Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Another great one!
I will eventually give this interesting form a try!
What a beautiful daffodil!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 19:18
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Another great one!
I will eventually give this interesting form a try!
What a beautiful daffodil!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 19:18
AS ONE
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A tricube...interesting form!
A super write accentuated by a beautiful pic! I like the colors of the anemone Wanda.
Reading your poems accompanied by your garden flowers, brought to mind Robert Louis Stevenson...āA Garden of Versesā! You should publish a āGarden of flowersā...
a best seller for certain!
Iām enjoying the whole package! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 18:09
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
A tricube...interesting form!
A super write accentuated by a beautiful pic! I like the colors of the anemone Wanda.
Reading your poems accompanied by your garden flowers, brought to mind Robert Louis Stevenson...āA Garden of Versesā! You should publish a āGarden of flowersā...
a best seller for certain!
Iām enjoying the whole package! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 18:09
SUNDAY
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
As a child, I was taught that Sundays were to be a day of rest. Then adulthood happened and reality set in! Sundays became the busiest of the seven days! Everything that I didnāt have time to do during the week, became a Sunday chose...exhausting!
A great write with a beautiful pic! The last two lines are perfect...for me!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 17:20
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
As a child, I was taught that Sundays were to be a day of rest. Then adulthood happened and reality set in! Sundays became the busiest of the seven days! Everything that I didnāt have time to do during the week, became a Sunday chose...exhausting!
A great write with a beautiful pic! The last two lines are perfect...for me!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 17:20
EARLY MORNING
Christina8 said:
Well done poem (haiku?), have a great time on your travels! Thanks again for more flower pictures!
April 19th, 2018 14:17
Christina8 said:
Well done poem (haiku?), have a great time on your travels! Thanks again for more flower pictures!
April 19th, 2018 14:17
EARLY MORNING
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Iām catching up on my reads! Iām going backwards...as life goes sometimes!
A super write...of course...and I love the pic of that unusual beautiful flower! Iāve never seen it before! Thank you for sharing!
So youāre going on a trip! Enjoy and be safe...and donāt forget those tickets!š
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 13:39
Lauraš» said:
Michael,
Iām catching up on my reads! Iām going backwards...as life goes sometimes!
A super write...of course...and I love the pic of that unusual beautiful flower! Iāve never seen it before! Thank you for sharing!
So youāre going on a trip! Enjoy and be safe...and donāt forget those tickets!š
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 13:39
EARLY MORNING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE I love chequered an gingham patterns ~ awesome flower ! Suitcase & Ticket (and Passport if going abroad) that all you need but all three cause rise of blood pressure ~ like Attractive Nurses ! Yours BRIAN
April 19th, 2018 11:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE I love chequered an gingham patterns ~ awesome flower ! Suitcase & Ticket (and Passport if going abroad) that all you need but all three cause rise of blood pressure ~ like Attractive Nurses ! Yours BRIAN
April 19th, 2018 11:01
EARLY MORNING
orchidee said:
The airport is lovely at this time of year. Oops, now I\'ve said it they will all want to go - as you say!
April 19th, 2018 09:15
orchidee said:
The airport is lovely at this time of year. Oops, now I\'ve said it they will all want to go - as you say!
April 19th, 2018 09:15
EARLY MORNING
Lorna said:
Wish I was going on a trip now! That is the most unusual flower I have ever seen! I\'m heading straight off to look it up! Update: found them! Going to order bulbs for next year!
April 19th, 2018 06:06
Lorna said:
Wish I was going on a trip now! That is the most unusual flower I have ever seen! I\'m heading straight off to look it up! Update: found them! Going to order bulbs for next year!
April 19th, 2018 06:06
EARLY MORNING
orchidee said:
Ohh good, a week\'s holiday at an airport. I must try it soon! heehee.
April 19th, 2018 03:13
orchidee said:
Ohh good, a week\'s holiday at an airport. I must try it soon! heehee.
April 19th, 2018 03:13
EARLY MORNING
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful flower pic and super write Michael -- wishing all the best for that coming trip.
