Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Myself
Dove said:
Lovely to read these words again! Is it a new format different. It forms a lamp ? Then it could be a mountain connection to the ever flowing droplet 💧 of me,
October 1st, 2020 12:21
Dove said:
Lovely to read these words again! Is it a new format different. It forms a lamp ? Then it could be a mountain connection to the ever flowing droplet 💧 of me,
October 1st, 2020 12:21
Myself
Goldfinch60 said:
I probably said the same last time. It is such a wonderful journey from a trickle of water to the ocean but memories of the brook. Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 04:27
Goldfinch60 said:
I probably said the same last time. It is such a wonderful journey from a trickle of water to the ocean but memories of the brook. Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 04:27
Myself
Neville said:
Having read these words previously .. it was a delight to see them bubble back to the surface ... and tho already familiar with them .. or as familiar as one can possibly be with something so infinitely mercurial as water ...
I would advise anyone who might follow me here ..
and just to allow them to trickle over the inside of their eyelids, to relax in their waft and bathe in their cooling beauty ...
October 1st, 2020 04:07
Neville said:
Having read these words previously .. it was a delight to see them bubble back to the surface ... and tho already familiar with them .. or as familiar as one can possibly be with something so infinitely mercurial as water ...
I would advise anyone who might follow me here ..
and just to allow them to trickle over the inside of their eyelids, to relax in their waft and bathe in their cooling beauty ...
October 1st, 2020 04:07
The Undisturbed
L. B. Mek said:
really like the picture and was immersed in the write from first line, another beautiful depiction of the magic waiting to be utilised in all the Nature that surrounds us
October 1st, 2020 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
really like the picture and was immersed in the write from first line, another beautiful depiction of the magic waiting to be utilised in all the Nature that surrounds us
October 1st, 2020 03:48
Myself
L. B. Mek said:
such a therapeutic read during our COVID horror reality, as we remain
- removed, from ready access to Nature\'s wonders,
well worth a secondary upload
October 1st, 2020 02:37
L. B. Mek said:
such a therapeutic read during our COVID horror reality, as we remain
- removed, from ready access to Nature\'s wonders,
well worth a secondary upload
October 1st, 2020 02:37
The Undisturbed
Dove said:
Beautifully said, I long for the tranquility of hiking in the canyons! After the fire ravaged it last year, the new growth is sadly sprout
From the ground, of burnt stumps, it’s so sad! I use to get lost in The trees and weeds,
Of course, with COVID-19, it’s a new animal
Oppsie!
Your poem reminds me how wonderful
Nature’s Beauty is missed!
September 30th, 2020 18:31
Dove said:
Beautifully said, I long for the tranquility of hiking in the canyons! After the fire ravaged it last year, the new growth is sadly sprout
From the ground, of burnt stumps, it’s so sad! I use to get lost in The trees and weeds,
Of course, with COVID-19, it’s a new animal
Oppsie!
Your poem reminds me how wonderful
Nature’s Beauty is missed!
September 30th, 2020 18:31
The Undisturbed
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE -VERY TRUE FAY ! We do live in a a very disturbed World and it is difficult to find a quiet place to meditate. Ironically COVID 19 has increased the quietness in the Countryside and reduced the noise form Traffic & Marauders etc. This has been remarked on by others ! Now that the Children are back in School we can enjoy Walks before & after Work & it is quieter @ weekends too ! T hanks for sharing a real TONIC !
Blesssing & Love & Peace & JOY
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
September 30th, 2020 08:13
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE -VERY TRUE FAY ! We do live in a a very disturbed World and it is difficult to find a quiet place to meditate. Ironically COVID 19 has increased the quietness in the Countryside and reduced the noise form Traffic & Marauders etc. This has been remarked on by others ! Now that the Children are back in School we can enjoy Walks before & after Work & it is quieter @ weekends too ! T hanks for sharing a real TONIC !
Blesssing & Love & Peace & JOY
Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
September 30th, 2020 08:13
The Undisturbed
Neville said:
If I tried to pretend.. even for a moment that these words, once read did not have both a calming and therapeutic effect or impact upon my presently weakened and fevered person ..
then I would be a liar ... and so those also tending me would know it ...
So I aint even gonna bovva .... x
September 30th, 2020 07:21
Neville said:
If I tried to pretend.. even for a moment that these words, once read did not have both a calming and therapeutic effect or impact upon my presently weakened and fevered person ..
then I would be a liar ... and so those also tending me would know it ...
So I aint even gonna bovva .... x
September 30th, 2020 07:21
The Undisturbed
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature has so much to be praised for in curing our stress and leading us into a wonderful place in our lives Fay, great words once more.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 04:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature has so much to be praised for in curing our stress and leading us into a wonderful place in our lives Fay, great words once more.
Andy
September 30th, 2020 04:25
The Undisturbed
dusk arising said:
Wonderful to stroll upon your words into the tranquil space of natures cathederal. Such places bring to us the reality of what we are, animals losing touch with our inherent being, yet tickling the senses of even the most detached person with raw reality of our inner truth. Magic, majesty, magnificence.
