Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a clever and artistic combo. of picture and verse - - one of your best for mysterious tale-telling Michael - loved every line.
March 20th, 2018 05:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a clever and artistic combo. of picture and verse - - one of your best for mysterious tale-telling Michael - loved every line.
March 20th, 2018 05:27
THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT
Lorna said:
The artist\'s touch to blend them out of sight........... they are invisible and still they seem to represent lovers from any time in the past - I think because of the lines: And on that pathway pointing east
but little modified by time..... the picture of course is perfect for the poem!!
March 20th, 2018 04:37
Lorna said:
The artist\'s touch to blend them out of sight........... they are invisible and still they seem to represent lovers from any time in the past - I think because of the lines: And on that pathway pointing east
but little modified by time..... the picture of course is perfect for the poem!!
March 20th, 2018 04:37
THEY BLENDED OUT OF SIGHT
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, \"they blended out of sight.\" is a wonderful line.
Intriguing artwork.
March 20th, 2018 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, \"they blended out of sight.\" is a wonderful line.
Intriguing artwork.
March 20th, 2018 02:16
SUPRESSIONS HOLD
willyweed said:
what dreams may come in a haze.
great art as usual ww
March 19th, 2018 15:09
willyweed said:
what dreams may come in a haze.
great art as usual ww
March 19th, 2018 15:09
SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem! I am also a fan of your abstracts.
March 19th, 2018 06:27
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem! I am also a fan of your abstracts.
March 19th, 2018 06:27
SUPRESSIONS HOLD
orchidee said:
Suppression, oppression, possession, depression, impression.. .. that\'s a lot of pressing. Who\'s pressing them buttons? And have you got your finger on any of them?!
March 19th, 2018 05:54
orchidee said:
Suppression, oppression, possession, depression, impression.. .. that\'s a lot of pressing. Who\'s pressing them buttons? And have you got your finger on any of them?!
March 19th, 2018 05:54
SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
When I first saw your
painting, I thought of
it as a Phantom!
I love the colors!
A great read! I hope
there’s a continuation
to this fine penned piece!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 04:18
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
When I first saw your
painting, I thought of
it as a Phantom!
I love the colors!
A great read! I hope
there’s a continuation
to this fine penned piece!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 04:18
SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael.
Love the abstract, back in your other style.
March 19th, 2018 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael.
Love the abstract, back in your other style.
March 19th, 2018 02:35
SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Lorna said:
Very haunting Michael......... I see so many versions of a woman in your picture - don\'t know if I am imagining it but it is haunting as well...... and love the burst of colors.......
March 19th, 2018 02:07
Lorna said:
Very haunting Michael......... I see so many versions of a woman in your picture - don\'t know if I am imagining it but it is haunting as well...... and love the burst of colors.......
March 19th, 2018 02:07
SUPRESSIONS HOLD
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Ooh what\'s she up to?!
March 19th, 2018 02:03
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Ooh what\'s she up to?!
March 19th, 2018 02:03
OUTSIDE THE BOX
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ for again breaking the boundaries of your BOX in both the Abstract and the Anthem (intriguing concept !). I love reptiles and the abstract clearly shows an alligator swimming to freedom outside its BOX (pool) in Tampa Zoo ! We are all trapped in boxes of our own making ~ some of ignorance as STEPHEN illustrated in his BOOK ~ A Short History of Time ~ Thanks for your comment ~ Yours BRIAN
March 18th, 2018 10:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ for again breaking the boundaries of your BOX in both the Abstract and the Anthem (intriguing concept !). I love reptiles and the abstract clearly shows an alligator swimming to freedom outside its BOX (pool) in Tampa Zoo ! We are all trapped in boxes of our own making ~ some of ignorance as STEPHEN illustrated in his BOOK ~ A Short History of Time ~ Thanks for your comment ~ Yours BRIAN
March 18th, 2018 10:18
OUTSIDE THE BOX
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This is a very interesting and intriguing write! It reminds me of what I see at the rehab center. Drug addicts take drugs to counterbalance the drugs they’re addicted to! As SL stated, it’s a trap!
Great painting, my friend!
~Laura~
March 18th, 2018 09:35
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This is a very interesting and intriguing write! It reminds me of what I see at the rehab center. Drug addicts take drugs to counterbalance the drugs they’re addicted to! As SL stated, it’s a trap!
Great painting, my friend!
