Comments received on poems by nair36
Fullest Father Figure
dbremner said:
I like this poem you've done a good job.
December 21st, 2010 15:55
dbremner said:
I like this poem you've done a good job.
December 21st, 2010 15:55
Wonder Woman Mom
lulu said:
Nice poem and full of emotions too I LOVED it it was the type of poem I was waiting for someone to write :) glad u wrote it :D
December 21st, 2010 06:58
lulu said:
Nice poem and full of emotions too I LOVED it it was the type of poem I was waiting for someone to write :) glad u wrote it :D
December 21st, 2010 06:58
Wonder Woman Mom
Cheeky Missy said:
My mom too! Can't beat our mothers!....They are the GREATEST!!! I LOVED this sweet tribute to your mom!
December 20th, 2010 01:31
Cheeky Missy said:
My mom too! Can't beat our mothers!....They are the GREATEST!!! I LOVED this sweet tribute to your mom!
December 20th, 2010 01:31
Will Be Done
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is the sweetest of all your poems that I've read. It is excellent. (hahaha, like somebody please rate my sincere prayers to God, I'll be the Pharisee and you flatter me?) Seriously, it is very nice. Oh may the Lord bless us with salvation!
December 19th, 2010 15:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is the sweetest of all your poems that I've read. It is excellent. (hahaha, like somebody please rate my sincere prayers to God, I'll be the Pharisee and you flatter me?) Seriously, it is very nice. Oh may the Lord bless us with salvation!
December 19th, 2010 15:16
I Feel Like Dying
Cheeky Missy said:
I've never heard the song you mention, but yours is sad....initially the last stanza made me begin to laugh, but it is sad....this earthly existence is sorrowful. because of the sin and death which came when our first father sinned. The scene you painted was wild and interesting....was it expressing what it is like to be high on that stuff?
December 18th, 2010 00:37
Cheeky Missy said:
I've never heard the song you mention, but yours is sad....initially the last stanza made me begin to laugh, but it is sad....this earthly existence is sorrowful. because of the sin and death which came when our first father sinned. The scene you painted was wild and interesting....was it expressing what it is like to be high on that stuff?
December 18th, 2010 00:37
I Believe I Can Fly
lulu said:
Nice poem :) loved to c you writing funny ones :)
December 17th, 2010 13:12
lulu said:
Nice poem :) loved to c you writing funny ones :)
December 17th, 2010 13:12
Up On The Roof Top
kelseyroy said:
Lol I love your poems like this. Hilarous. Great job
December 17th, 2010 00:38
kelseyroy said:
Lol I love your poems like this. Hilarous. Great job
December 17th, 2010 00:38
I Believe I Can Fly
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, Father/Uncle Goose, but you made me laugh! I am sorry of course, that it is so vulgar, 'cause you did a great job...it is funny!
December 16th, 2010 22:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, Father/Uncle Goose, but you made me laugh! I am sorry of course, that it is so vulgar, 'cause you did a great job...it is funny!
December 16th, 2010 22:38
Up On The Roof Top
StormyDay said:
Rofl, hahahaha! Best laugh I've had all week. Vulgar, but very witty.
December 15th, 2010 14:34
StormyDay said:
Rofl, hahahaha! Best laugh I've had all week. Vulgar, but very witty.
December 15th, 2010 14:34
Dear Santa
StormyDay said:
Rhyme scheme...amazing, content...even better! What a beautiful Christmas wish. A truely gifted writer you are. Keep up the good work!
December 15th, 2010 14:30
StormyDay said:
Rhyme scheme...amazing, content...even better! What a beautiful Christmas wish. A truely gifted writer you are. Keep up the good work!
December 15th, 2010 14:30
My Prayer
Cheeky Missy said:
It is very serious, nothing to lightly say....prayer to the Lord never is. It is a sad verbal photograph of a modern home....and in a real sense it expresses the pain, from the child's perspective. Bittersweet. You painted the picture effectively.
December 13th, 2010 21:40
Cheeky Missy said:
It is very serious, nothing to lightly say....prayer to the Lord never is. It is a sad verbal photograph of a modern home....and in a real sense it expresses the pain, from the child's perspective. Bittersweet. You painted the picture effectively.
December 13th, 2010 21:40
Frosty the Dope Man
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i would want to meet frosty the dope man...amazing character sketch man....absolutely loved it
December 9th, 2010 09:26
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i would want to meet frosty the dope man...amazing character sketch man....absolutely loved it
December 9th, 2010 09:26
Humpty Dumpty
ironmaiden_81186 said:
it was long for sure......but never really had a dull moment
great rhyming man, and it was amazing how the story unfolded in a matter of crisp, funny lines...
December 9th, 2010 09:23
ironmaiden_81186 said:
it was long for sure......but never really had a dull moment
great rhyming man, and it was amazing how the story unfolded in a matter of crisp, funny lines...