September 30th, 2020 03:59
dusk arising said:
Wonderful to stroll upon your words into the tranquil space of natures cathederal. Such places bring to us the reality of what we are, animals losing touch with our inherent being, yet tickling the senses of even the most detached person with raw reality of our inner truth. Magic, majesty, magnificence.
September 30th, 2020 03:59
The Undisturbed
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely. But then, coming out of woods, on to main roads, the vanity of loud motor-bikes, and some people showing off by driving too fast.
Oh well, after the woods, back to everyday life we may say - with its stupidities, daftness, etc included, along with its good.
And watch out - not everyone stops their cars at zebra crossings for us.
September 30th, 2020 02:25
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely. But then, coming out of woods, on to main roads, the vanity of loud motor-bikes, and some people showing off by driving too fast.
Oh well, after the woods, back to everyday life we may say - with its stupidities, daftness, etc included, along with its good.
And watch out - not everyone stops their cars at zebra crossings for us.
September 30th, 2020 02:25
Together
MendedFences27 said:
Let\'s hope there is enough time to save this Earth. With certain fools in power who deny the danger and destroy the unity required to save this planet it is increasingly close to the point of no return.
Your poem lends hope to us all that with some care we can survive. It also shows the attraction of two equally dedicated workers. A mutual attraction born of a shared will to help us all survive. Love and hope, what more can you ask for? - Phil A.
September 29th, 2020 13:36
MendedFences27 said:
Let\'s hope there is enough time to save this Earth. With certain fools in power who deny the danger and destroy the unity required to save this planet it is increasingly close to the point of no return.
Your poem lends hope to us all that with some care we can survive. It also shows the attraction of two equally dedicated workers. A mutual attraction born of a shared will to help us all survive. Love and hope, what more can you ask for? - Phil A.
September 29th, 2020 13:36
Together
Fay Slimm. said:
Many thanks Dan and D.A. for your read and for adding Together into your list of favourites.
September 29th, 2020 11:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Many thanks Dan and D.A. for your read and for adding Together into your list of favourites.
September 29th, 2020 11:31
Take One
Dove said:
Sudden loss runs rampant upon these COVID-19 times! Not necessarily a coupling , but loss of friends, family, even pets ran over and hit!
Well scripted metaphors
September 29th, 2020 10:27
Dove said:
Sudden loss runs rampant upon these COVID-19 times! Not necessarily a coupling , but loss of friends, family, even pets ran over and hit!
Well scripted metaphors
September 29th, 2020 10:27
Together
Goldfinch60 said:
I am very much with you Fay, may peace and love fill our world.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 04:33
Goldfinch60 said:
I am very much with you Fay, may peace and love fill our world.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 04:33
Together
Neville said:
I\'m right there with you .. both beside and behind ya ...
I just love these words and all they stand for ....
a perfectly poemed message for all those who love, peace, justice, love and all things that money and bullying n lies cant really buy despite some thinking otherwise ....
September 29th, 2020 03:18
Neville said:
I\'m right there with you .. both beside and behind ya ...
I just love these words and all they stand for ....
a perfectly poemed message for all those who love, peace, justice, love and all things that money and bullying n lies cant really buy despite some thinking otherwise ....
September 29th, 2020 03:18
Take One
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Wow...so vivid!
Your deliberate and well chosen scripted words and pic intensify one’s innermost feelings...
the feelings of loss and sadness when ‘one from a duo’ is taken.
A truly par excellence write.
Laura🌻
September 29th, 2020 00:37
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Wow...so vivid!
Your deliberate and well chosen scripted words and pic intensify one’s innermost feelings...
the feelings of loss and sadness when ‘one from a duo’ is taken.
A truly par excellence write.
Laura🌻
September 29th, 2020 00:37
Take One
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, I am aware of this so very much.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 00:01
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, I am aware of this so very much.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 00:01
Take One
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - ANGELA here ! Even in my short (32) years of Life - I have seen scenarios which reflect the Angst in each verse of your excellent Poem ! Trauma arises, smiles cease, sorrows tighten & nothing reviives ! It can be death or like Goldfinch & Joyce - Dementia. It can be Separation or Divorce. Since Brian & I Married six Months ago we have gradually morphed into ONE BEING shared equally between two Bodies ~ AWESOME ! It would be like an AMPUTATION if anything happened to either of & I know BRIAN feels the same ! Thats the Agony & Ecstasy of LOVE !
Blessings & Joy & Peace & Love
Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
September 28th, 2020 17:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - ANGELA here ! Even in my short (32) years of Life - I have seen scenarios which reflect the Angst in each verse of your excellent Poem ! Trauma arises, smiles cease, sorrows tighten & nothing reviives ! It can be death or like Goldfinch & Joyce - Dementia. It can be Separation or Divorce. Since Brian & I Married six Months ago we have gradually morphed into ONE BEING shared equally between two Bodies ~ AWESOME ! It would be like an AMPUTATION if anything happened to either of & I know BRIAN feels the same ! Thats the Agony & Ecstasy of LOVE !
