Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LUMBER
Louis Gibbs said:
Like everything else in nature, we all get the axe someday. At least trees are a renewable resource, unlike oil and coal. Good write, Michael!
January 19th, 2018 09:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Like everything else in nature, we all get the axe someday. At least trees are a renewable resource, unlike oil and coal. Good write, Michael!
January 19th, 2018 09:41
LUMBER
orchidee said:
Plus the old mystery - If a tree fell in a wood, and no one was there, would the tree make a noise as it fell? Hhmmm.
January 19th, 2018 02:43
orchidee said:
Plus the old mystery - If a tree fell in a wood, and no one was there, would the tree make a noise as it fell? Hhmmm.
January 19th, 2018 02:43
LUMBER
orchidee said:
A good write and true unfortunately. Trees there for many years - then gone in a moment.
Meanwhile - lumber - or lumbered with me singing?! lol.
January 19th, 2018 02:42
orchidee said:
A good write and true unfortunately. Trees there for many years - then gone in a moment.
Meanwhile - lumber - or lumbered with me singing?! lol.
January 19th, 2018 02:42
LUMBER
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the painting is gorgeous! And the poem ain\'t bad either! Don\'t know how you do it day after day!
January 19th, 2018 02:18
FredPeyer said:
Michael, the painting is gorgeous! And the poem ain\'t bad either! Don\'t know how you do it day after day!
January 19th, 2018 02:18
LUMBER
Goldfinch60 said:
Good meaningful write, so much is being destroyed in this world.
Beautiful artwork.
January 19th, 2018 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good meaningful write, so much is being destroyed in this world.
Beautiful artwork.
January 19th, 2018 02:05
CAUSATION
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you do have a way with words (might have said that before, but hey, it\'s true!) I would love to give my enemy (if I had one) an enema, just to see him suffer!
January 18th, 2018 16:57
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you do have a way with words (might have said that before, but hey, it\'s true!) I would love to give my enemy (if I had one) an enema, just to see him suffer!
January 18th, 2018 16:57
CAUSATION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ CAUSE & EFFECT ~ Love the abstract \"Snowy Village !\" Cause \"Snowfall\" effect \"Winter Wonderland\" As far(t) as the Poem is concerned is was ever thus ! BRIAN
January 18th, 2018 12:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ CAUSE & EFFECT ~ Love the abstract \"Snowy Village !\" Cause \"Snowfall\" effect \"Winter Wonderland\" As far(t) as the Poem is concerned is was ever thus ! BRIAN
January 18th, 2018 12:38
CAUSATION
lasergraph said:
Enemy and enema are both a pain in the a$$. I always love your short but to the point writes and the art as well.
January 18th, 2018 12:30
lasergraph said:
Enemy and enema are both a pain in the a$$. I always love your short but to the point writes and the art as well.
January 18th, 2018 12:30
CAUSATION
orchidee said:
That enema can seem like an enemy. Then it links to gas and discharge! heehee. In fact I can see now how the whole poem is linked!
January 18th, 2018 09:01
orchidee said:
That enema can seem like an enemy. Then it links to gas and discharge! heehee. In fact I can see now how the whole poem is linked!
January 18th, 2018 09:01
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep and telling these lines Michael - so pleased to have caught this hark back and look forward with love as its irrepressible subject. First class write.
January 18th, 2018 04:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Deep and telling these lines Michael - so pleased to have caught this hark back and look forward with love as its irrepressible subject. First class write.
January 18th, 2018 04:58
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The tetrameter gives each line a respectable cadence; well wrought diction. Thoroughly enjoyed your poem Michael.
January 17th, 2018 23:59
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The tetrameter gives each line a respectable cadence; well wrought diction. Thoroughly enjoyed your poem Michael.
January 17th, 2018 23:59
LOVE\'S CYCLE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you penned something very beautiful here, amazing word choices, incredible flow, and so much meaning and truth. That formula one car has been replaced by a bicycle, but hey, we are still getting around! :-)
January 17th, 2018 11:26
FredPeyer said:
Michael, you penned something very beautiful here, amazing word choices, incredible flow, and so much meaning and truth. That formula one car has been replaced by a bicycle, but hey, we are still getting around! :-)
January 17th, 2018 11:26
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Louis Gibbs said:
Infatuation comes and goes. Love never really dies, though it may morph into a mellow memory, indeed. Well expressed, Michael!
