Compromise
Laura🌻 said:

My Dear Fay,

What a pleasure to read your scripted words. A timely subject matter indeed. Heeding your well chosen scripted words, makes the reader reflect upon his/her own personal situation...and I believe what we hope for tomorrow will be today’s reality.
Your letter may be ‘imagined’;
but it’s message is not!
I thoroughly enjoyed the read.
Thank you for sharing your gifted pen.
Have a splendid Sunday.

All the Best my Dear Poetess.

Laura🌻

September 27th, 2020 03:13

Compromise
Trenz Pruca said:

I did enjoy, thanks.

September 26th, 2020 15:29

Compromise
Dove said:

Positive affirmations that love never dies; and troubles of yesteryear are forgotten

September 26th, 2020 10:37

Compromise
Neville said:



Having considered these words already, and several times before breakfast ..
I have swiftly concluded that your authors note is really redundant .. and that you get a BIG YES from me ... most thoroughly enjoyed ..

September 26th, 2020 03:28

Sweetness.
Goldfinch60 said:

So many sweets and sweetness in these wonderful words Fay.

Andy

September 25th, 2020 00:30

Sweetness.
orchidee said:

I see a fine write Fay.

September 24th, 2020 05:50

Sweetness.
L. B. Mek said:

I read a wonderfully written description of a mesmeric depiction encapsulating: magnetic attraction, draped in its otherworldly hue,
\'Twilight blushed streaking,
dun-dusk striped in humbug tints,\'

September 24th, 2020 03:54

Changeling.
Neville said:


.. So beautiful it almost hurts to expel or exhale any of it.... so very precious ... for where indeed would we be without it .....

September 23rd, 2020 16:23

Changeling.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI FAY ~ GOOD MIDWEEK ! Thanks for an awsome Pic an* Poem. We would have used FLAMENCO in verse 4 - But The FLAMINGO is a Dance !
Being a *POET* I always see pictures in clouds - blown leaves - waves & flowing water ! Your lovely poem reminds us that all these images are dynamic & transient ! To some extenet its the same with most People who pass in & out of our Lives every day. I often fell in Love with a GIRL going the wrong way on an Escalator (think about it !). In both our JOBS ~ Angela & I brush shoulders with many People every week but few mke a big impression. However there are those on MPS (like yourself !) who do make an inpression and whom we meet - every day - in Cyberspace ~ but (probably) never in Realspace. Thanks for Caring & Sharing !

Blessings & Love & Joy & Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey 💛💛💛


September 23rd, 2020 09:22

Souls Know.
Neville said:


An absolutely great bit o poetry here Fay and even more than just that...

here you emphasise the Irresistible call of nature and the awesomeness and intensity of feeling that is stronger than any barriers and that will surely break any and all taboos that yield and lead to an Eventual enmeshing of two like minded spirits and Explode as a single body ... if ya know what I mean 😎 ... x

September 20th, 2020 01:05

Stolen
Michael Edwards said:

A super write - heart-felt.

September 19th, 2020 10:42

Stolen
orchidee said:

A poignant write Fay. He surely had ups and downs physically (bodily, and what he saw physically) and emotionally (soul and spirit).

September 19th, 2020 05:07

Bonus.
Dove said:

Beautiful! My gardening is way late, my tomato plants are sprouting, but alas no bees to pollinate! Perhaps it’s all the fires!

Anyhow, lovely words !

September 18th, 2020 20:36

Compatible.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

September 18th, 2020 04:37

Compatible.
L. B. Mek said:

\'Oh that happy hand-in-glove fit
of regenerative pleasure
which we dared to admit\'

\'Our union was something
greater than physical
and that better otherness
I shall always remember.\'

someday, I hope to greet poetry with words and rhyme schemes and depth, half - as delectable as your wonderous writes,
undeniably beautiful!

September 18th, 2020 04:05