Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Making Richer.
Neville said:
early mane captured in all its glory..
far more than fifty shades of silver and grey here in your accompanying image... both superb.....
October 29th, 2019 08:51
Neville said:
early mane captured in all its glory..
far more than fifty shades of silver and grey here in your accompanying image... both superb.....
October 29th, 2019 08:51
In Transit.
kevin browne said:
Such beauty exists in every word that\'s read. Read with the influence of feeling raindrops keep falling on my head with the wisdom you, Fay of capturing magnificent gems and pearls. Just wonderful..!!
October 28th, 2019 20:06
kevin browne said:
Such beauty exists in every word that\'s read. Read with the influence of feeling raindrops keep falling on my head with the wisdom you, Fay of capturing magnificent gems and pearls. Just wonderful..!!
October 28th, 2019 20:06
In Transit.
Suresh said:
For long I have been wanting to write about a raindrop, but no matter what your art is unique.
October 28th, 2019 18:23
Suresh said:
For long I have been wanting to write about a raindrop, but no matter what your art is unique.
October 28th, 2019 18:23
In Transit.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your insight into water droplets ~ delightful ! Although water has a simple Molecular Structure H - O - H it is an amazing substance ! Intra-mlecular bonding makes water molecules stick together (other liquids dont do this) to form Water Droplets and surfce tension makes it stick to the wet glass and slide down slowly giving a wonderful & clourful display if light catches the prismatic water drops forming mini rainbows ! Water Droplets in transit is a rare glimse of Nature @ molecular level and an insight into the secret *World of Molecules*. It is these intramolecular foces that cause liquid water to form ICE which is 10% less dense than water causing ponds & lakes to FREEZE from the top downwards. This forms an insulating layer which prevents the whole pond freezing and preserves the Pond Life ~ AMEN ! BRIAN & I have both studied Science @ a higher level ! However the fact that we understand and can explain these things does not diminish the Mystery & Wonder of Nature ~ rather it enhances it ! We say to ourselves *What a Wonderful World !* Science is only thinking GODs thoughts after HIM ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 28th, 2019 17:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your insight into water droplets ~ delightful ! Although water has a simple Molecular Structure H - O - H it is an amazing substance ! Intra-mlecular bonding makes water molecules stick together (other liquids dont do this) to form Water Droplets and surfce tension makes it stick to the wet glass and slide down slowly giving a wonderful & clourful display if light catches the prismatic water drops forming mini rainbows ! Water Droplets in transit is a rare glimse of Nature @ molecular level and an insight into the secret *World of Molecules*. It is these intramolecular foces that cause liquid water to form ICE which is 10% less dense than water causing ponds & lakes to FREEZE from the top downwards. This forms an insulating layer which prevents the whole pond freezing and preserves the Pond Life ~ AMEN ! BRIAN & I have both studied Science @ a higher level ! However the fact that we understand and can explain these things does not diminish the Mystery & Wonder of Nature ~ rather it enhances it ! We say to ourselves *What a Wonderful World !* Science is only thinking GODs thoughts after HIM ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 28th, 2019 17:35
In Transit.
dusk arising said:
Aaaaaah, even from the tiniest of natures gems she creates yet another pearl!
October 28th, 2019 10:12
dusk arising said:
Aaaaaah, even from the tiniest of natures gems she creates yet another pearl!
October 28th, 2019 10:12
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Neville said:
this is an absolute delight, no matter which way one looks at it....
October 28th, 2019 03:53
Neville said:
this is an absolute delight, no matter which way one looks at it....
October 28th, 2019 03:53
Ours.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A & B Here (together again !) HI FAY (as the SONG says) LOVE is a many splendoured thing. Angela & I have a lot in common also much that separates us ! Even in the Spiritual Dimension She loves the pomp & ceremony of Catholic Cathedrals but she is happy to be married in the minimalism of OUR Evangelical Church where she is now a MEMBER. However we are having a Post Nuptual Blessing ~ by the BISHOP ~ in Seville Cathedral on our HONEYMOON ~ AMEN We are still in early glow of our Romance and Your final couplet scared us ! Even during this week ~ when we are getting back on track as ONE ~ we cannot imagine a life without each other ~ AMEN !
Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 25th, 2019 16:01
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
A & B Here (together again !) HI FAY (as the SONG says) LOVE is a many splendoured thing. Angela & I have a lot in common also much that separates us ! Even in the Spiritual Dimension She loves the pomp & ceremony of Catholic Cathedrals but she is happy to be married in the minimalism of OUR Evangelical Church where she is now a MEMBER. However we are having a Post Nuptual Blessing ~ by the BISHOP ~ in Seville Cathedral on our HONEYMOON ~ AMEN We are still in early glow of our Romance and Your final couplet scared us ! Even during this week ~ when we are getting back on track as ONE ~ we cannot imagine a life without each other ~ AMEN !
Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 25th, 2019 16:01
Ours.
Neville said:
this is a captivating, beautiful tho incredibly sad and wholly relatable bit of poetry that really does pack a hefty punch at the very end ...... N
October 25th, 2019 05:27
Neville said:
this is a captivating, beautiful tho incredibly sad and wholly relatable bit of poetry that really does pack a hefty punch at the very end ...... N
October 25th, 2019 05:27
Ours.
Poetic Dan said:
Felt ever word of this, I should pop in more as your spirit I do admire. \"honoured by harmony\'s law,\" fantastic way to start my morning off!
Always appreciated
October 25th, 2019 03:18
Poetic Dan said:
Felt ever word of this, I should pop in more as your spirit I do admire. \"honoured by harmony\'s law,\" fantastic way to start my morning off!
Always appreciated
October 25th, 2019 03:18
Tonic.
kevin browne said:
Ah, to drink deeply with a blackbird soprano sound like really good fun. Your poem captures this bird at its finest. Just like your writing...!!
October 24th, 2019 23:38
kevin browne said:
Ah, to drink deeply with a blackbird soprano sound like really good fun. Your poem captures this bird at its finest. Just like your writing...!!
October 24th, 2019 23:38
Tonic.
Neville said:
You have captured here well the very essence of the magnificent turdus merula ...... to hear it is to fall in love with it and true....
October 24th, 2019 12:11
Neville said:
You have captured here well the very essence of the magnificent turdus merula ...... to hear it is to fall in love with it and true....
October 24th, 2019 12:11
Tonic.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, the blackbird song is wondrous but the first bird heard in the morning (and the last at night) is the robin, still a wonderful sound though.
October 24th, 2019 08:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, the blackbird song is wondrous but the first bird heard in the morning (and the last at night) is the robin, still a wonderful sound though.
October 24th, 2019 08:05
Tonic.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful write capturing the beauty and song of the Blackbird!
Keep writing FineB
October 24th, 2019 04:18
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful write capturing the beauty and song of the Blackbird!
Keep writing FineB
October 24th, 2019 04:18
Contact.
FredPeyer said:
\'Thru heaven\'s hole I taste contact\'...And there you met the alien!
Love your poem, as always!
October 23rd, 2019 18:48
FredPeyer said:
\'Thru heaven\'s hole I taste contact\'...And there you met the alien!
Love your poem, as always!
October 23rd, 2019 18:48
Contact.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, that star will always be there for you.
October 23rd, 2019 08:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, that star will always be there for you.
October 23rd, 2019 08:18
Contact.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Once more, an excellent piece Fay. I promise I will read again this evening, outside, at dark. It promises to be a fine autumn evening here in Yorkshire so your fine words will enhance it for me.
Ex animo, Alan
October 23rd, 2019 05:44
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Once more, an excellent piece Fay. I promise I will read again this evening, outside, at dark. It promises to be a fine autumn evening here in Yorkshire so your fine words will enhance it for me.
Ex animo, Alan
October 23rd, 2019 05:44
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