Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Invasion.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Thanks for a delightful picture and discourse on COLOUR!
White light as you know is composed of SEVEN COLOURS (R O Y G B I V ). Because these colours have different wavelengths they travel @ different speeds. When White Light hits a PRISM or a drop of WATER it splits into the seven colours of the SPECTRUM (RAINBOW) - R O Y G B I V !
Thats the Scientific Explnanation - BUT - I prefer your DISCOURSE - cos its much much more Sensual & Poetic. Science is AWESOME but lacks EMOTION~ Except @ the point of DISCOVERY!
Love - Joy - Peace
Angela & Brian 🧡💙
August 26th, 2020 11:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Thanks for a delightful picture and discourse on COLOUR!
White light as you know is composed of SEVEN COLOURS (R O Y G B I V ). Because these colours have different wavelengths they travel @ different speeds. When White Light hits a PRISM or a drop of WATER it splits into the seven colours of the SPECTRUM (RAINBOW) - R O Y G B I V !
Thats the Scientific Explnanation - BUT - I prefer your DISCOURSE - cos its much much more Sensual & Poetic. Science is AWESOME but lacks EMOTION~ Except @ the point of DISCOVERY!
Love - Joy - Peace
Angela & Brian 🧡💙
August 26th, 2020 11:42
Invasion.
dusk arising said:
Taking on the challenge to poetically describe the most beautiful beginning of each day is no easy feat yet i was absorbed here re-reading several times for full effect.
August 26th, 2020 04:03
dusk arising said:
Taking on the challenge to poetically describe the most beautiful beginning of each day is no easy feat yet i was absorbed here re-reading several times for full effect.
August 26th, 2020 04:03
Invasion.
Neville said:
this aint heavy .. this is a light invasion .... amazingly described with the tools of her trade .. prism perfect in every hue described and displayed ...
August 26th, 2020 02:26
Neville said:
this aint heavy .. this is a light invasion .... amazingly described with the tools of her trade .. prism perfect in every hue described and displayed ...
August 26th, 2020 02:26
Invasion.
orchidee said:
I never knew so much happened with light - well, I know now! Good write Fay.
August 26th, 2020 01:58
orchidee said:
I never knew so much happened with light - well, I know now! Good write Fay.
August 26th, 2020 01:58
If.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANFELA HERE - Good Evening Fay almost time for BED! We didnt post today both too busy earning a crust! Special POST tomorrow by ME *MY SENSE OF TOUCH !* ENJOY. Loved your Poem (FAVE) it reminded me of one of my fave Seasonal Songs ~ but yours READS ~
If ever you should LOVE ME - Dont LOVE ME just in Summer
When we*re basking in the Summer SUN
If ever You should LOVE ME - Dont LOVE ME just in Autum
Moonlight in the Autumn - Loves Al-fresco FUN
If ever You should LOVE ME - Dont LOVE ME just in WINTER
Cold outside - but inside Passion Wild doth RUN
If ever you should LOVE ME - Dont love me just in SPRINGTIME
When the LUST of Blue ~ Green Spring has just BEGUN !
Summer - Autumn - Winter - Spring
With Your Love - Each Season My Heart Sings
Each Season My Love ~ Plays Your Heart Strings
Summer - Autumn - Winter - Spring
Thats how the MUSE moves ~ may post
sometime & Acknowledge source !
Blessings - Love - Joy - Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey 🧡💙🤎
August 25th, 2020 18:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANFELA HERE - Good Evening Fay almost time for BED! We didnt post today both too busy earning a crust! Special POST tomorrow by ME *MY SENSE OF TOUCH !* ENJOY. Loved your Poem (FAVE) it reminded me of one of my fave Seasonal Songs ~ but yours READS ~
If ever you should LOVE ME - Dont LOVE ME just in Summer
When we*re basking in the Summer SUN
If ever You should LOVE ME - Dont LOVE ME just in Autum
Moonlight in the Autumn - Loves Al-fresco FUN
If ever You should LOVE ME - Dont LOVE ME just in WINTER
Cold outside - but inside Passion Wild doth RUN
If ever you should LOVE ME - Dont love me just in SPRINGTIME
When the LUST of Blue ~ Green Spring has just BEGUN !
Summer - Autumn - Winter - Spring
With Your Love - Each Season My Heart Sings
Each Season My Love ~ Plays Your Heart Strings
Summer - Autumn - Winter - Spring
Thats how the MUSE moves ~ may post
sometime & Acknowledge source !
