Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Ours.
Neville said:
this is a captivating, beautiful tho incredibly sad and wholly relatable bit of poetry that really does pack a hefty punch at the very end ...... N
October 25th, 2019 05:27
Neville said:
this is a captivating, beautiful tho incredibly sad and wholly relatable bit of poetry that really does pack a hefty punch at the very end ...... N
October 25th, 2019 05:27
Ours.
Poetic Dan said:
Felt ever word of this, I should pop in more as your spirit I do admire. \"honoured by harmony\'s law,\" fantastic way to start my morning off!
Always appreciated
October 25th, 2019 03:18
Poetic Dan said:
Felt ever word of this, I should pop in more as your spirit I do admire. \"honoured by harmony\'s law,\" fantastic way to start my morning off!
Always appreciated
October 25th, 2019 03:18
Tonic.
kevin browne said:
Ah, to drink deeply with a blackbird soprano sound like really good fun. Your poem captures this bird at its finest. Just like your writing...!!
October 24th, 2019 23:38
kevin browne said:
Ah, to drink deeply with a blackbird soprano sound like really good fun. Your poem captures this bird at its finest. Just like your writing...!!
October 24th, 2019 23:38
Tonic.
Neville said:
You have captured here well the very essence of the magnificent turdus merula ...... to hear it is to fall in love with it and true....
October 24th, 2019 12:11
Neville said:
You have captured here well the very essence of the magnificent turdus merula ...... to hear it is to fall in love with it and true....
October 24th, 2019 12:11
Tonic.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, the blackbird song is wondrous but the first bird heard in the morning (and the last at night) is the robin, still a wonderful sound though.
October 24th, 2019 08:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, the blackbird song is wondrous but the first bird heard in the morning (and the last at night) is the robin, still a wonderful sound though.
October 24th, 2019 08:05
Tonic.
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful write capturing the beauty and song of the Blackbird!
Keep writing FineB
October 24th, 2019 04:18
FineB said:
Hello Fay,
A beautiful write capturing the beauty and song of the Blackbird!
Keep writing FineB
October 24th, 2019 04:18
Contact.
FredPeyer said:
\'Thru heaven\'s hole I taste contact\'...And there you met the alien!
Love your poem, as always!
October 23rd, 2019 18:48
FredPeyer said:
\'Thru heaven\'s hole I taste contact\'...And there you met the alien!
Love your poem, as always!
October 23rd, 2019 18:48
Contact.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, that star will always be there for you.
October 23rd, 2019 08:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, that star will always be there for you.
October 23rd, 2019 08:18
Contact.
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Once more, an excellent piece Fay. I promise I will read again this evening, outside, at dark. It promises to be a fine autumn evening here in Yorkshire so your fine words will enhance it for me.
Ex animo, Alan
October 23rd, 2019 05:44
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Once more, an excellent piece Fay. I promise I will read again this evening, outside, at dark. It promises to be a fine autumn evening here in Yorkshire so your fine words will enhance it for me.
Ex animo, Alan
October 23rd, 2019 05:44
Contact.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
AMEN FAY ~ When a Love One passes
over to the Other Side .......
Theres one more ANGEL in Heaven
Theres one more STAR in the Sky ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 23rd, 2019 04:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
AMEN FAY ~ When a Love One passes
over to the Other Side .......
Theres one more ANGEL in Heaven
Theres one more STAR in the Sky ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 23rd, 2019 04:24
Betweeness.
Goldfinch60 said:
Between lovers
A world of love exists in harmony
That goes on for eternity
Where two souls become one
Never ever parting
The love increasing in their journey.
October 23rd, 2019 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Between lovers
A world of love exists in harmony
That goes on for eternity
Where two souls become one
Never ever parting
The love increasing in their journey.
October 23rd, 2019 00:26
Betweeness.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOGD EVENING FAY ~ A & B BOTH HERE ! We often answer the Question *How are things* by *Betwixt & Between* ! You have illustrated the *BETWEENESS* of areas we take for granted ~ excellently in your (as always) elegant ode ! The areas BETWEEN ~ Yesterday & Tommorrow ~ Now & Infinity ~ Waking & Sleeping and Heaven & Paradise ! Much Food for thought ~ Thanks for sharing ! Please check our Poems ~ mixed reviews.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 22nd, 2019 18:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOGD EVENING FAY ~ A & B BOTH HERE ! We often answer the Question *How are things* by *Betwixt & Between* ! You have illustrated the *BETWEENESS* of areas we take for granted ~ excellently in your (as always) elegant ode ! The areas BETWEEN ~ Yesterday & Tommorrow ~ Now & Infinity ~ Waking & Sleeping and Heaven & Paradise ! Much Food for thought ~ Thanks for sharing ! Please check our Poems ~ mixed reviews.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 22nd, 2019 18:12
BOLDNESS.
dusk arising said:
These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much attuned to the ways of the natural world as can be seen in many of your writings.
