Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THIS LAND HE CALLS HIS HOME
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Blank Verse Quintrains are like hens teeth ~ so I enjoyed these ! Both structurally and subject-wise ! It stirred the special feeling I get when i arrive at the Liverpool Waterfront by BOAT and gaze in awe at the Three Graces ! That is the Land I call my HOME ! I loved the starkness of the painting ~ it left everything to the imagination ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN
January 11th, 2018 12:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ Blank Verse Quintrains are like hens teeth ~ so I enjoyed these ! Both structurally and subject-wise ! It stirred the special feeling I get when i arrive at the Liverpool Waterfront by BOAT and gaze in awe at the Three Graces ! That is the Land I call my HOME ! I loved the starkness of the painting ~ it left everything to the imagination ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN
January 11th, 2018 12:42
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malubotelho said:
O love the simple complexity of your poem and paint. Just the right measure to make one think. Just genius.
January 11th, 2018 11:53
malubotelho said:
O love the simple complexity of your poem and paint. Just the right measure to make one think. Just genius.
January 11th, 2018 11:53
THIS LAND HE CALLS HIS HOME
FineB said:
Excellent a good write Michael with some vivid striking imagery.
Kind regards.
Keep writing in 2018
FineB
January 11th, 2018 10:51
FineB said:
Excellent a good write Michael with some vivid striking imagery.
Kind regards.
Keep writing in 2018
FineB
January 11th, 2018 10:51
THIS LAND HE CALLS HIS HOME
Louis Gibbs said:
Stark and strong, both poem and art! Each well presented, Michael.
January 11th, 2018 10:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Stark and strong, both poem and art! Each well presented, Michael.
January 11th, 2018 10:41
THIS LAND HE CALLS HIS HOME
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael.
I too like the artwork.
January 11th, 2018 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Michael.
I too like the artwork.
January 11th, 2018 02:26
IN ECSTASY
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely beautiful and mesmerizing. The third line carries the whole poem, making the other lines possible.
In my humble opinion, this is what masterful writing is all about.
January 10th, 2018 12:13
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely beautiful and mesmerizing. The third line carries the whole poem, making the other lines possible.
In my humble opinion, this is what masterful writing is all about.
January 10th, 2018 12:13
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Louis Gibbs said:
A well executed write, Michael, as only one with your background might be inclined to produce. Reflecting experience, perhaps?
January 10th, 2018 10:49
Louis Gibbs said:
A well executed write, Michael, as only one with your background might be inclined to produce. Reflecting experience, perhaps?
January 10th, 2018 10:49
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Fay Slimm. said:
Ah clever use of clerical terms in this reminder that danger lies in speaking out of turn - ha - I just love that last line Michael.
January 10th, 2018 05:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah clever use of clerical terms in this reminder that danger lies in speaking out of turn - ha - I just love that last line Michael.
January 10th, 2018 05:33
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orchidee said:
Did they \'engage brain before opening mouth?\' Good write and pic Michael.
January 10th, 2018 02:58
orchidee said:
Did they \'engage brain before opening mouth?\' Good write and pic Michael.
January 10th, 2018 02:58
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Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all open our mouths and sometimes wish the thought had come before the words.
Like the artwork very much.
January 10th, 2018 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all open our mouths and sometimes wish the thought had come before the words.
Like the artwork very much.
January 10th, 2018 01:52
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FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Michael. There are times when I realize right after I said it that it was definitely the wrong thing. I guess the lawyer in you is showing through a bit here, especially in the last line! :-)
January 10th, 2018 01:18
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Michael. There are times when I realize right after I said it that it was definitely the wrong thing. I guess the lawyer in you is showing through a bit here, especially in the last line! :-)
January 10th, 2018 01:18
IN ECSTASY
dusk arising said:
Pure joy to read. Less is more and there is soooo much more here.
January 9th, 2018 15:52
dusk arising said:
Pure joy to read. Less is more and there is soooo much more here.
