Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Daveyboyz said:
I like it... and not as easy as it looks. I penned one but you need a compelling statement and these aren\'t throwing themselves onto the page for me.
April 16th, 2018 09:23
Daveyboyz said:
I like it... and not as easy as it looks. I penned one but you need a compelling statement and these aren\'t throwing themselves onto the page for me.
April 16th, 2018 09:23
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BREXIT has come and has stayed !
Who will it affect ?
When and where ?
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love DAFFS and there are hundreds of varieties always look best in HOSTS !
Quinzaines are a way of making a meaningful three line statement they are intellectual Haiku ! I like No. 2 and the answer is YES !
Please check my MUSICAL FUSION thanks BRIAN
April 16th, 2018 07:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BREXIT has come and has stayed !
Who will it affect ?
When and where ?
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love DAFFS and there are hundreds of varieties always look best in HOSTS !
Quinzaines are a way of making a meaningful three line statement they are intellectual Haiku ! I like No. 2 and the answer is YES !
Please check my MUSICAL FUSION thanks BRIAN
April 16th, 2018 07:22
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Lorna said:
It\'s amazing how much these short lines conjure up - especially the last three - I was out in an open field on a beautiful farm........ your white daffodil is amazing.... we don\'t see them much here.
April 16th, 2018 07:05
Lorna said:
It\'s amazing how much these short lines conjure up - especially the last three - I was out in an open field on a beautiful farm........ your white daffodil is amazing.... we don\'t see them much here.
April 16th, 2018 07:05
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Lorna said:
Call in DCI Vera Stanhope for the first one. As for the second, pigeons are everywhere! Intriguing little bits Michael!
April 16th, 2018 06:46
Lorna said:
Call in DCI Vera Stanhope for the first one. As for the second, pigeons are everywhere! Intriguing little bits Michael!
April 16th, 2018 06:46
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
orchidee said:
Ooh good quiz-wotsits and pic M.
I\'m gonna do a douzaine (12), or quatorzaine (14) for example. I might do 100 of these, cos I can count up to 100 in French. Ohh, our talents are too much - no end of them! lol.
Here\'s a unaze (1). Erm...\'One\'. That\'s it, the whole poem!
April 16th, 2018 01:51
orchidee said:
Ooh good quiz-wotsits and pic M.
I\'m gonna do a douzaine (12), or quatorzaine (14) for example. I might do 100 of these, cos I can count up to 100 in French. Ohh, our talents are too much - no end of them! lol.
Here\'s a unaze (1). Erm...\'One\'. That\'s it, the whole poem!
April 16th, 2018 01:51
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Goldfinch60 said:
Two thought provoking quinzaines Michael.
April 16th, 2018 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Two thought provoking quinzaines Michael.
April 16th, 2018 01:02
TWO MORE EDELECTS
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
I loved this poem
I love the flowers too.
Keep writing
FineB
April 15th, 2018 17:29
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
I loved this poem
I love the flowers too.
Keep writing
FineB
April 15th, 2018 17:29
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Beautiful pic of the white daffodils! Two more fine edelects! I can just see that “cheese churning “...in my tummy! Lol
I like this new form of yours.
Here’s my attempt...
Canvas blank
Painters prank
Japery justified
Children growing
Parents worrying
Society smiling
Constructive criticism welcomed!
~Laura~
April 15th, 2018 08:49
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Beautiful pic of the white daffodils! Two more fine edelects! I can just see that “cheese churning “...in my tummy! Lol
I like this new form of yours.
Here’s my attempt...
Canvas blank
Painters prank
Japery justified
Children growing
Parents worrying
Society smiling
Constructive criticism welcomed!
~Laura~
April 15th, 2018 08:49
TWO MORE EDELECTS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRAND NATIONAL
Horses Race
Ladies Grace
Tiger Trolls !
Thanks for sharing MICHEAL
Complicated form ~ Hope I
got near it !
Love the EDELECTS as a Scientist
I always seek to be OBJECTIVE and
seek to Prove my Hypotheses !
Cows are WONDERFUL ~ even the
Concrete ones in MILTON KEYNES !
Love the WHITE DAFFODILS
Yours Brian ~ Please check my
FRUIT of the SPIRIT ! I do appreciate
HUMANISTS show the same TRAITS !
April 15th, 2018 04:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRAND NATIONAL
Horses Race
Ladies Grace
Tiger Trolls !
Thanks for sharing MICHEAL
Complicated form ~ Hope I
got near it !
