Comments received on poems by nair36
Fullest Father Figure
lynn said:
What a beautiful tribute to you father.He must be so proud that you feel this love for him.
February 20th, 2012 22:44
lynn said:
What a beautiful tribute to you father.He must be so proud that you feel this love for him.
February 20th, 2012 22:44
Engine Issues
nair36 said:
That's a very nice comment. It's about a mental episode. I know a bit about them so I thought I could describe what it's like without giving it away just like that in the poem. Glad you liked it. I always appreciate others opinions on poetry.
January 19th, 2012 15:16
nair36 said:
That's a very nice comment. It's about a mental episode. I know a bit about them so I thought I could describe what it's like without giving it away just like that in the poem. Glad you liked it. I always appreciate others opinions on poetry.
January 19th, 2012 15:16
Engine Issues
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, it takes my imagination off into the countryside, careening along the road fringed by open fields and blue sky with dilemmas ruining the ride; dunno why it conjures that up, but interestingly it did. Loaded with awesome imagery, it seems almost a kaleidoscope of images intriguingly hinting at the main issue, which is internal trouble. I really like it. Flows nicely too. Sweet.
January 19th, 2012 15:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, it takes my imagination off into the countryside, careening along the road fringed by open fields and blue sky with dilemmas ruining the ride; dunno why it conjures that up, but interestingly it did. Loaded with awesome imagery, it seems almost a kaleidoscope of images intriguingly hinting at the main issue, which is internal trouble. I really like it. Flows nicely too. Sweet.
January 19th, 2012 15:11
mood swings, angel wings and puppet strings
Cheeky Missy said:
Awesome! Wow. I've never seen this one ere now, and it is impressive. La, but herein is beautifully expressed the dilemma the vast majority wriggle miserably in. With rhyme, rythm, and metre metaphorically you've aptly conveyed the multitudes' struggles. Superb. I really like this one.
October 20th, 2011 09:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Awesome! Wow. I've never seen this one ere now, and it is impressive. La, but herein is beautifully expressed the dilemma the vast majority wriggle miserably in. With rhyme, rythm, and metre metaphorically you've aptly conveyed the multitudes' struggles. Superb. I really like this one.
October 20th, 2011 09:36
mood swings, angel wings and puppet strings
Paul Price said:
Your very good, I really like your poems....
October 8th, 2011 18:31
Paul Price said:
Your very good, I really like your poems....
October 8th, 2011 18:31
Hummingbird\'s Flower
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! So beautiful and bittersweet, laden with such lovely imagery! Poignant and tender, though almost a tad flippant in closing, as if covering the depth of the grief over the loss thereby. I really like it!
August 15th, 2011 19:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! So beautiful and bittersweet, laden with such lovely imagery! Poignant and tender, though almost a tad flippant in closing, as if covering the depth of the grief over the loss thereby. I really like it!
August 15th, 2011 19:30
Behind My Hair 2
Dolphine29 said:
I know the depth of that feeling. I really enjoyed your poem. And yes, you see , you are a poet.
Best and I hope one day you will see.
June 9th, 2011 16:52
Dolphine29 said:
I know the depth of that feeling. I really enjoyed your poem. And yes, you see , you are a poet.
Best and I hope one day you will see.
June 9th, 2011 16:52
Love, Learn and Live
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Thanks. You've been through a LOT. What a life, what a grief,....may you flourish in life, loving and learning and brought to see the Lord's face with joy, in the end.
February 21st, 2011 23:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Thanks. You've been through a LOT. What a life, what a grief,....may you flourish in life, loving and learning and brought to see the Lord's face with joy, in the end.
February 21st, 2011 23:53
Q/A
Cheeky Missy said:
Very soberly fascinating.....lovely take on reality these days. I love the concluding line of your first stanza.
February 20th, 2011 23:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Very soberly fascinating.....lovely take on reality these days. I love the concluding line of your first stanza.
February 20th, 2011 23:57
Devils' Group Home
SauravRHS said:
Sounds like a rap from some Eminem number. I loved reading it!
February 16th, 2011 11:07
SauravRHS said:
Sounds like a rap from some Eminem number. I loved reading it!
February 16th, 2011 11:07
Devils' Group Home
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Sounds "hellish." What is the point of such places if that is the real truth about them? Why do they consign anyone to such "hellholes"? Yet "....there is forgiveness with Thee that Thou mightest be feared..." Thank you for this intro..."nasty" is too genteel a word for it. It's not now, right?
February 14th, 2011 22:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Sounds "hellish." What is the point of such places if that is the real truth about them? Why do they consign anyone to such "hellholes"? Yet "....there is forgiveness with Thee that Thou mightest be feared..." Thank you for this intro..."nasty" is too genteel a word for it. It's not now, right?
February 14th, 2011 22:34
Demons Inside
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent. The freaky part is the dragging below into hell suggestion....too real. Your placement of the Bible verses was well-timed....Oh that the Lord will hear and save us!!!!
January 20th, 2011 01:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent. The freaky part is the dragging below into hell suggestion....too real. Your placement of the Bible verses was well-timed....Oh that the Lord will hear and save us!!!!
January 20th, 2011 01:14
Lockdown
Cheeky Missy said:
Very fascinating....I quite enjoyed it. It is totally unknown to me....and very interesting to consider....thanks for your explanation...where and under what circumstances does lockdown occur? Thanks for this one....intriguing to wee me.
