Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Between Worlds.
dusk arising said:
I have to admit to being sidetracked by the geometry of this presentations mimicry of your very own figure. Such a tiny waist. However, I digress.
- resumes minutes later having calmed down -
dreamers embroidering that which cannot be sewn..... wonder here at the many possibilities of this metaphor for each is a poem itself. and \'bejeweling poems with tokens adorning the ordinary\' is something you show to us regularly with your observations of the natural world.
All in all, this is an insight into Poetic Fay for every phrase is a characteristic of your wonderful poetry which we see here on mps daily.
September 11th, 2020 00:54
dusk arising said:
I have to admit to being sidetracked by the geometry of this presentations mimicry of your very own figure. Such a tiny waist. However, I digress.
- resumes minutes later having calmed down -
dreamers embroidering that which cannot be sewn..... wonder here at the many possibilities of this metaphor for each is a poem itself. and \'bejeweling poems with tokens adorning the ordinary\' is something you show to us regularly with your observations of the natural world.
All in all, this is an insight into Poetic Fay for every phrase is a characteristic of your wonderful poetry which we see here on mps daily.
September 11th, 2020 00:54
Between Worlds.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good Evening FAY - Thanks for a POEM with such a DIABLOIC shape ! *Everything is Beautiful in its own Way !* Sunrise - Sunset & the whole Natural World ! If One is a True Poet then the sights & sounds of Nature trigger Ones Muse - to fashion Poetic Jewels. Such gems ameliorate the ordinary beyond the imagination of shallower Bards.
Your final TRIPLET is your final word and the lyric
for which we lesser would-be Poets all strive !
Blessings & Love & Joy & Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
September 10th, 2020 17:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good Evening FAY - Thanks for a POEM with such a DIABLOIC shape ! *Everything is Beautiful in its own Way !* Sunrise - Sunset & the whole Natural World ! If One is a True Poet then the sights & sounds of Nature trigger Ones Muse - to fashion Poetic Jewels. Such gems ameliorate the ordinary beyond the imagination of shallower Bards.
Your final TRIPLET is your final word and the lyric
for which we lesser would-be Poets all strive !
Blessings & Love & Joy & Peace
Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
September 10th, 2020 17:02
Between Worlds.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, and those words are always within us.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 15:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, and those words are always within us.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 15:16
Between Worlds.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow your phrasing is creatively awesome and top notch!! I was admiring \' bejewelling poems, signatured ego, and scribes adding zest to twilight\', Woww so imaginative and poetically exquisite. The shape is fabulous as well. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 10th, 2020 14:55
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow your phrasing is creatively awesome and top notch!! I was admiring \' bejewelling poems, signatured ego, and scribes adding zest to twilight\', Woww so imaginative and poetically exquisite. The shape is fabulous as well. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 10th, 2020 14:55
Between Worlds.
Dove said:
Awe just Adore The beautiful lines, and the format is quite lovely too!
A wondrous tapestry of a writer’s skills!
September 10th, 2020 07:23
Dove said:
Awe just Adore The beautiful lines, and the format is quite lovely too!
A wondrous tapestry of a writer’s skills!
September 10th, 2020 07:23
Waking.
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, like how you hid a separate rhythmic layer of the poem within your lines, hard to pinpoint initially without concentrating since you purposely didn\'t use that much punctuation,
brilliantly creative and it has such a healing/soothing element to it
September 10th, 2020 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, like how you hid a separate rhythmic layer of the poem within your lines, hard to pinpoint initially without concentrating since you purposely didn\'t use that much punctuation,
brilliantly creative and it has such a healing/soothing element to it
September 10th, 2020 03:07
Waking.
Michael Edwards said:
I feel sleepy just reading your dreamy poetic prose - don\'t wake me if I should fall asleep before finishing this com ...........zzzzz
September 9th, 2020 12:58
Michael Edwards said:
I feel sleepy just reading your dreamy poetic prose - don\'t wake me if I should fall asleep before finishing this com ...........zzzzz
September 9th, 2020 12:58
Waking.
dusk arising said:
Well you \'bright-eyed doer\' you\'ve been and gone and done it again aintcha?
I\'m jealous of your dawn appreciations. I envy your ability to witness the damn thing cos i languish beneath my duvet far too long these days and furthermore the houses opposite somewhat restrict my view of any horizon.
