Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A COUPLE OF 575s
dusk arising said:
I like that, pulsing hum of street traffic, the heart of the town. All the traffic has been driven out of my towns by pedestrianised (horrible word) zones. The hum has indeed become distant.
Your first piece here though invites me and readily I visualise and feel the sweltering sun and stifling humidity.
May 20th, 2018 03:53
dusk arising said:
I like that, pulsing hum of street traffic, the heart of the town. All the traffic has been driven out of my towns by pedestrianised (horrible word) zones. The hum has indeed become distant.
Your first piece here though invites me and readily I visualise and feel the sweltering sun and stifling humidity.
May 20th, 2018 03:53
A COUPLE OF 575s
orchidee said:
At they Haikus? Did someone sneeze? Ahh-kooo! Go back to bed Orchi and think up some better jokes! lol.
May 20th, 2018 01:04
orchidee said:
At they Haikus? Did someone sneeze? Ahh-kooo! Go back to bed Orchi and think up some better jokes! lol.
May 20th, 2018 01:04
A COUPLE OF 575s
orchidee said:
A fine location expressed in this poem, and fine pic too Michael.
May 20th, 2018 01:03
orchidee said:
A fine location expressed in this poem, and fine pic too Michael.
May 20th, 2018 01:03
THIS LAND
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Beautiful words, beautiful painting!
To paraphrase dusk,
you create love and see beauty in your writings, paintings, and photos! It is a pleasure to view and enjoy your works of art!
~Laura~
May 19th, 2018 13:43
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Beautiful words, beautiful painting!
To paraphrase dusk,
you create love and see beauty in your writings, paintings, and photos! It is a pleasure to view and enjoy your works of art!
~Laura~
May 19th, 2018 13:43
THIS LAND
dusk arising said:
The eyes of an artist see beauty where others see nought. The hands of an artist create love where others fumble.
Wonderful picture, no wonder it was desired so much.
May 19th, 2018 12:09
dusk arising said:
The eyes of an artist see beauty where others see nought. The hands of an artist create love where others fumble.
Wonderful picture, no wonder it was desired so much.
May 19th, 2018 12:09
THIS LAND
willyweed said:
Bravo Michael another master piece in art and verse. ww
May 19th, 2018 10:45
willyweed said:
Bravo Michael another master piece in art and verse. ww
May 19th, 2018 10:45
THIS LAND
MrNobody40 said:
It is so easy to rush through life, and we do so when we are young. As I get older, I find myself slowing down to enjoy things more. Time goes by so quickly
May 19th, 2018 08:19
MrNobody40 said:
It is so easy to rush through life, and we do so when we are young. As I get older, I find myself slowing down to enjoy things more. Time goes by so quickly
May 19th, 2018 08:19
THIS LAND
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THIS LAND is my LAND
The Blest and Perfect
Land of ENGLAND
No matter where I roam
Terra Firma or Aqua Foam
You will always hear me
Singing this SONG
SHOW ME THE WAY TO GO HOME !
Thank Michael for a lovely Poem and a typically ENGLISH BEACH ! I am only 10 miles (as the car drives !) form the nearest BEACH ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN !
May 19th, 2018 02:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THIS LAND is my LAND
The Blest and Perfect
Land of ENGLAND
No matter where I roam
Terra Firma or Aqua Foam
You will always hear me
Singing this SONG
SHOW ME THE WAY TO GO HOME !
Thank Michael for a lovely Poem and a typically ENGLISH BEACH ! I am only 10 miles (as the car drives !) form the nearest BEACH ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN !
May 19th, 2018 02:28
THIS LAND
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. I went on an \'Arts Trail\' spread over three areas, even bordering different counties. I covered two of the areas, the other one was too far out.
May 19th, 2018 01:07
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. I went on an \'Arts Trail\' spread over three areas, even bordering different counties. I covered two of the areas, the other one was too far out.
