Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



WORDS
orchidee said:

Colloquial, eh? That any relation to ventriloquial?!

May 3rd, 2018 10:02

WORDS
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
An impressive write! I’m fascinated by words! As an English language learner, I’m always curious about words and their usage!
Beautiful red tulips! Great pic of them! They look very velvety!

~Laura~

May 3rd, 2018 09:48

WORDS
onepauly said:

words come to me
that be free.

May 3rd, 2018 07:20

WORDS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MIKE ~ The pen has always (ad ultimatum) been mightier than the sword ! I love the ultimate definition of MODERN POETRY ~ and the are many examples on MPS !

MODERN POETRY ~ is just WORDS
any WORDS in any ORDER !
Generally without RHYME and ~
often without REASON !

Thanks for posting ~ Love WORDS
Love TULIPS ~ Yours BRIAN

Please check my Internal Organs ~ I will
post a MODERN POEM ~ tomorrow !

May 3rd, 2018 06:13

WORDS
Lorna said:

Eliza Doolittle didn\'t think much of them............

May 3rd, 2018 05:54

ONCE HONED
Fay Slimm. said:

Just caught up with this deep and meaningful write Micheal - sorry hear about you and yours being rained on so much during your break - Norfolk can be beautiful when the sun favours the days - -still you were all together as a happy family and celebrating a special birthday with moments to treasure no doubt - good to have your work back again with this piece which shows such wise perception of time\'s gift to family elders. Great read.

May 3rd, 2018 02:11

WORDS
orchidee said:

You parleying there? A fine write and pic M.

May 3rd, 2018 01:42

WORDS
Goldfinch60 said:

Words are so important in our lives, they can be so powerful both for good and evil. Good write Michael.

May 3rd, 2018 00:39

ONCE HONED
onepauly said:

this one goes on.
there is no end.

May 2nd, 2018 21:00

ONCE HONED
Lorna said:

Such a great message! You got rained on..... but at least someone else made the bed and cooked the meals! Welcome back.

May 2nd, 2018 09:36

ONCE HONED
Laura🌻 said:

Hi, Michael! Glad you’re back!
Andy really honed in to the message conveyed in your poem! A great write and beautiful pic!

~Laura~

May 2nd, 2018 08:05

ONCE HONED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Love the Violets ~ very Springy ! Thanks for a very thoughtful poem ~ I\'m 35 this year so I can look back ~ nostalgically ~ but also forward and your Poem give me hope for the future ! Nice to have a \"MICHEAL\" to ponder on at work today ! Yours BRIAN

May 2nd, 2018 03:25

ONCE HONED
orchidee said:

I\'ll threaten to sing this! heehee. It reads rather melodically! That will blunt one\'s blade! A fine write M.

May 2nd, 2018 01:50

ONCE HONED
Goldfinch60 said:

Those blunted blades when sharpened can cut through the sorrow of life into a glorious future.
Good write Michael.

May 2nd, 2018 00:41

LIMERICK No54
FineB said:

Thank you Michael!

That was good! It has cheered me up on this wet and miserable day outside.

Keep writing
FineB

April 27th, 2018 07:20

LIMERICK No54
kitcat said:

Loved it Michael Great poem thought it so funny Brilliant humour Loved the pic too

April 26th, 2018 15:08

LIMERICK No54
onepauly said:

enjoyed it.
I do wish people would
write poetry for poetry sake.

April 26th, 2018 09:24

LIMERICK No54
orchidee said:

BOO!!! Some poets writing on sleepy themes today. Did that wake you?! heehee. And how\'s Miss Berles?

April 26th, 2018 08:32

LIMERICK No54
Lorna said:

Fun and funny! At least she didn\'t put them on the outside of her clothes - I\'ve seen that! But mostly teenage boys....... whatever floats their boats!!! ha ha

April 26th, 2018 07:15

LIMERICK No54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

I\'ve been to LIMERICK and its a droll as your Poem ! thanks for sharing ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check MINE ~ B ! Love the muted shades in you art ~ very soothing !

April 26th, 2018 06:37

LIMERICK No54
Fay Slimm. said:

I agree that the majority of writing here seems to be an outlet for personal angst - - - but loved the grin your limerick raised as my first read of the morning Michael. - - A smile is a great tonic.

April 26th, 2018 03:42

LIMERICK No54
orchidee said:

Ooh swoon heehee! Not a poem about Miss Sue E. Side. I wouldn\'t like to meet her!

April 26th, 2018 01:54

LIMERICK No54
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun Limerick Michael.

I see the image is now looking in the opposite direction.

April 26th, 2018 00:49

TRANSIENT DREAMS
lasergraph said:

Beautiful job, in both imagery and words.

April 25th, 2018 14:43

TRANSIENT DREAMS
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
I enjoyed the read of your shorty and the Modigliani inspired artwork!

~Laura~

April 25th, 2018 10:07

TRANSIENT DREAMS
Lorna said:

Don\'t we have to grab that transient dream pretty quickly when we wake before it disappears! Do you paint portraits Michael?

April 25th, 2018 06:38

TRANSIENT DREAMS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

YOU may say you\'re a DREAMER
You\'re not the only one
So today I have joined you
That the WORLD might be one
Before we can create anything
We must first dream about something !

Thanks MIKE for caring & sharing
Love the Primitive Art ~ Pink & Green
Transitory ? Yours Dreamily ~ BRIAN

Please check MY FAMILY ~ Thanks B !

April 25th, 2018 03:13

TRANSIENT DREAMS
orchidee said:

A fine shorty write and pic Michael.

April 25th, 2018 01:41

TRANSIENT DREAMS
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Michael.

Sorry I didn\'t comment on the artwor yesterday but it is an interesting style of work.

April 25th, 2018 00:44

YESTEROW IS TOMODAY
orchidee said:

Cooeee - see ya tomorrow, which will then be today. Oh, I got headache now, working this lot out.....

April 24th, 2018 13:44



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