But one day Fay. I shall rise afore the dawn and upon my ready steed achieve the heights of those Malvern hills to witness days arrival in all its splendour (knowing my luck it will be foggy) and pleasure your screen with words to paint the vision i behold as beauty beckons the daylife-creatures into action.
Wonderful poetry as only you can ascribe Fay.
September 9th, 2020 11:48
dusk arising said:
Well you \'bright-eyed doer\' you\'ve been and gone and done it again aintcha?
I\'m jealous of your dawn appreciations. I envy your ability to witness the damn thing cos i languish beneath my duvet far too long these days and furthermore the houses opposite somewhat restrict my view of any horizon.
But one day Fay. I shall rise afore the dawn and upon my ready steed achieve the heights of those Malvern hills to witness days arrival in all its splendour (knowing my luck it will be foggy) and pleasure your screen with words to paint the vision i behold as beauty beckons the daylife-creatures into action.
Wonderful poetry as only you can ascribe Fay.
September 9th, 2020 11:48
Waking.
Goldfinch60 said:
OK Fay I am awakened have been up and about for almost four hours so I actually saw the daybreak in real time, not dream time.
Wonderful words as ever though.
Andy
September 9th, 2020 03:16
Goldfinch60 said:
OK Fay I am awakened have been up and about for almost four hours so I actually saw the daybreak in real time, not dream time.
Wonderful words as ever though.
Andy
September 9th, 2020 03:16
Waking.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
A gloomy thought maybe, yet going into Autumn: Soon, at the Autumnal Equinox, there will be 12 hours daylight and 12 hours dark. Then it\'s less daylight each day until the Shortest Day in December.
I recall it when I go up while still dark, and fell over the cat (or dog). Who put the lights out outdoors?!
September 9th, 2020 02:47
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
A gloomy thought maybe, yet going into Autumn: Soon, at the Autumnal Equinox, there will be 12 hours daylight and 12 hours dark. Then it\'s less daylight each day until the Shortest Day in December.
I recall it when I go up while still dark, and fell over the cat (or dog). Who put the lights out outdoors?!
September 9th, 2020 02:47
Disguised.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words once more Fay, may that rose always bloom for you.
You have pushed me into another quest now. I didn\'t know who the artist was it certainly looked like a pre-Raphaelite painting, having looked up the picture I found that the artist was Emily Sandys who was in the pre-Raphaelite dominion, it is my favourite type of art but I had never heard of her, I didn\'t even realise that there were any females in that group. Ah well more time to be spent on studying her work. Thank you.
Andy
September 8th, 2020 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words once more Fay, may that rose always bloom for you.
You have pushed me into another quest now. I didn\'t know who the artist was it certainly looked like a pre-Raphaelite painting, having looked up the picture I found that the artist was Emily Sandys who was in the pre-Raphaelite dominion, it is my favourite type of art but I had never heard of her, I didn\'t even realise that there were any females in that group. Ah well more time to be spent on studying her work. Thank you.
Andy
September 8th, 2020 00:19
Disguised.
dusk arising said:
Yes such lovely creation upon the plant and here upon my screen.
Then presented as a heartfelt gesture of positive intention from afar, reassures and reaffirms romance.
The sending of a single rose. Probably the most romantic gesture we know.
September 7th, 2020 17:28
dusk arising said:
Yes such lovely creation upon the plant and here upon my screen.
Then presented as a heartfelt gesture of positive intention from afar, reassures and reaffirms romance.
The sending of a single rose. Probably the most romantic gesture we know.
September 7th, 2020 17:28
Disguised.
Michael Edwards said:
One of the most stately of flowers - the regal rose. Great write Fay.
September 7th, 2020 05:33
Michael Edwards said:
One of the most stately of flowers - the regal rose. Great write Fay.
September 7th, 2020 05:33
Disguised.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A rose by any other name
Wonderful write today Fay
September 7th, 2020 04:25
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A rose by any other name
Wonderful write today Fay
September 7th, 2020 04:25
Chimerical
L. B. Mek said:
encapsulates the mysticism qualities of wind chimes wonderfully,
great write
September 7th, 2020 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
encapsulates the mysticism qualities of wind chimes wonderfully,
great write
September 7th, 2020 04:04
Disguised.
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully empowering metaphor of that time when all beautiful roses begin to bloom and enrich, their corner of existence
September 7th, 2020 03:12
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully empowering metaphor of that time when all beautiful roses begin to bloom and enrich, their corner of existence
September 7th, 2020 03:12
Chimerical
Goldfinch60 said:
The sound of those chimes always remind me of sitting out in the garden on a fine summers evening with my beloved Joyce. Thank you for the memory Fay.