May 19th, 2018 01:07
BUTTERFLY
SLR said:
I love butterflies. So delicately beautiful. God sighs and butterflies break free from their chrysalis and grace us with their beauty. Hard to believe they\'re just beautiful insects. The \'flittering and fluttering\' does sound like butterfly wings, but I do also like dusks\' \'pulsing fluff\'. You guys are great!
May 18th, 2018 22:18
SLR said:
I love butterflies. So delicately beautiful. God sighs and butterflies break free from their chrysalis and grace us with their beauty. Hard to believe they\'re just beautiful insects. The \'flittering and fluttering\' does sound like butterfly wings, but I do also like dusks\' \'pulsing fluff\'. You guys are great!
May 18th, 2018 22:18
BUTTERFLY
dusk arising said:
Lovely to watch aren\'t they. I think you do catch their flitting flight well in your piece. Earlier this year i included the sound of a butterfly\'s beating wings in a poem, i described it as sounding like \'pulsing fluff\'.
Oddly, a lady i met recently was terrified of butterflies to the point of running away screaming. It takes all kinds i suppose.
I think of them as one of the most beautiful of all creations and the peace they bring to our countryside when one is immersed in it is quite tangible.
Thanks for making mme think butterfly.
May 18th, 2018 09:00
dusk arising said:
Lovely to watch aren\'t they. I think you do catch their flitting flight well in your piece. Earlier this year i included the sound of a butterfly\'s beating wings in a poem, i described it as sounding like \'pulsing fluff\'.
Oddly, a lady i met recently was terrified of butterflies to the point of running away screaming. It takes all kinds i suppose.
I think of them as one of the most beautiful of all creations and the peace they bring to our countryside when one is immersed in it is quite tangible.
Thanks for making mme think butterfly.
May 18th, 2018 09:00
BUTTERFLY
FineB said:
A butterfly so symbolic of hot beautiful sunny days.
A sweet, vivid and charming poem!
Thank you Michael!
Keep writing
FineB
May 18th, 2018 03:27
FineB said:
A butterfly so symbolic of hot beautiful sunny days.
A sweet, vivid and charming poem!
Thank you Michael!
Keep writing
FineB
May 18th, 2018 03:27
BUTTERFLY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a fine SEXTET Micheal ~ full of flutter & flow ! Love the AQUILEGIA ~ Yes the butterflies are out in Mum\'s Garden ~ difficult to photograph with OPEN WINGS ~ BRIAN !
May 18th, 2018 03:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for a fine SEXTET Micheal ~ full of flutter & flow ! Love the AQUILEGIA ~ Yes the butterflies are out in Mum\'s Garden ~ difficult to photograph with OPEN WINGS ~ BRIAN !
May 18th, 2018 03:23
BUTTERFLY
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Ohh and there was I, battling through heavy rain, getting sodden, but \'snail-saving\', helping them on to the grass. Well, it takes them a long time to cross the path!
May 18th, 2018 01:31
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Ohh and there was I, battling through heavy rain, getting sodden, but \'snail-saving\', helping them on to the grass. Well, it takes them a long time to cross the path!
May 18th, 2018 01:31
BUTTERFLY
Goldfinch60 said:
They are beautiful to watch while I sit in the garden drinking my Rioja.
May 18th, 2018 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
They are beautiful to watch while I sit in the garden drinking my Rioja.
May 18th, 2018 01:04
MERLOT
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I agree! A good vintage Merlot will do it for me and my husband! Iāll admit that in the past, as an adult, I only drank Pinot Grigio!
My husband is still strictly red!
Depending on the meal,
I do well with both!
So hereās to you š·, Maestro, for a super write and a super painting!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 10:12
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
I agree! A good vintage Merlot will do it for me and my husband! Iāll admit that in the past, as an adult, I only drank Pinot Grigio!
My husband is still strictly red!
Depending on the meal,
I do well with both!
So hereās to you š·, Maestro, for a super write and a super painting!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 10:12
MERLOT
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
A charming lovely poem.
