Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED
Augustus said:

\"Sentences of rising hills\" great visual metaphor. I had to look up pointillism, again the perfect word for this tribute to Impressionism.

May 30th, 2017 09:21

WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED
Louis Gibbs said:

Beautiful poem, Michael! It is, indeed, a magical area, and I can see why it inspired artists.

May 30th, 2017 08:41

WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL for an intriguing painting and a complementary Tone Poem ! Impressionism always makes an impression on me. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN

May 30th, 2017 07:25

WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED
swingline said:

The painting reminds me of a sunset on the gold Coast of Flords , beautiful . Sadly it is not the same as it was 55 years ago either . Stirs many memories I had long ago put away . But that is the purpose of the poem .

May 30th, 2017 04:04

WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED
Fay Slimm. said:

What a land of light this place must be. You draw its paradise with words and with paint so very well Michael.

May 30th, 2017 01:47

WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.

May 30th, 2017 01:35

WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write with great imagery.

Love the painting.

May 30th, 2017 00:44

LIMERICK 31
Augustus said:

Haha.

May 29th, 2017 19:56

LIMERICK 31
Louis Gibbs said:

Well done, Micheal! It\'s a pleasure to run across well written humor in our usually heavy offerings.

May 29th, 2017 08:33

LIMERICK 31
swingline said:

Ohhhhhhhhhhh !

May 29th, 2017 06:50

LIMERICK 31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

There was a young Girl from Divizes
Whose EARS* they were different sizes
One was so small ~ it was no use at all
But the other ~ it won several prizes
*Could be FEET ~ ETC ETC !

Thanks MIKE for another limmy and another
BARRINGTON ~ AMUSE NEZ ! BRIAN

Please check my ICE CREAM Poem & Fusion
Thanks BRIAN

May 29th, 2017 03:29

LIMERICK 31
orchidee said:

Oh lol. Nose as big as a bird\'s perch!

May 29th, 2017 01:48

LIMERICK 31
Goldfinch60 said:

My first smile of the day, thank you Michael.

May 29th, 2017 01:31

LIMERICK 31
Frank Prem said:

That\'s always going to be a problem, Michael.

May 29th, 2017 01:24

I LIKE SAID IT
Hopey_xx said:

I like, read your poem, and after I read it, I like, couldn\'t stop thinking about how much I liked it!😂

May 28th, 2017 15:24

I LIKE SAID IT
Augustus said:

Like I said before, clever.

May 28th, 2017 08:05

I LIKE SAID IT
swingline said:

You know , what I say , you know .

May 28th, 2017 04:47

I LIKE SAID IT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ Another great poem & cartoon ~ LIKE I SAID ! BRIAN. Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

May 28th, 2017 02:58

I LIKE SAID IT
Rajkumar said:

I like I said

May 28th, 2017 01:51

I LIKE SAID IT
orchidee said:

Lol. This sounds like the thingy of saying it 3 times:
1. I\'m gonna tell you what I\'m about to say.
2. Then I\'m gonna say it.
3. Then I\'m gonna tell ya what I just said.
Phew!

May 28th, 2017 01:46

I LIKE SAID IT
Goldfinch60 said:

What did I say?

May 28th, 2017 01:26

WHY DO THEY DO IT?
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha Michael this
Is absolutely spot on
I am in your team
Bloody hate these,
Poncey people...

May 27th, 2017 13:53

WHY DO THEY DO IT?
WriteBeLight said:

Great write about the frustration Michael. We pay so very much to relax and enjoy a meal out, and sometimes get the short end of the stick. Very, very annoying. Great job!

May 27th, 2017 13:52

WHY DO THEY DO IT?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

In the trade (well in our Traning Restaurant) we call it \"deconstructed\". The idea is that (like Spanish PLATAS) you serve all the elements of the meal separated. Fries in pail ~ peas in a jug ~ pie in a dish ~ gravy in BOAT ! etc etc. I love SUNDAY DINNER at me Mums ~ you get everything on the plate whether to want it or not. She has special mega-plates for Christmas Dinner. My worst experience of \"Pie in a Pot\" was shooting it on to the floor ~ trying to drill through the crust . We even deconstruct Strawberry Meringue !Meringue on the plate ~ straws in a bucket and cream in a jug ! Being a SCOUSER I love the fish wrapt in the Daily Mirror ! Thanks BRIAN.!


May 27th, 2017 10:46

WHY DO THEY DO IT?
Augustus said:

Must be a British thing. My beef is the tons of paper, plastic waste. I have no answer. Dishwashing has its effect on the environment as well. Kudos.

May 27th, 2017 10:02

WHY DO THEY DO IT?
swingline said:

I can relate . Nothing like dinner served on a plate .

May 27th, 2017 08:46

WHY DO THEY DO IT?
orchidee said:

I thought only babies had dishes with separate compartments. Or cats and dogs?! A fine write and pic M.

May 27th, 2017 01:38

WHY DO THEY DO IT?
Goldfinch60 said:

The pie in a pot is the one that gets me, perhaps it is too hard for them to get it out, I certainly struggle sometimes and end up with burnt fingers and pie everywhere, except on the plate. Good write and very true Michael.

May 27th, 2017 00:58

THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI MICHAEL ~ There is a mental hiatus between The elegance and pristinity of the Hamlet and the Lady in your last haunting line ! She would not (in my experience with the YMCA) be plying her trade under the respectability of that cloistered portico ! BUT ~ in retrospect ~ that paradox heightens the sadness of her position. I have never met a truly happy SEX WORKER ~ they are all very vulnerable ! Yours BRIAN

May 26th, 2017 17:10

THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
WriteBeLight said:

Deep and dark Michael.

May 26th, 2017 08:09



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