Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICK No 52
Lorna said:
There HAS to be an Upper Brayling..... love it! And the hellebores are delightful! Thanks for the garden glimpse!
April 11th, 2018 04:40
Lorna said:
There HAS to be an Upper Brayling..... love it! And the hellebores are delightful! Thanks for the garden glimpse!
April 11th, 2018 04:40
ANOTHER ESSENCE
Lorna said:
Yes! Elation at the train rolling! I so agree! Even the commuter train!
As for the rhyme style:
Me fixing the dinner
for all of the sinners
April 11th, 2018 04:24
Lorna said:
Yes! Elation at the train rolling! I so agree! Even the commuter train!
As for the rhyme style:
Me fixing the dinner
for all of the sinners
April 11th, 2018 04:24
ANOTHER ESSENCE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Are you Mr Berles, married to Cilla?!
April 11th, 2018 01:53
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Are you Mr Berles, married to Cilla?!
April 11th, 2018 01:53
ANOTHER ESSENCE
Nicholas Browning said:
An interesting concept to be sure. Haven\'t seen one of these before, but I quite like it.
April 11th, 2018 01:26
Nicholas Browning said:
An interesting concept to be sure. Haven\'t seen one of these before, but I quite like it.
April 11th, 2018 01:26
LIMERICK No 52
ron parrish aka wordman said:
buddy you are good with these writes
April 10th, 2018 21:16
ron parrish aka wordman said:
buddy you are good with these writes
April 10th, 2018 21:16
LIMERICK No 52
Christina8 said:
Absolutely enjoyed the pictures of flowers! Nice limerick!
April 10th, 2018 17:02
Christina8 said:
Absolutely enjoyed the pictures of flowers! Nice limerick!
April 10th, 2018 17:02
AN ESSENCE
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A great pic of your double daffodil! I like your shortie and its name! Thank you for defining what āAn Essenceā is so I donāt have to look it up and be disappointed that I canāt find it! Lol
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 16:24
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A great pic of your double daffodil! I like your shortie and its name! Thank you for defining what āAn Essenceā is so I donāt have to look it up and be disappointed that I canāt find it! Lol
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 16:24
WATER DROPLETS
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A beautiful Rondelet and garden wall! A great pic! The pics of your garden paint a beautiful picture! Your village sounds delightful!
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 15:57
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A beautiful Rondelet and garden wall! A great pic! The pics of your garden paint a beautiful picture! Your village sounds delightful!
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 15:57
LIMERICK No 52
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Love the pic! I enjoyed the limerick! Is there such a place as Upper Brayling?
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 15:15
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Love the pic! I enjoyed the limerick! Is there such a place as Upper Brayling?
~Laura~
April 10th, 2018 15:15
LIMERICK No 52
Daveyboyz said:
Great poem, the only limerics I know are unrepeatably vulgar.
April 10th, 2018 05:10
Daveyboyz said:
Great poem, the only limerics I know are unrepeatably vulgar.
April 10th, 2018 05:10
LIMERICK No 52
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Similar to the Fire Exit: They found Bill Posters yet, sometimes known as Bill Stickers? And why they want to prosecute him?!
April 10th, 2018 02:00
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Similar to the Fire Exit: They found Bill Posters yet, sometimes known as Bill Stickers? And why they want to prosecute him?!
April 10th, 2018 02:00
LIMERICK No 52
Nicholas Browning said:
I like that you write about so many broad subjects. Is it because you find them inspirational, interesting, or both? Whichever it be friend, your writing always astonishes.
April 10th, 2018 00:18
Nicholas Browning said:
I like that you write about so many broad subjects. Is it because you find them inspirational, interesting, or both? Whichever it be friend, your writing always astonishes.
April 10th, 2018 00:18
AN ESSENCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
On your BIKE ~ MIKE
Short SPIKE ~ I LIKE
A SPIKE is a riposte poem !
Thanks for sharing and educating. The recent
Warm weather (65F) has encouraged the
double DAFFS in our town which is now a
Blaze of White & Yellow. Yours BRIAN
Please check today\'s Poem ~ Ta ~ B.
April 9th, 2018 04:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
On your BIKE ~ MIKE
Short SPIKE ~ I LIKE
A SPIKE is a riposte poem !
Thanks for sharing and educating. The recent
Warm weather (65F) has encouraged the
double DAFFS in our town which is now a
Blaze of White & Yellow. Yours BRIAN
Please check today\'s Poem ~ Ta ~ B.
April 9th, 2018 04:56
AN ESSENCE
Lorna said:
Hi Michael - Happens that I like short concise poems as well - however while you have very logical patterns you study and stick to, I think in my case it is about short attention span.........
April 9th, 2018 04:23
Lorna said:
Hi Michael - Happens that I like short concise poems as well - however while you have very logical patterns you study and stick to, I think in my case it is about short attention span.........
