Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Revival
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Eveaning FAY another Sunny Day in Esex - time for me to relax away from WORK. Loved the PIC *n POEM. Your elegant ode reminded me that ^All Creatures Great & Small* are an integral part of Mother Natures Food Chains & Food Webs! Thank you for RESSUSECATING the FLY and not KILLING it ! Knowing You I pressume you drank the coffee without a second thought - I know i would have done! Please check my Poem *Seven Ages of Woman* I am surea it will strike a chord.
Blessings & Love & Joy
Angela - Brian & Smokey ! !
September 5th, 2020 14:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Eveaning FAY another Sunny Day in Esex - time for me to relax away from WORK. Loved the PIC *n POEM. Your elegant ode reminded me that ^All Creatures Great & Small* are an integral part of Mother Natures Food Chains & Food Webs! Thank you for RESSUSECATING the FLY and not KILLING it ! Knowing You I pressume you drank the coffee without a second thought - I know i would have done! Please check my Poem *Seven Ages of Woman* I am surea it will strike a chord.
Blessings & Love & Joy
Angela - Brian & Smokey ! !
September 5th, 2020 14:27
Revival
dusk arising said:
And when revived I\'ll go find you a nice warm dog **** to dine upon.
Hmm well respect to all living creatures is fine but i\'d like a little some of that back in so far as, if a fly is going to walk over my cheese then firstly i\'d like him to have clean feet and secondly not to regurgitate the last meals digestive juices (as they do) onto my cheese.
Now if that were a Bee in your tea, then I\'d not have a Bee in my bonnet about a fly.
However, that\'s just me inflicting me upon your fine poetry today. Rapping my own knuckles here.
Rather a sweet piece you have penned here. Certainly good reading for an audience of children\'s ears too.
September 5th, 2020 12:32
dusk arising said:
And when revived I\'ll go find you a nice warm dog **** to dine upon.
Hmm well respect to all living creatures is fine but i\'d like a little some of that back in so far as, if a fly is going to walk over my cheese then firstly i\'d like him to have clean feet and secondly not to regurgitate the last meals digestive juices (as they do) onto my cheese.
Now if that were a Bee in your tea, then I\'d not have a Bee in my bonnet about a fly.
However, that\'s just me inflicting me upon your fine poetry today. Rapping my own knuckles here.
Rather a sweet piece you have penned here. Certainly good reading for an audience of children\'s ears too.
September 5th, 2020 12:32
Undiluted
Michael Edwards said:
Another mistresspiece (said he being very PC).
September 5th, 2020 05:25
Michael Edwards said:
Another mistresspiece (said he being very PC).
September 5th, 2020 05:25
Revival
L. B. Mek said:
immersive, it reads as an actual thought I might have had myself in the past, though not necessarily about a fly, nor with a tea cup as a culprit
September 5th, 2020 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
immersive, it reads as an actual thought I might have had myself in the past, though not necessarily about a fly, nor with a tea cup as a culprit
September 5th, 2020 03:30
Revival
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
This reminded me of the waiter’s joke,
“There’s a fly in my soup“.
A most enjoyable read.
Have a wonderful day.
Laura🌻
September 5th, 2020 02:41
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
This reminded me of the waiter’s joke,
“There’s a fly in my soup“.
A most enjoyable read.
Have a wonderful day.
Laura🌻
September 5th, 2020 02:41
Revival
Neville said:
Ah\' I recall this little gem.. and enjoy it as much today as i did when first discovered .... x
September 5th, 2020 02:37
Neville said:
Ah\' I recall this little gem.. and enjoy it as much today as i did when first discovered .... x
September 5th, 2020 02:37
Undiluted
Goldfinch60 said:
Positive words Fay leading to the light that can be in all our lives.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 23:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Positive words Fay leading to the light that can be in all our lives.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 23:59
Undiluted
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Brian here!
Midnight - all alone on the Moonlight
Can agrevate ones Memories - and
make the day seem *worse than it was* !
However as the night wears on - There
is some light @ the end of the Tunnel.
We*ve all been there - AMEN !
Love - Joy & Peace
Brian & Angel & Smokey 💛💛💛
September 4th, 2020 15:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Brian here!
Midnight - all alone on the Moonlight
Can agrevate ones Memories - and
make the day seem *worse than it was* !
However as the night wears on - There
is some light @ the end of the Tunnel.
We*ve all been there - AMEN !
