Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Lush
L. B. Mek said:
\'Deep lush of bunched purple winds in trust
around mother-vine.\'
wonderful depiction, full of zeal for nature\'s majesty
August 22nd, 2020 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'Deep lush of bunched purple winds in trust
around mother-vine.\'
wonderful depiction, full of zeal for nature\'s majesty
August 22nd, 2020 03:39
Lush
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay, can you send me a case when it is ready. LOL
Andy
August 22nd, 2020 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay, can you send me a case when it is ready. LOL
Andy
August 22nd, 2020 02:52
Betweeness
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Love this FAY - Whether one is single or with Partner one has always to CARPE DIEM cos there are always opportunities to be grasped ! Between - Yesterday & Tomorrow - Solemn & Grey nowness - Waking & Sleeping & Heaven & Paradise ! You just have to be awake enough to grasp ! Thought provoking - thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Love - Joy - Peace
Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
Please check *BRIDGES* Thanks !
August 21st, 2020 05:54
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Love this FAY - Whether one is single or with Partner one has always to CARPE DIEM cos there are always opportunities to be grasped ! Between - Yesterday & Tomorrow - Solemn & Grey nowness - Waking & Sleeping & Heaven & Paradise ! You just have to be awake enough to grasp ! Thought provoking - thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Love - Joy - Peace
Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
Please check *BRIDGES* Thanks !
August 21st, 2020 05:54
Betweeness
Goldfinch60 said:
Even though have been together with my loved one for most of my life, I am coming to terms with the wonder of being alone, with the occasional lapses into my wonderful memories with my loved one.
Wonderful words once again Fay.
Andy
August 21st, 2020 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Even though have been together with my loved one for most of my life, I am coming to terms with the wonder of being alone, with the occasional lapses into my wonderful memories with my loved one.
Wonderful words once again Fay.
Andy
August 21st, 2020 03:14
Betweeness
Neville said:
this is quite simply but one of the reasons I fell in love with this most beautiful of art forms .....
August 21st, 2020 02:38
Neville said:
this is quite simply but one of the reasons I fell in love with this most beautiful of art forms .....
August 21st, 2020 02:38
Betweeness
dusk arising said:
That\'s me that is!
After reading goldfinches piece today and responding positively i feel that you have composed this super piece in sympathy to our positive outlook upon each new days adventure opportunity.
So well written and enjoyable.
There\'s a lot to be said for being single in later years if one is of a positive disposition. I have never experienced the lasting togetherness of a true soul mate and no longer care to contemplate a half way house. Indeed i wonder were I in such a relationship of convenience for the latter half of life would i have the freedom of mind to write poetry. I would feel somewhat unfufilled. Just an expression of thoughts upon the condition which sits, for me, between the lines of your words today.
One of the wonders of mps is that other\'s words can take you to self expression hitherto unspoken i find.
August 21st, 2020 02:32
dusk arising said:
That\'s me that is!
After reading goldfinches piece today and responding positively i feel that you have composed this super piece in sympathy to our positive outlook upon each new days adventure opportunity.
So well written and enjoyable.
There\'s a lot to be said for being single in later years if one is of a positive disposition. I have never experienced the lasting togetherness of a true soul mate and no longer care to contemplate a half way house. Indeed i wonder were I in such a relationship of convenience for the latter half of life would i have the freedom of mind to write poetry. I would feel somewhat unfufilled. Just an expression of thoughts upon the condition which sits, for me, between the lines of your words today.
One of the wonders of mps is that other\'s words can take you to self expression hitherto unspoken i find.
August 21st, 2020 02:32
Changed.
Michael Edwards said:
And may you live forever posting poetry like this.
August 20th, 2020 13:26
Michael Edwards said:
And may you live forever posting poetry like this.
August 20th, 2020 13:26
Changed.
dusk arising said:
Romance refreshes the parts other kinds of rowing just cannot touch and before you know it yesterdays blues have capsized and you\'re swimming with the current.
