Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Contrivance.
sylviasearcher said:
I really enjoyed this Faye. Thanks for sharing 😊
August 10th, 2020 06:37
sylviasearcher said:
I really enjoyed this Faye. Thanks for sharing 😊
August 10th, 2020 06:37
Contrivance.
dusk arising said:
Oh my, it\'s as if you had sourced the truth of why mother-in-law hated cameras. (But she would have loved photoshop).
I can\'t help but draw a comparison within my anti sectarian opinions of similarly exhibited behaviour.
A devilish poke at the falseness of paid for reality from you today. I\'m sure somewhere i have seen a portrait of samuel pepys complete with pox complexion, warts and all but one wonders if this was indeed \'prettied up\' for reward.
August 10th, 2020 05:12
dusk arising said:
Oh my, it\'s as if you had sourced the truth of why mother-in-law hated cameras. (But she would have loved photoshop).
I can\'t help but draw a comparison within my anti sectarian opinions of similarly exhibited behaviour.
A devilish poke at the falseness of paid for reality from you today. I\'m sure somewhere i have seen a portrait of samuel pepys complete with pox complexion, warts and all but one wonders if this was indeed \'prettied up\' for reward.
August 10th, 2020 05:12
Contrivance.
L. B. Mek said:
you have such a wide range in styles and tone,
another insightful and engaging write
August 10th, 2020 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
you have such a wide range in styles and tone,
another insightful and engaging write
August 10th, 2020 05:09
Contrivance.
Neville said:
Perfectly penned & complete a little masterpiece of poetic ink well applied and truer than truth I might add.... there aint nothing rough sketched about this un......... N x
August 10th, 2020 04:29
Neville said:
Perfectly penned & complete a little masterpiece of poetic ink well applied and truer than truth I might add.... there aint nothing rough sketched about this un......... N x
August 10th, 2020 04:29
Contrivance.
orchidee said:
Yes, and sometimes the Patron appeared was painted small in a corner of the picture, and maybe even his/her little dog appeared too!
August 10th, 2020 04:03
orchidee said:
Yes, and sometimes the Patron appeared was painted small in a corner of the picture, and maybe even his/her little dog appeared too!
August 10th, 2020 04:03
I Spied.
MendedFences27 said:
A very delightful scribble, Fay. Some great imagery. Lines of poetic beauty. \" I picked time from the tree of forever\" . Just wonderful. - Phil A
August 9th, 2020 18:59
MendedFences27 said:
A very delightful scribble, Fay. Some great imagery. Lines of poetic beauty. \" I picked time from the tree of forever\" . Just wonderful. - Phil A
August 9th, 2020 18:59
I Spied.
Neville said:
how absolutely bloomin lovely is that eh\'...... bloomin muchly I say and then some .....
........... Neville
August 9th, 2020 02:50
Neville said:
how absolutely bloomin lovely is that eh\'...... bloomin muchly I say and then some .....
........... Neville
August 9th, 2020 02:50
Catzzzzzzz.
Neville said:
I\'m very much a dog lover.. I kinda like cats too, the big ones mind.. not so much the so called domesticated type... wouldn\'t hurt one tho ... and anyways... back to business... this is by far the best pussy poem I have read in ages and no kiddin :)
August 9th, 2020 02:48
Neville said:
I\'m very much a dog lover.. I kinda like cats too, the big ones mind.. not so much the so called domesticated type... wouldn\'t hurt one tho ... and anyways... back to business... this is by far the best pussy poem I have read in ages and no kiddin :)
August 9th, 2020 02:48
Carpéing Diem.
Goldfinch60 said:
Another wonderful write Fay. May each day in your life be filled with paradise.
Andy
August 9th, 2020 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Another wonderful write Fay. May each day in your life be filled with paradise.
Andy
August 9th, 2020 00:44
Carpéing Diem.