Love - Joy & Peace
Brian & Angel & Smokey 💛💛💛
September 4th, 2020 15:52
Undiluted
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Brian here!
Midnight - all alone on the Moonlight
Can agrevate ones Memories - and
make the day seem *worse than it was* !
However as the night wears on - There
is some light @ the end of the Tunnel.
We*ve all been there - AMEN !
Love - Joy & Peace
Brian & Angel & Smokey 💛💛💛
September 4th, 2020 15:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - Brian here!
Midnight - all alone on the Moonlight
Can agrevate ones Memories - and
make the day seem *worse than it was* !
However as the night wears on - There
is some light @ the end of the Tunnel.
We*ve all been there - AMEN !
Love - Joy & Peace
Brian & Angel & Smokey 💛💛💛
September 4th, 2020 15:52
Undiluted
Neville said:
... Me n me mate D A are in complete agreement with regard to how well crafted your \'Undiluted\' post is ... pure unadulterated poetry ...
September 4th, 2020 09:11
Neville said:
... Me n me mate D A are in complete agreement with regard to how well crafted your \'Undiluted\' post is ... pure unadulterated poetry ...
September 4th, 2020 09:11
Abundance.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Friday Fay ~ Thanks for showcasing SEPTEMBER ~ My Fave Month too & my Birthday Month. Thanks a fine tribute - You inspired my Poem today *SEPTEMBER LOVES* !
Love the structure of Your Eulogy !
V 1. BEAUTY is the word that jumped out
V 2. *Russet through emerald lushness* !
V 3. *Laced with change*
V 4. The period of GESTATION is almost OVER !
V 5. Summers SAPRANO is transposed to Autumns CONTRALTO
My fave S EPTEMBER POEM ~ EV ER !
Blessings & Love & Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela & Smokey 💛💛💛💛💛
September 4th, 2020 03:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Friday Fay ~ Thanks for showcasing SEPTEMBER ~ My Fave Month too & my Birthday Month. Thanks a fine tribute - You inspired my Poem today *SEPTEMBER LOVES* !
Love the structure of Your Eulogy !
V 1. BEAUTY is the word that jumped out
V 2. *Russet through emerald lushness* !
V 3. *Laced with change*
V 4. The period of GESTATION is almost OVER !
V 5. Summers SAPRANO is transposed to Autumns CONTRALTO
My fave S EPTEMBER POEM ~ EV ER !
Blessings & Love & Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela & Smokey 💛💛💛💛💛
September 4th, 2020 03:37
Undiluted
dusk arising said:
And that is how life flows for the positive minded.
Another of your well woven tapestries here lifting us out of dark blues thru sensible pastels of reassurance and into the light of futures promise.
When i read your poetry today somebodies famous song lyrics came to mind:-
Strumming my pain with her fingers,
Singing my life with her words,
Telling my whole life with her words,
Killing me softly with her song.
I know where every line of your piece today comes from believe me. So well written.
September 4th, 2020 02:23
dusk arising said:
And that is how life flows for the positive minded.
Another of your well woven tapestries here lifting us out of dark blues thru sensible pastels of reassurance and into the light of futures promise.
When i read your poetry today somebodies famous song lyrics came to mind:-
Strumming my pain with her fingers,
Singing my life with her words,
Telling my whole life with her words,
Killing me softly with her song.
I know where every line of your piece today comes from believe me. So well written.
September 4th, 2020 02:23
Abundance.
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words take me into that wonderful time where Autumn brings such beauty to us all.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words take me into that wonderful time where Autumn brings such beauty to us all.
Andy
September 4th, 2020 00:04
Abundance.
Michael Edwards said:
A super write that does such justice to a great month - thank you Fay.
September 3rd, 2020 14:17
Michael Edwards said:
A super write that does such justice to a great month - thank you Fay.
September 3rd, 2020 14:17
Abundance.
dusk arising said:
And so to browse the brambles for fine plump dark berry fruit ignoring the prick and scratch of defence barbs, which will punish for days yet, for the minds eye is set upon the bounty of times afore. Mothers blackberry and apple pies. The glory of summers end served with a hot sweet custard.
And sun loitering low in the sky as the land is laboured to harvest in fields of gold and cider tickles throat.
Sweet accompanyment of blackbird seranade as hungry eyes prepare to feast upon the now revealed haunt of insect supper suddenly disturbed by dash of rabit and crazed dog barkings.