What a celebration!
August 20th, 2020 09:38
dusk arising said:
Romance refreshes the parts other kinds of rowing just cannot touch and before you know it yesterdays blues have capsized and you\'re swimming with the current.
What a celebration!
August 20th, 2020 09:38
Changed.
Neville said:
There aint nothin quite like it is there our Fay... nothin at all .. exceptin poetry .. maybe .....
a perfectly executed poetical consideration of the transient nature of sameness and constant change .....
Neville ... x
August 20th, 2020 07:32
Neville said:
There aint nothin quite like it is there our Fay... nothin at all .. exceptin poetry .. maybe .....
a perfectly executed poetical consideration of the transient nature of sameness and constant change .....
Neville ... x
August 20th, 2020 07:32
Best
L. B. Mek said:
Amen! an emotive tribute to that quickly burning - passion fuelled romance, we have all lost at least once,
though ultimately depicting a sad feature of a universally shared experience, this work is unmistakably warm and comforting: a signature brush stroke of the writer\'s unquestionable skill, I imagine
August 20th, 2020 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
Amen! an emotive tribute to that quickly burning - passion fuelled romance, we have all lost at least once,
though ultimately depicting a sad feature of a universally shared experience, this work is unmistakably warm and comforting: a signature brush stroke of the writer\'s unquestionable skill, I imagine
August 20th, 2020 05:09
Changed.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, just as being alive is wonderful.
Andy
August 20th, 2020 04:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, just as being alive is wonderful.
Andy
August 20th, 2020 04:15
Best
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful words, Fay. Is love a once in a lifetime event? Or can it re-occur? Those were the questions your poem raised in my mind, but whatever the answer, your words do it justice and with beauty attached. - Phil A.
August 19th, 2020 17:08
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful words, Fay. Is love a once in a lifetime event? Or can it re-occur? Those were the questions your poem raised in my mind, but whatever the answer, your words do it justice and with beauty attached. - Phil A.
August 19th, 2020 17:08
Best
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY ! We are exhorted to *Hold fast to that which is BEST* - Because - we neer now the Day or thhe Hour when it will be taken away fom us ~ AMEN !
Love - Joy - Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 19th, 2020 08:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY ! We are exhorted to *Hold fast to that which is BEST* - Because - we neer now the Day or thhe Hour when it will be taken away fom us ~ AMEN !
Love - Joy - Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 19th, 2020 08:31
Best
orchidee said:
Can I venture a reply?
It\'s best if you don\'t hear me sing. Better if you\'re 100 miles away when I do! lol.
August 19th, 2020 04:50
orchidee said:
Can I venture a reply?
It\'s best if you don\'t hear me sing. Better if you\'re 100 miles away when I do! lol.
August 19th, 2020 04:50
Best
Neville said:
As far as poetry goes, this is nothing short of superb ... there is an old saying I am trying to remember about best and better.. but for the life of me, I can not remember it .... If I ever do ... I shall send it to ya ...
Neville
August 19th, 2020 04:47
Neville said:
As far as poetry goes, this is nothing short of superb ... there is an old saying I am trying to remember about best and better.. but for the life of me, I can not remember it .... If I ever do ... I shall send it to ya ...
Neville
August 19th, 2020 04:47
Best
Goldfinch60 said:
What absolutely wonderful words Fay. Love it so it must go into favourites.
Andy
August 19th, 2020 04:12
Goldfinch60 said:
What absolutely wonderful words Fay. Love it so it must go into favourites.
Andy
August 19th, 2020 04:12
Rapture
Goldfinch60 said:
That love has certainly has had me in raptures and your words send me the same way Fay.
Andy
August 19th, 2020 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
That love has certainly has had me in raptures and your words send me the same way Fay.
Andy
August 19th, 2020 00:28
Rapture
dusk arising said:
Yes indeed, love is heavenly.
And I sat thinking about love after reading you here. Recapturing in my mind some of those feelings when love is brand new and nothing finer flows through one\'s soul.
