Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LIMERICK No40
orchidee said:
Ohh heeheee M. Cooeee, first UK poet-poster of the day! I won\'t attempt to be the first UK person here each day.
August 6th, 2017 01:34
orchidee said:
Ohh heeheee M. Cooeee, first UK poet-poster of the day! I won\'t attempt to be the first UK person here each day.
August 6th, 2017 01:34
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gone but not forgotten ! loved the Poem and the complementary Picture. I like QUATRAINS and a KIRIELLE way to present them ! Also like Rhyming Couplets so I like your choice of rhyme pattern aabB ccbB ddbB eebB ! You have made each line 4 the same hence B ~ it can vary. For instance you could vary word four (RESTFUL) in each line etc. Thanks for daring & sharing ~ BRIAN
August 5th, 2017 09:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gone but not forgotten ! loved the Poem and the complementary Picture. I like QUATRAINS and a KIRIELLE way to present them ! Also like Rhyming Couplets so I like your choice of rhyme pattern aabB ccbB ddbB eebB ! You have made each line 4 the same hence B ~ it can vary. For instance you could vary word four (RESTFUL) in each line etc. Thanks for daring & sharing ~ BRIAN
August 5th, 2017 09:26
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
malubotelho said:
I have a weeping heart after reading this. So beautiful. So romantic. When is he coming back? I hope before she wakes up
August 5th, 2017 08:30
malubotelho said:
I have a weeping heart after reading this. So beautiful. So romantic. When is he coming back? I hope before she wakes up
August 5th, 2017 08:30
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
Louis Gibbs said:
A beauty, this one, Michael! The repeating last line is very effective, and the closing phrase ties it up with a punch.
August 5th, 2017 08:19
Louis Gibbs said:
A beauty, this one, Michael! The repeating last line is very effective, and the closing phrase ties it up with a punch.
August 5th, 2017 08:19
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FredPeyer said:
Michael this is a beautiful poem, you succeeded admirably. And the watercolor \'ain\'t bad either\'!
And btw, the \'he\'d taken flight\' fits perfectly as far as I am concerned.
August 5th, 2017 02:54
FredPeyer said:
Michael this is a beautiful poem, you succeeded admirably. And the watercolor \'ain\'t bad either\'!
And btw, the \'he\'d taken flight\' fits perfectly as far as I am concerned.
August 5th, 2017 02:54
SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE
orchidee said:
Cooeee M - first UK poet of the day - or nearly every day?!
August 5th, 2017 01:57
orchidee said:
Cooeee M - first UK poet of the day - or nearly every day?!
August 5th, 2017 01:57
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orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. I\'m sure that sometime a pic of yours may inspire me to write a poem.
August 5th, 2017 01:56
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M. I\'m sure that sometime a pic of yours may inspire me to write a poem.
August 5th, 2017 01:56
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Goldfinch60 said:
Well you succeeded. Good write and a good painting.
August 5th, 2017 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Well you succeeded. Good write and a good painting.
August 5th, 2017 00:55
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rrodriguez said:
Abstract indeed with a message of intrigue. Super!
August 4th, 2017 14:30
rrodriguez said:
Abstract indeed with a message of intrigue. Super!
August 4th, 2017 14:30
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Alf W said:
Beautiful flow and emitting deep thoughts and feelings... thank you.
August 4th, 2017 09:38
Alf W said:
Beautiful flow and emitting deep thoughts and feelings... thank you.
August 4th, 2017 09:38
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ShannonXx said:
This was wonderful to read, really enjoyed it
August 4th, 2017 09:35
ShannonXx said:
This was wonderful to read, really enjoyed it
August 4th, 2017 09:35
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WriteBeLight said:
Two whoop, whoops, Michael! Very deep, no pun intended! Perfect painting for the feeling of this!
August 4th, 2017 08:31
WriteBeLight said:
Two whoop, whoops, Michael! Very deep, no pun intended! Perfect painting for the feeling of this!
August 4th, 2017 08:31
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Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Michael plus another good abstract.
August 4th, 2017 08:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Michael plus another good abstract.
August 4th, 2017 08:02
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LOVE THE PICTURE OF TOM DALEY UNDERWATER ~ after his Gold Medal Dive ! Drowned in JOY ! Love the Poem it has a touch of Glass ! Sets the tone for us lesser Wordsmiths ~ thanks for raising the board ~ Your BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 03:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LOVE THE PICTURE OF TOM DALEY UNDERWATER ~ after his Gold Medal Dive ! Drowned in JOY ! Love the Poem it has a touch of Glass ! Sets the tone for us lesser Wordsmiths ~ thanks for raising the board ~ Your BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 03:23
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Fay Slimm. said:
Wowers - - great imagery Michael -- have to read this one again.
August 4th, 2017 02:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Wowers - - great imagery Michael -- have to read this one again.
August 4th, 2017 02:15
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orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Erm *gets out my dictionary now*!
August 4th, 2017 02:06
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Erm *gets out my dictionary now*!
August 4th, 2017 02:06
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FredPeyer said:
Michael, this is a poem on steroids. Incredible writing, and I like the last two lines!
August 4th, 2017 00:42
FredPeyer said:
Michael, this is a poem on steroids. Incredible writing, and I like the last two lines!
August 4th, 2017 00:42
THE SMILING DIED
Thewildfire said:
Such a meaningful set of words...It is a great write and I would love to read more of your poems.
August 3rd, 2017 18:20
Thewildfire said:
Such a meaningful set of words...It is a great write and I would love to read more of your poems.
August 3rd, 2017 18:20
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FredPeyer said:
You may call this a \'simple piece\', Michael, but it packs a lot of power and meaning beautifully expressed in \'simple\' words!
August 3rd, 2017 11:44
FredPeyer said:
You may call this a \'simple piece\', Michael, but it packs a lot of power and meaning beautifully expressed in \'simple\' words!
August 3rd, 2017 11:44
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Louis Gibbs said:
A love twice lost? Sad, indeed! Lost love is an integral experience of life to all it seems. Thanks for this fine expression, Michael.
August 3rd, 2017 06:54
Louis Gibbs said:
A love twice lost? Sad, indeed! Lost love is an integral experience of life to all it seems. Thanks for this fine expression, Michael.
August 3rd, 2017 06:54
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Fay Slimm. said:
Pathos perfected in these slow sad lines. Great work Michael.
August 3rd, 2017 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Pathos perfected in these slow sad lines. Great work Michael.
August 3rd, 2017 04:24
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write. The picture is super and both the words and the drawing complement each other.
August 3rd, 2017 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write. The picture is super and both the words and the drawing complement each other.
August 3rd, 2017 01:59
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