Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Time\'s Needle.
Neville said:
Outstanding is perhaps the most apt word I can currently find to apply meaningfully to your page dear Fay....
October 4th, 2019 04:25
Neville said:
Outstanding is perhaps the most apt word I can currently find to apply meaningfully to your page dear Fay....
October 4th, 2019 04:25
Time\'s Needle.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I never knew some much happened with time - well, I do now, reading this!
October 4th, 2019 02:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I never knew some much happened with time - well, I do now, reading this!
October 4th, 2019 02:34
Time\'s Needle.
dusk arising said:
Ah, Fay and the dawning, harmony.
Yes indeed the dawning for the ageing mind is a reminder that the more seed sewn today, the richer the harvest be for those years ahead.....
Alll i need now is the vigour to go out there a sewing!
Do the young sparrows crowd to tap your windows in the morning begging \"tell us more stories of days dawnings please Oh Fay of the Rising Day\"
October 4th, 2019 01:29
dusk arising said:
Ah, Fay and the dawning, harmony.
Yes indeed the dawning for the ageing mind is a reminder that the more seed sewn today, the richer the harvest be for those years ahead.....
Alll i need now is the vigour to go out there a sewing!
Do the young sparrows crowd to tap your windows in the morning begging \"tell us more stories of days dawnings please Oh Fay of the Rising Day\"
October 4th, 2019 01:29
Asking.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful poem. \'Why\' the unanswerable question in our lives.
October 4th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful poem. \'Why\' the unanswerable question in our lives.
October 4th, 2019 00:20
Asking.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - ANGELA HERE - Its 7am Friday - just checking MPS before getting ready for WORK ! First CLINIC 10am ! Love the pathos in Your Poem - The ECSTACY of Life & Love and then the AGONY of Life & Death ! It is a reality we WILL all face & many Members have faced ALREADY ! We grieve with YOU ! Brian & I - hope & pray to see our RUBY Wedding (2060 !) but at the least our SILVER (2045) BUT just in case - We will CHERISH each & every DAY we have together. Thanks for sharing - very challenging as we face our whole future TOGETHER - AMEN !
Please check todays POEM *Discovering a New Cave* - Thanks ! Today is National Poetry Day 2019 ! Please add a Poem (Any Style - Any Subject) to Our New Fusion *NATIONAL ODE DAY* ONLY 9 SPACES LEFT - Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
October 3rd, 2019 14:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FAY - ANGELA HERE - Its 7am Friday - just checking MPS before getting ready for WORK ! First CLINIC 10am ! Love the pathos in Your Poem - The ECSTACY of Life & Love and then the AGONY of Life & Death ! It is a reality we WILL all face & many Members have faced ALREADY ! We grieve with YOU ! Brian & I - hope & pray to see our RUBY Wedding (2060 !) but at the least our SILVER (2045) BUT just in case - We will CHERISH each & every DAY we have together. Thanks for sharing - very challenging as we face our whole future TOGETHER - AMEN !
Please check todays POEM *Discovering a New Cave* - Thanks ! Today is National Poetry Day 2019 ! Please add a Poem (Any Style - Any Subject) to Our New Fusion *NATIONAL ODE DAY* ONLY 9 SPACES LEFT - Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
October 3rd, 2019 14:34
Asking.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully sad write dear Fay - another real gem.
October 3rd, 2019 11:41
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully sad write dear Fay - another real gem.
October 3rd, 2019 11:41
Asking.
Neville said:
A great big sad little write if I might be so bold....
tis near a sorrow shared..... Neville
October 3rd, 2019 09:35
Neville said:
A great big sad little write if I might be so bold....
tis near a sorrow shared..... Neville
October 3rd, 2019 09:35
Asking.
Clara said:
Those last two lines... Truly heartbreaking. This is a wonderful poem Fay. Sad but wonderful and beautifully expressed... A life together... Then lost. Yes, this is a lovely poem.
October 3rd, 2019 09:02
Clara said:
Those last two lines... Truly heartbreaking. This is a wonderful poem Fay. Sad but wonderful and beautifully expressed... A life together... Then lost. Yes, this is a lovely poem.
October 3rd, 2019 09:02
Asking.
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written poem of \'love\'s story\' in mature years and the inevitable toll of our humanity.
The \'Why\' we all ask is perennial as the wind which blows, and the wind upon a tear stained bears no answer as solace instead begins to dull the pain and haunt the eyes.
October 3rd, 2019 02:54
dusk arising said:
Beautifully written poem of \'love\'s story\' in mature years and the inevitable toll of our humanity.
The \'Why\' we all ask is perennial as the wind which blows, and the wind upon a tear stained bears no answer as solace instead begins to dull the pain and haunt the eyes.
October 3rd, 2019 02:54
Maybe.
dusk arising said:
Cor! Fay.
That is so so beautiful. Just so damn moving.
So beautiful and has to be a Favourite.
October 2nd, 2019 05:59
dusk arising said:
Cor! Fay.
That is so so beautiful. Just so damn moving.
So beautiful and has to be a Favourite.