Look what you did, thank you.
August 18th, 2020 12:28
dusk arising said:
Yes indeed, love is heavenly.
And I sat thinking about love after reading you here. Recapturing in my mind some of those feelings when love is brand new and nothing finer flows through one\'s soul.
Look what you did, thank you.
August 18th, 2020 12:28
Rapture
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY ! WOW - RAPTURE - A very emotive & spiritual word ! However since being married to BRIAN (in March) I have experienced (@ 32 !) for the first time - just what *Sensual Rapture* can be ! Just holding & kissing BRIAN sends me into RAPTURES ! You will understand - that because we are devout Christians (and Brian a Deacon !) we held back in our Physical Relationship - BUT - now all barriers are down we have entered the *Exploritory Realm of uninhibited sensual LOVE* and YES - *RAPTURE* is the appropriate WORD ! Plus all the colours of Loves Ecstasy !
HEAVEN accepts & its approves - AMEN !
Love & Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 18th, 2020 10:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon FAY ! WOW - RAPTURE - A very emotive & spiritual word ! However since being married to BRIAN (in March) I have experienced (@ 32 !) for the first time - just what *Sensual Rapture* can be ! Just holding & kissing BRIAN sends me into RAPTURES ! You will understand - that because we are devout Christians (and Brian a Deacon !) we held back in our Physical Relationship - BUT - now all barriers are down we have entered the *Exploritory Realm of uninhibited sensual LOVE* and YES - *RAPTURE* is the appropriate WORD ! Plus all the colours of Loves Ecstasy !
HEAVEN accepts & its approves - AMEN !
Love & Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 18th, 2020 10:34
Rapture
orchidee said:
I had a feeling I was gonna swoon... lol. Good write Fay.
August 18th, 2020 05:35
orchidee said:
I had a feeling I was gonna swoon... lol. Good write Fay.
August 18th, 2020 05:35
Rapture
Neville said:
I had a feeling I woz gonna love this just as soon as I saw you had posted ...
p.s. I was not disappointed
... Neville
August 18th, 2020 04:04
Neville said:
I had a feeling I woz gonna love this just as soon as I saw you had posted ...
p.s. I was not disappointed
... Neville
August 18th, 2020 04:04
Sleep\'s Acres.
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams ending into reality in such a wonderful way shown in your words Fay.
Andy
August 17th, 2020 23:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams ending into reality in such a wonderful way shown in your words Fay.
Andy
August 17th, 2020 23:59
Sleep\'s Acres.
dusk arising said:
Dreamyhead\'s delight before our eyes. Truly capturing the early waking to capture the dawn and slumber as \'rays snipe at quiesence\' - a lovely line in itself.
Waking as the natural world awakes before our sleepy eyes.
Beyond my capabilities at the moment for shielding ha not only made me fatter and lazier but also broken the spring in my body clock. Dawn has become, for me, unfamiliar.
August 17th, 2020 06:38
dusk arising said:
Dreamyhead\'s delight before our eyes. Truly capturing the early waking to capture the dawn and slumber as \'rays snipe at quiesence\' - a lovely line in itself.
Waking as the natural world awakes before our sleepy eyes.
Beyond my capabilities at the moment for shielding ha not only made me fatter and lazier but also broken the spring in my body clock. Dawn has become, for me, unfamiliar.
August 17th, 2020 06:38
Sleep\'s Acres.
L. B. Mek said:
that last line is such a quirky twist - it anchors your chosen writing style and form to cultivate that \'sleep drunk\' awareness effect, recreating the sluggishly blurry - dawning of reality, when the sleepiness finally clears,
highly creative, really well thought-out
August 17th, 2020 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
that last line is such a quirky twist - it anchors your chosen writing style and form to cultivate that \'sleep drunk\' awareness effect, recreating the sluggishly blurry - dawning of reality, when the sleepiness finally clears,
highly creative, really well thought-out
August 17th, 2020 04:01
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