Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS
Goldfinch60 said:
My worries seem to have settled on my stomach, nowadays it is hard to try and convince others it is relaxed muscle.
January 8th, 2018 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
My worries seem to have settled on my stomach, nowadays it is hard to try and convince others it is relaxed muscle.
January 8th, 2018 02:50
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that first taste of love is something quite special and is always remembered.
January 8th, 2018 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that first taste of love is something quite special and is always remembered.
January 8th, 2018 01:17
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a lovely balanced Poem \'n Pic. Thank heaven Love\'s First Taste leaves one wanting more and is never the last. At my age the taste of love ~ still has its freshness and anticipation ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 17:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL for a lovely balanced Poem \'n Pic. Thank heaven Love\'s First Taste leaves one wanting more and is never the last. At my age the taste of love ~ still has its freshness and anticipation ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 17:21
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
FredPeyer said:
Michael, beautifully written, and I agree with SL, that last stanza is something else, you may be smug for as long as you want! And for a five minute job, that painting is amazing!
January 7th, 2018 11:06
FredPeyer said:
Michael, beautifully written, and I agree with SL, that last stanza is something else, you may be smug for as long as you want! And for a five minute job, that painting is amazing!
January 7th, 2018 11:06
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
WL Schuett said:
Nice work Michael both poem and painting
January 7th, 2018 07:44
WL Schuett said:
Nice work Michael both poem and painting
January 7th, 2018 07:44
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
Accidental Poet said:
Love\'s first taste sometimes lasts a lifetime. Great write Michael.
January 7th, 2018 07:34
Accidental Poet said:
Love\'s first taste sometimes lasts a lifetime. Great write Michael.
January 7th, 2018 07:34
LOVE\'S FIRST TASTE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. Did she swoon when she tasted?! I did, of course! heehee.
January 7th, 2018 03:24
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. Did she swoon when she tasted?! I did, of course! heehee.
January 7th, 2018 03:24
SATURDAY
Lauraš» said:
Enjoyed reading your acrostic poem, Michael!
The Acrostic form is one of my favorites!
When one is retired, every day is SATURDAY! Enjoy to the fullest!
January 6th, 2018 18:05
Lauraš» said:
Enjoyed reading your acrostic poem, Michael!
The Acrostic form is one of my favorites!
When one is retired, every day is SATURDAY! Enjoy to the fullest!
January 6th, 2018 18:05
SATURDAY
FredPeyer said:
Maybe I should be, but am not retired yet, Michael. Saturday for me is a day of chores, so I am not so sure I would want every day of the week to be like that. :-)
Like the poem, though!
January 6th, 2018 15:08
FredPeyer said:
Maybe I should be, but am not retired yet, Michael. Saturday for me is a day of chores, so I am not so sure I would want every day of the week to be like that. :-)
Like the poem, though!
January 6th, 2018 15:08
SATURDAY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NOW DON\'T RUB IT IN MICHEAL ! I\'ve got another 30 years to go (at least !) and even today I hve been out examining East Coastal Erosion with Students for Projects. However I really love my JOB and would hate to retire too soon ~ or to redundantated ~ Thanks for POEM & ABSTRACT ~ Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2018 11:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NOW DON\'T RUB IT IN MICHEAL ! I\'ve got another 30 years to go (at least !) and even today I hve been out examining East Coastal Erosion with Students for Projects. However I really love my JOB and would hate to retire too soon ~ or to redundantated ~ Thanks for POEM & ABSTRACT ~ Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2018 11:36
SATURDAY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NOW DON\'T RUB IT IN MICHEAL ! I\'ve got another 30 years to go (at least !) and even today I hve been out examining East Coastal Erosion with Students for Projects. However I really love my JOB and would hate to retire too soon ~ or to redundantated ~ Thanks for POEM & ABSTRACT ~ Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2018 11:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NOW DON\'T RUB IT IN MICHEAL ! I\'ve got another 30 years to go (at least !) and even today I hve been out examining East Coastal Erosion with Students for Projects. However I really love my JOB and would hate to retire too soon ~ or to redundantated ~ Thanks for POEM & ABSTRACT ~ Yours BRIAN
January 6th, 2018 11:36
SATURDAY
Fay Slimm. said:
The business of being retired comes through so well in this Saturday acrostic Michael - like you I too shout hip hip hooray for a daily Saturday.
January 6th, 2018 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
The business of being retired comes through so well in this Saturday acrostic Michael - like you I too shout hip hip hooray for a daily Saturday.
January 6th, 2018 04:29
SATURDAY
orchidee said:
\'I should like to have the time for it\', as they say. Ahh, you have got the time for it, but are busy being retired - so much for you to do!
January 6th, 2018 02:44
orchidee said:
\'I should like to have the time for it\', as they say. Ahh, you have got the time for it, but are busy being retired - so much for you to do!
January 6th, 2018 02:44
SATURDAY
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the same for me Michael, so many Saturdays, so little time.
