELA sends her Love ~ her parents are CANINOPHILES ~ but I still love her even though I know she will want a DOG when we have Kids or (GOD forbid !) earlier !
March 28th, 2018 05:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
UNPOOPULAR MICHAEL ~ That is too kind a word ! If you were not one of my best Friends on MPS (I have a great respect for you !) I would riposte with a scourge on all DOGS ~ but I won\'t ! I can\'t have a CAT in a FLAT or even a CAT in a HAT. My Parents still have Cats and I visit often just to discuss Relativity etc now that Stephen Hawking has been called Home to Glory ! Dogs can be Domesticated (as you know) and Dogs in our extended Family are well behaved ~ and know their place ! Cats on the other hand are Mystical and Majestic and consider themselves to be well above Humans in the pecking order. They are too aloof and elegant to be domesticated and as for being constrained on a lead ~ it would unleash worldwide CATACLYSM ! They don\'t need us to feed Pus and the large colonies of Feral Cats in Athens and other Cities are a good example ! BUT they are very CrAfTy and in return for regular GOURMET WHISKERS etc they well allow you a stroke and will purrrrrrrrrr (not an aggressive BAAAAAARK) and will rub your leg in return ! Cats just do \"what comes naturally\" ~ just like Teenagers ! and we should LOVE THEM (Cats & Teens) for it ! I case my rest Yours BRIAN I am very tolerant today because (as you know) it is my DAY of ENGAGEMENT ~ Your Best friend on MPS ~ BRIAN ~ ANGELA sends her Love ~ her parents are CANINOPHILES ~ but I still love her even though I know she will want a DOG when we have Kids or (GOD forbid !) earlier !
March 28th, 2018 05:42
THE OWNERS ARE REALLY TO BLAME
orchidee said:
I always thought cats clean up after themselves. I\'ve seen them digging holes to do their business, then covering it up again. Then they wash themselves. They can be independent though. You couldn\'t play \'fetch\' with Tiddles as you can play it with Fido!
March 28th, 2018 01:55
orchidee said:
I always thought cats clean up after themselves. I\'ve seen them digging holes to do their business, then covering it up again. Then they wash themselves. They can be independent though. You couldn\'t play \'fetch\' with Tiddles as you can play it with Fido!
March 28th, 2018 01:55
THE OWNERS ARE REALLY TO BLAME
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Michael, you get my vote. As a bird watcher for over sixty years I find that cats are arrogant monsters.
The statistics show that for every bird taken for food by a raptor four hundred get taken by cats to paly with!
March 28th, 2018 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Michael, you get my vote. As a bird watcher for over sixty years I find that cats are arrogant monsters.
The statistics show that for every bird taken for food by a raptor four hundred get taken by cats to paly with!
March 28th, 2018 01:02
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
orchidee said:
She got there yet - in that boat - wherever she\'s going?!
March 27th, 2018 14:34
orchidee said:
She got there yet - in that boat - wherever she\'s going?!
March 27th, 2018 14:34
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
Lorna said:
No cursor jumping so the picture was perfect - my your gardens are so far advanced from ours at this time of year..... loved the positive of this poem! She\'s chooses happiness!
March 27th, 2018 07:05
Lorna said:
No cursor jumping so the picture was perfect - my your gardens are so far advanced from ours at this time of year..... loved the positive of this poem! She\'s chooses happiness!
March 27th, 2018 07:05
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ Sound like all the Ladies ~ I have ever known ! Knocked down ~ BUT ~ never knocked out ! Love PRIMROSES ~ very PRIM & very ROSY ! Sorry you\'ve dropped the HEADER ~ write to JULIAN ! I love them and mine (PETS) is very apposite today ! Love the tenor of you ode ! Yours BRIAN
March 27th, 2018 04:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MIKE ~ Sound like all the Ladies ~ I have ever known ! Knocked down ~ BUT ~ never knocked out ! Love PRIMROSES ~ very PRIM & very ROSY ! Sorry you\'ve dropped the HEADER ~ write to JULIAN ! I love them and mine (PETS) is very apposite today ! Love the tenor of you ode ! Yours BRIAN
March 27th, 2018 04:18
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
Laura🌻 said:
A brilliantly penned poem, Michael! So vivid!
As vivid as the beautiful primroses from your garden (I assume)!
~Laura~
March 27th, 2018 04:15
Laura🌻 said:
A brilliantly penned poem, Michael! So vivid!
As vivid as the beautiful primroses from your garden (I assume)!
~Laura~
March 27th, 2018 04:15
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
Fay Slimm. said:
A woman\'s answer to adversity so aptly described in this super write Michael.