You brought the season to me as once again i fell into your words and found myself planted. Oh for those younger days in september\'s fields.
September 3rd, 2020 12:32
dusk arising said:
And so to browse the brambles for fine plump dark berry fruit ignoring the prick and scratch of defence barbs, which will punish for days yet, for the minds eye is set upon the bounty of times afore. Mothers blackberry and apple pies. The glory of summers end served with a hot sweet custard.
And sun loitering low in the sky as the land is laboured to harvest in fields of gold and cider tickles throat.
Sweet accompanyment of blackbird seranade as hungry eyes prepare to feast upon the now revealed haunt of insect supper suddenly disturbed by dash of rabit and crazed dog barkings.
You brought the season to me as once again i fell into your words and found myself planted. Oh for those younger days in september\'s fields.
September 3rd, 2020 12:32
Abundance.
MendedFences27 said:
Living here, this is the beginning of what most here call the best time of the year. Everything becomes pumpkin-spiced, candied apple, butter and sugar corned. County fairs spring up. The foliage sets the country side ablaze in beauty....but then this year there\'s Covid 19...blah. Thanks for reminding me of the greatness of September. - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2020 10:07
MendedFences27 said:
Living here, this is the beginning of what most here call the best time of the year. Everything becomes pumpkin-spiced, candied apple, butter and sugar corned. County fairs spring up. The foliage sets the country side ablaze in beauty....but then this year there\'s Covid 19...blah. Thanks for reminding me of the greatness of September. - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2020 10:07
Abundance.
orchidee said:
Godo write Fay. I never knew there was so much in September, but I know now. How do they fit all that in 30 days?!
September 3rd, 2020 06:00
orchidee said:
Godo write Fay. I never knew there was so much in September, but I know now. How do they fit all that in 30 days?!
September 3rd, 2020 06:00
Abundance.
Neville said:
.. such is September my lady and superbly struck ... now captured to savour any time of year ..... and truly...
September 3rd, 2020 03:57
Neville said:
.. such is September my lady and superbly struck ... now captured to savour any time of year ..... and truly...
September 3rd, 2020 03:57
Abundance.
jarcher54 said:
I appreciate how you so often approach a subject or place or event objectively, without a word about yourself, yet every bit of your work is so inherently personal. You seldom use the word \"I\" but the vision is so you.
September 3rd, 2020 03:03
jarcher54 said:
I appreciate how you so often approach a subject or place or event objectively, without a word about yourself, yet every bit of your work is so inherently personal. You seldom use the word \"I\" but the vision is so you.
September 3rd, 2020 03:03
Abundance.
Poetic Dan said:
Oooo, I really enjoyed that as I try to reconnect with my birth star... Thank you for helping with the vibration to be felt from Mars...
September 3rd, 2020 02:54
Poetic Dan said:
Oooo, I really enjoyed that as I try to reconnect with my birth star... Thank you for helping with the vibration to be felt from Mars...
September 3rd, 2020 02:54
Interchange
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly pro humanity, inspiring wonder in the mechanics of our very existence and a subtle nudge, reminding us to not take it for granted
September 3rd, 2020 01:51
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly pro humanity, inspiring wonder in the mechanics of our very existence and a subtle nudge, reminding us to not take it for granted
September 3rd, 2020 01:51
Interchange
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Fay, the senses can define so much of our life and transfer so much into different senses within our brain.
Andy
September 3rd, 2020 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Fay, the senses can define so much of our life and transfer so much into different senses within our brain.
Andy
September 3rd, 2020 00:36
Interchange
dusk arising said:
Amazing isn\'t it that we are such wonderful creatures and sophisticated beyond our own knowledge yet we can be so callously indifferent to our equally sophisticated, wonderful fellow homo sapiens.
Yes within the sophistication you poetically explore here there lurks the raging beast, the plundering rapist the cunning serial killer.
Your work always leads me into thoughts around your chosen subject, no less today. Perhaps the dark side of me is showing or maybe it\'s mankind\'s guilt oozing out - so sophisticated yet so savage.
Yes to your closing line.... but if only we could.
September 2nd, 2020 07:19
dusk arising said:
Amazing isn\'t it that we are such wonderful creatures and sophisticated beyond our own knowledge yet we can be so callously indifferent to our equally sophisticated, wonderful fellow homo sapiens.
Yes within the sophistication you poetically explore here there lurks the raging beast, the plundering rapist the cunning serial killer.