January 17th, 2018 09:22
Louis Gibbs said:
Infatuation comes and goes. Love never really dies, though it may morph into a mellow memory, indeed. Well expressed, Michael!
January 17th, 2018 09:22
LOVE\'S CYCLE
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is so very beautiful and expressive.
January 17th, 2018 09:21
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is so very beautiful and expressive.
January 17th, 2018 09:21
LOVE\'S CYCLE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for Dawn stimulation ! Love the visual ~ the never ending Circle of Love and the ripples of the Ups & Downs of Love ! Your ODE exemplifies the VISUAL ! Love (in my experience) is CYCLIC and what goes round ~ comes round ! I have FALLEN (I guess that is the correct verb ?) IN & OUT for Love regularly for half my life (17 years) and the ECSTASY (and AGONY) has been worth it ~ Let there be LOVE ! Yours BRIAN
January 17th, 2018 04:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for Dawn stimulation ! Love the visual ~ the never ending Circle of Love and the ripples of the Ups & Downs of Love ! Your ODE exemplifies the VISUAL ! Love (in my experience) is CYCLIC and what goes round ~ comes round ! I have FALLEN (I guess that is the correct verb ?) IN & OUT for Love regularly for half my life (17 years) and the ECSTASY (and AGONY) has been worth it ~ Let there be LOVE ! Yours BRIAN
January 17th, 2018 04:15
LOVE\'S CYCLE
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Ooh lucidity. Will that make me swoon?! lol.
January 17th, 2018 02:41
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Ooh lucidity. Will that make me swoon?! lol.
January 17th, 2018 02:41
ANOTHER COUPLET COLLECTION
lasergraph said:
I liked them all. Political correctness has too big a choke hold on us all.
January 16th, 2018 16:38
lasergraph said:
I liked them all. Political correctness has too big a choke hold on us all.
January 16th, 2018 16:38
ANOTHER COUPLET COLLECTION
Louis Gibbs said:
All four are beauties, Michael! Well thought out.
January 16th, 2018 10:13
Louis Gibbs said:
All four are beauties, Michael! Well thought out.
January 16th, 2018 10:13
ANOTHER COUPLET COLLECTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I like them all ! No. 3 best very apt for today\'s international \"diplomacy\" ! You can only \"give & take\" with an open palm ~ a clenched fist is always aggressive it can conceal a weapon (or a bribe) and always packs a PUNCH. Having been brought up in LIVERPOOL I have both given & received \"bare knuckle\" but I much prefer the \"velvet glove\" ! Thanks for scaring BRIAN Please don\'t forget my \"Monthly Fusion !\" B. I like the Ariel Photography ~ The Bermuda Triangle is very clear !
January 16th, 2018 07:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I like them all ! No. 3 best very apt for today\'s international \"diplomacy\" ! You can only \"give & take\" with an open palm ~ a clenched fist is always aggressive it can conceal a weapon (or a bribe) and always packs a PUNCH. Having been brought up in LIVERPOOL I have both given & received \"bare knuckle\" but I much prefer the \"velvet glove\" ! Thanks for scaring BRIAN Please don\'t forget my \"Monthly Fusion !\" B. I like the Ariel Photography ~ The Bermuda Triangle is very clear !
January 16th, 2018 07:35
ANOTHER COUPLET COLLECTION
FredPeyer said:
Agree with no.1, well said!
No.2, yes, beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
No.3, so true, but sometimes it is the only way.
No.4, and is this view correct?
January 16th, 2018 02:37
FredPeyer said:
Agree with no.1, well said!
No.2, yes, beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
No.3, so true, but sometimes it is the only way.
No.4, and is this view correct?
January 16th, 2018 02:37
ANOTHER COUPLET COLLECTION
Goldfinch60 said:
I do like the first one Michael.
January 16th, 2018 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
I do like the first one Michael.
January 16th, 2018 01:55
HEY WAITER THERE\'S A .....
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
As your language its a little gem sir!
January 15th, 2018 08:41
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
As your language its a little gem sir!
January 15th, 2018 08:41
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