Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Silence.
Neville said:
Ssh\' tIs as golden as they say it is and then some....
N x
October 19th, 2019 08:15
Neville said:
Ssh\' tIs as golden as they say it is and then some....
N x
October 19th, 2019 08:15
COMES AUTUMN.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful visualisation of my favourite time of the year.
October 18th, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful visualisation of my favourite time of the year.
October 18th, 2019 00:35
COMES AUTUMN.
Michael Edwards said:
Worthy of another read - correction - many reads. Super work Fay.
October 17th, 2019 11:24
Michael Edwards said:
Worthy of another read - correction - many reads. Super work Fay.
October 17th, 2019 11:24
COMES AUTUMN.
Neville said:
The golden season so well captured and timely too....
Thank you Fay.... N
October 17th, 2019 05:52
Neville said:
The golden season so well captured and timely too....
Thank you Fay.... N
October 17th, 2019 05:52
COMES AUTUMN.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Aww, why no-one offer me an invitation to sing?! heehee.
October 17th, 2019 05:43
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Aww, why no-one offer me an invitation to sing?! heehee.
October 17th, 2019 05:43
COMES AUTUMN.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
What can I say Fay? Outstanding? ~ yes! outstanding. May I list this delight as a Fay-ve please, please, please?
Ex animo, Alan
October 17th, 2019 05:23
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
What can I say Fay? Outstanding? ~ yes! outstanding. May I list this delight as a Fay-ve please, please, please?
Ex animo, Alan
October 17th, 2019 05:23
COMES AUTUMN.
dusk arising said:
What a beauty, and yes thank you for posting this gem again.
Goes into my collection of Favourite Fay poetry.
October 17th, 2019 04:26
dusk arising said:
What a beauty, and yes thank you for posting this gem again.
Goes into my collection of Favourite Fay poetry.
October 17th, 2019 04:26
COMES AUTUMN.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ We love the PICTURE love the POEM ! It highlights all the JOYS of Autumn ! It was Spring when we left NZ on Thursday (now in Hawaii !) but Angela loves AUTUMN ~ swishing through the carpet of leaves ~ in the Woods ~ behind my FLAT ! Please check our FUSION on SEASONS and add a POEM on Autumn !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
October 17th, 2019 04:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FAY ~ We love the PICTURE love the POEM ! It highlights all the JOYS of Autumn ! It was Spring when we left NZ on Thursday (now in Hawaii !) but Angela loves AUTUMN ~ swishing through the carpet of leaves ~ in the Woods ~ behind my FLAT ! Please check our FUSION on SEASONS and add a POEM on Autumn !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
October 17th, 2019 04:23
Captive.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Fay ! We have anjoyed a nice SPRING day 17C (63F) a bit Spring Showery today but plenty of Wind for sailing in Auckland Bay ~ This adds a frisson to being (physically) with My Beloved ANGELA again ~ AMEN. Its 11pm (Monday Evening) and we have just watched the *Queens Speach* ! Angela wishes BREXIT was all *Done & Dusted* so do I ! We both welcome the promise of more money for Education & the NHS !
Pictures do produce fascinating POEMS and this is no exception ! ANY CAGED BIRD ~ anywhere always fill Angela & I with horror ! The *caged* KIWIS we have seen in NZ are provided with enough SPACE rather like the 4OO Elephants we saw in the Addo Elephant park in Port Elizabeth South Africa. We also see domesticated CATS & DOGS as (normally) being housed humanely ! We dont agree with CAGED BIRDS in Homes ~ they always look SAD ! *Caged & Enslaved Fellow Humans* is a great scourge on HUMANITY. An apt PUNISHMENT is caging the perpertrators in PRISON ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 14th, 2019 06:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Fay ! We have anjoyed a nice SPRING day 17C (63F) a bit Spring Showery today but plenty of Wind for sailing in Auckland Bay ~ This adds a frisson to being (physically) with My Beloved ANGELA again ~ AMEN. Its 11pm (Monday Evening) and we have just watched the *Queens Speach* ! Angela wishes BREXIT was all *Done & Dusted* so do I ! We both welcome the promise of more money for Education & the NHS !
Pictures do produce fascinating POEMS and this is no exception ! ANY CAGED BIRD ~ anywhere always fill Angela & I with horror ! The *caged* KIWIS we have seen in NZ are provided with enough SPACE rather like the 4OO Elephants we saw in the Addo Elephant park in Port Elizabeth South Africa. We also see domesticated CATS & DOGS as (normally) being housed humanely ! We dont agree with CAGED BIRDS in Homes ~ they always look SAD ! *Caged & Enslaved Fellow Humans* is a great scourge on HUMANITY. An apt PUNISHMENT is caging the perpertrators in PRISON ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 14th, 2019 06:28
Captive.
dusk arising said:
How cruel and unthinking we are to cage the wild animals.
The epitome of which must be the magnificent ferocious tiger which once caged deteriorates into a pathetic facsimile of depression and behavioural nonesense.
