Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Bonus.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

September 17th, 2020 05:39

Souls Know.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Brain here ~ Good Morning FAY ~ Thanks for another Love Poem which exemplifies the CHOICE Angela & I made to becoem ENGAGED (a First for both of US !) and MARRIED ! Our LOVE is *New Every Morning* and you second verse describes exactly how we FEEL - Each New Day ~ AMEN !

Blessings Love - Peace & Joy
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !

September 17th, 2020 04:58

Souls Know.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Brain here ~ Good Morning FAY ~ Thanks for another Love Poem which exemplifies the CHOICE Angela & I made to becoem ENGAGED (a First for both of US !) and MARRIED ! Our LOVE is *New Every Morning* and you second verse describes exactly how we FEEL - Each New Day ~ AMEN !

Blessings Love - Peace & Joy
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !

September 17th, 2020 04:58

Bonus.
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words once more Fay, the end of Summer into the wonder of Autumn.

Andy

September 17th, 2020 04:54

Bonus.
Michael Edwards said:

Yes much of my plantings are showing signs of winter retirement . Still waitng for a large bulb order (daffs etc) and once they are in that will be it until spring. fine write Fay.

September 17th, 2020 03:59

Bonus.
dusk arising said:

Reading your words today i shudder as your description of summers end now a thing of yesterday and within sight the winter i want to curl up and hibernate. Last years medical intervention has left me weakened and the winter ahead fills me with dread.

Your\'s the tale of a land girls toil as she relates to the seasons timetable laid before her every day.

September 17th, 2020 03:56

Souls Know.
Trenz Pruca said:

I enjoyed it very much.

September 16th, 2020 14:18

Souls Know.
Goldfinch60 said:

Great write Fay and so true in my case.

Andy

September 16th, 2020 04:35

Souls Know.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

September 16th, 2020 04:05

Souls Know.
dusk arising said:

Bliss! Yep like a alloy, two become one and of newfound strength and dexterity. Sigh... foreverness?...
foreverness is beyond my scope sadly for my alloys always got hit by a whacking great hammer out of the blue.
But in a dream of ideals... yes... gimmie please.

(bliss why hast thou escaped me LOL)

September 16th, 2020 02:48

Intake.
L. B. Mek said:

the loving way you write of Dawn so often makes me think you must have been Tithonus in a past life...
wonderful imagery

September 16th, 2020 02:02

Intake.
Goldfinch60 said:

Another fabulous sunrise Fay, thatn you.

Andy

September 16th, 2020 01:10

Intake.
SerenWise said:

Beautiful imagery as always

September 15th, 2020 22:40

Intake.
dusk arising said:

Now if I\'m not mistaken that picture is taken from Lands End looking westwards where you\'d be treated to a lovely sunset but.......

Your words bring to mind what magic there must be in witnessing the dawn over a seascape and being able to see its effect upon adjacent coast. I shall have to plot a course for a place where i could watch this display one fine day.

September 15th, 2020 11:05

Intake.
Dove said:

Beautiful poem and image!

September 15th, 2020 10:23

Intake.
Neville said:

... There ain’t nothin can compare with the Kernow coastline ... certainly not when shared with a lover pre, post or peri dawn ....

...Penned to perfection Fay ... 😎

September 15th, 2020 08:40

Intake.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good afternoon FAY ! Love your Nature Poems and for us in an Indian Summer on Sunny (30C) Essex the DAWNS have been breathtaking !
We are Early Risers - 6:30am - so the beauty of Dawn is still filling the Skywith a *Bright New Day* AMEN

This is the Day that the LORD has made
Let US rejoice & be glad in It !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !

September 15th, 2020 08:12

Intake.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

September 15th, 2020 05:50

Given.
L. B. Mek said:

one of the most beautiful Aurora\'s I have ever witnessed was on a quite secluded pebble beach in Cornwall, we were there for a long bank holiday weekend to visit the Eden Project,
your words took me to that place and my memorable conversations with those unassuming, generous and warm people,
really liked the characterisation details as well:
\'Old Rosie would just for fun endeavour to wink at my ignorance that by smiles, we help Heaven to send small treasures\'

September 15th, 2020 02:43

Given.
Dove said:

Awe! Sweetness with a smile, thanks for sharing

September 14th, 2020 09:59

Given.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Thnaks for sharing FAY

CARPE DIEM

Love - Joy & Peace
Angela - Brian & Smokey πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

September 14th, 2020 08:58

Given.
dusk arising said:

Can\'t help but be drawn into the character of dear Rosie here for I too have known those who live simple lives adoring their environment and those who frequent it. They have such grace in the full meaning of the word. Stepping away from the bustle of 21st century life to spend time with somebody like Rosie will always reward us in some unthought of manner with a gift of their grace and peaceful joy of life.

Yes, took me away to past meetings and time spent in peaceful harmony with rich characters of yesterdays.

A lovely memory of fine Rosie you share with us today and i thank you for I really enjoyed reading it and the peace on reflection i found.

September 14th, 2020 06:25

Given.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

September 14th, 2020 05:10

Show Me.
Goldfinch60 said:

Your words are so true Fay and maybe one day everybody will be caring and be best to live their lives.

Andy

September 12th, 2020 01:25

Show Me.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

maybe it will come true

September 11th, 2020 17:46

Show Me.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Teach Me Thy Way O Lord ~ Teach Me Thy Way
Thy gracious aid afford ~ Teach |Me Thy Way
Help Me to walk aright ~ more by Faith ~ less by sight
Lead Me to Heavenly Light ~ Teach Me Thy Way ~ AMEN

Angela here ~ Good Friday FAY ~ Thanks for sharing a very Beautiful Prayer. Life is too precious to waste it being Judgmental.
V 1. Suggests we can all be Peacemakers & Encouragers
V 2. Replacing Criticism with Care & Frostiness with Forgiveness
V 3. Replacing Pride & Prejudice with Peace & Partnership !
We are praying that COVID19 will bring us closer together in 2021 ~ AMEN

Blessings & Peace & Joy with Love ~
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !

September 11th, 2020 09:52

Show Me.
AwHec8 said:

Great Write there Fay Slimm. Don
You must have a very connective soul to be able to access these words of wisdom.

September 11th, 2020 07:56

Show Me.
orchidee said:

A fine write/prayer Fay.

September 11th, 2020 07:03

Show Me.
dusk arising said:

Now there\'s a prayer and a half. But i reckon the solution is granted to most who become a parent. Oh not right away with that wriggling noisy attention seeking bundle of fun and squeels. But as he/she/they grow it occurs. Unconditional love they call it. The spin offs from this milestone provide all you have asked for in your prayer.

September 11th, 2020 05:09

Between Worlds.
L. B. Mek said:

impressive in its ambitious scope, wonderfully creative

September 11th, 2020 03:23



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