April 19th, 2018 02:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful flower pic and super write Michael -- wishing all the best for that coming trip.
April 19th, 2018 02:11
EARLY MORNING
orchidee said:
Where ya going? Bognor by plane?! They say Margate\'s the No.1 dirge spot now. Apologies to folk living in either place. A fine write and pic Michael.
April 19th, 2018 01:42
orchidee said:
Where ya going? Bognor by plane?! They say Margate\'s the No.1 dirge spot now. Apologies to folk living in either place. A fine write and pic Michael.
April 19th, 2018 01:42
SUNDAY
Christina8 said:
Very nice rhyming poem, enjoyed it very much. Love Sundays! Also loved the picture of your Anemone. Hopefully soon enough I shall see flowers!
April 18th, 2018 20:33
Christina8 said:
Very nice rhyming poem, enjoyed it very much. Love Sundays! Also loved the picture of your Anemone. Hopefully soon enough I shall see flowers!
April 18th, 2018 20:33
SUNDAY
Lorna said:
I disagree! I think you caught the whole of the day....... it all runs beautifully and picks up all the pieces of life on a Sunday........ (although here there are no fathers out doing their own gardens - that\'s why they have to work until 10 pm so they can pay the gardeners - fathers were always doing their own gardening when I was young - oh well their loss)............ I love the picture of the diddly plunkit.......
April 18th, 2018 05:04
Lorna said:
I disagree! I think you caught the whole of the day....... it all runs beautifully and picks up all the pieces of life on a Sunday........ (although here there are no fathers out doing their own gardens - that\'s why they have to work until 10 pm so they can pay the gardeners - fathers were always doing their own gardening when I was young - oh well their loss)............ I love the picture of the diddly plunkit.......
April 18th, 2018 05:04
SUNDAY
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the flow and fresh feel to this verse Michael -- it describes Sunday is many a place. Love the picture of your gorgeous Anemone Pulsatilla .
April 18th, 2018 03:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the flow and fresh feel to this verse Michael -- it describes Sunday is many a place. Love the picture of your gorgeous Anemone Pulsatilla .
April 18th, 2018 03:28
SUNDAY
Goldfinch60 said:
A good write about Sundays Michael. They were always special but not quite the same nowadays.
April 18th, 2018 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
A good write about Sundays Michael. They were always special but not quite the same nowadays.
April 18th, 2018 01:31
SUNDAY
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic still M. Is this a quinze-wotsit or whatever? Any more brilliantly inspired troisaine thingys?!
April 18th, 2018 01:28
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic still M. Is this a quinze-wotsit or whatever? Any more brilliantly inspired troisaine thingys?!
April 18th, 2018 01:28
AS ONE
Christina8 said:
Great job on this especially with the rhyme! And as always, love the picture of the flowers!
April 17th, 2018 17:15
Christina8 said:
Great job on this especially with the rhyme! And as always, love the picture of the flowers!
April 17th, 2018 17:15
AS ONE
Lorna said:
Love the simplicity - the whole cycle of beauty, love and marriage wrapped up in a few lines....... are your flowers a form of aster?
April 17th, 2018 06:15
Lorna said:
Love the simplicity - the whole cycle of beauty, love and marriage wrapped up in a few lines....... are your flowers a form of aster?
April 17th, 2018 06:15
AS ONE
Nicholas Browning said:
One of these days I\'m going to conjure up a new type of free verse ballad. When I stop being lazy! Enough about me. This is simply wonderful sir. It gets better every time.
April 17th, 2018 04:29
Nicholas Browning said:
One of these days I\'m going to conjure up a new type of free verse ballad. When I stop being lazy! Enough about me. This is simply wonderful sir. It gets better every time.
April 17th, 2018 04:29
AS ONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BAGPIPES I\' HAND
PROUDLY AH STAND
RESONATE THRU LAND
Thanks MIKE ~ I\'m in Scotia this mornin\'
Please check my Poem for picture !