Love the EDELECTS as a Scientist
I always seek to be OBJECTIVE and
seek to Prove my Hypotheses !
Cows are WONDERFUL ~ even the
Concrete ones in MILTON KEYNES !
Love the WHITE DAFFODILS
Yours Brian ~ Please check my
FRUIT of the SPIRIT ! I do appreciate
HUMANISTS show the same TRAITS !
April 15th, 2018 04:04
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Daveyboyz said:
That first one sure is the truth... you seem to know about horticulture, I could write all I know on that subject on the back of a stamp.
April 15th, 2018 01:37
Daveyboyz said:
That first one sure is the truth... you seem to know about horticulture, I could write all I know on that subject on the back of a stamp.
April 15th, 2018 01:37
TWO MORE EDELECTS
orchidee said:
Fine ede-wotstis and pic Michael. A nice bit of bread and chunk of cheese to go with it?!
April 15th, 2018 01:23
orchidee said:
Fine ede-wotstis and pic Michael. A nice bit of bread and chunk of cheese to go with it?!
April 15th, 2018 01:23
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Goldfinch60 said:
Both are good but the second one gave me my first chuckle of the day.
April 15th, 2018 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Both are good but the second one gave me my first chuckle of the day.
April 15th, 2018 00:58
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Nicholas Browning said:
Hah! Changing it up little by little. You\'re not wrong though. I don\'t know much about flowers. Hydrangeas are pretty cool. A shame they don\'t last long.
April 15th, 2018 00:34
Nicholas Browning said:
Hah! Changing it up little by little. You\'re not wrong though. I don\'t know much about flowers. Hydrangeas are pretty cool. A shame they don\'t last long.
April 15th, 2018 00:34
UNWINESQUE
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This write is hilarious!
I like the Modigliani inspired artwork!
Great work my friend!
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 12:31
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
This write is hilarious!
I like the Modigliani inspired artwork!
Great work my friend!
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 12:31
AN ARTISTS EYE
Christina8 said:
It\'s amazing what, as an artist, you see and can be transferred to almost any medium. Also, great write! I like the rhyme scheme.
April 14th, 2018 12:28
Christina8 said:
It\'s amazing what, as an artist, you see and can be transferred to almost any medium. Also, great write! I like the rhyme scheme.
April 14th, 2018 12:28
AN ARTISTS EYE
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the sketch and the poem!
The following words sum up your message very well...
“...with beauty that is rearely seen
save through an artist’s eye.”
Awesomely done!
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 09:50
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the sketch and the poem!
The following words sum up your message very well...
“...with beauty that is rearely seen
save through an artist’s eye.”
Awesomely done!
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 09:50
AN ARTISTS EYE
Daveyboyz said:
Good job Michael, both in the poetry and the image.
April 14th, 2018 08:45
Daveyboyz said:
Good job Michael, both in the poetry and the image.
April 14th, 2018 08:45
AN ARTISTS EYE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Michael ~ It\'s surprising what the sub-conscious can do with a few lines ~ Ah yea I remember her well (2003 - 4 !). Love the rhyme pattern in the Poem abba cddc etc ! I\'m listening to Jazz on Radio 3 ( waiting for the National ~ please check my Poem) and your poem had a Jazz Rhythm ! I have the Mind of an Artist but (as yet) not quite the hand. Just got my Spring Set of Foot & Mouth Paintings ~ perhaps I might do better in either of those modes of painting ! Angela is going on a Year Exchange to New Zealand in May so I will have more time to try ACRYLICS ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
April 14th, 2018 08:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Michael ~ It\'s surprising what the sub-conscious can do with a few lines ~ Ah yea I remember her well (2003 - 4 !). Love the rhyme pattern in the Poem abba cddc etc ! I\'m listening to Jazz on Radio 3 ( waiting for the National ~ please check my Poem) and your poem had a Jazz Rhythm ! I have the Mind of an Artist but (as yet) not quite the hand. Just got my Spring Set of Foot & Mouth Paintings ~ perhaps I might do better in either of those modes of painting ! Angela is going on a Year Exchange to New Zealand in May so I will have more time to try ACRYLICS ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
April 14th, 2018 08:27
AN ARTISTS EYE
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
You certainly see life in an interesting way through an artist\"s eye.
Lovely poem and I like your sketch it reminds me of Picasso\'s blue woman painting.
Don\'t forget the big Frida Kanlo exhibition on at the V& A from June.