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful poem Fay. It makes one want to walk the shoreline once again. But, alas, I made it only to the local river. A beautiful day it was, though. Thanks for reminding me of the pleasures of such a journey. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2020 11:49
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful poem Fay. It makes one want to walk the shoreline once again. But, alas, I made it only to the local river. A beautiful day it was, though. Thanks for reminding me of the pleasures of such a journey. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2020 11:49
Carpéing Diem.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I was gonna seize the day too, but by the time I found out what Carpe Diem meant, it was drawing towards night-fall! Well, I kept looking through French dictionaires, and got nowhere, you see. Such is life! lol.
August 8th, 2020 10:39
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I was gonna seize the day too, but by the time I found out what Carpe Diem meant, it was drawing towards night-fall! Well, I kept looking through French dictionaires, and got nowhere, you see. Such is life! lol.
August 8th, 2020 10:39
Carpéing Diem.
Neville said:
Oh\' what a real delight you had in store Fay ... and then, you were kind enough to share it with us here, in all this glorious poetry ....
Neville
August 8th, 2020 08:11
Neville said:
Oh\' what a real delight you had in store Fay ... and then, you were kind enough to share it with us here, in all this glorious poetry ....
Neville
August 8th, 2020 08:11
Better Beware
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay letting the imagination wonder into another place.
Andy
August 8th, 2020 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay letting the imagination wonder into another place.
Andy
August 8th, 2020 00:21
Better Beware
Neville said:
tantalizingly tasty treats she doth bestow indeed and mighty... dive in she sayeth..
so they did
the rest is so damned fine but naughty ..... a fun little gem if ever there be.....
Neville
August 7th, 2020 04:58
Neville said:
tantalizingly tasty treats she doth bestow indeed and mighty... dive in she sayeth..
so they did
the rest is so damned fine but naughty ..... a fun little gem if ever there be.....
Neville
August 7th, 2020 04:58
Nectar.
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful throwback, sad that even smaller farms nowadays utilise machinery, with menacingly clanging mechanisms that seemingly suck the life out of what ancestral heritage remains - of our once tightly grasped union with nature
meaningful subject, engaging writing as always
August 7th, 2020 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful throwback, sad that even smaller farms nowadays utilise machinery, with menacingly clanging mechanisms that seemingly suck the life out of what ancestral heritage remains - of our once tightly grasped union with nature
meaningful subject, engaging writing as always
August 7th, 2020 03:25
Nectar.
Neville said:
tis easy when ya get the hang of it.. but ya got to get the hang of it... and I swear they are so grateful at the end of the day....
it is such a shame that not everyone today even knows where our daily pint originates ....
August 6th, 2020 08:39
Neville said:
tis easy when ya get the hang of it.. but ya got to get the hang of it... and I swear they are so grateful at the end of the day....
it is such a shame that not everyone today even knows where our daily pint originates ....
August 6th, 2020 08:39
Nectar.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, seeing cows milked properly is so good to see in these days.
Andy
August 6th, 2020 04:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, seeing cows milked properly is so good to see in these days.
Andy
August 6th, 2020 04:21
Love-Light.
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful flow, with a strong message
if this was a song, I imagine someone like Cyndi Lauper doing it justice
August 5th, 2020 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful flow, with a strong message
if this was a song, I imagine someone like Cyndi Lauper doing it justice
August 5th, 2020 04:26
Love-Light.
MendedFences27 said:
\"Love light\" conquers all, \"ce-la-vie,\" \"no one\'s to blame,\" \"ready to face any truth,\" seems a wonderful way to live.
I believe that Love is the strongest power in all of humanity\'s existence.
Your poem is a wonderful description of a potential way of life. If only all of us could sustain such an endeavor, this planet would be a much happier place. You raise many thoughts and ideas that warrant deep consideration. Can one endure all of life\'s tragedies and still laugh and smile and be happy. Thanks for this thoughtful and provoking piece. - Phil A.
August 4th, 2020 15:22
MendedFences27 said:
\"Love light\" conquers all, \"ce-la-vie,\" \"no one\'s to blame,\" \"ready to face any truth,\" seems a wonderful way to live.
I believe that Love is the strongest power in all of humanity\'s existence.