Blessings - Love - Joy - Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey 🧡💙🤎
August 25th, 2020 18:22
If.
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I simply love this one, not just the emotions it conveys, but the descriptions of the seasons. Those emotions sustained through eternal seasons, bring uplifting hope for everlasting love. Just terrific. High Praise - Phil A.
August 25th, 2020 09:42
MendedFences27 said:
Well, I simply love this one, not just the emotions it conveys, but the descriptions of the seasons. Those emotions sustained through eternal seasons, bring uplifting hope for everlasting love. Just terrific. High Praise - Phil A.
August 25th, 2020 09:42
If.
L. B. Mek said:
If, Rudyard Kipling wrote with the empathetic grace of a liberated lioness\'s genius: of female intuitiveness - it would sound a lot like this...
a read: riding upon the gentle river of beautiful imagery your words weave, from first - to that last stanza\'s tug of universal yearning,
of a love outlasting youth\'s fervent desires, to graduate into those lasting fields of majestic grey devotion,
breath-taking: in its deceptive simplicity
August 25th, 2020 03:56
L. B. Mek said:
If, Rudyard Kipling wrote with the empathetic grace of a liberated lioness\'s genius: of female intuitiveness - it would sound a lot like this...
a read: riding upon the gentle river of beautiful imagery your words weave, from first - to that last stanza\'s tug of universal yearning,
of a love outlasting youth\'s fervent desires, to graduate into those lasting fields of majestic grey devotion,
breath-taking: in its deceptive simplicity
August 25th, 2020 03:56
If.
Michael Edwards said:
Just simply flows with tenderness - great piece Fay. more than just a worthy read.
August 25th, 2020 03:33
Michael Edwards said:
Just simply flows with tenderness - great piece Fay. more than just a worthy read.
August 25th, 2020 03:33
If.
dusk arising said:
By \'eck chuck, there\'s a lorra luv-n-devotion in that there, there is.
\'appen as i\'ve read it twice now and i were reet the first time.
August 25th, 2020 03:19
dusk arising said:
By \'eck chuck, there\'s a lorra luv-n-devotion in that there, there is.
\'appen as i\'ve read it twice now and i were reet the first time.
August 25th, 2020 03:19
If.
Neville said:
These words are .. in the truest sense of forever truly beautiful and as far as this art we share is concerned, shall stand the test of time .... x
August 25th, 2020 03:19
Neville said:
These words are .. in the truest sense of forever truly beautiful and as far as this art we share is concerned, shall stand the test of time .... x
August 25th, 2020 03:19
Full Spate.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay. In my maturing years I look upon each day with wonder and always look forward to the next one.
Andy
August 25th, 2020 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write Fay. In my maturing years I look upon each day with wonder and always look forward to the next one.
Andy
August 25th, 2020 00:38
Full Spate.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Brian & I love Mountan Streams - But they are at their most exciting in *Full Spate* ! So it is with LIFE & LOVE - The fuller the spate the more intense the Experience !
Thanks for sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love Angela & Brian & Smokie 🧡💙🤎
August 24th, 2020 15:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Brian & I love Mountan Streams - But they are at their most exciting in *Full Spate* ! So it is with LIFE & LOVE - The fuller the spate the more intense the Experience !
Thanks for sharing
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love Angela & Brian & Smokie 🧡💙🤎
August 24th, 2020 15:03
Full Spate.
siranswerer said:
Fay, others say what I feel when you write, so I won\'t say anything else, except, I love it.
August 24th, 2020 14:08
siranswerer said:
Fay, others say what I feel when you write, so I won\'t say anything else, except, I love it.
August 24th, 2020 14:08
Full Spate.
MendedFences27 said:
It certainly is true,\" the nearer\" we \"come\" the more intense each day becomes. Just beautiful words Fay. beautiful. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2020 12:38
MendedFences27 said:
It certainly is true,\" the nearer\" we \"come\" the more intense each day becomes. Just beautiful words Fay. beautiful. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2020 12:38
Full Spate.
dusk arising said:
Oh Fay, what a beauty you have penned here. All in their later years will feel your words and know.
As a poet you know what that means, for in the heart of a poet is the desire to pass on our emotion to our reader, to give something. You truly have done that in depth here.
Fav\'s of course.
August 24th, 2020 07:18
dusk arising said:
Oh Fay, what a beauty you have penned here. All in their later years will feel your words and know.