Your work always leads me into thoughts around your chosen subject, no less today. Perhaps the dark side of me is showing or maybe it\'s mankind\'s guilt oozing out - so sophisticated yet so savage.
Yes to your closing line.... but if only we could.
September 2nd, 2020 07:19
Interchange
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Aww, they took a pic of my brain - only three brain cellls in it! lol.
September 2nd, 2020 04:17
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Aww, they took a pic of my brain - only three brain cellls in it! lol.
September 2nd, 2020 04:17
Interchange
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Midweek FAY - Angela Here - Thanks for sharing some precious TRUTHS!
\"As Humans - created in GODs Likeness
We have this Treasure in Earthern Vessels\"
Paul The Apostle who wrote The Epistles
Our five basic Senses of Sight - Sound - Scent - Savour
& Sensuality are Divine Treasures afforded in part or whole
to each Human Being together with the abilities of Speech
& Script. These attributes make us SPECIAL *Angels not Apes*
Your elegant ODE reminds us that ONE SENSE triggers ANOTHER
making the Whole Person infinitly greater than *Sum of the Parts*
INDEED *Human enrichment far exceeds a Brain Scan !*
Thanks for Caring & Sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love A & B & Smokey 🧡💙🤎
September 2nd, 2020 04:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Midweek FAY - Angela Here - Thanks for sharing some precious TRUTHS!
\"As Humans - created in GODs Likeness
We have this Treasure in Earthern Vessels\"
Paul The Apostle who wrote The Epistles
Our five basic Senses of Sight - Sound - Scent - Savour
& Sensuality are Divine Treasures afforded in part or whole
to each Human Being together with the abilities of Speech
& Script. These attributes make us SPECIAL *Angels not Apes*
Your elegant ODE reminds us that ONE SENSE triggers ANOTHER
making the Whole Person infinitly greater than *Sum of the Parts*
INDEED *Human enrichment far exceeds a Brain Scan !*
Thanks for Caring & Sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love A & B & Smokey 🧡💙🤎
September 2nd, 2020 04:11
Interchange
Neville said:
this gift you have crafted so fine and made available today must surely rank amongst my personal Fay\'ve\'s dear lady and poet ....
... absolutely amazing and true ... x
September 2nd, 2020 03:52
Neville said:
this gift you have crafted so fine and made available today must surely rank amongst my personal Fay\'ve\'s dear lady and poet ....
... absolutely amazing and true ... x
September 2nd, 2020 03:52
Gifts
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Fay - Angela here just catching a few moments of MPS Time before its time for bed again ! You Cornish Pixies know just how much the Sea ameliorates SUNRISE & SUNSET and Cowes faces both East & West (see map) so one can observe both in a Day in all their Channel reflected GLORY. There is always something Magic & Divine about both events & Venus (on whom we will never walk !) is always the Bright & Morning Star !
From the Rising of the SUN
To the going down of the same
The LORDS Name is too be PRAISED ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
September 1st, 2020 16:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Fay - Angela here just catching a few moments of MPS Time before its time for bed again ! You Cornish Pixies know just how much the Sea ameliorates SUNRISE & SUNSET and Cowes faces both East & West (see map) so one can observe both in a Day in all their Channel reflected GLORY. There is always something Magic & Divine about both events & Venus (on whom we will never walk !) is always the Bright & Morning Star !
From the Rising of the SUN
To the going down of the same
The LORDS Name is too be PRAISED ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
September 1st, 2020 16:50
Gifts
dusk arising said:
The dawn so beautiful and so inspiring. Wow were you inspired into fluid verse when the light caught you this time around. That\'s one of the wonderous things we poets possess I believe, the ability to be inspired in a different way on a different day by the same type of event - though no two dawnings are the same.
Love the way you romance the passage of venus of the night laying down before the glory of arising day.
P.S. I\'d love to know what you thought of the fairy tale i posted yesterday about Louise rabbit
September 1st, 2020 15:11
dusk arising said:
The dawn so beautiful and so inspiring. Wow were you inspired into fluid verse when the light caught you this time around. That\'s one of the wonderous things we poets possess I believe, the ability to be inspired in a different way on a different day by the same type of event - though no two dawnings are the same.
Love the way you romance the passage of venus of the night laying down before the glory of arising day.
P.S. I\'d love to know what you thought of the fairy tale i posted yesterday about Louise rabbit
September 1st, 2020 15:11
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