Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ! Whether you\'re a MAN or FISH (love all the sculptures !) as one gets over life ebbs and the Glory diminishes and the river of time flows relentlessly. At 35 I\'m still in my PRIME and there is the question of marrying (ANGELA ?) and raising a Family. As far as work is concerned I am still on he WAY UP ! Head of Science ~ VP and then perhaps PRINCIPAL ! Without ambition we stagnate ! But having said that one also sees how one\'s DOMAIN can disappear ~ I\'ve seen it happen and it is NOT NICE ~ A Friend of mine (45) recently suicided off a Motorway Bridge because his WORK DOMAIN disappeared ~ Leaving a grieving WIDOW & three distraught Children ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
February 15th, 2018 08:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ! Whether you\'re a MAN or FISH (love all the sculptures !) as one gets over life ebbs and the Glory diminishes and the river of time flows relentlessly. At 35 I\'m still in my PRIME and there is the question of marrying (ANGELA ?) and raising a Family. As far as work is concerned I am still on he WAY UP ! Head of Science ~ VP and then perhaps PRINCIPAL ! Without ambition we stagnate ! But having said that one also sees how one\'s DOMAIN can disappear ~ I\'ve seen it happen and it is NOT NICE ~ A Friend of mine (45) recently suicided off a Motorway Bridge because his WORK DOMAIN disappeared ~ Leaving a grieving WIDOW & three distraught Children ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
February 15th, 2018 08:38
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
Heather T said:
Sir, this is stunning. I read through twice and then aloud to feel the affecting verses in my mouth. This is a moody beauty. Bravo.
February 15th, 2018 08:30
Heather T said:
Sir, this is stunning. I read through twice and then aloud to feel the affecting verses in my mouth. This is a moody beauty. Bravo.
February 15th, 2018 08:30
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
Fay Slimm. said:
First class write Michael - - love every stanza of this mystical journey into failing minds. Another gem from your talented quill which goes straight into my favourites.
February 15th, 2018 05:51
Fay Slimm. said:
First class write Michael - - love every stanza of this mystical journey into failing minds. Another gem from your talented quill which goes straight into my favourites.
February 15th, 2018 05:51
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
orchidee said:
Hold on *gets out dictionary for purlieus*. Good write Michael.
February 15th, 2018 02:44
orchidee said:
Hold on *gets out dictionary for purlieus*. Good write Michael.
February 15th, 2018 02:44
WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good dark write, the imagery is wonderful, a picture painted with words.
February 15th, 2018 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good dark write, the imagery is wonderful, a picture painted with words.
February 15th, 2018 02:25
LOVE IS >>>
myself and me said:
Love is simple, easy and straight as this yet no so simple, easy and straight to have.
February 14th, 2018 20:52
myself and me said:
Love is simple, easy and straight as this yet no so simple, easy and straight to have.
February 14th, 2018 20:52
LOVE IS >>>
FredPeyer said:
Yes, love is all that, Michael, and much more like sharing our joys and sorrows, watching that sunset together, getting wet in the rain together, and.....letting the other one drive the car without any backseat driver comments!!!
February 14th, 2018 14:11
FredPeyer said:
Yes, love is all that, Michael, and much more like sharing our joys and sorrows, watching that sunset together, getting wet in the rain together, and.....letting the other one drive the car without any backseat driver comments!!!
February 14th, 2018 14:11
ME AND MY FAMILY
FredPeyer said:
Dancing is a way of expressing yourself, same as you do in your painting and writing. And judging from how you paint and write, I think you have the potential to be an incredible dancer!
Ancestry: My family tree goes way back to before there were humans on this earth, to my ancestors on that far away planet, the generations born in the ship all the way to arrival on earth. There is some indication, not entirely clear though, that some of your ancestors arrived on the same space ship.
February 14th, 2018 14:00
FredPeyer said:
Dancing is a way of expressing yourself, same as you do in your painting and writing. And judging from how you paint and write, I think you have the potential to be an incredible dancer!
Ancestry: My family tree goes way back to before there were humans on this earth, to my ancestors on that far away planet, the generations born in the ship all the way to arrival on earth. There is some indication, not entirely clear though, that some of your ancestors arrived on the same space ship.