October 2nd, 2019 05:59
Difference.
chani said:
Hello Fay, your difference is different. But I like it. Love to read more and more what you write.
October 2nd, 2019 04:09
chani said:
Hello Fay, your difference is different. But I like it. Love to read more and more what you write.
October 2nd, 2019 04:09
Maybe.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY - ANGELA here (8pm WED evening !) Love the picture that stirred your MUSE *Til the BOATS CUM IN !* The wife of a Deep Sea Fishherman is a fearful & lonely one - cos often they fish at night ! There are more Men Lost @ Sea than this world dreams of. Brian & I are separated but I know he is not in danger from *SEA or SIRENS* and He knows I am keeping all the Male Maoris & Kiwis at arms length ! Ruth & I chaperone each other ! My massages are purely therapeutic ! Please check our Collab on Roses - You will feel the LOVE !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 2nd, 2019 03:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING FAY - ANGELA here (8pm WED evening !) Love the picture that stirred your MUSE *Til the BOATS CUM IN !* The wife of a Deep Sea Fishherman is a fearful & lonely one - cos often they fish at night ! There are more Men Lost @ Sea than this world dreams of. Brian & I are separated but I know he is not in danger from *SEA or SIRENS* and He knows I am keeping all the Male Maoris & Kiwis at arms length ! Ruth & I chaperone each other ! My massages are purely therapeutic ! Please check our Collab on Roses - You will feel the LOVE !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 2nd, 2019 03:03
Maybe.
orchidee said:
Maybe - or rather certainly - this is a good write Fay!
October 2nd, 2019 01:44
orchidee said:
Maybe - or rather certainly - this is a good write Fay!
October 2nd, 2019 01:44
Difference.
Christina8 said:
This poem is an excellent visual and a wonderful tribute to a great poet. Great job, Fay!
October 1st, 2019 07:30
Christina8 said:
This poem is an excellent visual and a wonderful tribute to a great poet. Great job, Fay!
October 1st, 2019 07:30
Difference.
Clara said:
Absolute stunning visuals created here. A wonderful tribute to the poet, nature and the animal kingdom at large. Wonderful Fay.
October 1st, 2019 06:43
Clara said:
Absolute stunning visuals created here. A wonderful tribute to the poet, nature and the animal kingdom at large. Wonderful Fay.
October 1st, 2019 06:43
Difference.
Neville said:
Ah.. a sight for sore eyes and a treat for the remaining senses.... a lovely tribute and true..... N
October 1st, 2019 05:34
Neville said:
Ah.. a sight for sore eyes and a treat for the remaining senses.... a lovely tribute and true..... N
October 1st, 2019 05:34
Difference.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm TUESDAY EVENING) soon have to reajust to GMT again ! Love the picture & poem & mention of GMH ! God created a very colourful WORLD and created H.Sapiens with amazing EYES to appreciate it. We see in moving 3D and can distinguish thousands of shades. Our eyes are one of our greatest assets. Restoring mobility - movement - confidence to the BLIND is one of our toughest jobs as PHYSIOS. People who are blinded in ADULTHOOD do have a great appreciation of COLOUR and FORM and still say to THEMSELVES *What a Wonderful World* AMEN Thanks for caring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our POEM on MONEY - THANKS !
October 1st, 2019 05:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm TUESDAY EVENING) soon have to reajust to GMT again ! Love the picture & poem & mention of GMH ! God created a very colourful WORLD and created H.Sapiens with amazing EYES to appreciate it. We see in moving 3D and can distinguish thousands of shades. Our eyes are one of our greatest assets. Restoring mobility - movement - confidence to the BLIND is one of our toughest jobs as PHYSIOS. People who are blinded in ADULTHOOD do have a great appreciation of COLOUR and FORM and still say to THEMSELVES *What a Wonderful World* AMEN Thanks for caring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check our POEM on MONEY - THANKS !
October 1st, 2019 05:04
Difference.
dusk arising said:
Visual arts are a wonder and pleasure our moods.
Though easily overlooked, the artistry has become psychological cleverly entertaining and placing \'happy\' before our eyes, leading us to smile.
Fitting tribute Fay.
October 1st, 2019 03:48
dusk arising said:
Visual arts are a wonder and pleasure our moods.
Though easily overlooked, the artistry has become psychological cleverly entertaining and placing \'happy\' before our eyes, leading us to smile.
Fitting tribute Fay.
October 1st, 2019 03:48
Difference.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that abundance forever be there for us all.
October 1st, 2019 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
May that abundance forever be there for us all.
October 1st, 2019 01:34
Now.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, the pictures your words paint are so enthralling.
October 1st, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, the pictures your words paint are so enthralling.
October 1st, 2019 00:38
Now.
dusk arising said:
Whilst firmly planning the future perfect i find myself gripped by mother natures savagery so it\'s very refreshing to read the purity in your words at this time.
Thank you for this pleasure.
September 30th, 2019 14:06
dusk arising said:
Whilst firmly planning the future perfect i find myself gripped by mother natures savagery so it\'s very refreshing to read the purity in your words at this time.
Thank you for this pleasure.
September 30th, 2019 14:06
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