January 9th, 2018 15:52
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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hmm saucy n sensational. I like the creative rhyming muse by your poets pen here. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 14:27
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hmm saucy n sensational. I like the creative rhyming muse by your poets pen here. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 14:27
IN ECSTASY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for another excellent FUSION of POEM and PIC. Personally I have always found Country & Coastal Girls ~ very affectionate ~ especially \"Lassies from Rural Lancashire !\" In the scenario you mention I would refuse or defuse ~ but always FUSE ! Yours BRIAN
January 9th, 2018 12:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE for another excellent FUSION of POEM and PIC. Personally I have always found Country & Coastal Girls ~ very affectionate ~ especially \"Lassies from Rural Lancashire !\" In the scenario you mention I would refuse or defuse ~ but always FUSE ! Yours BRIAN
January 9th, 2018 12:10
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Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful poetic description of the afterglow of love-making. Well penned, Michael!
January 9th, 2018 11:34
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful poetic description of the afterglow of love-making. Well penned, Michael!
January 9th, 2018 11:34
IN ECSTASY
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - love the descriptive words used in this short and sweetly sensuous piece - \"primal melody\" indeed Michael !! - - great painting too.
January 9th, 2018 08:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - love the descriptive words used in this short and sweetly sensuous piece - \"primal melody\" indeed Michael !! - - great painting too.
January 9th, 2018 08:54
IN ECSTASY
orchidee said:
Oh woe is me
I never gets to ecstasy
I only gets as far as a swoony!
heehee.
January 9th, 2018 08:43
orchidee said:
Oh woe is me
I never gets to ecstasy
I only gets as far as a swoony!
heehee.
January 9th, 2018 08:43
IN ECSTASY
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael, and a swoon from me! lol.
January 9th, 2018 02:49
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael, and a swoon from me! lol.
January 9th, 2018 02:49
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
dusk arising said:
His brow was moderately wrinkled
as he sat in the cold and he tinkled
for the prostate you know
will slacken the flow
so stay young and don\'t ever think-old
January 8th, 2018 21:41
dusk arising said:
His brow was moderately wrinkled
as he sat in the cold and he tinkled
for the prostate you know
will slacken the flow
so stay young and don\'t ever think-old
January 8th, 2018 21:41
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
Christina8 said:
These lines are genius! Great job! Also beautiful painting of the hall! You always do such great work.
January 8th, 2018 17:56
Christina8 said:
These lines are genius! Great job! Also beautiful painting of the hall! You always do such great work.
January 8th, 2018 17:56
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
FredPeyer said:
I go along with all four of your one-liners, except the hip thing. With me it is more of a belly thing.
Love \'age and sin...\', but we can still dream, can we?
Love the painting. Am amazed at how well you do perspectives and details, especially in a watercolor. The windows are exquisitely done, not easy with watercolors where you don\'t paint white and cannot really overpaint as in acrylics. Guess your engineering background is showing through a little bit.
January 8th, 2018 11:40
FredPeyer said:
I go along with all four of your one-liners, except the hip thing. With me it is more of a belly thing.
Love \'age and sin...\', but we can still dream, can we?
Love the painting. Am amazed at how well you do perspectives and details, especially in a watercolor. The windows are exquisitely done, not easy with watercolors where you don\'t paint white and cannot really overpaint as in acrylics. Guess your engineering background is showing through a little bit.
January 8th, 2018 11:40
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
lasergraph said:
Growing old is always better than the alternative. The wear and tear on the outside is not an indication of wear on the inside. We seem to gain perspective after the experience of age. Sometimes even new ways to look at life. A toast to experience my friend.
January 8th, 2018 09:31
lasergraph said:
Growing old is always better than the alternative. The wear and tear on the outside is not an indication of wear on the inside. We seem to gain perspective after the experience of age. Sometimes even new ways to look at life. A toast to experience my friend.
January 8th, 2018 09:31
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
Fay Slimm. said:
Great thought on the aging struggle Michael - love the painting too which will always have a special place in your home I would imagine - a wonderful space in which to exchange marriage vows - - -
January 8th, 2018 05:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Great thought on the aging struggle Michael - love the painting too which will always have a special place in your home I would imagine - a wonderful space in which to exchange marriage vows - - -
January 8th, 2018 05:38
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m having a real fight keeping the weight down - have a 20 minute routine every morning which gets me out of breath and eat sensibly but it\'s still a struggle. Cheers Andy.
January 8th, 2018 02:58
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m having a real fight keeping the weight down - have a 20 minute routine every morning which gets me out of breath and eat sensibly but it\'s still a struggle. Cheers Andy.
January 8th, 2018 02:58
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