I see you\'re a red man !
I confess that I am a white wine person all the way!
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2018 06:52
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
A charming lovely poem.
I see you\'re a red man !
I confess that I am a white wine person all the way!
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2018 06:52
MERLOT
dusk arising said:
Yes i agree, merlot can be relied upon and available in a range of moderate to low prices. My fav is cabernet sauvignon but it doesn\'t do to buy a cheaper one.
I have consumed more merlot in recent years. Such good taste!
May 17th, 2018 04:28
dusk arising said:
Yes i agree, merlot can be relied upon and available in a range of moderate to low prices. My fav is cabernet sauvignon but it doesn\'t do to buy a cheaper one.
I have consumed more merlot in recent years. Such good taste!
May 17th, 2018 04:28
MERLOT
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Reminds me to reach for the sherry.... What? This time of day? I\'ve started early....! I shall not be ablesh to comment mucsh latersh on. Good acting innit?!
May 17th, 2018 01:25
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Reminds me to reach for the sherry.... What? This time of day? I\'ve started early....! I shall not be ablesh to comment mucsh latersh on. Good acting innit?!
May 17th, 2018 01:25
MERLOT
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good painting Michael.
Good write as well, Merlot is OK but I would always reach for the Rioja.
May 17th, 2018 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good painting Michael.
Good write as well, Merlot is OK but I would always reach for the Rioja.
May 17th, 2018 01:09
PREJUDICES
SLR said:
So true. We have to get past any prejudices before we can truly open our minds and hearts to new people, things and even experiences. Great write Mr Michael!
May 16th, 2018 22:55
SLR said:
So true. We have to get past any prejudices before we can truly open our minds and hearts to new people, things and even experiences. Great write Mr Michael!
May 16th, 2018 22:55
SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
SLR said:
This is beautiful. I have different beliefs about the end of someone life but I can still appreciate the beauty, peace and serenity expressed. Beautiful piece.
May 16th, 2018 19:44
SLR said:
This is beautiful. I have different beliefs about the end of someone life but I can still appreciate the beauty, peace and serenity expressed. Beautiful piece.
May 16th, 2018 19:44
PREJUDICES
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Spot on with this write!
Love the pic of dainty flowers!
~Laura~
May 16th, 2018 10:37
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Spot on with this write!
Love the pic of dainty flowers!
~Laura~
May 16th, 2018 10:37
PREJUDICES
dusk arising said:
Great analogy, whereas the thinking mind IS on a flexible \'line\', those prejudices are ever present to trip us up.
Are they still there when we\'re \'pegged - out?\' ... sorry, couldn\'t resist that.
May 16th, 2018 10:26
dusk arising said:
Great analogy, whereas the thinking mind IS on a flexible \'line\', those prejudices are ever present to trip us up.
Are they still there when we\'re \'pegged - out?\' ... sorry, couldn\'t resist that.
May 16th, 2018 10:26
PREJUDICES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for the \"BEAUTY\" of the Flowers and the \"WARNING\" in the Poem. Thanks for DALI ~ I have posted \"The Persistence of Memories\" hope that was an apt choice ! Please check my SENRYU on LADIES ! Yours BRIAN ~ Unprejudiced ?
May 16th, 2018 03:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for the \"BEAUTY\" of the Flowers and the \"WARNING\" in the Poem. Thanks for DALI ~ I have posted \"The Persistence of Memories\" hope that was an apt choice ! Please check my SENRYU on LADIES ! Yours BRIAN ~ Unprejudiced ?
May 16th, 2018 03:45
PREJUDICES
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh it\'s too psychological this time of day - and far too long a word for this time of day. See ya later, when I\'ve had a lie down to recover!
May 16th, 2018 01:46
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh it\'s too psychological this time of day - and far too long a word for this time of day. See ya later, when I\'ve had a lie down to recover!
May 16th, 2018 01:46
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