Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Gifts
Michael Edwards said:
The inspiration for both poets and artists alike. Superbly captured .
September 1st, 2020 09:54
Michael Edwards said:
The inspiration for both poets and artists alike. Superbly captured .
September 1st, 2020 09:54
Gifts
L. B. Mek said:
is Venus the moon and the Knight her ever present Sun? or am I tangled up in your web of sumptuous Poetic ambition and lost in my mere mortal capacity of deciphering,
Poetry with half a step, in a magnificent dreamscape
September 1st, 2020 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
is Venus the moon and the Knight her ever present Sun? or am I tangled up in your web of sumptuous Poetic ambition and lost in my mere mortal capacity of deciphering,
Poetry with half a step, in a magnificent dreamscape
September 1st, 2020 04:01
Gifts
Neville said:
... pon my word.. your words doth make me come over all unnecessary ... such is the beauty of em ....
September 1st, 2020 02:44
Neville said:
... pon my word.. your words doth make me come over all unnecessary ... such is the beauty of em ....
September 1st, 2020 02:44
Gifts
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words once more Fay, dawns early light is so wonderful.
Andy
September 1st, 2020 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words once more Fay, dawns early light is so wonderful.
Andy
September 1st, 2020 02:34
Who Dares.
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful write and the picture is so majestic: nature in its unvarnished state
August 31st, 2020 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful write and the picture is so majestic: nature in its unvarnished state
August 31st, 2020 04:06
Lovescape
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay,
You have such an affinity writing in this particular ‘archaic style’. In my humble opinion, you do it best. I do enjoy reading it very much. Your talent in writing in this particular style is laced throughout your poem “Lovescape”. The pic you chose complements the poem beautifully.
Impressive!
Laura🌻
August 31st, 2020 03:34
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Poetess Fay,
You have such an affinity writing in this particular ‘archaic style’. In my humble opinion, you do it best. I do enjoy reading it very much. Your talent in writing in this particular style is laced throughout your poem “Lovescape”. The pic you chose complements the poem beautifully.
Impressive!
Laura🌻
August 31st, 2020 03:34
Lovescape
L. B. Mek said:
\'I seem much given to yield.
Seared to frazzle on need\'s rack
fear beaten with thine ardent flame\'
absolutely beautiful!
August 31st, 2020 03:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'I seem much given to yield.
Seared to frazzle on need\'s rack
fear beaten with thine ardent flame\'
absolutely beautiful!
August 31st, 2020 03:33
Lovescape
orchidee said:
Thou hast produced a fine work Fay.
I could use \'thee\' and \'thou\' I suppose.
I\'m torn sometimes between seeming old-fashioned by using them, but maybe having maybe more rhyming choice if I did use them.
August 31st, 2020 02:14
orchidee said:
Thou hast produced a fine work Fay.
I could use \'thee\' and \'thou\' I suppose.
I\'m torn sometimes between seeming old-fashioned by using them, but maybe having maybe more rhyming choice if I did use them.
August 31st, 2020 02:14
Lovescape
dusk arising said:
As leaves repent to leave upon turn of autumnal breeze so doth reticence vacate staid and salted haunt of concealed soul passion for thee thou subject of wordy finery herefound upon screen of ungodly device.
I shall tarry here a while in contemplation of such delight as been afforded in this reading.
Forsooth innit.
Love the old style.
August 31st, 2020 01:51
dusk arising said:
As leaves repent to leave upon turn of autumnal breeze so doth reticence vacate staid and salted haunt of concealed soul passion for thee thou subject of wordy finery herefound upon screen of ungodly device.
I shall tarry here a while in contemplation of such delight as been afforded in this reading.
Forsooth innit.
Love the old style.
August 31st, 2020 01:51
Who Dares.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words once more Fay, otters are wonderful creatures.
Andy
August 31st, 2020 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words once more Fay, otters are wonderful creatures.
Andy
August 31st, 2020 00:32
Who Dares.
Neville said:
super poetry Fay .. reminded me of \'Ring of bright water\' ...
August 30th, 2020 16:56
Neville said:
super poetry Fay .. reminded me of \'Ring of bright water\' ...
August 30th, 2020 16:56
Who Dares.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Sunday Evening FAY! Brian & I love the sleekness & bravery of the OTTER - our fave aqueous animal ! Love the photo - Awesome! Our new Mantra (Now we are ONE) *They who Dare - as ONE in Life & Love - Will always be VICTORIOUS - AMEN!
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 30th, 2020 13:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here - Good Sunday Evening FAY! Brian & I love the sleekness & bravery of the OTTER - our fave aqueous animal ! Love the photo - Awesome! Our new Mantra (Now we are ONE) *They who Dare - as ONE in Life & Love - Will always be VICTORIOUS - AMEN!
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 30th, 2020 13:07
Beach-Combing
Neville said:
How very bloomin apt my dear lady Fay.. I woz only wanderin along some of your very wild and rugged shores this very early mane ... and must have just missed the mermaids hairdresser because shorn n strewn locks were everywhere ..... x
August 30th, 2020 12:57
Neville said:
How very bloomin apt my dear lady Fay.. I woz only wanderin along some of your very wild and rugged shores this very early mane ... and must have just missed the mermaids hairdresser because shorn n strewn locks were everywhere ..... x
August 30th, 2020 12:57
Who Dares.
dusk arising said:
Ferocious rarity now, the otter is something to marvel over. Superb picture you chose here too.