February 14th, 2018 14:00
ME AND MY FAMILY
malubotelho said:
Humorous and smart at the same time. Always a joy to read you Michael
February 14th, 2018 13:08
malubotelho said:
Humorous and smart at the same time. Always a joy to read you Michael
February 14th, 2018 13:08
ME AND MY FAMILY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL \"The eye of the Fish is awesome !\" I\'m learning lots from the \"SENIORS* on MPS ~ Adam & Eve indeed ~ in essence we are ALL descended from THEM ! \"Daddy Dancing\" is an oft debated subject ~ but I have no critics and Angela loves to dance with me and we both love STRICTLY ~ It takes TANG to TO~O ! Thanks for scaring ~ Yours BRIAN
February 14th, 2018 09:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL \"The eye of the Fish is awesome !\" I\'m learning lots from the \"SENIORS* on MPS ~ Adam & Eve indeed ~ in essence we are ALL descended from THEM ! \"Daddy Dancing\" is an oft debated subject ~ but I have no critics and Angela loves to dance with me and we both love STRICTLY ~ It takes TANG to TO~O ! Thanks for scaring ~ Yours BRIAN
February 14th, 2018 09:14
ME AND MY FAMILY
dusk arising said:
Ha! Adam and Eve indeed,.. you\'re a bunch of youngsters..... my family can be traced back to when they first slimed and wriggled their way out of the ocean..... Bournemouth i think it was.
I really like the series of pictures you\'\'ve been using recently.
February 14th, 2018 08:35
dusk arising said:
Ha! Adam and Eve indeed,.. you\'re a bunch of youngsters..... my family can be traced back to when they first slimed and wriggled their way out of the ocean..... Bournemouth i think it was.
I really like the series of pictures you\'\'ve been using recently.
February 14th, 2018 08:35
ME AND MY FAMILY
Christina8 said:
Very good Michael--I like the one about dancing very much!
February 14th, 2018 07:25
Christina8 said:
Very good Michael--I like the one about dancing very much!
February 14th, 2018 07:25
ME AND MY FAMILY
Michael Edwards said:
Got it Orchi:
Biological evolutionists keep getting it wrong
When they say we’ve evolved from primates
Now I’ve been telling them all along
( and the argument never abates)
that in fact the apes evolved from us
and the truth was ever thus!
February 14th, 2018 03:01
Michael Edwards said:
Got it Orchi:
Biological evolutionists keep getting it wrong
When they say we’ve evolved from primates
Now I’ve been telling them all along
( and the argument never abates)
that in fact the apes evolved from us
and the truth was ever thus!
February 14th, 2018 03:01
ME AND MY FAMILY
orchidee said:
I was a dinosaur! What\'s that you say?- you still are! doh! Good write Michael. Well, I for one don\'t believe we evolved from apes.
February 14th, 2018 02:37
orchidee said:
I was a dinosaur! What\'s that you say?- you still are! doh! Good write Michael. Well, I for one don\'t believe we evolved from apes.
February 14th, 2018 02:37
ME AND MY FAMILY
Goldfinch60 said:
But if you trace it back to Adam and Eve how did you get back to the records before the Great Flood. Orchi and I were there disguised as baboons.
February 14th, 2018 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
But if you trace it back to Adam and Eve how did you get back to the records before the Great Flood. Orchi and I were there disguised as baboons.
February 14th, 2018 01:59
LOVE IS >>>
Christina8 said:
Such simple things but when there is such a deep and meaningful love between two people, you are glad to have that person to share all these things with. Great write!
February 13th, 2018 21:11
Christina8 said:
Such simple things but when there is such a deep and meaningful love between two people, you are glad to have that person to share all these things with. Great write!
February 13th, 2018 21:11
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
FredPeyer said:
As many others already mentioned, had to read it several times too, and it really does grow on the reader. The perfect woman...a paragon of womanhood. And you Michael are on the way of becoming a paragon of poethood!
February 13th, 2018 20:33
FredPeyer said:
As many others already mentioned, had to read it several times too, and it really does grow on the reader. The perfect woman...a paragon of womanhood. And you Michael are on the way of becoming a paragon of poethood!
February 13th, 2018 20:33
LOVE IS >>>
dusk arising said:
Ha! wht do you know about love...she makes me wear her undies or she wont let me do the washing up - i tell you it gets damn chilly stood by the sink in february just in undies ...pah! real love.
.omg.... you better believe this is tongue in cheek
February 13th, 2018 15:38
dusk arising said:
Ha! wht do you know about love...she makes me wear her undies or she wont let me do the washing up - i tell you it gets damn chilly stood by the sink in february just in undies ...pah! real love.