The TRICUBE should be 3 WORDS per line !
Loved the TRICUBE ~ it could be a tribute
to the lovely MEGHAN MARKLE
Yours BRIAN ~ please add to my MUSIC FUSION ~ Ta
April 17th, 2018 03:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BAGPIPES I\' HAND
PROUDLY AH STAND
RESONATE THRU LAND
Thanks MIKE ~ I\'m in Scotia this mornin\'
Please check my Poem for picture !
The TRICUBE should be 3 WORDS per line !
Loved the TRICUBE ~ it could be a tribute
to the lovely MEGHAN MARKLE
Yours BRIAN ~ please add to my MUSIC FUSION ~ Ta
April 17th, 2018 03:06
AS ONE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I thought you was going to do a \'unaze\' thingy, with that title! Here\'s one, compiled from yesterday between us both. Well it\'s got three syllables in all - a troisane? heehee.
One
Two
Three
April 17th, 2018 01:45
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. I thought you was going to do a \'unaze\' thingy, with that title! Here\'s one, compiled from yesterday between us both. Well it\'s got three syllables in all - a troisane? heehee.
One
Two
Three
April 17th, 2018 01:45
AS ONE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Another form that I had not seen.
April 17th, 2018 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael. Another form that I had not seen.
April 17th, 2018 01:05
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Daveyboyz said:
I like it... and not as easy as it looks. I penned one but you need a compelling statement and these aren\'t throwing themselves onto the page for me.
April 16th, 2018 09:23
Daveyboyz said:
I like it... and not as easy as it looks. I penned one but you need a compelling statement and these aren\'t throwing themselves onto the page for me.
April 16th, 2018 09:23
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BREXIT has come and has stayed !
Who will it affect ?
When and where ?
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love DAFFS and there are hundreds of varieties always look best in HOSTS !
Quinzaines are a way of making a meaningful three line statement they are intellectual Haiku ! I like No. 2 and the answer is YES !
Please check my MUSICAL FUSION thanks BRIAN
April 16th, 2018 07:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BREXIT has come and has stayed !
Who will it affect ?
When and where ?
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love DAFFS and there are hundreds of varieties always look best in HOSTS !
Quinzaines are a way of making a meaningful three line statement they are intellectual Haiku ! I like No. 2 and the answer is YES !
Please check my MUSICAL FUSION thanks BRIAN
April 16th, 2018 07:22
TWO MORE EDELECTS
Lorna said:
It\'s amazing how much these short lines conjure up - especially the last three - I was out in an open field on a beautiful farm........ your white daffodil is amazing.... we don\'t see them much here.
April 16th, 2018 07:05
Lorna said:
It\'s amazing how much these short lines conjure up - especially the last three - I was out in an open field on a beautiful farm........ your white daffodil is amazing.... we don\'t see them much here.
April 16th, 2018 07:05
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
Lorna said:
Call in DCI Vera Stanhope for the first one. As for the second, pigeons are everywhere! Intriguing little bits Michael!
April 16th, 2018 06:46
Lorna said:
Call in DCI Vera Stanhope for the first one. As for the second, pigeons are everywhere! Intriguing little bits Michael!
April 16th, 2018 06:46
A COUPLE OF QUINZAINES
orchidee said:
Ooh good quiz-wotsits and pic M.
I\'m gonna do a douzaine (12), or quatorzaine (14) for example. I might do 100 of these, cos I can count up to 100 in French. Ohh, our talents are too much - no end of them! lol.
Here\'s a unaze (1). Erm...\'One\'. That\'s it, the whole poem!
April 16th, 2018 01:51
orchidee said:
Ooh good quiz-wotsits and pic M.
I\'m gonna do a douzaine (12), or quatorzaine (14) for example. I might do 100 of these, cos I can count up to 100 in French. Ohh, our talents are too much - no end of them! lol.
Here\'s a unaze (1). Erm...\'One\'. That\'s it, the whole poem!
April 16th, 2018 01:51
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