Lovely entertaining story you recount today. A pleasure to read.
October 22nd, 2019 11:18
dusk arising said:
These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much attuned to the ways of the natural world as can be seen in many of your writings.
Lovely entertaining story you recount today. A pleasure to read.
October 22nd, 2019 11:18
Betweeness.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow I admire the poetic terms with which you convey your muse here. I like using oasis , brook and yonder so I enjoyed how you employed your word choice. It\'s creative how you theme this on the bliss of togetherness and love\'s warmth. Kudos for such an awesome poem.!!
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 07:44
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow I admire the poetic terms with which you convey your muse here. I like using oasis , brook and yonder so I enjoyed how you employed your word choice. It\'s creative how you theme this on the bliss of togetherness and love\'s warmth. Kudos for such an awesome poem.!!
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 07:44
Betweeness.
Neville said:
These words fall between categories and lay across the page most beautifully ... a real treat for poetry lovers.... N x
October 22nd, 2019 07:26
Neville said:
These words fall between categories and lay across the page most beautifully ... a real treat for poetry lovers.... N x
October 22nd, 2019 07:26
BOLDNESS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words recounting a beautiful experience with nature.
October 22nd, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words recounting a beautiful experience with nature.
October 22nd, 2019 00:16
BOLDNESS.
dusk arising said:
These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much attuned to the ways of the natural world as can be seen in many of your writings.
Lovely entertaining story you recount today. A pleasure to read.
October 21st, 2019 19:42
dusk arising said:
These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much attuned to the ways of the natural world as can be seen in many of your writings.
Lovely entertaining story you recount today. A pleasure to read.
October 21st, 2019 19:42
BOLDNESS.
dusk arising said:
These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much attuned to the ways of the natural world as can be seen in many of your writings.
Lovely entertaining story you recount today. A pleasure to read.
October 21st, 2019 19:18
dusk arising said:
These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much attuned to the ways of the natural world as can be seen in many of your writings.
Lovely entertaining story you recount today. A pleasure to read.
October 21st, 2019 19:18
BOLDNESS.
Neville said:
Dear Fay, your words invariably impress, today.. they made me smile big.... how wonderful.. N
October 21st, 2019 16:56
Neville said:
Dear Fay, your words invariably impress, today.. they made me smile big.... how wonderful.. N
October 21st, 2019 16:56
BOLDNESS.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write Fay. If alone at times, and one calls in to see me, or phones, etc, I may say \'No one here but us mice (and me)!\'
October 21st, 2019 10:08
orchidee said:
Oh lol, fine write Fay. If alone at times, and one calls in to see me, or phones, etc, I may say \'No one here but us mice (and me)!\'
October 21st, 2019 10:08
BOLDNESS.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ! The Picture & Poem ! The boldness and brashness of feral animals - when they are hungry & thirsty beggers belief ! The Foxes in Essex are getting more cheeky by the day ! My (BRIAN) Mum throws scraps out for the Birds (who have always been BOLD) and now the FOXES come to claim their righful share - even if there are Humans about. A Neighbour of my Mums has been doing some preservation work in her shed and has disturbed a Rats nest Now they also come (with three little ones !) to share the food and drink in the pond ! We watch them through the French Window - visually they are delightful ! Thanks for sharing !
Love - Joy & Peace
Brian & Angela
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 21st, 2019 04:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ! The Picture & Poem ! The boldness and brashness of feral animals - when they are hungry & thirsty beggers belief ! The Foxes in Essex are getting more cheeky by the day ! My (BRIAN) Mum throws scraps out for the Birds (who have always been BOLD) and now the FOXES come to claim their righful share - even if there are Humans about. A Neighbour of my Mums has been doing some preservation work in her shed and has disturbed a Rats nest Now they also come (with three little ones !) to share the food and drink in the pond ! We watch them through the French Window - visually they are delightful ! Thanks for sharing !
Love - Joy & Peace
Brian & Angela
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
October 21st, 2019 04:16
Sea-Swell.
Suresh said:
those undertows hidden in its swells,
tumble the mightiest in its wells -
excited by the moon’s phases,
whether calm or the frothy head it raises.
True poetry is such, that the words are often insufficient to show one’s appreciation
October 20th, 2019 01:04
Suresh said:
those undertows hidden in its swells,
tumble the mightiest in its wells -
excited by the moon’s phases,
whether calm or the frothy head it raises.
True poetry is such, that the words are often insufficient to show one’s appreciation
October 20th, 2019 01:04
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