Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
orchidee said:
Why did I return to this? Just to say my voice did not fall soft. It shattered the peace with a loud \'ccooeeeeee\'! That\'s ruined any chance of quiet now! lol.
August 9th, 2017 09:17
orchidee said:
Why did I return to this? Just to say my voice did not fall soft. It shattered the peace with a loud \'ccooeeeeee\'! That\'s ruined any chance of quiet now! lol.
August 9th, 2017 09:17
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
WriteBeLight said:
The sun will set on this beautiful poem and painting only to rise up again and shine on them once more.
August 9th, 2017 07:56
WriteBeLight said:
The sun will set on this beautiful poem and painting only to rise up again and shine on them once more.
August 9th, 2017 07:56
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
malubotelho said:
Awesome reading for my little soul just walking up this new day. Divine, to say nothing else.
August 9th, 2017 06:53
malubotelho said:
Awesome reading for my little soul just walking up this new day. Divine, to say nothing else.
August 9th, 2017 06:53
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
Louis Gibbs said:
Your words compete with the watercolor for the loveliest picture you have created, Michael. Both, beauties! Thanks for sharing this morning.
August 9th, 2017 04:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Your words compete with the watercolor for the loveliest picture you have created, Michael. Both, beauties! Thanks for sharing this morning.
August 9th, 2017 04:41
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL ~ An elegant PICTURE & POEM to welcome a new DAY ~ AMEN Please check my ANGEL POEM ~ Yours BRIAN
August 9th, 2017 03:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHEAL ~ An elegant PICTURE & POEM to welcome a new DAY ~ AMEN Please check my ANGEL POEM ~ Yours BRIAN
August 9th, 2017 03:39
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, 14 minutes into the poet-s day on here! (whatever time that is in the UK).
August 9th, 2017 02:13
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, 14 minutes into the poet-s day on here! (whatever time that is in the UK).
August 9th, 2017 02:13
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
Fay Slimm. said:
The gentle flow of this read engenders a quiet peace. Fine work Michael.
August 9th, 2017 02:00
Fay Slimm. said:
The gentle flow of this read engenders a quiet peace. Fine work Michael.
August 9th, 2017 02:00
HER VOICE FELL SOFT
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Michael, a pleasure to read at 6:30 in the morning.
August 9th, 2017 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Michael, a pleasure to read at 6:30 in the morning.
August 9th, 2017 00:29
Dreamers
WriteBeLight said:
Briefly beautiful and very bucolic picture Michael.
August 8th, 2017 15:48
WriteBeLight said:
Briefly beautiful and very bucolic picture Michael.
August 8th, 2017 15:48
Dreamers
malubotelho said:
Lovely three lines. Nothing better than a pier over the ocean to look at the stars. Hand in hand with love.
August 8th, 2017 08:48
malubotelho said:
Lovely three lines. Nothing better than a pier over the ocean to look at the stars. Hand in hand with love.
August 8th, 2017 08:48
Dreamers
Louis Gibbs said:
The watercolor, I guess that is what it is, is absolutely beautiful ... I couldn\'t stop looking at it. Not only the detail, but the perspective you employed. Love it, Michael!
August 8th, 2017 08:08
Louis Gibbs said:
The watercolor, I guess that is what it is, is absolutely beautiful ... I couldn\'t stop looking at it. Not only the detail, but the perspective you employed. Love it, Michael!
August 8th, 2017 08:08
Dreamers
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks everyone for all your kind words - so much appreciated
August 8th, 2017 05:13
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks everyone for all your kind words - so much appreciated
August 8th, 2017 05:13
Dreamers
Fay Slimm. said:
So true that night skies can evoke much in lovers - - lovely brushwork too.
August 8th, 2017 04:16
Fay Slimm. said:
So true that night skies can evoke much in lovers - - lovely brushwork too.
August 8th, 2017 04:16
Dreamers
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Perfect Painting ~ Superb Senryu ~ delighted my Morning ! Mine is also a Love Poem today ~ Yours BRIAN.
August 8th, 2017 03:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Perfect Painting ~ Superb Senryu ~ delighted my Morning ! Mine is also a Love Poem today ~ Yours BRIAN.
August 8th, 2017 03:52
Dreamers
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, and a \'dreaming spire\' of a church too!
August 8th, 2017 01:40
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, and a \'dreaming spire\' of a church too!
August 8th, 2017 01:40
Dreamers
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, and a \'dreaming spire\' of a church too!
August 8th, 2017 01:40
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael, and a \'dreaming spire\' of a church too!
August 8th, 2017 01:40
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
malubotelho said:
The best for me is the second. Not cê writing Michael. And your painting is superb.
August 7th, 2017 14:05
malubotelho said:
The best for me is the second. Not cê writing Michael. And your painting is superb.
August 7th, 2017 14:05
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
Poetic Dan said:
Dam it! You made me take a break for too long. But that was an enjoyable moment, thank you
August 7th, 2017 07:43
Poetic Dan said:
Dam it! You made me take a break for too long. But that was an enjoyable moment, thank you
August 7th, 2017 07:43
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
Louis Gibbs said:
I, too, like the middle one a lot, but something about the last one really intrigues me. I\'d have to say it is my favorite of the three. Kudos, Michael! Love the painting too.
August 7th, 2017 05:15
Louis Gibbs said:
I, too, like the middle one a lot, but something about the last one really intrigues me. I\'d have to say it is my favorite of the three. Kudos, Michael! Love the painting too.
August 7th, 2017 05:15
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing trio of couplets here Michael - can relate to the middle one as youth is so fleeting. Lovely watercolour too.
August 7th, 2017 02:45
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing trio of couplets here Michael - can relate to the middle one as youth is so fleeting. Lovely watercolour too.
August 7th, 2017 02:45
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ LOVE CYMING RHOUPLETS ~ FOR ME THE ULTIMATE ~ Frugal Poetic Form ~ One Liners (nomally) are non~rhyming. To make COUPLET ONE into Rhyming Couplet (you did not say they rhymed !) I would suggest revision to:
In LIFE he never knew her name
In DEATH she Marble Cast became !
Now polished and with outstretched hand
She acts as an Umbrella Stand
(This couplet is optional ~ of course !)
Yours BRIAN the FUSSY !
August 7th, 2017 02:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MICHAEL ~ LOVE CYMING RHOUPLETS ~ FOR ME THE ULTIMATE ~ Frugal Poetic Form ~ One Liners (nomally) are non~rhyming. To make COUPLET ONE into Rhyming Couplet (you did not say they rhymed !) I would suggest revision to:
In LIFE he never knew her name
In DEATH she Marble Cast became !
Now polished and with outstretched hand
She acts as an Umbrella Stand
(This couplet is optional ~ of course !)
Yours BRIAN the FUSSY !
August 7th, 2017 02:12
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic Michael. Yep, first UK poet of the day again!
August 7th, 2017 01:37
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic Michael. Yep, first UK poet of the day again!
August 7th, 2017 01:37
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
FredPeyer said:
Michael, all three are good. Like the first one best.
August 7th, 2017 01:31
FredPeyer said:
Michael, all three are good. Like the first one best.
August 7th, 2017 01:31
A FEW COUPLETS (3)
Heather T said:
Well done, Michael. Sad three couplets! The middle is my favorite. But surely even if youth is gone, there\'s still room for new hopes and dreams!
August 7th, 2017 00:22
Heather T said:
Well done, Michael. Sad three couplets! The middle is my favorite. But surely even if youth is gone, there\'s still room for new hopes and dreams!
August 7th, 2017 00:22
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