Your poem is a wonderful description of a potential way of life. If only all of us could sustain such an endeavor, this planet would be a much happier place. You raise many thoughts and ideas that warrant deep consideration. Can one endure all of life\'s tragedies and still laugh and smile and be happy. Thanks for this thoughtful and provoking piece. - Phil A.
August 4th, 2020 15:22
Love-Light.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks Fay - Angela here - its nice to have you back with Uplifting Odes two days in a row ! Yesterday you spoke of Changes and how the Pride of King Sun has to ineveiably give way to Queen Moon as Dusk gies way to darkness and the Suns unbearable Blaze is eclipsed by His reflection from Queen Moon ! As a FEMALE (but not a Feminist) I can relate to that ! Todays poem reminds us about the Power & Significance of our Own Individuality especially as Ladies ! I admire Brian for who & what He is and I respect & honour Him as the only Husband I have ever had or will (DV) ever want to have. BUT in our Marriage we are EQUAL but with different skills & gifts we bring to our Home ! I accept that when we start a Family - it is I as the Mother who will have to put my Career on Hold to nurture our Baby while Brian will continue to work to sustain all three of US - Esta la Vida ! Thats the Spanish Way as well as the English Way. Fortunately PHYSIO does not change radically every five years ! MAMA warns Me *TWO Bambinos takes FIVE Years*
Your Poem emphasises the importance of SELF ~ Awareness - Determination - Peace - Compassion & Freedom of Spirit ~ BRIAN is beginning to learn Im big on all those things ~ they are MY MANTRA and in the past - they have enabled me to *overcome & survive* doubt - despair & disillusion. However with Brian as my alter-ego we are both twice as STRONG ! Aint Marriage WONDERFUL ! We haven*t posted today but have a great Acrostic Ballad for tomorrow *LOVE OF THE HORSE* please visit ! We also have a Fusion which could interest you ! Its about Holidaying @ Home. You cant choose CORNWALL - but Devon has its charm & we are sure you will have a DEVON POEM to add. I asked DOVE to choose a State other than California ! We got a one word answer *HAWAII* ! Having visited we didnt blame her ~ AWESOME ! Thanks for all your very stimulating Poems ! Love your VISUAL - Thats ME al-fresco ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 4th, 2020 14:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks Fay - Angela here - its nice to have you back with Uplifting Odes two days in a row ! Yesterday you spoke of Changes and how the Pride of King Sun has to ineveiably give way to Queen Moon as Dusk gies way to darkness and the Suns unbearable Blaze is eclipsed by His reflection from Queen Moon ! As a FEMALE (but not a Feminist) I can relate to that ! Todays poem reminds us about the Power & Significance of our Own Individuality especially as Ladies ! I admire Brian for who & what He is and I respect & honour Him as the only Husband I have ever had or will (DV) ever want to have. BUT in our Marriage we are EQUAL but with different skills & gifts we bring to our Home ! I accept that when we start a Family - it is I as the Mother who will have to put my Career on Hold to nurture our Baby while Brian will continue to work to sustain all three of US - Esta la Vida ! Thats the Spanish Way as well as the English Way. Fortunately PHYSIO does not change radically every five years ! MAMA warns Me *TWO Bambinos takes FIVE Years*
Your Poem emphasises the importance of SELF ~ Awareness - Determination - Peace - Compassion & Freedom of Spirit ~ BRIAN is beginning to learn Im big on all those things ~ they are MY MANTRA and in the past - they have enabled me to *overcome & survive* doubt - despair & disillusion. However with Brian as my alter-ego we are both twice as STRONG ! Aint Marriage WONDERFUL ! We haven*t posted today but have a great Acrostic Ballad for tomorrow *LOVE OF THE HORSE* please visit ! We also have a Fusion which could interest you ! Its about Holidaying @ Home. You cant choose CORNWALL - but Devon has its charm & we are sure you will have a DEVON POEM to add. I asked DOVE to choose a State other than California ! We got a one word answer *HAWAII* ! Having visited we didnt blame her ~ AWESOME ! Thanks for all your very stimulating Poems ! Love your VISUAL - Thats ME al-fresco ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
August 4th, 2020 14:11
Love-Light.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Nope, I\'m not interested in dram either - not a drama queen! lo.