Andy
September 7th, 2020 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The sound of those chimes always remind me of sitting out in the garden on a fine summers evening with my beloved Joyce. Thank you for the memory Fay.
Andy
September 7th, 2020 00:45
Chimerical
Ifeanyichukwu said:
Your poem is enjoyable, free flowing and clear language. It resonates a universal theme everyone can relate with. Very refreshing for a beautiful Sunday!
September 6th, 2020 08:42
Ifeanyichukwu said:
Your poem is enjoyable, free flowing and clear language. It resonates a universal theme everyone can relate with. Very refreshing for a beautiful Sunday!
September 6th, 2020 08:42
Chimerical
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
CHIMERA - A Mythical Creature of Several Creatures (Notes) an apt appelation for A WIND CHIME !
Good Morning FAY on a Sunny Sunday. How is Cornwall - showing & sharing its Autumness ?
Love the POEM - we too have *A Windchimes* in our Garden - very soporiphic al fresco in the Evening with a *Glass of Rioja* while my House Husband is preparing the Dinner!
Love all the *bons mots* in you elegant *Tone Poem* Sonorus - tremolous quiver - toning jingle - whisper - hovering rustle (of leaves in harmony !) - playful air-currents - tuned tingle - mystical draw - transfixing pleasure - rhythm resonates! As I read your Lyrical Poem I could sure hear those CHIMERI !CAL WIND CHIMES ~ AMEN !
BLESSINGS & Joy & Peace in all things
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛💛💛
September 6th, 2020 04:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
CHIMERA - A Mythical Creature of Several Creatures (Notes) an apt appelation for A WIND CHIME !
Good Morning FAY on a Sunny Sunday. How is Cornwall - showing & sharing its Autumness ?
Love the POEM - we too have *A Windchimes* in our Garden - very soporiphic al fresco in the Evening with a *Glass of Rioja* while my House Husband is preparing the Dinner!
Love all the *bons mots* in you elegant *Tone Poem* Sonorus - tremolous quiver - toning jingle - whisper - hovering rustle (of leaves in harmony !) - playful air-currents - tuned tingle - mystical draw - transfixing pleasure - rhythm resonates! As I read your Lyrical Poem I could sure hear those CHIMERI !CAL WIND CHIMES ~ AMEN !
BLESSINGS & Joy & Peace in all things
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛💛💛
September 6th, 2020 04:07
Chimerical
dusk arising said:
Ha! Honorable tinklings upon breeze announce back door left open. Maybe perhaps robber enters and clever Missy has subtlety alarm system installed. Inscrutable!
September 6th, 2020 03:56
dusk arising said:
Ha! Honorable tinklings upon breeze announce back door left open. Maybe perhaps robber enters and clever Missy has subtlety alarm system installed. Inscrutable!
September 6th, 2020 03:56
Chimerical
Neville said:
... there is something rather ethereal about the sound of distant or hidden wind chimes, methinks ...
... meknows you have captured the essence of it here .....
September 6th, 2020 03:44
Neville said:
... there is something rather ethereal about the sound of distant or hidden wind chimes, methinks ...
... meknows you have captured the essence of it here .....
September 6th, 2020 03:44
Revival
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Costa really have thought of everything for toppings these days haven\'t they?
September 6th, 2020 03:17
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Costa really have thought of everything for toppings these days haven\'t they?
September 6th, 2020 03:17
Revival
Goldfinch60 said:
They daren\'t go into my coffee, it would would do them no good, as the scotch in it would make them drunk! LOL.
Andy
September 6th, 2020 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
They daren\'t go into my coffee, it would would do them no good, as the scotch in it would make them drunk! LOL.
Andy
September 6th, 2020 01:07
Revival
Crowns4Christ said:
i think we can all relate to this in some way.thank you fay,for reminding me to look before i drink.lots of love melissa aka frogspoetry
September 5th, 2020 15:53
Crowns4Christ said:
i think we can all relate to this in some way.thank you fay,for reminding me to look before i drink.lots of love melissa aka frogspoetry
September 5th, 2020 15:53
Revival
Michael Edwards said:
And then drink the coffee. And here\'s me chasing flies around our conservatory with a whackem stick.
September 5th, 2020 14:30
Michael Edwards said:
And then drink the coffee. And here\'s me chasing flies around our conservatory with a whackem stick.
September 5th, 2020 14:30
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