Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Christina8 said:

Beautiful poem! I am also a fan of your abstracts.

March 19th, 2018 06:27

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
orchidee said:

Suppression, oppression, possession, depression, impression.. .. that\'s a lot of pressing. Who\'s pressing them buttons? And have you got your finger on any of them?!

March 19th, 2018 05:54

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
When I first saw your
painting, I thought of
it as a Phantom!
I love the colors!
A great read! I hope
there’s a continuation
to this fine penned piece!

~Laura~


March 19th, 2018 04:18

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Michael.

Love the abstract, back in your other style.

March 19th, 2018 02:35

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Well read!

March 19th, 2018 02:27

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Good work sir ..short but great!

March 19th, 2018 02:22

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Lorna said:

Very haunting Michael......... I see so many versions of a woman in your picture - don\'t know if I am imagining it but it is haunting as well...... and love the burst of colors.......

March 19th, 2018 02:07

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Ooh what\'s she up to?!

March 19th, 2018 02:03

SUPRESSIONS HOLD
Resa71 said:

Very nice read.
Thank you:)

March 19th, 2018 02:01

OUTSIDE THE BOX
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ for again breaking the boundaries of your BOX in both the Abstract and the Anthem (intriguing concept !). I love reptiles and the abstract clearly shows an alligator swimming to freedom outside its BOX (pool) in Tampa Zoo ! We are all trapped in boxes of our own making ~ some of ignorance as STEPHEN illustrated in his BOOK ~ A Short History of Time ~ Thanks for your comment ~ Yours BRIAN

March 18th, 2018 10:18

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
This is a very interesting and intriguing write! It reminds me of what I see at the rehab center. Drug addicts take drugs to counterbalance the drugs they’re addicted to! As SL stated, it’s a trap!
Great painting, my friend!

~Laura~

March 18th, 2018 09:35

OUTSIDE THE BOX
willyweed said:

I find a dog in the picture and wisdom in the words. ww

March 18th, 2018 08:07

LOVE RENEWED
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Ah... there is hope yet?
Thank you Michael

March 18th, 2018 06:58

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Lorna said:

Little boxes, little boxes and they\'re all made out of ticky tacky........ remember this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VUoXtddNPAM

March 18th, 2018 04:26

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Goldfinch60 said:

I have moments like that, but the problem is if I think outside the box I can never find the box that I left and if I climb in others boxes they don\'t like it.

Like the abstract.

March 18th, 2018 03:51

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Caring dove said:

a box is very trapping , no wander he cannot think straight ! lol.. he needs to find a circle to jump into lol

March 18th, 2018 03:02

OUTSIDE THE BOX
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Now we must know things such as: How big is the box? What is it made of? How long will he be outside the box? How long will he be in it?! And so on - most important questions. lol.

March 18th, 2018 03:01

OUTSIDE THE BOX
Caring dove said:

oh dear, lol ! this is good , i like it ! :-)

poor guy , cant think clearly at all

March 18th, 2018 02:56

SHE WAS ALONE
orchidee said:

She still alone, or she found some company today? Is it today all day, or......oh I did enough on that the other day!

March 17th, 2018 13:01

SHE WAS ALONE
Lorna said:

ooooo Michael - you\'ve outdone yourself and I dove into your painting of blue......

March 17th, 2018 06:25

SHE WAS ALONE
willyweed said:

Great format and picture Michael.

March 17th, 2018 05:41

SHE WAS ALONE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the Seascape ~ I am a Coastal Boy at Heart ! Born on the West Coast and living on the East ! Loved the Structure of the UDIT BHATIA (they taste good too ! The contents of the poem is also elegant but mournful ! Please check my HORSE and my FUSION on ANIMALS ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN

March 17th, 2018 05:13

SHE WAS ALONE
orchidee said:

Not that I don\'t repeat myself sometimes in poems, I said, not that I don\'t...... (I wish I would shut up. lol).

March 17th, 2018 03:01

SHE WAS ALONE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Phew, I won\'t even start this form with me hymn-poems! It\'s \'common\' for me to stay with me \'Common Metre\' often. 8.6.8.6. lines that is!
Cheating a bit, cos that fits to thousands of tunes, yet so many of them I don\'t know.

March 17th, 2018 03:01

SHE WAS ALONE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
As Gold stated, an intriguing structure to express a painful situation! Beautiful painting...Maestro Extraordinaire! Bravo!

~Laura~

March 17th, 2018 02:26

LOVE RENEWED
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
This is a beautiful write of the journey of a lifetime...as colorful as your painting! Enjoyed the read!

~Laura~

March 17th, 2018 02:10

SHE WAS ALONE
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a very good write Michael and the structure is intriguing.

March 17th, 2018 01:33

LOVE RENEWED
willyweed said:

wonderful poem Michael, the painting looks like a bouquet of beautiful flowers to me? ww


March 16th, 2018 16:07

LOVE RENEWED
Nicholas Browning said:

Now this one sure is a thriller. It\'s like a roller coaster. It starts off slow, hits you with a slope, and then calms you down with a satisfactory conclusion. Very nice.

March 16th, 2018 09:02

LOVE RENEWED
Lorna said:

Pilgrims on their way to glory, sometimes up to mischief naughty............

March 16th, 2018 03:25



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