August 4th, 2020 06:02
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Nope, I\'m not interested in dram either - not a drama queen! lo.
August 4th, 2020 06:02
Changes
L. B. Mek said:
A war cry: for mother nature,
for Female superiority (at the very least equality),
for that graceful Moon - with her guiding spotlight, for all lost to their dark corners of 3am introspections
and for Poetry, at its majestic - pulse igniting best:
\'faded velvet adorning a battle-vest\'
thank you for reposting, so glad I was able to discover this
a wonderful write, radiating with the full beam: of a perfect Sunset\'s brilliance!
August 3rd, 2020 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
A war cry: for mother nature,
for Female superiority (at the very least equality),
for that graceful Moon - with her guiding spotlight, for all lost to their dark corners of 3am introspections
and for Poetry, at its majestic - pulse igniting best:
\'faded velvet adorning a battle-vest\'
thank you for reposting, so glad I was able to discover this
a wonderful write, radiating with the full beam: of a perfect Sunset\'s brilliance!
August 3rd, 2020 05:48
Changes
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I had a message that they were doing something with the server one day, here on MPS.
But - I can\'t seem to select poems for my E-book. It won\'t update any changes. There will be some strange \'hymns\' in it!
August 2nd, 2020 05:20
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I had a message that they were doing something with the server one day, here on MPS.
But - I can\'t seem to select poems for my E-book. It won\'t update any changes. There will be some strange \'hymns\' in it!
August 2nd, 2020 05:20
Catzzzzzzz.
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry you are having problems Fay - interested to know if you recieve an email advising of this comment.
August 1st, 2020 09:33
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry you are having problems Fay - interested to know if you recieve an email advising of this comment.
August 1st, 2020 09:33
Catzzzzzzz.
Goldfinch60 said:
Although t is a wonderful write Fay the arrogance of cats is so powerful.
But as a bird watcher I always refer to the nastiness of cats as for every bird a raptor takes for food a cat will take four hundred to play with!! As Michael has said - they need controlling by their owners.
Andy
Andy
July 31st, 2020 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Although t is a wonderful write Fay the arrogance of cats is so powerful.
But as a bird watcher I always refer to the nastiness of cats as for every bird a raptor takes for food a cat will take four hundred to play with!! As Michael has said - they need controlling by their owners.
Andy
Andy
July 31st, 2020 00:53
Catzzzzzzz.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Love the septet of CATZ in your photo ~ what LUCK would seven bring ! SMOKEY has transedformed our lives in a couple of Months ~ my mantra has always been *Home is where the CAT is !* I love Poems which eulogise CATZ and this one is A*
V 1. They beguile us ~ Yet we LIKE thwm
V 2. They spook us ~ Yet we LOVE them
V 3. CATZ rule - OK ~ Yet we still PRIZE them
V 4. Every trick in the Book ~ Yet we still NEED them !
CATZ are as infectious as C-19 ~ let one
into your HOUSE and they take over ~ BUT
We Like - Love - Prize and always NEED THEM ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela - Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat
Please check *POTTY PROVERBS* Thanks !
July 30th, 2020 18:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening FAY ~ Love the septet of CATZ in your photo ~ what LUCK would seven bring ! SMOKEY has transedformed our lives in a couple of Months ~ my mantra has always been *Home is where the CAT is !* I love Poems which eulogise CATZ and this one is A*
V 1. They beguile us ~ Yet we LIKE thwm
V 2. They spook us ~ Yet we LOVE them
V 3. CATZ rule - OK ~ Yet we still PRIZE them
V 4. Every trick in the Book ~ Yet we still NEED them !
CATZ are as infectious as C-19 ~ let one
into your HOUSE and they take over ~ BUT
We Like - Love - Prize and always NEED THEM ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela - Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat
Please check *POTTY PROVERBS* Thanks !
July 30th, 2020 18:18
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