Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes! Yes, we must try coffee without any water! (???)
June 7th, 2017 08:33
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes! Yes, we must try coffee without any water! (???)
June 7th, 2017 08:33
TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
swingline said:
You can\'t say much about Haiku\'s . There are self explanatory . Now I\'m craving coffee and a dire need to go paint fishing lures .
June 7th, 2017 04:15
swingline said:
You can\'t say much about Haiku\'s . There are self explanatory . Now I\'m craving coffee and a dire need to go paint fishing lures .
June 7th, 2017 04:15
TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes, I too like coffee, Colombian of course.
June 7th, 2017 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes, I too like coffee, Colombian of course.
June 7th, 2017 01:58
TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
MaddieJ said:
I love it! Also, I paint on the table too! Some call me crazy but I find it fun!
June 7th, 2017 00:52
MaddieJ said:
I love it! Also, I paint on the table too! Some call me crazy but I find it fun!
June 7th, 2017 00:52
MATURITY
Augustus said:
Perfect poem. You are a great water color artist. Even your quickies are good.
June 6th, 2017 11:40
Augustus said:
Perfect poem. You are a great water color artist. Even your quickies are good.
June 6th, 2017 11:40
MATURITY
Louis Gibbs said:
As you know by now, I am a big fan of the four line poem, and this is a fine example. Not much of an art critic, but love the poem, Michael!
June 6th, 2017 09:36
Louis Gibbs said:
As you know by now, I am a big fan of the four line poem, and this is a fine example. Not much of an art critic, but love the poem, Michael!
June 6th, 2017 09:36
MATURITY
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and the last line is so meaningful.
Apparently it\'s a bit wet in Venice I am led to believe. Good artwork.
June 6th, 2017 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and the last line is so meaningful.
Apparently it\'s a bit wet in Venice I am led to believe. Good artwork.
June 6th, 2017 02:50
MATURITY
swingline said:
An x-ray on the subject . Nice painting . Take your time next time .
June 6th, 2017 01:42
swingline said:
An x-ray on the subject . Nice painting . Take your time next time .
June 6th, 2017 01:42
MATURITY
MaddieJ said:
I like how deep the subject is and how you convey it in so few words! Good write!
June 6th, 2017 00:46
MaddieJ said:
I like how deep the subject is and how you convey it in so few words! Good write!
June 6th, 2017 00:46
FIVE THIRTY PM
Augustus said:
I\'m in Houston to now. Talk about mass transit. We had black raindrops in Southern California. The rain would cleanse the smog for a few hours.
June 5th, 2017 19:29
Augustus said:
I\'m in Houston to now. Talk about mass transit. We had black raindrops in Southern California. The rain would cleanse the smog for a few hours.
June 5th, 2017 19:29
FIVE THIRTY PM
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks everyone - many of us have been there, done that.
June 5th, 2017 02:11
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks everyone - many of us have been there, done that.
June 5th, 2017 02:11
FIVE THIRTY PM
swingline said:
Descriptive image , coming down , going out . As life goes on in a never ending cycle .
June 5th, 2017 00:58
swingline said:
Descriptive image , coming down , going out . As life goes on in a never ending cycle .
June 5th, 2017 00:58
FIVE THIRTY PM
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice poem to start off this day, Michael! Very descriptive phrases.
June 5th, 2017 00:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice poem to start off this day, Michael! Very descriptive phrases.
June 5th, 2017 00:24
LIMERICK 33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A man on the Platform @ Ealing
Waited in vain for a train to Darjeeling
The guard on Platform 3
Sotto voced to me
If he comes in the CAFF
We can all have a LAFF
And serve him with Darjeeling TEA
Thanks MIKE for limerick & cartoon
We need cheering up again this
morning Please check my POEM
BRIAN the MOURNFUL !
June 4th, 2017 04:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A man on the Platform @ Ealing
Waited in vain for a train to Darjeeling
The guard on Platform 3
Sotto voced to me
If he comes in the CAFF
We can all have a LAFF
And serve him with Darjeeling TEA
Thanks MIKE for limerick & cartoon
We need cheering up again this
morning Please check my POEM
BRIAN the MOURNFUL !
June 4th, 2017 04:21
LIMERICK 33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and cartoon, my first smile of the day.
June 4th, 2017 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and cartoon, my first smile of the day.
June 4th, 2017 02:06
AS YET UNWRITTEN
Augustus said:
Nicely done.
Sir I\'d be honored to serve on your next voyage. I have a full suit of mail. My specialty is broad ax. I have numerous kills to my credit and have taken the wives of my opponents. I\'m from The Valley Dal.
June 3rd, 2017 13:08
Augustus said:
Nicely done.
Sir I\'d be honored to serve on your next voyage. I have a full suit of mail. My specialty is broad ax. I have numerous kills to my credit and have taken the wives of my opponents. I\'m from The Valley Dal.
June 3rd, 2017 13:08
AS YET UNWRITTEN
orchidee said:
You written this poem yet. or is it still unwritten? Said some wag (me!). Ah yes, I see you\'ve written it! heehee.
June 3rd, 2017 12:21
orchidee said:
You written this poem yet. or is it still unwritten? Said some wag (me!). Ah yes, I see you\'ve written it! heehee.
June 3rd, 2017 12:21
AS YET UNWRITTEN
thehippiepoet said:
Very nice, I enjoyed how smooth it was to read and the alliteration used on the sword swinging line. Good use of alliteration always gets me
June 3rd, 2017 09:38
thehippiepoet said:
Very nice, I enjoyed how smooth it was to read and the alliteration used on the sword swinging line. Good use of alliteration always gets me
June 3rd, 2017 09:38
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