Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LOST IN THE NIGHT
Heather T said:
Elegant work that left me heavy hearted, in part because of the subject and partly because it feels so unresolved. Well done.
June 10th, 2017 08:24
Heather T said:
Elegant work that left me heavy hearted, in part because of the subject and partly because it feels so unresolved. Well done.
June 10th, 2017 08:24
LOST IN THE NIGHT
Jooles said:
Aw this is lovely...do they ever meet??? Are they meant to be? Love a poem that leaves you wanting more 😊
June 10th, 2017 04:29
Jooles said:
Aw this is lovely...do they ever meet??? Are they meant to be? Love a poem that leaves you wanting more 😊
June 10th, 2017 04:29
LOST IN THE NIGHT
Fay Slimm. said:
The heart of a female has no comfort from broken promises - though sad you verse it well here Michael. I love the clear calm of the watercolour.
June 10th, 2017 02:59
Fay Slimm. said:
The heart of a female has no comfort from broken promises - though sad you verse it well here Michael. I love the clear calm of the watercolour.
June 10th, 2017 02:59
LOST IN THE NIGHT
swingline said:
Like a chessboard waiting on somebody to move . Will it be a checkmate ? Or will they play to a draw .
June 10th, 2017 00:42
swingline said:
Like a chessboard waiting on somebody to move . Will it be a checkmate ? Or will they play to a draw .
June 10th, 2017 00:42
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 5 and 6
Jooles said:
I had to read it twice....its Friday.....im slow but it mad me chuckle. ...eventually. ....when my brain woke up
June 9th, 2017 14:28
Jooles said:
I had to read it twice....its Friday.....im slow but it mad me chuckle. ...eventually. ....when my brain woke up
June 9th, 2017 14:28
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 5 and 6
orchidee said:
Dang it! They caught B. Posters or B. Stickers yet?! heehee.
June 9th, 2017 10:57
orchidee said:
Dang it! They caught B. Posters or B. Stickers yet?! heehee.
June 9th, 2017 10:57
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 5 and 6
Louis Gibbs said:
Clever, very clever, Michael. I enjoyed!
June 9th, 2017 10:53
Louis Gibbs said:
Clever, very clever, Michael. I enjoyed!
June 9th, 2017 10:53
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 5 and 6
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the wit in your limericks Michael
June 9th, 2017 07:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the wit in your limericks Michael
June 9th, 2017 07:37
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 5 and 6
swingline said:
Ha ha , good examples , especially the last .
June 9th, 2017 00:37
swingline said:
Ha ha , good examples , especially the last .
June 9th, 2017 00:37
SUSPICION
swingline said:
I love the repetitive references to time (pendelum , hands of times , times decrees) reiterating the importance of the here and now . And when the time does not add up it creates \"suspcion\" .
June 8th, 2017 15:36
swingline said:
I love the repetitive references to time (pendelum , hands of times , times decrees) reiterating the importance of the here and now . And when the time does not add up it creates \"suspcion\" .
June 8th, 2017 15:36
SUSPICION
Augustus said:
Suspicion plus a woman\'s intuition,
Lethal combination. Love the water color.
June 8th, 2017 10:07
Augustus said:
Suspicion plus a woman\'s intuition,
Lethal combination. Love the water color.
June 8th, 2017 10:07
SUSPICION
Frank Prem said:
Good poem, Michael, but I love the painting. Well done.
June 8th, 2017 05:03
Frank Prem said:
Good poem, Michael, but I love the painting. Well done.
June 8th, 2017 05:03
SUSPICION
Fay Slimm. said:
Mysterious and provocative this verse with its painting to match and oh -
Michael those final lines must surely produce a sequel. Another great read.
June 8th, 2017 02:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Mysterious and provocative this verse with its painting to match and oh -
Michael those final lines must surely produce a sequel. Another great read.
June 8th, 2017 02:57
SUSPICION
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, cracking last line.
A red telephone kiosk eh? Don\'t see many of those around now.
June 8th, 2017 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, cracking last line.
A red telephone kiosk eh? Don\'t see many of those around now.
June 8th, 2017 01:29
TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes! Yes, we must try coffee without any water! (???)
June 7th, 2017 08:33
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good writes! Yes, we must try coffee without any water! (???)
June 7th, 2017 08:33
TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
swingline said:
You can\'t say much about Haiku\'s . There are self explanatory . Now I\'m craving coffee and a dire need to go paint fishing lures .
June 7th, 2017 04:15
swingline said:
You can\'t say much about Haiku\'s . There are self explanatory . Now I\'m craving coffee and a dire need to go paint fishing lures .
June 7th, 2017 04:15
TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes, I too like coffee, Colombian of course.
June 7th, 2017 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes, I too like coffee, Colombian of course.
June 7th, 2017 01:58
TWO IN HAIKU STYLE
MaddieJ said:
I love it! Also, I paint on the table too! Some call me crazy but I find it fun!
June 7th, 2017 00:52
MaddieJ said:
I love it! Also, I paint on the table too! Some call me crazy but I find it fun!
June 7th, 2017 00:52
MATURITY
Augustus said:
Perfect poem. You are a great water color artist. Even your quickies are good.
June 6th, 2017 11:40
Augustus said:
Perfect poem. You are a great water color artist. Even your quickies are good.
June 6th, 2017 11:40
MATURITY
Louis Gibbs said:
As you know by now, I am a big fan of the four line poem, and this is a fine example. Not much of an art critic, but love the poem, Michael!
June 6th, 2017 09:36
Louis Gibbs said:
As you know by now, I am a big fan of the four line poem, and this is a fine example. Not much of an art critic, but love the poem, Michael!
June 6th, 2017 09:36
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