Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



BUTTERFLY
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Ohh and there was I, battling through heavy rain, getting sodden, but \'snail-saving\', helping them on to the grass. Well, it takes them a long time to cross the path!

May 18th, 2018 01:31

BUTTERFLY
Goldfinch60 said:

They are beautiful to watch while I sit in the garden drinking my Rioja.

May 18th, 2018 01:04

MERLOT
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
I agree! A good vintage Merlot will do it for me and my husband! I’ll admit that in the past, as an adult, I only drank Pinot Grigio!
My husband is still strictly red!
Depending on the meal,
I do well with both!
So here’s to you šŸ·, Maestro, for a super write and a super painting!

~Laura~


May 17th, 2018 10:12

MERLOT
FineB said:

Thank you Michael.

A charming lovely poem.

I see you\'re a red man !

I confess that I am a white wine person all the way!

Keep writing
FineB

May 17th, 2018 06:52

MERLOT
dusk arising said:

Yes i agree, merlot can be relied upon and available in a range of moderate to low prices. My fav is cabernet sauvignon but it doesn\'t do to buy a cheaper one.
I have consumed more merlot in recent years. Such good taste!

May 17th, 2018 04:28

MERLOT
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Reminds me to reach for the sherry.... What? This time of day? I\'ve started early....! I shall not be ablesh to comment mucsh latersh on. Good acting innit?!

May 17th, 2018 01:25

MERLOT
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good painting Michael.

Good write as well, Merlot is OK but I would always reach for the Rioja.

May 17th, 2018 01:09

PREJUDICES
SLR said:

So true. We have to get past any prejudices before we can truly open our minds and hearts to new people, things and even experiences. Great write Mr Michael!

May 16th, 2018 22:55

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
SLR said:

This is beautiful. I have different beliefs about the end of someone life but I can still appreciate the beauty, peace and serenity expressed. Beautiful piece.

May 16th, 2018 19:44

PREJUDICES
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
Spot on with this write!

Love the pic of dainty flowers!

~Laura~

May 16th, 2018 10:37

PREJUDICES
dusk arising said:

Great analogy, whereas the thinking mind IS on a flexible \'line\', those prejudices are ever present to trip us up.

Are they still there when we\'re \'pegged - out?\' ... sorry, couldn\'t resist that.

May 16th, 2018 10:26

PREJUDICES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE for the \"BEAUTY\" of the Flowers and the \"WARNING\" in the Poem. Thanks for DALI ~ I have posted \"The Persistence of Memories\" hope that was an apt choice ! Please check my SENRYU on LADIES ! Yours BRIAN ~ Unprejudiced ?

May 16th, 2018 03:45

PREJUDICES
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh it\'s too psychological this time of day - and far too long a word for this time of day. See ya later, when I\'ve had a lie down to recover!

May 16th, 2018 01:46

PREJUDICES
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, may those prejudices soon be dispelled.

May 16th, 2018 01:14

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
orchidee said:

She swimming still?!

May 15th, 2018 11:37

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
Today must be one of those days! Yours is the second write that I’ve read about a peaceful death!
My dad’s was a peaceful death...3:00a.m. ...8 1/2 years ago!
Your exquisite verse beautifully expresses how I felt about my dad’s passing! Well done my friend!
Love the pic of the aquilegia! Too bad I’m not allowed to plant flowers at his gravesite! Like you, he loved his garden!

~Laura~


May 15th, 2018 09:34

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Christina8 said:

Just loved this poem for today! Loved the last two lines, they were my favorite. Great flower pic!

May 15th, 2018 08:54

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Lorna said:

Beautiful death!

May 15th, 2018 04:59

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE for a beautiful REQUIEM IN PACE poem ~ My Grandma passed away just like that ~ peacefully ! Love the AQUILEGIA ~ like dancing fairies so delicate ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my HAIKU and add an Artist (I will add the picture) to my NEW FUSION ~ thanks BRIAN

May 15th, 2018 04:36

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
dusk arising said:

Transitional beauty here. I\'m interpreting this as the passing at the end of life. I hope i have this right because anyone reading this piece with thoughts of the end of their days will surely see the passing over as a time of.magical transition.
Lovely words.

May 15th, 2018 03:22

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. She on Cloud Nine now?!

May 15th, 2018 01:33

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Goldfinch60 said:

Another beautiful write Michael.

May 15th, 2018 01:19

SHE SWAM IN A LUMINOUS SKY
Resa71 said:

So beautifully written.
You always capture such a peaceful feeling when you write.
I’m pretty much the opposite.
Guess we balance things out :)
Resa

May 15th, 2018 00:45

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
SLR said:

Mankind\'s unrelenting obliviousness of the direct result of their actions. History repeats itself because humans never learn. A sad tragic truth of humanity. Pretty flowers. I\'ve never seen those. I\'m going to have to start saving your pics. I don\'t think we have those here.

May 14th, 2018 12:41

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
dusk arising said:

The custom of ghosts - a haunting line indeed. Joking apart - very clever phrase.

May 14th, 2018 08:32

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
Lorna said:

The couplets are lovely and the pretty little flower world is captivating Michael!

May 14th, 2018 06:35

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE ~ CARPE DIEM ! Brian !

May 14th, 2018 03:47

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
orchidee said:

Aww, and I wanted to say more. I will have to say: A fine xouple of xouplets xonveyed with xlarity and no xonfusion and...... now I\'ve run out of \'x\'s, and the spell-checker\'s gone into overtime!

May 14th, 2018 03:06

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
orchidee said:

A fine couple of couplets, and pic M. Have we run out of \'c\'s now?!

May 14th, 2018 01:17

A COUPLE MORE COUPLETS
Goldfinch60 said:

Good couplets Michael, especially the first one - when will they ever learn.

May 14th, 2018 00:58



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