April 9th, 2018 04:23
AN ESSENCE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. You sorting out those syllables?! Ms Berles helped me.
April 9th, 2018 01:39
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. You sorting out those syllables?! Ms Berles helped me.
April 9th, 2018 01:39
WATER DROPLETS
Lorna said:
Perfect poem Michael and oooooooooooo love your garden wall and plants.... charm charm charm all over the place......... now this is what I think of when I imagine England......
April 8th, 2018 05:29
Lorna said:
Perfect poem Michael and oooooooooooo love your garden wall and plants.... charm charm charm all over the place......... now this is what I think of when I imagine England......
April 8th, 2018 05:29
WITH RESOLUTION
Fay Slimm. said:
Just the place for a drink and some quiet contemplation Michael -- love that sonnet with such positive finalƩ.
April 8th, 2018 04:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Just the place for a drink and some quiet contemplation Michael -- love that sonnet with such positive finalƩ.
April 8th, 2018 04:59
WATER DROPLETS
Fay Slimm. said:
Watery drops described by a talented writer of form and beauty - love that high wall for display and for privacy.
April 8th, 2018 04:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Watery drops described by a talented writer of form and beauty - love that high wall for display and for privacy.
April 8th, 2018 04:57
WATER DROPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ A true English Garden should have an IVY WALL (my Parent\'s Garage has one) or at least a Rose Hedge ! Thanks for the Rondelet ~ always a delight to recite ! For me WATER is the ultimate MOLECULE H - O - H (angular 105 degrees) and any poetic tribute WATER (the amphoteric hydroxide of hydrogen !) makes my day ! Thanks for explaining the classical form ~ All poetry sites should explain Classical Structural Form and Rhyme Pattern etc. Thanks BRIAN
April 8th, 2018 03:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ A true English Garden should have an IVY WALL (my Parent\'s Garage has one) or at least a Rose Hedge ! Thanks for the Rondelet ~ always a delight to recite ! For me WATER is the ultimate MOLECULE H - O - H (angular 105 degrees) and any poetic tribute WATER (the amphoteric hydroxide of hydrogen !) makes my day ! Thanks for explaining the classical form ~ All poetry sites should explain Classical Structural Form and Rhyme Pattern etc. Thanks BRIAN
April 8th, 2018 03:22
WATER DROPLETS
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yep, I must get those pesky syllables correct. Well ,they\'re not too pesky! lol
April 8th, 2018 01:43
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Yep, I must get those pesky syllables correct. Well ,they\'re not too pesky! lol
April 8th, 2018 01:43
WATER DROPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey to the ocean can be thrilling. Good write Michael.
April 8th, 2018 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey to the ocean can be thrilling. Good write Michael.
April 8th, 2018 00:45
WITH RESOLUTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for composing and sharing this excellent 6-6-2 Blank verse sonnet ! I can emphasise with the metaphor of Life & Sailing ! I was raised on the W Coast and live on the E Coast and have spent many hours \"messing about in boats\" I have lots of salt in my Blood Stream. Verse 1. When you are in mid-ocean ~ You always long for the shore Verse 2. WE learn more about the reality of life \"afloat\" than on the shore ! Verse 3. Sailors always believe the next cruise will be the BEST ! My Parents have a Patio outside the french Windows and this afternoon (55F) I enjoyed a Pot of Earl Grey and scones ! thanks for Sharing ~ BRIAN.
April 7th, 2018 16:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for composing and sharing this excellent 6-6-2 Blank verse sonnet ! I can emphasise with the metaphor of Life & Sailing ! I was raised on the W Coast and live on the E Coast and have spent many hours \"messing about in boats\" I have lots of salt in my Blood Stream. Verse 1. When you are in mid-ocean ~ You always long for the shore Verse 2. WE learn more about the reality of life \"afloat\" than on the shore ! Verse 3. Sailors always believe the next cruise will be the BEST ! My Parents have a Patio outside the french Windows and this afternoon (55F) I enjoyed a Pot of Earl Grey and scones ! thanks for Sharing ~ BRIAN.
April 7th, 2018 16:30
WITH RESOLUTION
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A great sonnet! I love your garden...especially that view outside your studio! I can picture you and your wife sitting there enjoying your gin and tonic! Perfect pic! Thank you for indulging us with your beautiful pics and super writes! Enjoy your day at the rummage sale. I hope a lot of funds are raised for a very worthy cause!
~Laura~
April 7th, 2018 09:13
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A great sonnet! I love your garden...especially that view outside your studio! I can picture you and your wife sitting there enjoying your gin and tonic! Perfect pic! Thank you for indulging us with your beautiful pics and super writes! Enjoy your day at the rummage sale. I hope a lot of funds are raised for a very worthy cause!
~Laura~
April 7th, 2018 09:13
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