~Laura~
March 18th, 2018 09:35
OUTSIDE THE BOX
willyweed said:
I find a dog in the picture and wisdom in the words. ww
March 18th, 2018 08:07
willyweed said:
I find a dog in the picture and wisdom in the words. ww
March 18th, 2018 08:07
LOVE RENEWED
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Ah... there is hope yet?
Thank you Michael
March 18th, 2018 06:58
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Ah... there is hope yet?
Thank you Michael
March 18th, 2018 06:58
OUTSIDE THE BOX
Lorna said:
Little boxes, little boxes and they\'re all made out of ticky tacky........ remember this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VUoXtddNPAM
March 18th, 2018 04:26
Lorna said:
Little boxes, little boxes and they\'re all made out of ticky tacky........ remember this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VUoXtddNPAM
March 18th, 2018 04:26
OUTSIDE THE BOX
Goldfinch60 said:
I have moments like that, but the problem is if I think outside the box I can never find the box that I left and if I climb in others boxes they don\'t like it.
Like the abstract.
March 18th, 2018 03:51
Goldfinch60 said:
I have moments like that, but the problem is if I think outside the box I can never find the box that I left and if I climb in others boxes they don\'t like it.
Like the abstract.
March 18th, 2018 03:51
OUTSIDE THE BOX
Caring dove said:
a box is very trapping , no wander he cannot think straight ! lol.. he needs to find a circle to jump into lol
March 18th, 2018 03:02
Caring dove said:
a box is very trapping , no wander he cannot think straight ! lol.. he needs to find a circle to jump into lol
March 18th, 2018 03:02
OUTSIDE THE BOX
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Now we must know things such as: How big is the box? What is it made of? How long will he be outside the box? How long will he be in it?! And so on - most important questions. lol.
March 18th, 2018 03:01
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Now we must know things such as: How big is the box? What is it made of? How long will he be outside the box? How long will he be in it?! And so on - most important questions. lol.
March 18th, 2018 03:01
OUTSIDE THE BOX
Caring dove said:
oh dear, lol ! this is good , i like it ! :-)
poor guy , cant think clearly at all
March 18th, 2018 02:56
Caring dove said:
oh dear, lol ! this is good , i like it ! :-)
poor guy , cant think clearly at all
March 18th, 2018 02:56
SHE WAS ALONE
orchidee said:
She still alone, or she found some company today? Is it today all day, or......oh I did enough on that the other day!
March 17th, 2018 13:01
orchidee said:
She still alone, or she found some company today? Is it today all day, or......oh I did enough on that the other day!
March 17th, 2018 13:01
SHE WAS ALONE
Lorna said:
ooooo Michael - you\'ve outdone yourself and I dove into your painting of blue......
March 17th, 2018 06:25
Lorna said:
ooooo Michael - you\'ve outdone yourself and I dove into your painting of blue......
March 17th, 2018 06:25
SHE WAS ALONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the Seascape ~ I am a Coastal Boy at Heart ! Born on the West Coast and living on the East ! Loved the Structure of the UDIT BHATIA (they taste good too ! The contents of the poem is also elegant but mournful ! Please check my HORSE and my FUSION on ANIMALS ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN
March 17th, 2018 05:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the Seascape ~ I am a Coastal Boy at Heart ! Born on the West Coast and living on the East ! Loved the Structure of the UDIT BHATIA (they taste good too ! The contents of the poem is also elegant but mournful ! Please check my HORSE and my FUSION on ANIMALS ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN
March 17th, 2018 05:13
SHE WAS ALONE
orchidee said:
Not that I don\'t repeat myself sometimes in poems, I said, not that I don\'t...... (I wish I would shut up. lol).
March 17th, 2018 03:01
orchidee said:
Not that I don\'t repeat myself sometimes in poems, I said, not that I don\'t...... (I wish I would shut up. lol).
March 17th, 2018 03:01
SHE WAS ALONE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Phew, I won\'t even start this form with me hymn-poems! It\'s \'common\' for me to stay with me \'Common Metre\' often. 8.6.8.6. lines that is!
Cheating a bit, cos that fits to thousands of tunes, yet so many of them I don\'t know.
March 17th, 2018 03:01
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Phew, I won\'t even start this form with me hymn-poems! It\'s \'common\' for me to stay with me \'Common Metre\' often. 8.6.8.6. lines that is!
Cheating a bit, cos that fits to thousands of tunes, yet so many of them I don\'t know.
March 17th, 2018 03:01
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