.omg.... you better believe this is tongue in cheek
February 13th, 2018 15:38
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Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Love is lovely ...and your piece is also beautious enough!!
February 13th, 2018 12:18
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Love is lovely ...and your piece is also beautious enough!!
February 13th, 2018 12:18
LOVE IS >>>
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES MIKE ~ In my (limited) experience it always
\"Takes Two to Tango\" When one is in LOVE ~
Sky above is Brighter Blue
Earth beneath is Softer Green
Something gleams in every hue
Loveless Eyes have never seen ......
Thanks for sharing the 24/7 BLESSINGS of LOVE
Yours as always ~ BRIAN
Love the boat ~ QUINQUERIME of NINEVEH ?
February 13th, 2018 09:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES MIKE ~ In my (limited) experience it always
\"Takes Two to Tango\" When one is in LOVE ~
Sky above is Brighter Blue
Earth beneath is Softer Green
Something gleams in every hue
Loveless Eyes have never seen ......
Thanks for sharing the 24/7 BLESSINGS of LOVE
Yours as always ~ BRIAN
Love the boat ~ QUINQUERIME of NINEVEH ?
February 13th, 2018 09:35
LOVE IS >>>
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Yes, Love should be all of what you’ve described it to be...and more! It would promote peace and less divorces! I like this write very much! Today, I’m washing the linens
and he’s cooking!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 05:57
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Yes, Love should be all of what you’ve described it to be...and more! It would promote peace and less divorces! I like this write very much! Today, I’m washing the linens
and he’s cooking!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 05:57
LOVE IS >>>
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Love is - me scoffing pork pies and downing sherries. A completely selfish love of course. I could never share them with anyone!
Oh OK I will, but it\'s always porkies and sherries on the menu! heehee.
February 13th, 2018 02:33
orchidee said:
Good write Michael. Love is - me scoffing pork pies and downing sherries. A completely selfish love of course. I could never share them with anyone!
Oh OK I will, but it\'s always porkies and sherries on the menu! heehee.
February 13th, 2018 02:33
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Goldfinch60 said:
I am going to wash the linen today!
Being together in all things is so special.
February 13th, 2018 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
I am going to wash the linen today!
Being together in all things is so special.
February 13th, 2018 01:56
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Love the original ~ dripping with PATHOS ! Hoots Mon Ah luv yon woody fush ~ OCH AYE ~ BRIAN
February 12th, 2018 03:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Love the original ~ dripping with PATHOS ! Hoots Mon Ah luv yon woody fush ~ OCH AYE ~ BRIAN
February 12th, 2018 03:42
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
Laura🌻 said:
Did spy mellcheck! I did wetty prell! A bun frain exercise! This is fun, Michael! Cow I nannot stop!
Kidding aside, a great write! Many different interpretations, I’m sure! Open-ended...I like that!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:32
Laura🌻 said:
Did spy mellcheck! I did wetty prell! A bun frain exercise! This is fun, Michael! Cow I nannot stop!
Kidding aside, a great write! Many different interpretations, I’m sure! Open-ended...I like that!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:32
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
dusk arising said:
Very deep and needs several reads to find its meaning. It reminds me of somebody. Someone complex about who simple verse would fill two pages and fail. Somehow you\'ve captured their demeanor here.
February 12th, 2018 03:22
dusk arising said:
Very deep and needs several reads to find its meaning. It reminds me of somebody. Someone complex about who simple verse would fill two pages and fail. Somehow you\'ve captured their demeanor here.
February 12th, 2018 03:22
NOW FARP THE SHOTS
Laura🌻 said:
Fun to read Michael!
I must say , I had to read it a few times to figure out what it was saying! Thought provoking for sure!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:20
Laura🌻 said:
Fun to read Michael!
I must say , I had to read it a few times to figure out what it was saying! Thought provoking for sure!
~Laura~
February 12th, 2018 03:20
NOW SHARP THE FROSTS
orchidee said:
Ahh so that\'s what you was on about! I though yesterday\'s poem was in French or something! A wood grite again M. What\'s a grite?!
February 12th, 2018 02:40
orchidee said:
Ahh so that\'s what you was on about! I though yesterday\'s poem was in French or something! A wood grite again M. What\'s a grite?!
February 12th, 2018 02:40
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