Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



CULTURE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
Two fine little gems...poem and painting!
Your subject matter is a constant discussion in our household! Trying to keep our culture alive as much as we can!

~Laura~

February 27th, 2018 05:15

CULTURE
Lorna said:

Oh yes - wouldn\'t the world be a flat place without all the different cultures. Only thing I can say for the mish-mash though is that I see kids growing up together and not thinking twice about who is what color or whatever - and perhaps that is a good thing for the future. Will they kill each other less perhaps?

February 27th, 2018 05:06

CULTURE
dusk arising said:

Also applies to politics and society. The country i grew up in where we played games which had roots hundreds of years old and the nation followed many historic traditions (look whats happened to sundays) has changed so very much. The boundaries, whatever, you perceive them to be, have been eroded.
Are you posting a \'wake up UK\' notice here?

February 27th, 2018 03:21

CULTURE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Oohh, I know, me roots must be kept alive when I dye me hair green! Now come on Orchi, you\'ve missed the point of this poem. Probably lost the plot again! lol.

February 27th, 2018 02:56

CULTURE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING VAN GOGH ~ Love the VISUAL \"SURVIVAL\" We all need roots TAP ROOTS for nourishment and stability and LATERAL ROOTS to expand our Boundaries ~ Thanks for reminding ~ BRIAN

February 27th, 2018 02:26

CULTURE
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Michael.

Great artwork.

February 27th, 2018 01:24

A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

I know only ..this is a great poem!

February 26th, 2018 19:39

A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Fay Slimm. said:

The strength within this Lady oozes from your tribute to dignity Michael - so much to aim for when that time arrives for us all.

February 26th, 2018 12:54

A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Christina8 said:

Beautiful painting and I just loved \"woman of dignity\" you did such a great job describing in your poem.

February 26th, 2018 09:37

A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Laura🌻 said:

A great write with a beautiful painting, Michael!
As I was reading it, it reminded me of Monica Bellucci in the film ā€œMalenaā€ when she walked through town with her head held up high! Enjoyed the read very much!

~Laura~

February 26th, 2018 09:19

A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
myself and me said:

The color in the paint is so lovely and the lady in the poem is just right.

February 26th, 2018 08:44

A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
orchidee said:

It\'s the Co-op for me - no toffee-noses there!

February 26th, 2018 06:55

A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Lorna said:

You\'ve got total command over this poem Michael! She would have been the example my mother held up to show me how to be - and I could never manage........ oh well. Always love your paintings.......

February 26th, 2018 05:12

A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
dusk arising said:

That\'s a lady that is. You can spot \'em... it\'s the way they eat cake.

February 26th, 2018 04:21

A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
FredPeyer said:

Beautifully written, Michael. But she does sound a little bit stuck up. Or maybe that is just her British side? :-)

February 26th, 2018 03:04

A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
orchidee said:

A dignified write and pic there Michael. Would she make me swoon? Or is she too dignified for that?! lol.

February 26th, 2018 02:43

A WOMAN OF DIGNITY
Goldfinch60 said:

A woman of dignity has surely dignified the words written.

February 26th, 2018 02:05

FOG
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,
The title reminded me of Carl Sandburg’s poem, ā€œFogā€. A required read in school!
Remembering his while reading yours, I see similarities and differences! Both excellent writes! Enjoyed the read!

~Laura~

February 25th, 2018 16:11

FOG
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS ANDY ~ As you know the real pea soup fogs of the 19th (Orchi will remember those !) and the 20th C have largely been abated ! What I love are the MISTS you get in Snowdonia ~ Scotland (Scottish Mist !) and the Lake District ~ if you are on the Hills you have to be guided by the ubiquitous CAIRNS ! It is only when you are in a FOG or a MIST that you fully appreciate BROTHER SUN ! Love the wording of the poem very KEATSIAN ! Yours BRIAN

February 25th, 2018 05:03

FOG
Lorna said:

Well Michael I have seen every Sherlock Holmes movie and Jack the Ripper and they are always moving through the \"Impenetrable fog\"........ it\'s actually amazing that it was reversed! It must have been a bit frightening! Oh and loved the verse!

February 25th, 2018 04:38

FOG
FredPeyer said:

Beautiful writing again, Michael. Makes me remember the foggy days in November in Zuerich. Don\'t have much fog here in Hawaii. Sometimes just a little bit hanging in the valleys in early morning.

February 25th, 2018 03:48

RISING PAIN
FredPeyer said:

Don\'t believe everything you hear, it might pain you.....as perceived by the one who lives along a remote, but not so responsive shore.

February 25th, 2018 03:02

FOG
dusk arising said:

You got the title wrong mate, this should be called dusks kitchen. We use a smoke alarm as an oven timer.

February 25th, 2018 02:55

FOG
orchidee said:

A fine write M.Never knew there was so much in fog! Maybe because I could not SEE anything in the fog! heehee.
You see me? *reaches to shelf for dictionary* And who is Chorus Kate? lol.

February 25th, 2018 02:54

FOG
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Michael.

February 25th, 2018 02:53

RISING PAIN
dusk arising said:

How often we pick up the signals missed by those involved who may be blinded by their love and devotion. Hope i read this convoluted tale correctly. Very subtle.

February 24th, 2018 15:06

BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS
FredPeyer said:

I keep on fighting for my breath and you keep on walking! Looks like we both had the same thing in mind, but you said it more beautifully and eloquently. Well penned, Michael!

February 24th, 2018 13:45

RISING PAIN
orchidee said:

Meanwhile - I thought this would be about my singing. That\'s a rising pain (in the neck!) to people. heehee.

February 24th, 2018 07:14

RISING PAIN
Lorna said:

We are so deep inside someone here!

February 24th, 2018 05:20

RISING PAIN
Laura🌻 said:

Wow! That’s a powerful message, Michael, via words and visual! Has to be read more than once...for sure!

~Laura~

February 24th, 2018 05:17



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