January 6th, 2018 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the same for me Michael, so many Saturdays, so little time.
January 6th, 2018 01:43
TOO MUCH MUFFIN
FineB said:
A witty poem Michael. Thanks very much.
A sweet treat once a week such as a muffin is not too bad provided one exercises and eats sensibly the rest of the week.
Keep writing in 2018.
FineB
January 5th, 2018 08:10
FineB said:
A witty poem Michael. Thanks very much.
A sweet treat once a week such as a muffin is not too bad provided one exercises and eats sensibly the rest of the week.
Keep writing in 2018.
FineB
January 5th, 2018 08:10
TOO MUCH MUFFIN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh MUCHAEL ~ Lovely lament ! \"Stuffin\' the MUFFIN and endin\' up in the CUFFIN ! We call them PICLETS ~Yummy toasted with cheese ! Please check my ROSE ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 5th, 2018 04:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhh MUCHAEL ~ Lovely lament ! \"Stuffin\' the MUFFIN and endin\' up in the CUFFIN ! We call them PICLETS ~Yummy toasted with cheese ! Please check my ROSE ~ Thanks BRIAN
January 5th, 2018 04:18
TOO MUCH MUFFIN
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Michael. I have just looked up the nursery rhyme of the Muffin Man and it was first written down circa 1820.
January 5th, 2018 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Michael. I have just looked up the nursery rhyme of the Muffin Man and it was first written down circa 1820.
January 5th, 2018 01:48
TOO MUCH MUFFIN
FredPeyer said:
You keep on surprising me with your humor, Michael. And your writing!
Love the \'Muffin Man\'.
January 5th, 2018 00:14
FredPeyer said:
You keep on surprising me with your humor, Michael. And your writing!
Love the \'Muffin Man\'.
January 5th, 2018 00:14
BLUNDERS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MIKE ~ Loved the poem ~ the answer is NO !
Loved the MONOTYPE PRINT ~ Kind of mechanical dream ! I\'m giving a talk on the History of the Bicycle and I will use it in my intro labelled as \"A MECHANICAL DREAM\" ~ A post is in the cheque to cover the ROYALTIES ~ OK ~ BRIAN
January 4th, 2018 15:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MIKE ~ Loved the poem ~ the answer is NO !
Loved the MONOTYPE PRINT ~ Kind of mechanical dream ! I\'m giving a talk on the History of the Bicycle and I will use it in my intro labelled as \"A MECHANICAL DREAM\" ~ A post is in the cheque to cover the ROYALTIES ~ OK ~ BRIAN
January 4th, 2018 15:48
BLUNDERS
Louis Gibbs said:
A poetic mathematical challenge well met, Michael! Kudos.
January 4th, 2018 10:24
Louis Gibbs said:
A poetic mathematical challenge well met, Michael! Kudos.
January 4th, 2018 10:24
BLUNDERS
WL Schuett said:
Have been enjoying your art lately sorry I havenāt been chiming in but some days I just read and donāt comment. Your work is alway worth a stop and look !
January 4th, 2018 08:47
WL Schuett said:
Have been enjoying your art lately sorry I havenāt been chiming in but some days I just read and donāt comment. Your work is alway worth a stop and look !
January 4th, 2018 08:47
BLUNDERS
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I thought: Has \'E (he) DONE the poem?
I\'m rather un-cultured, or I\'ve lost he plot on edones! lol.
January 4th, 2018 03:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I thought: Has \'E (he) DONE the poem?
I\'m rather un-cultured, or I\'ve lost he plot on edones! lol.
January 4th, 2018 03:02
BLUNDERS
Goldfinch60 said:
Very befittingly.
It must be in the air I am just about to put up a FIB (Fibonacci sequence) poem which increases the vowels in a Fibonacci sequence
January 4th, 2018 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very befittingly.
It must be in the air I am just about to put up a FIB (Fibonacci sequence) poem which increases the vowels in a Fibonacci sequence
January 4th, 2018 02:35
ADVERSARY RHYMES 10 11 & 12
Lauraš» said:
I love the readersā
interpretations...
to each his own...
as the old saying goes!
I enjoyed the read!
Great painting to
illustrate your writing!
January 3rd, 2018 11:42
Lauraš» said:
I love the readersā
interpretations...
to each his own...
as the old saying goes!
I enjoyed the read!
Great painting to
illustrate your writing!
January 3rd, 2018 11:42
ADVERSARY RHYMES 10 11 & 12
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely music Fred - lovely music.
January 3rd, 2018 05:10
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely music Fred - lovely music.
January 3rd, 2018 05:10
ADVERSARY RHYMES 10 11 & 12
FredPeyer said:
Didn\'t know you can make love with a fiddling stick! :-)
Am I wrong, or are you getting a little bit nasty here?
January 3rd, 2018 04:37
FredPeyer said:
Didn\'t know you can make love with a fiddling stick! :-)
Am I wrong, or are you getting a little bit nasty here?
January 3rd, 2018 04:37
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