Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE CHINESE BRUSH (Completed Work)
Louis Gibbs said:
I envy and appreciate those of you with the gift of creating visual art. Congratulations on both the art and poem, Michael!
December 20th, 2017 12:25
Louis Gibbs said:
I envy and appreciate those of you with the gift of creating visual art. Congratulations on both the art and poem, Michael!
December 20th, 2017 12:25
THE CHINESE BRUSH (Completed Work)
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this finished tribute to the Chinese Brush -- talent for using it is shown by the picture dear Michael - thanks for sharing the two sides of your gifts.
December 20th, 2017 05:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this finished tribute to the Chinese Brush -- talent for using it is shown by the picture dear Michael - thanks for sharing the two sides of your gifts.
December 20th, 2017 05:55
THE CHINESE BRUSH (Completed Work)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love your \"blank verse\" Poetry Michael it has so much \"rhythm\" that rhyme would be an intrusion ! I have enjoyed these \"Odes to a Chinese Brush\" ! To today\'s BRUSHY I have assigned the title \"Father Christmas\' National Elf Service !\" Thanks for CHEERING US UP ! BRIAN
December 20th, 2017 05:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love your \"blank verse\" Poetry Michael it has so much \"rhythm\" that rhyme would be an intrusion ! I have enjoyed these \"Odes to a Chinese Brush\" ! To today\'s BRUSHY I have assigned the title \"Father Christmas\' National Elf Service !\" Thanks for CHEERING US UP ! BRIAN
December 20th, 2017 05:04
THE CHINESE BRUSH (Completed Work)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write those \"rhythmic skils of mastery\" are echoed in you words Michael.
December 20th, 2017 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write those \"rhythmic skils of mastery\" are echoed in you words Michael.
December 20th, 2017 02:46
THE CHINESE BRUSH (Completed Work)
orchidee said:
Fine writes in each part Michael.
December 20th, 2017 02:37
orchidee said:
Fine writes in each part Michael.
December 20th, 2017 02:37
THE CHINESE BRUSH (Stage 2)
Christina8 said:
Absolutely love it all coming together. Can\'t wait to see finished product tomorrow!
December 19th, 2017 19:07
Christina8 said:
Absolutely love it all coming together. Can\'t wait to see finished product tomorrow!
December 19th, 2017 19:07
THE CHINESE BRUSH (Stage 2)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing more details of the inscrutable Chinese Brush ! Confucius He Say: English Man with Chinese Brush paints an ENIGMA ! Instead SAN TA CLAWS pulling Imperial Sledge ~ He paint Polar Bear trying to pull Imperial Christmas Tree in Plastic (Made in China) Tub ! We always find the English VELLY EXCLUTIBLE ! Yours BLIAN SAN ! Plees to post honorwabbel ploem on Flusion of CHRISTINA SAN \"LOVE IS\" Slank yu ~ B.
December 19th, 2017 03:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing more details of the inscrutable Chinese Brush ! Confucius He Say: English Man with Chinese Brush paints an ENIGMA ! Instead SAN TA CLAWS pulling Imperial Sledge ~ He paint Polar Bear trying to pull Imperial Christmas Tree in Plastic (Made in China) Tub ! We always find the English VELLY EXCLUTIBLE ! Yours BLIAN SAN ! Plees to post honorwabbel ploem on Flusion of CHRISTINA SAN \"LOVE IS\" Slank yu ~ B.
December 19th, 2017 03:53
THE CHINESE BRUSH (Stage 2)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Reading this makes me want to try for myself the mysteries of painting with almost no symmetry Michael - - the picture you chose as an example shows your mastery over this method of self-expression. Wonderful idea to post the work in in stages and almost a masterclass in itself.
December 19th, 2017 03:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Reading this makes me want to try for myself the mysteries of painting with almost no symmetry Michael - - the picture you chose as an example shows your mastery over this method of self-expression. Wonderful idea to post the work in in stages and almost a masterclass in itself.
December 19th, 2017 03:05
THE CHINESE BRUSH (1)
Fay Slimm. said:
Had to look back to this posting to see the first stages your mind made in both writing and painting - a most interesting journey for readers to make with you Michael - thanks for sharing the ways to succeed with the rhythmic skills of Chinese Brushwork
December 19th, 2017 03:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Had to look back to this posting to see the first stages your mind made in both writing and painting - a most interesting journey for readers to make with you Michael - thanks for sharing the ways to succeed with the rhythmic skills of Chinese Brushwork
December 19th, 2017 03:00
THE CHINESE BRUSH (1)
orchidee said:
You going to China to get new brushes, or does the Co-op in the High Street stock them?! :)
December 18th, 2017 09:37
orchidee said:
You going to China to get new brushes, or does the Co-op in the High Street stock them?! :)
December 18th, 2017 09:37
THE CHINESE BRUSH (1)
Christina8 said:
It\'s amazing to see how you work! Thanks for sharing with us.
December 18th, 2017 07:16
Christina8 said:
It\'s amazing to see how you work! Thanks for sharing with us.
December 18th, 2017 07:16
THE CHINESE BRUSH (1)
Accidental Poet said:
\"Rhythmic skills of mastery\". That about sums up this post. Thanks for sharing Michael.
December 18th, 2017 06:12
Accidental Poet said:
\"Rhythmic skills of mastery\". That about sums up this post. Thanks for sharing Michael.
December 18th, 2017 06:12
THE CHINESE BRUSH (1)
Goldfinch60 said:
This will be good.
I have tried to do calligraphy with brushes in the Chines style and failed miserably, I\'ll stick to dip pens.
December 18th, 2017 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
This will be good.