Keep writing
FineB
April 14th, 2018 05:08
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
You certainly see life in an interesting way through an artist\"s eye.
Lovely poem and I like your sketch it reminds me of Picasso\'s blue woman painting.
Don\'t forget the big Frida Kanlo exhibition on at the V& A from June.
Keep writing
FineB
April 14th, 2018 05:08
AN ARTISTS EYE
Fay Slimm. said:
A few little lines and the image of beauty is there in your wonderful sketch Michael - - the verse too gives its reminder of what a true artist discerns - -- super read.
April 14th, 2018 02:08
Fay Slimm. said:
A few little lines and the image of beauty is there in your wonderful sketch Michael - - the verse too gives its reminder of what a true artist discerns - -- super read.
April 14th, 2018 02:08
AN ARTISTS EYE
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing what beauty can be seen when transferred from the artists eye to the canvas.
April 14th, 2018 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing what beauty can be seen when transferred from the artists eye to the canvas.
April 14th, 2018 01:22
UNWINESQUE
lasergraph said:
Very hot and dry where I am, thanks for giving me a taste of the other side.
April 13th, 2018 15:38
lasergraph said:
Very hot and dry where I am, thanks for giving me a taste of the other side.
April 13th, 2018 15:38
UNWINESQUE
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow you certainly got the feel of his hilarious wording Michael - - if I tried to imitate that I would never be able to return to the norm - great piece of humour and so cleverly wrought.
April 13th, 2018 14:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow you certainly got the feel of his hilarious wording Michael - - if I tried to imitate that I would never be able to return to the norm - great piece of humour and so cleverly wrought.
April 13th, 2018 14:57
UNWINESQUE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ELVIS PRESLEY ~ Swivel - Hippy rhythmic contrapole of the wobblemode of the hipper ! Sideways and with the head a tilty and doggy expression in the eyebold conveyed to the femailode of the species ! This was coupled with a trilty - how on the strims syncypole with his voicemode which reduced teenimodes to hysterium ~ AMEN
There was only one Stanley Unwin (d. 2002) and at parties my Dad used to embarrass us my doing his speeches and party pieces in UNWINESE !
Thanks for sharing and reviving memories of the
last Century ! A fine tribute to STANLEY
Yours ~ BRIAN Love the DOPPLEGANGER carving !
April 13th, 2018 08:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ELVIS PRESLEY ~ Swivel - Hippy rhythmic contrapole of the wobblemode of the hipper ! Sideways and with the head a tilty and doggy expression in the eyebold conveyed to the femailode of the species ! This was coupled with a trilty - how on the strims syncypole with his voicemode which reduced teenimodes to hysterium ~ AMEN
There was only one Stanley Unwin (d. 2002) and at parties my Dad used to embarrass us my doing his speeches and party pieces in UNWINESE !
Thanks for sharing and reviving memories of the
last Century ! A fine tribute to STANLEY
Yours ~ BRIAN Love the DOPPLEGANGER carving !
April 13th, 2018 08:19
UNWINESQUE
myself and me said:
Really enjoy the writing. Always curious how do you create the perfect color on the paint.
April 13th, 2018 08:18
myself and me said:
Really enjoy the writing. Always curious how do you create the perfect color on the paint.
April 13th, 2018 08:18
UNWINESQUE
Lorna said:
Lots of fun Michael! A little like Jabberwocky! Twas brillig!
April 13th, 2018 06:02
Lorna said:
Lots of fun Michael! A little like Jabberwocky! Twas brillig!
April 13th, 2018 06:02
UNWINESQUE
Daveyboyz said:
I should be too young to know him but I am familiar... one line he used to say that stuck with me was \"Electricol follly on da fingol\" Your print came out nice too, great textures to the central shapes.
April 13th, 2018 02:46
Daveyboyz said:
I should be too young to know him but I am familiar... one line he used to say that stuck with me was \"Electricol follly on da fingol\" Your print came out nice too, great textures to the central shapes.
April 13th, 2018 02:46
UNWINESQUE
Nicholas Browning said:
The last stanza was hilarious. Limbly flopping, oh the sight. A fine work all the same. Versatility must be your middle name. There\'s just no other way.
April 13th, 2018 02:35
Nicholas Browning said:
The last stanza was hilarious. Limbly flopping, oh the sight. A fine work all the same. Versatility must be your middle name. There\'s just no other way.
April 13th, 2018 02:35
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