Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



SUSPICION
Augustus said:

Suspicion plus a woman\'s intuition,
Lethal combination. Love the water color.

June 8th, 2017 10:07

SUSPICION
Frank Prem said:

Good poem, Michael, but I love the painting. Well done.

June 8th, 2017 05:03

SUSPICION
Fay Slimm. said:

Mysterious and provocative this verse with its painting to match and oh -
Michael those final lines must surely produce a sequel. Another great read.

June 8th, 2017 02:57

SUSPICION
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.

June 8th, 2017 01:45

SUSPICION
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, cracking last line.

A red telephone kiosk eh? Don\'t see many of those around now.

June 8th, 2017 01:29

TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
Augustus said:

Good fun

June 7th, 2017 14:11

TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good writes! Yes, we must try coffee without any water! (???)

June 7th, 2017 08:33

TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
Tony36 said:

Great write, love them both

June 7th, 2017 07:57

TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
swingline said:

You can\'t say much about Haiku\'s . There are self explanatory . Now I\'m craving coffee and a dire need to go paint fishing lures .

June 7th, 2017 04:15

TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun writes, I too like coffee, Colombian of course.

June 7th, 2017 01:58

TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
MaddieJ said:

I love it! Also, I paint on the table too! Some call me crazy but I find it fun!

June 7th, 2017 00:52

MATURITY
Augustus said:

Perfect poem. You are a great water color artist. Even your quickies are good.

June 6th, 2017 11:40

MATURITY
Louis Gibbs said:

As you know by now, I am a big fan of the four line poem, and this is a fine example. Not much of an art critic, but love the poem, Michael!

June 6th, 2017 09:36

MATURITY
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic again M.

June 6th, 2017 08:29

MATURITY
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and the last line is so meaningful.

Apparently it\'s a bit wet in Venice I am led to believe. Good artwork.

June 6th, 2017 02:50

MATURITY
swingline said:

An x-ray on the subject . Nice painting . Take your time next time .

June 6th, 2017 01:42

MATURITY
MaddieJ said:

I like how deep the subject is and how you convey it in so few words! Good write!

June 6th, 2017 00:46

FIVE THIRTY PM
Augustus said:

I\'m in Houston to now. Talk about mass transit. We had black raindrops in Southern California. The rain would cleanse the smog for a few hours.

June 5th, 2017 19:29

FIVE THIRTY PM
ShannonXx said:

Very descriptive, love it

June 5th, 2017 09:07

FIVE THIRTY PM
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks everyone - many of us have been there, done that.

June 5th, 2017 02:11

FIVE THIRTY PM
Frank Prem said:

Nice city-scape piece Michael. Well done.

June 5th, 2017 01:29

FIVE THIRTY PM
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.

June 5th, 2017 01:15

FIVE THIRTY PM
swingline said:

Descriptive image , coming down , going out . As life goes on in a never ending cycle .

June 5th, 2017 00:58

FIVE THIRTY PM
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Been there!

Like the artwork.

June 5th, 2017 00:56

FIVE THIRTY PM
Louis Gibbs said:

Nice poem to start off this day, Michael! Very descriptive phrases.

June 5th, 2017 00:24

LIMERICK 33
Augustus said:

You crack me up

June 4th, 2017 11:05

LIMERICK 33
swingline said:

Platform 9 3/4 .

June 4th, 2017 07:35

LIMERICK 33
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha ha ha - great stuff.

June 4th, 2017 07:22

LIMERICK 33
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha ... Another cracker Michael

June 4th, 2017 05:59

LIMERICK 33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

A man on the Platform @ Ealing
Waited in vain for a train to Darjeeling
The guard on Platform 3
Sotto voced to me
If he comes in the CAFF
We can all have a LAFF
And serve him with Darjeeling TEA

Thanks MIKE for limerick & cartoon
We need cheering up again this
morning Please check my POEM
BRIAN the MOURNFUL !

June 4th, 2017 04:21



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