I have tried to do calligraphy with brushes in the Chines style and failed miserably, I\'ll stick to dip pens.
December 18th, 2017 02:30
LOOKING DOWN
Accidental Poet said:
Yes trees are stationary, but have much to say if one chooses to listen. Great write Michael.
December 17th, 2017 10:35
Accidental Poet said:
Yes trees are stationary, but have much to say if one chooses to listen. Great write Michael.
December 17th, 2017 10:35
LOOKING DOWN
Louis Gibbs said:
I too compulsively edit and rewrite my poems before publishing them. Makes for a better write, doesn\'t it.
This is a fine example of that, Michael. You took us on the journey home with you. Beautiful!
December 17th, 2017 09:03
Louis Gibbs said:
I too compulsively edit and rewrite my poems before publishing them. Makes for a better write, doesn\'t it.
This is a fine example of that, Michael. You took us on the journey home with you. Beautiful!
December 17th, 2017 09:03
LOOKING DOWN
Michael Edwards said:
Think I\'ll change the word \'weathered\' for \'noble\' - yes that sounds better. Happy now
December 17th, 2017 03:20
Michael Edwards said:
Think I\'ll change the word \'weathered\' for \'noble\' - yes that sounds better. Happy now
December 17th, 2017 03:20
LOOKING DOWN
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Michael, that oak will always be there for you.
December 17th, 2017 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Michael, that oak will always be there for you.
December 17th, 2017 03:01
LOOKING DOWN
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. Well, Santa\'s looking down - the chimney? Note my \'dash\' there. they can give longer pauses than commas, then a \'punchline\' may follow. All very technical!
I dunno poetic styles. I\'m too un-cultured. I dunno about iambic-wotsits anyway. I probably use them without knowing it! Ooh, a hyphen there too! lol.
December 17th, 2017 02:56
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Michael. Well, Santa\'s looking down - the chimney? Note my \'dash\' there. they can give longer pauses than commas, then a \'punchline\' may follow. All very technical!
I dunno poetic styles. I\'m too un-cultured. I dunno about iambic-wotsits anyway. I probably use them without knowing it! Ooh, a hyphen there too! lol.
December 17th, 2017 02:56
A FEW COUPLETS
Laura🌻 said:
Great set of couples! I’m particularly drawn to the first! Semblance of innocence and independence!
December 16th, 2017 17:12
Laura🌻 said:
Great set of couples! I’m particularly drawn to the first! Semblance of innocence and independence!
December 16th, 2017 17:12
A FEW COUPLETS
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the season-appropriate drawing, Michael. I favor the fourth couplet, for the tender story it portrays.
December 16th, 2017 10:37
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the season-appropriate drawing, Michael. I favor the fourth couplet, for the tender story it portrays.
December 16th, 2017 10:37
POETRY IS.....RECEIVED BY LISTENING EARS
FredPeyer said:
You truly are an incredible poet, Michael! And this poem proves it.
PS: I too had to look up the word
\'prosody\', but since I don\'t seem to be the only one, I don\'t feel bad about it anymore.
December 16th, 2017 03:14
FredPeyer said:
You truly are an incredible poet, Michael! And this poem proves it.
PS: I too had to look up the word
\'prosody\', but since I don\'t seem to be the only one, I don\'t feel bad about it anymore.
December 16th, 2017 03:14
A FEW COUPLETS
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic Michael. The second one is my favourite.
Here\'s my version of it:
\'His words were booed
Cos he turned them all into song\' (caterwauling). lol
December 16th, 2017 03:03
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic Michael. The second one is my favourite.
Here\'s my version of it:
\'His words were booed
Cos he turned them all into song\' (caterwauling). lol
December 16th, 2017 03:03
A FEW COUPLETS
Fay Slimm. said:
Food for thought in some of these clever couplets Michael - love the final one about looking forward. Great work.
December 16th, 2017 02:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Food for thought in some of these clever couplets Michael - love the final one about looking forward. Great work.
December 16th, 2017 02:42
LIMERICK 41
Louis Gibbs said:
Never knew that is why people do that. Makes perfect sense!
Cute limerick, Michael.
December 15th, 2017 08:57
Louis Gibbs said:
Never knew that is why people do that. Makes perfect sense!
Cute limerick, Michael.
December 15th, 2017 08:57
LIMERICK 41
Christina8 said:
Very clever limerick. I\'m blind as a bat, so it\'s either contacts or wearing glasses---the right way, lol! Also, a beautiful painting to accompany your limerick!
December 15th, 2017 07:57
Christina8 said:
Very clever limerick. I\'m blind as a bat, so it\'s either contacts or wearing glasses---the right way, lol! Also, a beautiful painting to accompany your limerick!
December 15th, 2017 07:57
LIMERICK 41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There was a Young Girl from Hawaii
Who was extrovert
And far from SHYII
With a smile kool & pert
She pulled up her grass skirt
And showed me her HUMGAGAWAII
Thanks MIKE for another
Enigmatic Limerick 40+ !
Yours BRIAN
Thanks for another great Rural WC !
December 15th, 2017 03:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There was a Young Girl from Hawaii
Who was extrovert
And far from SHYII
With a smile kool & pert
She pulled up her grass skirt
And showed me her HUMGAGAWAII
Thanks MIKE for another
Enigmatic Limerick 40+ !
Yours BRIAN
Thanks for another great Rural WC !
December 15th, 2017 03:45
LIMERICK 41
FredPeyer said:
Lovely painting!
Great limerick, Michael. Well penned!
December 15th, 2017 03:27
FredPeyer said:
Lovely painting!
Great limerick, Michael. Well penned!
December 15th, 2017 03:27
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