December 9th, 2010 09:23
Up On The Roof Top
Cheeky Missy said:
I enjoy your cleverness.....you did a clever dirty job of it. Too bad it was dirty, seeing it is rather humorous, but that really kills the humor.
December 8th, 2010 22:52
Cheeky Missy said:
I enjoy your cleverness.....you did a clever dirty job of it. Too bad it was dirty, seeing it is rather humorous, but that really kills the humor.
December 8th, 2010 22:52
Dear Santa
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! I absolutely LOVED this one! Your similes were great! It made me laugh and is so sweet!
December 8th, 2010 00:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh! I absolutely LOVED this one! Your similes were great! It made me laugh and is so sweet!
December 8th, 2010 00:38
My Angel And Me
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is very sweet. I like it very well.....and I hope she loves you all the time!
Your rhyming is delightful....excellent...I love you varied it alternately from stanza to stanza.
December 7th, 2010 22:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is very sweet. I like it very well.....and I hope she loves you all the time!
Your rhyming is delightful....excellent...I love you varied it alternately from stanza to stanza.
December 7th, 2010 22:31
My Christmas Gift
Cheeky Missy said:
I love this! It is SO sweet! You expressed it all so delightfully and the rhyming was very pleasant...the rythm was good too...off occasionally but good. It was very enjoyable to read.
November 29th, 2010 22:14
Cheeky Missy said:
I love this! It is SO sweet! You expressed it all so delightfully and the rhyming was very pleasant...the rythm was good too...off occasionally but good. It was very enjoyable to read.
November 29th, 2010 22:14
Humpty Dumpty
Cheeky Missy said:
You did a jolly good job! It made me laugh right away, until I got to the naughty subjects and words....then I sobered up. I am sorry it had such naughty material, for I couldn't recommend it though it quite amuses me. You did an excellent job! I LOVE your use of end-rhyming---keep it up!!!! Make your syllable count per line consistent and you'll be even more perfect. Kiss the naughty subjects/words goodbye and I'll give you an "A+" and 10+! I would say I loved it, but that would incriminate me.....
November 24th, 2010 21:02
Cheeky Missy said:
You did a jolly good job! It made me laugh right away, until I got to the naughty subjects and words....then I sobered up. I am sorry it had such naughty material, for I couldn't recommend it though it quite amuses me. You did an excellent job! I LOVE your use of end-rhyming---keep it up!!!! Make your syllable count per line consistent and you'll be even more perfect. Kiss the naughty subjects/words goodbye and I'll give you an "A+" and 10+! I would say I loved it, but that would incriminate me.....
November 24th, 2010 21:02
Frosty the Dope Man
Cheeky Missy said:
I absolutely LOVE this piece!!!! Me too!....you took a familiar favourite song and excellently put different lyrics to it! I like to do that myself....and I was singing this as I read it!!! Superb!
It made me laugh out loud after the first stanza, and then even louder at the end! I just loved this one!
Excellent story lines too!
I love it!
November 22nd, 2010 08:15
Cheeky Missy said:
I absolutely LOVE this piece!!!! Me too!....you took a familiar favourite song and excellently put different lyrics to it! I like to do that myself....and I was singing this as I read it!!! Superb!
It made me laugh out loud after the first stanza, and then even louder at the end! I just loved this one!
Excellent story lines too!
I love it!
November 22nd, 2010 08:15
You
Cheeky Missy said:
It is so romantic and simple and so sweet. I really like it.
November 21st, 2010 22:50
Cheeky Missy said:
It is so romantic and simple and so sweet. I really like it.
November 21st, 2010 22:50
The things I carry
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet.....reminded me that some of the things I have to bear are literally too heavy for me.
November 21st, 2010 22:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet.....reminded me that some of the things I have to bear are literally too heavy for me.
November 21st, 2010 22:44
Walking in my Shoes
Lifewellspoken said:
Nicely said, this sometimes is my life, now I just say Fu#@ it and think more positive.
Keep the poems coming!
November 16th, 2010 12:44
Lifewellspoken said:
Nicely said, this sometimes is my life, now I just say Fu#@ it and think more positive.
Keep the poems coming!
November 16th, 2010 12:44
Humans and This World
ironmaiden_81186 said:
what an articulation man....i haven't read a poem with the same amount of feel as i did today....amazing
November 11th, 2010 09:15
ironmaiden_81186 said:
what an articulation man....i haven't read a poem with the same amount of feel as i did today....amazing
November 11th, 2010 09:15
My Cousin Luke
lulu said:
Oooh this poem really touched me .. Rob is Luke the same Luke your little cousin who was born several months ago ?!!! :/ well I am so sorry. To hear that from u maybe he is in a better place as u say :/
October 31st, 2010 10:49
lulu said:
Oooh this poem really touched me .. Rob is Luke the same Luke your little cousin who was born several months ago ?!!! :/ well I am so sorry. To hear that from u maybe he is in a better place as u say :/
October 31st, 2010 10:49
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