January 14th, 2011 22:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Very fascinating....I quite enjoyed it. It is totally unknown to me....and very interesting to consider....thanks for your explanation...where and under what circumstances does lockdown occur? Thanks for this one....intriguing to wee me.
January 14th, 2011 22:42
Grow Old With You
Cheeky Missy said:
I don't know the original, but this is VERY sweet! I love it!!!!! I hope you stay together forever, just like you sing.
January 3rd, 2011 00:01
Cheeky Missy said:
I don't know the original, but this is VERY sweet! I love it!!!!! I hope you stay together forever, just like you sing.
January 3rd, 2011 00:01
Grow Old With You
nair36 said:
Adam Sandlers version is awesome but I wanted to make one too...
January 2nd, 2011 19:46
nair36 said:
Adam Sandlers version is awesome but I wanted to make one too...
January 2nd, 2011 19:46
Psychosis In Me
nair36 said:
It is real. Hey Jenny, do you ever stop to wonder about the little things in life that make the world seem real to you? Like if this is all just in your head or apart of Gods' plan? Have you ever felt suicidal and happy at the same time? Idk what to think anymore. This is a peek into insanity. Only it's mine. I wish I knew how to say what I am trying to say.
January 1st, 2011 23:39
nair36 said:
It is real. Hey Jenny, do you ever stop to wonder about the little things in life that make the world seem real to you? Like if this is all just in your head or apart of Gods' plan? Have you ever felt suicidal and happy at the same time? Idk what to think anymore. This is a peek into insanity. Only it's mine. I wish I knew how to say what I am trying to say.
January 1st, 2011 23:39
Psychosis In Me
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is AWFUL and yet you make it sound so real,....like a peek into insanity.
January 1st, 2011 22:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is AWFUL and yet you make it sound so real,....like a peek into insanity.
January 1st, 2011 22:28
Blue
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! Very sweet! Is it a play on a familiar song? With all the repeat lines, I guessed it was, but could not identify what song it would be, if it is. It is a lovely romantic piece to your dear sweetheart....hope she keeps you singing!
December 31st, 2010 01:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! Very sweet! Is it a play on a familiar song? With all the repeat lines, I guessed it was, but could not identify what song it would be, if it is. It is a lovely romantic piece to your dear sweetheart....hope she keeps you singing!
December 31st, 2010 01:30
The Poem Before Christmas
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw....this is so very sweet! I LOVE this one! It beat "Twas the Night Before Christmas" all hollow for sweetness! It is so romantic!
December 29th, 2010 21:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw....this is so very sweet! I LOVE this one! It beat "Twas the Night Before Christmas" all hollow for sweetness! It is so romantic!
December 29th, 2010 21:38
The Poem Before Christmas
lulu said:
Nice poem .. Btw happy Christmas and a happy new year :)
Love These love poems :D
December 25th, 2010 06:18
lulu said:
Nice poem .. Btw happy Christmas and a happy new year :)
Love These love poems :D
December 25th, 2010 06:18
My Prayer
ironmaiden_81186 said:
its amazing to read such painful portrayal of feelings...after reading your witty poems, this one comes as quite a surprise really..
but for whatever u've tried to express here, has come out very effectively indeed...
briliant work man..
December 24th, 2010 10:29
ironmaiden_81186 said:
its amazing to read such painful portrayal of feelings...after reading your witty poems, this one comes as quite a surprise really..
but for whatever u've tried to express here, has come out very effectively indeed...
briliant work man..
December 24th, 2010 10:29
Choosing
Cheeky Missy said:
It is fascinating, since you choose the Lord, and by contrast He declares He chooses whom He saves, and all the more so, seeing you are resigned to being blue. Styled as a prayer, it is something to tread softly in,....a sorrowful confused cry to be saved, though almost with a touch of humor, that is dampened by the inescapable depression.....your closing is hopeful, and correctly you don't "need to drink, fight or use...." but rather need His salvation and grace to obey His Word. I hope I have not been at all unkind or offensive in what I've said.
December 24th, 2010 00:02
Cheeky Missy said:
It is fascinating, since you choose the Lord, and by contrast He declares He chooses whom He saves, and all the more so, seeing you are resigned to being blue. Styled as a prayer, it is something to tread softly in,....a sorrowful confused cry to be saved, though almost with a touch of humor, that is dampened by the inescapable depression.....your closing is hopeful, and correctly you don't "need to drink, fight or use...." but rather need His salvation and grace to obey His Word. I hope I have not been at all unkind or offensive in what I've said.
December 24th, 2010 00:02
Fullest Father Figure
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! This is EXCELLENT! I so love this tribute to your father! Mine too! If only I could put him so elegantly as you have done yours....he loves us so much! I am not good enough ever for either Daddy or Mommy! I love this poem and the one to your mother....these are the best poems of yours, in my opinion. Thank you very much for writing and posting them.
December 21st, 2010 18:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! This is EXCELLENT! I so love this tribute to your father! Mine too! If only I could put him so elegantly as you have done yours....he loves us so much! I am not good enough ever for either Daddy or Mommy! I love this poem and the one to your mother....these are the best poems of yours, in my opinion. Thank you very much for writing and posting them.
December 21st, 2010 18:20
Fullest Father Figure
dbremner said:
I like this poem you've done a good job.
December 21st, 2010 15:55
dbremner said:
I like this poem you've done a good job.
December 21st, 2010 15:55
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