March 27th, 2018 04:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A woman\'s answer to adversity so aptly described in this super write Michael.
March 27th, 2018 04:05
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, you old romantic you.
March 27th, 2018 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, you old romantic you.
March 27th, 2018 02:09
IN TONES OF GRATITUDE
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Hope her boat had no holes in it? Did she get to the other shore, wherever she was going?!
March 27th, 2018 01:50
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Hope her boat had no holes in it? Did she get to the other shore, wherever she was going?!
March 27th, 2018 01:50
Alone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing MIKE ~ Perfect Poem \'n Pic
Very sad situation for the LADY ! If I\'m at a Dance
were there are WALLFLOWERS ~ I always invite
then to Dance and then often another Man will !
I adore HELLEBORE
SENRYU ~ I like too !
One of the first things I teach my Pensioner\'s
Poetry Class is the essential difference between
A HAIKU and a SENRYU ! Yours is a SENRYU !
Please check my BOAT RACE ~ Thanks BRIAN
March 26th, 2018 06:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing MIKE ~ Perfect Poem \'n Pic
Very sad situation for the LADY ! If I\'m at a Dance
were there are WALLFLOWERS ~ I always invite
then to Dance and then often another Man will !
I adore HELLEBORE
SENRYU ~ I like too !
One of the first things I teach my Pensioner\'s
Poetry Class is the essential difference between
A HAIKU and a SENRYU ! Yours is a SENRYU !
Please check my BOAT RACE ~ Thanks BRIAN
March 26th, 2018 06:02
Alone
Lorna said:
Perfect poem and of course your artist\'s eye caught the flower just like a painting!
March 26th, 2018 05:39
Lorna said:
Perfect poem and of course your artist\'s eye caught the flower just like a painting!
March 26th, 2018 05:39
Alone
Goldfinch60 said:
Super senryu
Connecting us with nature
With your hellebore
March 26th, 2018 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Super senryu
Connecting us with nature
With your hellebore
March 26th, 2018 01:16
GENEALOGY
Resa71 said:
Thank you for brightening my morning!
I needed a smile and a laugh today!
Resa.
March 25th, 2018 13:10
Resa71 said:
Thank you for brightening my morning!
I needed a smile and a laugh today!
Resa.
March 25th, 2018 13:10
GENEALOGY
Lorna said:
Ha ha Michael....... short poem for such a prolific family............
March 25th, 2018 05:15
Lorna said:
Ha ha Michael....... short poem for such a prolific family............
March 25th, 2018 05:15
GENEALOGY
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
First of all, I love the painting!
Secondly...
Thank you for the laugh!
It was great!
As I commented to Hood and Gold, this is a great Sunday morning! Reading each write and the comments was enjoyable, engaging, and entertaining!
Have a great Sunday!
~Laura~
March 25th, 2018 03:51
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
First of all, I love the painting!
Secondly...
Thank you for the laugh!
It was great!
As I commented to Hood and Gold, this is a great Sunday morning! Reading each write and the comments was enjoyable, engaging, and entertaining!
Have a great Sunday!
~Laura~
March 25th, 2018 03:51
GENEALOGY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ADAM & EVE ~ Thank GOD
It wasn\'t ADAM & STEVE
Their Genealogy would have been small
In essence ~ NOTHING at all !
Thanks for sharing MIKE very droll
Yours BRIAN ~ Love the SPRING
MEADOW abstract ~ awesome !
March 25th, 2018 03:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ADAM & EVE ~ Thank GOD
It wasn\'t ADAM & STEVE
Their Genealogy would have been small
In essence ~ NOTHING at all !
Thanks for sharing MIKE very droll
Yours BRIAN ~ Love the SPRING
MEADOW abstract ~ awesome !
March 25th, 2018 03:30
GENEALOGY
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Erm yes. Only one branch on it at the time - those two themselves?
Oh I won\'t get started on \'me, myself, and I\'. is that one person or three people? The family tree would be an awful jumble then!
March 25th, 2018 02:13
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Erm yes. Only one branch on it at the time - those two themselves?
Oh I won\'t get started on \'me, myself, and I\'. is that one person or three people? The family tree would be an awful jumble then!
March 25th, 2018 02:13
FLAKES FALL
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As snow flakes fall
Children bawl
Mother hit the wall
Old Folk fall
Teenagers have a BALL
As snow flakes fall !
Love the snowy abstract
and the Poetic Form
and the POEM
Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
March 24th, 2018 18:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As snow flakes fall
Children bawl
Mother hit the wall
Old Folk fall
Teenagers have a BALL
As snow flakes fall !
Love the snowy abstract
and the Poetic Form
and the POEM
Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
March 24th, 2018 18:35
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