Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



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Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and cartoon, my first smile of the day.

June 4th, 2017 02:06

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orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic M!

June 4th, 2017 01:43

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Ethan said:

Aw I like this lots. It\'s so quaint. Thanks 👌🏻.

June 4th, 2017 00:26

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Augustus said:

Nicely done.
Sir I\'d be honored to serve on your next voyage. I have a full suit of mail. My specialty is broad ax. I have numerous kills to my credit and have taken the wives of my opponents. I\'m from The Valley Dal.

June 3rd, 2017 13:08

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orchidee said:

You written this poem yet. or is it still unwritten? Said some wag (me!). Ah yes, I see you\'ve written it! heehee.

June 3rd, 2017 12:21

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thehippiepoet said:

Very nice, I enjoyed how smooth it was to read and the alliteration used on the sword swinging line. Good use of alliteration always gets me

June 3rd, 2017 09:38

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Louis Gibbs said:

Beautiful poem, Michael! Thanks.

June 3rd, 2017 09:10

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Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and a cracking picture.

June 3rd, 2017 03:57

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P.H.Rose said:

Brilliant Michael
Absolutly brilliant
This is my kind of
Poem..well done..

June 3rd, 2017 03:05

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swingline said:

I picture Valhalla , where old Vikings do gather and swig and sway .

June 3rd, 2017 02:24

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orchidee said:

Good write and pic M.

June 3rd, 2017 01:40

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MaddieJ said:

As I read I fealt like I was reading about history through a poem. I really enjoyed this!

June 3rd, 2017 01:20

SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
Augustus said:

When I was a kid the \"little rat\" that brought you a penny or a nickel for a tooth placed under the pillow. Louisiana was influenced by the French. Unfortunately these quaint distinctions have been lost. I love your little original characters. We use elevators in stead of lifts. Nice fiery uplifting haiku.

June 2nd, 2017 06:37

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MICHAEL ~ FOR THOSE OF US STILL WORKING ~ Cartoons and ambiguities make FRIDAY more bearable ! I was researching the \"Wisdom of Kentucky\" and came across this sign outside a Church !

BEST SAUSAGE SUPPER
IN ST LOUIS
COME AND EAT
PASTOR THOMAS RESSLER

I knew they all intermarried but I didn\'t
realise they still pracised CANABALISM !

Thanks for sharing BRIAN.

June 2nd, 2017 03:57

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P.H.Rose said:

Brilliant Michael
I love swingline\'s


June 2nd, 2017 03:22

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Goldfinch60 said:

The English language is a minefield of inconsistency when not written, correctly.

June 2nd, 2017 02:03

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orchidee said:

Oh lol. And who are Bill Stickers and Bill Posters? They are going to be prosecuted when they get caught!

June 2nd, 2017 01:46

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swingline said:

While visiting a white racist antigay bar in America the English tourists saw a sign that said \"No Fags Allowed\" and immediately left their cigarettes on the bus .

June 2nd, 2017 00:35

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Michael Edwards said:

Looks like Cedric\'s got toothache - I wonder if the fairy will be visiting him.

June 2nd, 2017 00:09

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Louis Gibbs said:

Love your humor, Michael, and how it inspires more in the replies.

June 1st, 2017 08:48

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Augustus said:

Sniffer mouse-- giggle.
Small screen-- bucking the trend for larger and larger ( with less useful content)


June 1st, 2017 08:05

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Michael Edwards said:

They do indeed - cheers Brian.

June 1st, 2017 06:26

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

It\'s a problem for Men
Veggie Growers and Hatters
They find in the end
That size ~ really Matters
Things look less obscene
On a smaller screen !
Thanks for caring ~ love the cartoon ! BRIAN
Please check my BEE POEM ~ Thanks BEE.

June 1st, 2017 05:06

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Fay Slimm. said:

Where do you get these limericks from Michael - so full of fun.

June 1st, 2017 04:18

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P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha Michael
Another cracker
And the drawing
Would be perfect
For my Ellie lapage
Poem/story

June 1st, 2017 03:37

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Goldfinch60 said:

Fun write.

June 1st, 2017 02:48

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orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write and pic. M.

June 1st, 2017 01:30

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Augustus said:

I agree. But a 300 pound woman in spandex is what gets to me

May 31st, 2017 11:52

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Tony36 said:

Great write

May 31st, 2017 10:13

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Louis Gibbs said:

Aside from all the frivolity above, which I enjoyed thoroughly, Let me say that your poem is impressive ... very well done, Michael! We can use all the humor we can get.

May 31st, 2017 09:30



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