Some people encage a loved one and live a life of moaning \'what\'s changed, why can\'t you be like you used to be?\'
Sad tale retold here with the finesse of Fay.
October 14th, 2019 04:28
dusk arising said:
How cruel and unthinking we are to cage the wild animals.
The epitome of which must be the magnificent ferocious tiger which once caged deteriorates into a pathetic facsimile of depression and behavioural nonesense.
Some people encage a loved one and live a life of moaning \'what\'s changed, why can\'t you be like you used to be?\'
Sad tale retold here with the finesse of Fay.
October 14th, 2019 04:28
Sightless.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Your words are clear as Cornish air
They cause you want to dream;
Your sentiment, like Cornish fare,
As rich as clotted cream.
Ex animo, Alan
October 12th, 2019 05:36
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Your words are clear as Cornish air
They cause you want to dream;
Your sentiment, like Cornish fare,
As rich as clotted cream.
Ex animo, Alan
October 12th, 2019 05:36
Sightless.
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see why that picture brought such a powerful write to you.
\"Sightless obedience\" says it all.
October 12th, 2019 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see why that picture brought such a powerful write to you.
\"Sightless obedience\" says it all.
October 12th, 2019 00:11
Sightless.
dusk arising said:
How disgusting is war really. Mankinds stupidity in murderous manufacture motivated by, well strange for me to use the word but, motivated by evil.
Back on 1st Aug last year i tried to confront the aftermath of war in a piece title \'peace\'. I think i caught it but you go further here.
what can we do.... helpless, impotent.... \'not my war?????\' really?
October 11th, 2019 07:23
dusk arising said:
How disgusting is war really. Mankinds stupidity in murderous manufacture motivated by, well strange for me to use the word but, motivated by evil.
Back on 1st Aug last year i tried to confront the aftermath of war in a piece title \'peace\'. I think i caught it but you go further here.
what can we do.... helpless, impotent.... \'not my war?????\' really?
October 11th, 2019 07:23
Sightless.
Clara said:
Quite haunting. Beautifully expressed Fay, as always.
October 11th, 2019 04:37
Clara said:
Quite haunting. Beautifully expressed Fay, as always.
October 11th, 2019 04:37
Sightless.
Thoughts In Time said:
Yes when we look but cannot see there is much misery ...the eyes of the heart need to be opened and then the mind shall surely follow...🌹
October 11th, 2019 04:18
Thoughts In Time said:
Yes when we look but cannot see there is much misery ...the eyes of the heart need to be opened and then the mind shall surely follow...🌹
October 11th, 2019 04:18
Awayness.
Thoughts In Time said:
The echos we wait upon ...yet our hearts know the answer..wonderful words of depth and emotion...🌹
October 11th, 2019 04:15
Thoughts In Time said:
The echos we wait upon ...yet our hearts know the answer..wonderful words of depth and emotion...🌹
October 11th, 2019 04:15
First Light.
FredPeyer said:
I am breathing, I am breathing, Fay!
Got dizzy with all that fresh early morning air!
October 10th, 2019 21:15
FredPeyer said:
I am breathing, I am breathing, Fay!
Got dizzy with all that fresh early morning air!
October 10th, 2019 21:15
First Light.
dusk arising said:
I have to say a big grin warmed my face when i saw this title.... \"ah yes, our lady of the dawn\" were my thoughts.
And an encouraging twist unfolded before me. I rarely greet the dawn in it\'s real nature i.e. outdoors but special occasions do come to mind and the dawning does something special to me when experienced in that way.
Lately I\'m living in an insipid drugs regieme which leaves me bed ridden till mid-day. Sad but really makes me want to recover and be \"there\" again to absorb natures rich gifts and probably appreciate them as never before.
Inspiring.
October 10th, 2019 11:30
dusk arising said:
I have to say a big grin warmed my face when i saw this title.... \"ah yes, our lady of the dawn\" were my thoughts.
And an encouraging twist unfolded before me. I rarely greet the dawn in it\'s real nature i.e. outdoors but special occasions do come to mind and the dawning does something special to me when experienced in that way.
Lately I\'m living in an insipid drugs regieme which leaves me bed ridden till mid-day. Sad but really makes me want to recover and be \"there\" again to absorb natures rich gifts and probably appreciate them as never before.
Inspiring.
October 10th, 2019 11:30
First Light.
Michael Edwards said:
I breathe it in every day - an inspiring write Fay.
October 10th, 2019 05:15
Michael Edwards said:
I breathe it in every day - an inspiring write Fay.
October 10th, 2019 05:15
First Light.
Clara said:
A wonderful refreshing poem to start the day. Your words create such a lovely soothing feeling in me as I read. Great work.
October 10th, 2019 04:17
Clara said:
A wonderful refreshing poem to start the day. Your words create such a lovely soothing feeling in me as I read. Great work.
October 10th, 2019 04:17
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