Blessings & Joy & Peace & Love
Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
September 28th, 2020 17:37
Take One
MendedFences27 said:
Some things are meant to be in pairs, people too, especially lovers are paired and often times resemble one entity. When one is lost or removed the other is completely at sea. No one can measure the \"grief,\" because it is personal and everyone is different.
Your poem has shown all these elements and more. It rings of the sorrow of separation. It is beautifully composed - Phil A.
September 28th, 2020 16:21
MendedFences27 said:
Some things are meant to be in pairs, people too, especially lovers are paired and often times resemble one entity. When one is lost or removed the other is completely at sea. No one can measure the \"grief,\" because it is personal and everyone is different.
Your poem has shown all these elements and more. It rings of the sorrow of separation. It is beautifully composed - Phil A.
September 28th, 2020 16:21
Take One
Neville said:
sadder than sad and truly felt ..
the title could not be bettered and introduces this poem filled with a sense of more than just loss but of grief and associated anguish ..
Neville
September 28th, 2020 09:25
Neville said:
sadder than sad and truly felt ..
the title could not be bettered and introduces this poem filled with a sense of more than just loss but of grief and associated anguish ..
Neville
September 28th, 2020 09:25
Enmeshed
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a poetic minute-by-minute account of an eye witness statement,
as wonderfully majestic as ever
September 28th, 2020 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a poetic minute-by-minute account of an eye witness statement,
as wonderfully majestic as ever
September 28th, 2020 04:10
Take One
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I will \'take one\'read, and \'take two\' in fact, by reading this twice!
September 28th, 2020 02:12
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I will \'take one\'read, and \'take two\' in fact, by reading this twice!
September 28th, 2020 02:12
Enmeshed
MendedFences27 said:
The Spider\'s Web, often the intention of the phrase is indicate a mystery. Why? Because the physical spider\'s web is a mystery. Stronger than steel and yet artfully beautiful, science has no answer. Oh, and don\'t forget deadly as a trap for the spider\'s survival.
Your poem captures all these attributes and itself is beautiful. - Phil A.
September 27th, 2020 18:49
MendedFences27 said:
The Spider\'s Web, often the intention of the phrase is indicate a mystery. Why? Because the physical spider\'s web is a mystery. Stronger than steel and yet artfully beautiful, science has no answer. Oh, and don\'t forget deadly as a trap for the spider\'s survival.
Your poem captures all these attributes and itself is beautiful. - Phil A.
September 27th, 2020 18:49
Enmeshed
Michael Edwards said:
Oh Fay
what can I say
the words you display
have made my day.
September 27th, 2020 11:21
Michael Edwards said:
Oh Fay
what can I say
the words you display
have made my day.
September 27th, 2020 11:21
Enmeshed
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Sunday FAY ! Ahhhhh SPIDER WEB ! As an Environmental Scientist I am aware of the beaty & importance of SPIDERS and SPIDER WEBS are on one of my faves especially in Winter ~ awesome ! Often overlooked and destroyed by the swish of a hedgetrimmer ! Angela & I were visiting WOODBRIDGE ~ Artisan Village near Ipswich - with our neice Charlotte (3). We were ebjoying a cream tea in an alfresco Court Yard Cafe when Charlotte kept saying Spider Web - Spider Web we couldnt see it so she pointed it out on the pot plant on the Table. It was exquisite ! *Out of the Mouths of Babes !* I have an ACROSTIC SONNET on a Spider Webs which I will post in the week ! Thnks for sharing the *Beauty of Nature* in the midst of a Pandemic ! Must be the Cornish Air & Ice Cream - that keeps you so Young & Calm.
Blessings & Joy & Peace & Love
Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
September 27th, 2020 10:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Sunday FAY ! Ahhhhh SPIDER WEB ! As an Environmental Scientist I am aware of the beaty & importance of SPIDERS and SPIDER WEBS are on one of my faves especially in Winter ~ awesome ! Often overlooked and destroyed by the swish of a hedgetrimmer ! Angela & I were visiting WOODBRIDGE ~ Artisan Village near Ipswich - with our neice Charlotte (3). We were ebjoying a cream tea in an alfresco Court Yard Cafe when Charlotte kept saying Spider Web - Spider Web we couldnt see it so she pointed it out on the pot plant on the Table. It was exquisite ! *Out of the Mouths of Babes !* I have an ACROSTIC SONNET on a Spider Webs which I will post in the week ! Thnks for sharing the *Beauty of Nature* in the midst of a Pandemic ! Must be the Cornish Air & Ice Cream - that keeps you so Young & Calm.
Blessings & Joy & Peace & Love
Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
September 27th, 2020 10:47
Enmeshed
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures Art at is brilliance as Autumn comes into our lives, so much art for which to look forward to in the new few months.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 06:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures Art at is brilliance as Autumn comes into our lives, so much art for which to look forward to in the new few months.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 06:39
Enmeshed
Neville said:
this is quite beautifully and intricately crafted .. and whilst I would never harm one ... you just sent a shiver down me spine ......
September 27th, 2020 05:25
Neville said:
this is quite beautifully and intricately crafted .. and whilst I would never harm one ... you just sent a shiver down me spine ......
September 27th, 2020 05:25
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