Yes I think you bring to the fore the ferocity of these truly wild creatures today.
August 30th, 2020 09:38
dusk arising said:
Ferocious rarity now, the otter is something to marvel over. Superb picture you chose here too.
Yes I think you bring to the fore the ferocity of these truly wild creatures today.
August 30th, 2020 09:38
Beach-Combing
Goldfinch60 said:
As d a has said us inlanders can only dream of walking by the sea beach-combing but your words always take us there Fay so I am grateful to you.
Andy
August 29th, 2020 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
As d a has said us inlanders can only dream of walking by the sea beach-combing but your words always take us there Fay so I am grateful to you.
Andy
August 29th, 2020 00:08
Beach-Combing
dusk arising said:
Oh for gently windswept hair, sandy toes and feet and the distant roar of tide out. A rarity for us in-landers who are jealous of your shoreline familiarity and romance it\'s idea.
August 28th, 2020 05:55
dusk arising said:
Oh for gently windswept hair, sandy toes and feet and the distant roar of tide out. A rarity for us in-landers who are jealous of your shoreline familiarity and romance it\'s idea.
August 28th, 2020 05:55
Beach-Combing
L. B. Mek said:
nature needs no combing to deliver its poignant fruits, merely a gifted Poet\'s: keen eyes, to unravel the majesty from the debris,
makes one yearn for the Seaside that little bit more, a beautiful write
August 28th, 2020 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
nature needs no combing to deliver its poignant fruits, merely a gifted Poet\'s: keen eyes, to unravel the majesty from the debris,
makes one yearn for the Seaside that little bit more, a beautiful write
August 28th, 2020 04:13
New Appetite.
MendedFences27 said:
Life is a series of changes. One must keep going through it all. \"And the butterfly flapped her wings\" as a result of a tornado 3 days previous. One event leads to another. \"Regrets\" should never be felt, when making ones path through life.
Enough philosophy. Another lovely poem, Fay, and somewhere a butterfly is flapping her wings. - Phil A.
August 27th, 2020 12:35
MendedFences27 said:
Life is a series of changes. One must keep going through it all. \"And the butterfly flapped her wings\" as a result of a tornado 3 days previous. One event leads to another. \"Regrets\" should never be felt, when making ones path through life.
Enough philosophy. Another lovely poem, Fay, and somewhere a butterfly is flapping her wings. - Phil A.
August 27th, 2020 12:35
New Appetite.
orchidee said:
Yes, caan I have some of that too?! Will it be too much for me? lol.
August 27th, 2020 05:08
orchidee said:
Yes, caan I have some of that too?! Will it be too much for me? lol.
August 27th, 2020 05:08
New Appetite.
dusk arising said:
A story of regret, repair, revitalisation and readiness. Life\'s rich tapestry. What resilient things we are to over come such hurt as love can bring. Such a powerful driving force is this pairing desire within us all.
August 27th, 2020 04:44
dusk arising said:
A story of regret, repair, revitalisation and readiness. Life\'s rich tapestry. What resilient things we are to over come such hurt as love can bring. Such a powerful driving force is this pairing desire within us all.
August 27th, 2020 04:44
New Appetite.
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always move on in life when one chapter of our book finishes.
Andy
August 27th, 2020 04:16
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always move on in life when one chapter of our book finishes.
Andy
August 27th, 2020 04:16
Invasion.
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully written,
has me reminiscing a Sunny morning, forcing eyelids closed for a few more minutes as the Sunrays pelt eyelids with Iris shooting stars and a gentle smile tugs loose: at experiencing one of the simple wonders of life,
indeed, our chosen perspective is a key factor in those gradient shades of our life\'s horizons
August 27th, 2020 03:29
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully written,
has me reminiscing a Sunny morning, forcing eyelids closed for a few more minutes as the Sunrays pelt eyelids with Iris shooting stars and a gentle smile tugs loose: at experiencing one of the simple wonders of life,
indeed, our chosen perspective is a key factor in those gradient shades of our life\'s horizons
August 27th, 2020 03:29
New Appetite.
Neville said:
... Quite summat is this our Fay
Appetite whetted & imaginations well n truly stirred ..
He\'ll take a dubble helpin of what the lass infurred ...
Neville ... x
August 27th, 2020 02:53
Neville said:
... Quite summat is this our Fay
Appetite whetted & imaginations well n truly stirred ..
He\'ll take a dubble helpin of what the lass infurred ...
Neville ... x
August 27th, 2020 02:53
Invasion.
MendedFences27 said:
Light fascinates. Brings forth all the color our eyes can perceive. Your prismatic poem, in colorful language tells us of the spectrum we see in life.You pen great words to bring us rays of hope. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 26th, 2020 18:34
MendedFences27 said:
Light fascinates. Brings forth all the color our eyes can perceive. Your prismatic poem, in colorful language tells us of the spectrum we see in life.You pen great words to bring us rays of hope. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 26th, 2020 18:34
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