As a poet you know what that means, for in the heart of a poet is the desire to pass on our emotion to our reader, to give something. You truly have done that in depth here.
Fav\'s of course.
August 24th, 2020 07:18
Watching.
L. B. Mek said:
instinctively moving,
reads like a diary of a young heart\'s: untainted certainty, full of hope and wonder at all the new, yet to be discovered
August 24th, 2020 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
instinctively moving,
reads like a diary of a young heart\'s: untainted certainty, full of hope and wonder at all the new, yet to be discovered
August 24th, 2020 05:08
Full Spate.
Neville said:
I could read these words over and over ... and no doubt I shall ..
poetry personified dear lady Fay ... x
August 24th, 2020 04:15
Neville said:
I could read these words over and over ... and no doubt I shall ..
poetry personified dear lady Fay ... x
August 24th, 2020 04:15
Full Spate.
L. B. Mek said:
the first deep breath I take after reading one of your nature poems, is some of the sweetest I shall ever taste:
\'more vivid each floral bloom,
sooner seems seasonal
change, hues extra beautiful,\'
August 24th, 2020 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
the first deep breath I take after reading one of your nature poems, is some of the sweetest I shall ever taste:
\'more vivid each floral bloom,
sooner seems seasonal
change, hues extra beautiful,\'
August 24th, 2020 04:10
Watching.
dusk arising said:
Awww pictures, pictures, pictures.... I\'m writing the play in my mind.
This has such presence.
So many questions, so many answers.... lovely composition leaving your reader wanting more.
August 23rd, 2020 13:23
dusk arising said:
Awww pictures, pictures, pictures.... I\'m writing the play in my mind.
This has such presence.
So many questions, so many answers.... lovely composition leaving your reader wanting more.
August 23rd, 2020 13:23
Watching.
Michael Edwards said:
Well I like a happy ending - there\'s enough doom and gloom at the present time. great stuff.
August 23rd, 2020 07:21
Michael Edwards said:
Well I like a happy ending - there\'s enough doom and gloom at the present time. great stuff.
August 23rd, 2020 07:21
Watching.
jarcher54 said:
You and your happy endings! Here you went and called to mind all those tragic ballads of widows and lovers alone on the strand waiting for the whaler/sailor/fisherman who never comes home. Then you spoiled it! (-:
August 23rd, 2020 06:48
jarcher54 said:
You and your happy endings! Here you went and called to mind all those tragic ballads of widows and lovers alone on the strand waiting for the whaler/sailor/fisherman who never comes home. Then you spoiled it! (-:
August 23rd, 2020 06:48
Watching.
Neville said:
what a picture .... such is beauty, such is love ... sent a shiver down me spine ..
August 23rd, 2020 03:37
Neville said:
what a picture .... such is beauty, such is love ... sent a shiver down me spine ..
August 23rd, 2020 03:37
Lush
Michael Edwards said:
Lush are the words of dearest Fay
posted here regularly every day.
August 23rd, 2020 03:24
Michael Edwards said:
Lush are the words of dearest Fay
posted here regularly every day.
August 23rd, 2020 03:24
Watching.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write once more Fay, I can see her waking out in the sea to meet him.
Andy
August 23rd, 2020 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write once more Fay, I can see her waking out in the sea to meet him.
Andy
August 23rd, 2020 02:54
Watching.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. She would have to rather wade in the river here, about 2 miles away. The sea is about 60 miles from us! Well, she could catch the No.7 bus there. lol.
August 23rd, 2020 02:01
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. She would have to rather wade in the river here, about 2 miles away. The sea is about 60 miles from us! Well, she could catch the No.7 bus there. lol.
August 23rd, 2020 02:01
Lush
dusk arising said:
Reading you today brings forth the lust in me for red wine. I haven\'t had a sip of red wine since i had a stomach op in 2018,... used to love a ful bodied red.
Chateau-neuf-du-Slimm or Cabernet Slimmvignon. With such care into the nurture of your vine of words today I\'m reassured that 2020 will again be a classy vintage. A corker!
August 22nd, 2020 06:03
dusk arising said:
Reading you today brings forth the lust in me for red wine. I haven\'t had a sip of red wine since i had a stomach op in 2018,... used to love a ful bodied red.
Chateau-neuf-du-Slimm or Cabernet Slimmvignon. With such care into the nurture of your vine of words today I\'m reassured that 2020 will again be a classy vintage. A corker!
August 22nd, 2020 06:03
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